外研版高中英語(yǔ)必修3《odule-7-Revision-Writing》示范課課件-1

高一期中考試書面表達(dá)講析Book3Module7WritingSkills

高一期中考試書面表達(dá)講析Book3Module71Writing書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）假設(shè)你是李華，你班邀請(qǐng)一位老藝人在4月21日上午8:00至10:00來(lái)班里推廣剪紙藝術(shù)，你打算邀請(qǐng)你們學(xué)?？釔壑袊?guó)文化的英國(guó)交換生Peter參加。請(qǐng)你寫封E-mail,邀請(qǐng)他參加，并告訴他活動(dòng)安排。參考詞匯：手藝人craftsman;

剪紙藝術(shù)paper-cutart

Writing書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）2普遍錯(cuò)誤：1.單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤2.不會(huì)表達(dá)日期3.

be動(dòng)詞的漏用或錯(cuò)用WewillbeinviteanoldmanItwillholdonApril21st4.old前誤用a5.主謂不一致普遍錯(cuò)誤：1.單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤3審題不清，要點(diǎn)缺失審4Writing書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）假設(shè)你是李華，你班邀請(qǐng)一位老藝人在4月21日上午8:00至10:00來(lái)班里推廣剪紙藝術(shù)，你打算邀請(qǐng)你們學(xué)?？釔壑袊?guó)文化的英國(guó)交換生Peter參加。請(qǐng)你寫封E-mail,邀請(qǐng)他參加，并告訴他活動(dòng)安排。

Writing書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）5邏輯不清邏6思路點(diǎn)撥1.

文章的首段要開門見山，言明寫郵件的目的；2.

第二段主體部分表述要準(zhǔn)確、流暢，結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰3.

結(jié)尾要重申希望參加的愿望，

并期待對(duì)方盡早

回復(fù)。（交際性）思路點(diǎn)撥7

如何使書面表達(dá)更加流暢清晰得高分?想一想:內(nèi)容不能空，邏輯不能亂想一想:內(nèi)容不能空，邏輯不能亂81.Whatshouldwewrite?Whatexpressionsandsentencescanweuse?1.Whatshouldwewrite?What91.我班將邀請(qǐng)一位老藝人來(lái)班里教學(xué)剪紙藝術(shù)。2.這是一個(gè)很好的機(jī)會(huì)去了解剪紙，這個(gè)傳統(tǒng)技藝有約2000年的歷史了3.該活動(dòng)于4月21日上午8:00到10:00舉行。4.受邀藝人將推廣剪紙藝術(shù)，并有相關(guān)活動(dòng)安排。（難點(diǎn)）

學(xué)生考場(chǎng)作文摘錄：1.我班將邀請(qǐng)一位老藝人來(lái)班里教學(xué)剪紙藝術(shù)。學(xué)生考場(chǎng)作文摘10句子形式的變化變一變更好考生原句Myclasswillinviteanoldcraftsmanwhoisgoodatpaper-cuttingtoteachuspaper-cutart.Anoldcraftsman,whoisskilledatpaper-cutting,

willbeinvitedtoteachuspaper-cutart.句子形式的變化變一變更好考生原句Myclasswill112.考生原句Itisagoodwaytolearnaboutthepaper-cut,whichisatraditionalChinesearthasaround2000yearshistory.…..,atraditionalChineseartwith

ahistoryofaround2000years.2.考生原句Itisagoodwaytolea123.考生原句ThisactivityisonApril21standbeginsat8:00amendsat10:00.ThisactivityfallsonApril21st,beginningat8:00amandendingat10:00am.3.考生原句ThisactivityisonApr134.受邀藝人將推廣剪紙藝術(shù)，并且要告知Peter相關(guān)活動(dòng)安排。聯(lián)想相關(guān)動(dòng)詞：explain/teach,show/display,guide/directThecraftsmanwillexplainsomebasicknowledgeofpaper-cutart,teachussomeskillsabouthowtomakeitandguideustofinishourownworks.并列句的使用節(jié)奏明快，使得文章錯(cuò)落有致考生缺少信息4.聯(lián)想相關(guān)動(dòng)詞：Thecraftsmanwille14要點(diǎn)羅列“布”詞句外研版高中英語(yǔ)必修3《odule-7-Revision-Writing》示范課課件_1152.Howcanweorganizethenecessaryinformationandrelatedideaswewanttowrite?2.Howcanweorganizethenec16句間：不可松散堆砌式，起承轉(zhuǎn)合連貫好。句間：171.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture.做好要點(diǎn)之間的連貫和必要的延伸

2.Meanwhile,youwillmakesomenewfriends.Inaword,youcanexperienceChinesecultureandbroadenyoureyesatthesametime.思考：對(duì)哪個(gè)要點(diǎn)做連貫和延伸？受邀藝人將推廣剪紙藝術(shù)，并且要告知Peter相關(guān)活動(dòng)安排。

喧賓奪主不可取1.Besides,therewillbealot18文中：邏輯分明交流要好文中：19在結(jié)尾處添加表希望、祝愿的語(yǔ)句，適當(dāng)增加一些人情味，會(huì)使全文更加完整，使文章讀起來(lái)更親切，完全達(dá)到與讀者進(jìn)行交流的目的。在結(jié)尾處添加表希望、祝愿的語(yǔ)句，適當(dāng)增加一些人情味，會(huì)使全文20DearPeter,①IamLiHua,

theleaderofthepaper-cuttingclubinourschool.知道你熱愛中國(guó)藝術(shù)，

I’dliketoinviteyoutoattendameaningful

activity.

KnowingthatyouarecrazyaboutChineseartdeeply,DearPeter,①IamLiHua,

the21

Asweknow,thepaper-cutisafamoustraditionalChineseartwithahistoryaround2000years.我班將邀請(qǐng)一位老藝人來(lái)推廣剪紙藝術(shù)。ItfallsonApril21st,beginningat8:00amandendingat10:00am.Thecraftsmanwillexplainsomebasicknowledgeofpaper-cutart,teachussomeskillabouthowtomakeitandguideustofinishourownworks.

此外，還會(huì)有一些有趣的活動(dòng)，你可以從中更加了解中國(guó)的文化。Fortunately,anoldcraftsman,whoisskilledatpaper-cutting,

willbeinvitedtoteachuspaper-cutart.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture.Asweknow,thepaper-cutis22如能接受我的邀請(qǐng)我將不勝感激。I'msureitcanleaveawonderfulimpressiononyou!lookforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHuaIwouldappreciateitifyouacceptmyinvitation.如能接受我的邀請(qǐng)我將不勝感激。I'msureitcan23DearPeter,I

amLiHua,

theleaderofthepaper-cuttingclubinourschool

.KnowingthatyouarecrazyaboutChineseartdeeply,

I’dliketoinviteyoutoattendameaningfulactivity.Asweknow,thepaper-cutisafamoustraditionalChineseartwithahistoryaround2000years.Fortunately,anoldcraftsman,whoisskilledatpaper-cutting,

willbeinvitedtoteachuspaper-cutart.It

fallsonApril21st,beginningat8:00amandendingat10:00am.Thecraftsmanwillexplainsomebasicknowledgeofpaper-cutart,teachussomeskillabouthowtomakeitandguideustofinishourownworks.

.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture.Iwouldappreciateitifyouacceptmyinvitation.I'msureitcanleaveawonderfulimpressiononyou!lookforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!Yours,DearPeter,24全國(guó)I卷書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）假定你是李華，正在教你的英國(guó)朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)你寫封郵件告知下次上課的計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容包括：1.時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；2.內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩(shī)；3.課前準(zhǔn)備：簡(jiǎn)要了解唐朝的歷史。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Homework全國(guó)I卷Homework25Thanksforyourattention!Goodbye!Thanksforyourattention!Good26優(yōu)秀滿分范文DearLeslie,Howareyou?GladtoseeyouhavemadesomeprogressinChineselearningandI’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutournextlesson.Thelessonwillbegivenfrom3pmto5pmontheafternoonofnextTuesdayintheclassroom502.Intheclass,youwillmainlylearnTangpoetry,whichreflectstraditionalChinesecultureandisdeeplylovedbyChinese.YoucanfeelthebeautyofChinesebylearningTangPoetry.You’dbettermakefullpreparationsbeforeclassandhaveabriefunderstandingofthehistoryofTangDynasty,whichmakesiteasyforyoutogothroughtheclass.IfthereisanythingthatIcanhelpyou,pleasedon’thesitatetotellme.Lookingforwardtomeetingyou.Yourssincerely,LiHua優(yōu)秀滿分范文27高一期中考試書面表達(dá)講析Book3Module7WritingSkills

高一期中考試書面表達(dá)講析Book3Module728Writing書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）假設(shè)你是李華，你班邀請(qǐng)一位老藝人在4月21日上午8:00至10:00來(lái)班里推廣剪紙藝術(shù)，你打算邀請(qǐng)你們學(xué)?？釔壑袊?guó)文化的英國(guó)交換生Peter參加。請(qǐng)你寫封E-mail,邀請(qǐng)他參加，并告訴他活動(dòng)安排。參考詞匯：手藝人craftsman;

剪紙藝術(shù)paper-cutart

Writing書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）29普遍錯(cuò)誤：1.單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤2.不會(huì)表達(dá)日期3.

be動(dòng)詞的漏用或錯(cuò)用WewillbeinviteanoldmanItwillholdonApril21st4.old前誤用a5.主謂不一致普遍錯(cuò)誤：1.單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤30審題不清，要點(diǎn)缺失審31Writing書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）假設(shè)你是李華，你班邀請(qǐng)一位老藝人在4月21日上午8:00至10:00來(lái)班里推廣剪紙藝術(shù)，你打算邀請(qǐng)你們學(xué)?？釔壑袊?guó)文化的英國(guó)交換生Peter參加。請(qǐng)你寫封E-mail,邀請(qǐng)他參加，并告訴他活動(dòng)安排。

Writing書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）32邏輯不清邏33思路點(diǎn)撥1.

文章的首段要開門見山，言明寫郵件的目的；2.

第二段主體部分表述要準(zhǔn)確、流暢，結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰3.

結(jié)尾要重申希望參加的愿望，

并期待對(duì)方盡早

回復(fù)。（交際性）思路點(diǎn)撥34

如何使書面表達(dá)更加流暢清晰得高分?想一想:內(nèi)容不能空，邏輯不能亂想一想:內(nèi)容不能空，邏輯不能亂351.Whatshouldwewrite?Whatexpressionsandsentencescanweuse?1.Whatshouldwewrite?What361.我班將邀請(qǐng)一位老藝人來(lái)班里教學(xué)剪紙藝術(shù)。2.這是一個(gè)很好的機(jī)會(huì)去了解剪紙，這個(gè)傳統(tǒng)技藝有約2000年的歷史了3.該活動(dòng)于4月21日上午8:00到10:00舉行。4.受邀藝人將推廣剪紙藝術(shù)，并有相關(guān)活動(dòng)安排。（難點(diǎn)）

學(xué)生考場(chǎng)作文摘錄：1.我班將邀請(qǐng)一位老藝人來(lái)班里教學(xué)剪紙藝術(shù)。學(xué)生考場(chǎng)作文摘37句子形式的變化變一變更好考生原句Myclasswillinviteanoldcraftsmanwhoisgoodatpaper-cuttingtoteachuspaper-cutart.Anoldcraftsman,whoisskilledatpaper-cutting,

willbeinvitedtoteachuspaper-cutart.句子形式的變化變一變更好考生原句Myclasswill382.考生原句Itisagoodwaytolearnaboutthepaper-cut,whichisatraditionalChinesearthasaround2000yearshistory.…..,atraditionalChineseartwith

ahistoryofaround2000years.2.考生原句Itisagoodwaytolea393.考生原句ThisactivityisonApril21standbeginsat8:00amendsat10:00.ThisactivityfallsonApril21st,beginningat8:00amandendingat10:00am.3.考生原句ThisactivityisonApr404.受邀藝人將推廣剪紙藝術(shù)，并且要告知Peter相關(guān)活動(dòng)安排。聯(lián)想相關(guān)動(dòng)詞：explain/teach,show/display,guide/directThecraftsmanwillexplainsomebasicknowledgeofpaper-cutart,teachussomeskillsabouthowtomakeitandguideustofinishourownworks.并列句的使用節(jié)奏明快，使得文章錯(cuò)落有致考生缺少信息4.聯(lián)想相關(guān)動(dòng)詞：Thecraftsmanwille41要點(diǎn)羅列“布”詞句外研版高中英語(yǔ)必修3《odule-7-Revision-Writing》示范課課件_1422.Howcanweorganizethenecessaryinformationandrelatedideaswewanttowrite?2.Howcanweorganizethenec43句間：不可松散堆砌式，起承轉(zhuǎn)合連貫好。句間：441.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture.做好要點(diǎn)之間的連貫和必要的延伸

2.Meanwhile,youwillmakesomenewfriends.Inaword,youcanexperienceChinesecultureandbroadenyoureyesatthesametime.思考：對(duì)哪個(gè)要點(diǎn)做連貫和延伸？受邀藝人將推廣剪紙藝術(shù)，并且要告知Peter相關(guān)活動(dòng)安排。

喧賓奪主不可取1.Besides,therewillbealot45文中：邏輯分明交流要好文中：46在結(jié)尾處添加表希望、祝愿的語(yǔ)句，適當(dāng)增加一些人情味，會(huì)使全文更加完整，使文章讀起來(lái)更親切，完全達(dá)到與讀者進(jìn)行交流的目的。在結(jié)尾處添加表希望、祝愿的語(yǔ)句，適當(dāng)增加一些人情味，會(huì)使全文47DearPeter,①IamLiHua,

theleaderofthepaper-cuttingclubinourschool.知道你熱愛中國(guó)藝術(shù)，

I’dliketoinviteyoutoattendameaningful

activity.

KnowingthatyouarecrazyaboutChineseartdeeply,DearPeter,①IamLiHua,

the48

Asweknow,thepaper-cutisafamoustraditionalChineseartwithahistoryaround2000years.我班將邀請(qǐng)一位老藝人來(lái)推廣剪紙藝術(shù)。ItfallsonApril21st,beginningat8:00amandendingat10:00am.Thecraftsmanwillexplainsomebasicknowledgeofpaper-cutart,teachussomeskillabouthowtomakeitandguideustofinishourownworks.

此外，還會(huì)有一些有趣的活動(dòng)，你可以從中更加了解中國(guó)的文化。Fortunately,anoldcraftsman,whoisskilledatpaper-cutting,

willbeinvitedtoteachuspaper-cutart.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture.Asweknow,thepaper-cutis49如能接受我的邀請(qǐng)我將不勝感激。I'msureitcanleaveawonderfulimpressiononyou!lookforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHuaIwouldappreciateitifyouacceptmyinvitation.如能接受我的邀請(qǐng)我將不勝感激。I'msureitcan50DearPeter,I

amLiHua,

theleaderofthepaper-cuttingclubinourschool

.KnowingthatyouarecrazyaboutChineseartdeeply,

I’dliketoinviteyoutoattendameaningfulactivity.Asweknow,thepaper-cutisafamoustraditionalChineseartwithahistoryaround2000years.Fortunately,anoldcraftsman,whoisskilledatpaper-cutting,

willbeinvitedtoteachuspaper-cutart.It

fallsonApril21st,beginningat8:00amandendingat10:00am.Thecraftsmanwillexplainsomebasicknowledgeofpaper-cutart,teachussomeskillabouthowtomakeitandguideustofinishourownworks.

.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChi