考研作文攻略

第五部分2011年考研作文攻略字體：大中小打?。菏〖埌?gt;>清晰版>>自定義>>行距：?jiǎn)伪?.2單倍1.5倍1.7倍2倍字體：大中小隱藏：答疑編號(hào)手寫板【“十二字”總體策略：“明”特點(diǎn)、“熟”套路、“背”經(jīng)典、“多”練習(xí)】一、“明”特點(diǎn)——準(zhǔn)確把握考研作文命題特點(diǎn)：1.考查內(nèi)容：【英語(yǔ)（一）大綱要求】考生應(yīng)能寫不同類型的應(yīng)用文，包括私人和公務(wù)信函、備忘錄、摘要、報(bào)告等，以及一般描述性、敘述性、說(shuō)明性或議論性的文章。寫作時(shí)考生應(yīng)能：1）做到語(yǔ)法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，用詞恰當(dāng)。2）遵循文章的特定文體格式。3）合理組織文章結(jié)構(gòu)，使其內(nèi)容統(tǒng)?、連貫。4）根據(jù)寫作目的和特定讀者，恰當(dāng)選用語(yǔ)域。（在書面或口語(yǔ)表達(dá)中根據(jù)不同的交際對(duì)象，所采用的話語(yǔ)方式，即正式、一般和非正式的話語(yǔ)）【英語(yǔ)（二）大綱要求】考生應(yīng)能根據(jù)所給的提綱、情景或要求完成相應(yīng)的短文寫作。短文應(yīng)中心思想明確、切中題意、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、條理清楚、用詞恰當(dāng)、無(wú)明顯語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。2.命題形式：【英語(yǔ)（一）大綱要求】考研英語(yǔ)作文部分由A、B兩節(jié)組成，主要考查考生的書面表達(dá)能力?？偡?0分。A節(jié)：題型有兩種，每次考試選擇其中的一種形式。1）考生根據(jù)所給情景寫出約100詞（標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不計(jì)算在內(nèi)）的應(yīng)用性短文，包括私人和公務(wù)信函、備忘錄、報(bào)告等。2）要求考生根據(jù)所提供的漢語(yǔ)文章，用英語(yǔ)寫出一篇約80-100詞的文章摘要。【英語(yǔ)（二）大綱要求】考研英語(yǔ)作文部分由A、B兩節(jié)組成，主要考查考生的書面表達(dá)能力?？偡?5分。A節(jié)：題型有兩種，每次考試選擇其中的一種形式。1）考生根據(jù)所給情景寫出約100詞（標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不計(jì)算在內(nèi)）的應(yīng)用性短文，包括私人和公務(wù)信函、備忘錄、報(bào)告等。2）要求考生根據(jù)所提供的漢語(yǔ)文章，用英語(yǔ)寫出一篇約80-100詞的該文摘要。小作文真題解析[09年真題】Directions:Restrictionsontheuseofplasticbagshavenotbeensosuccessfulinsomeregions."Whilepollution“isstillgoingon.Writealettertotheeditor（s）ofyourlocalnewspapertogiveyouropinionsbrieflyandmaketwoorthreesuggestionsYoushouldwriteabout100words.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use“LiMing”instead.Youdonotneedtowritetheaddress.(10points)(08年真題】Directions:YouhavejustcomebackfromCanadaandfoundamusicCDinyourluggagethatyouforgottoreturntoBob,yourlandlordthere.Writehimalettertomakeanapology,andsuggestasolution.Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use“LiMing“instead.Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)[07年真題】Directions:Writealettertoyouruniversitylibrary,makingsuggestionsforimprovingitsservice.Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use“LiMing“instead.Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)[06年真題】Directions：YouwanttocontributetoProjectHopebyofferingfinancialaidtoachildinaremotearea.Writealettertothedepartmentconcerned,askingthemtohelpfindacandidate.Youshouldspecifywhatkindofchildyouwanttohelpandhowyouwillcarryoutyourplan.Writeyourletterinnolessthan100words.WriteitneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter;use“LiMing“instead.Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)[05年真題】Directions:TwomonthsagoyougotajobasaneditorforthemagazineDesigns&Fashions.Butnowyoufindthattheworkisnotwhatyouexpected.Youdecidetoquit.Writealettertoyourboss,Mr.Wang,tellinghimyourdecision,statingyourreason(s),andmakinganapology.Writeyourletterwithnolessthan100words.WriteitneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter;use“LiMing“instead.Youdonotneedtowritetheaddress.(10points)【10年真題】Directions:YouaresupposedtowriteforthePostgraduates*Associationanoticetorecruitvolunteersfbraninternationalconferenceonglobalization0Thenoticeshouldincludethebasicqualificationsofapplicantsandtheotherinformationyouthinkisrelevant.Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendofthenotice.UseuPostgraduates*Association“instead.(10points)特點(diǎn)：一般給出作文內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求考生圍繞內(nèi)容提示構(gòu)建短文主體內(nèi)容；以書信形式為主，可能涉及求職信、辭職信、建議信、道歉信、投訴信、邀請(qǐng)信和感謝信等具體類型。摘要應(yīng)對(duì)策略：包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；注意格式、語(yǔ)域要求；表意明確即可，避免復(fù)雜華麗的文采修飾。【英語(yǔ)(一)大綱要求】B節(jié)：考生根據(jù)提示信息寫出一篇160?200詞的短文(標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不計(jì)算在內(nèi))。提示信息的形式有主題句、寫作提綱、規(guī)定情景、圖、表等?！居⒄Z(yǔ)(二)大綱要求】B節(jié)：要求考生根據(jù)所規(guī)定的情景或給出的提綱，寫出一篇150詞以上的英語(yǔ)說(shuō)明文或議論文。提供情景的形式為圖畫、圖表或文字。特點(diǎn)：在選題上，通常貼近生活，一方面是帶有哲理性的永恒話題：另一方面是目前人們最為關(guān)注的問(wèn)題，亦即當(dāng)前熱門話題。但總體上講，所涉及的寫作內(nèi)容均屬大多數(shù)考生所熟悉之話題，因而便于取材，具有一定的可寫性。具體說(shuō)來(lái)，主要涉及教育、職業(yè)道德、身體健康、家庭關(guān)系、環(huán)境保護(hù)、人口增長(zhǎng)以及文化交流等話題。就體裁而言，以論說(shuō)文為主,因?yàn)檫@類體裁形式在實(shí)際學(xué)習(xí)、工作和生活中使用的頻率較高。就具體的命題形式而言，可分為：主題句作文、標(biāo)題作文、提綱作文、圖畫(表)作文、規(guī)定情景式作文等。大作文真題解析：【10年真題】Directions:Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshoulddescribethedrawingbriefly,explainitsintendedmeaning,andgiveyourcomments.YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)[09年真題】Directions:Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshoulddescribethedrawingbriefly,explainitsintendedmeaning,andthengiveyourcomments.YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSHWERSHEET2.(20points)【08年真題】Directions:Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshoulddescribethedrawingbriefly,explainitsintendedmeaning,andthengiveyourcomments.YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)【07年真題】Directions:Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshoulddescribethedrawingbriefly,explainitsintendedmeaning,andthensupportyourviewwithanexample/examples.YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)[06年真題】Directions:Studythefollowingphotoscarefullyandwriteanessayinwhichyoushoulddescribethephotosbriefly,interpretthesocialphenomenonreflectedbythem,andgiveyourpointofview.Youshouldwrite160-200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.（20points）[05年真題】Directions:Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshouldfirstdescribethedrawing,theninterpretitsmeaning,andgiveyourcommentonit.YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.（20points）【04年真題】Directions:Studythefollowingdrawingcarefullyandwriteanessayinwhichyoushoulddescribethedrawing,interpretitsmeaning,andsupportyourviewwithexamples.Youshouldwriteabout200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.（20points）總體應(yīng)對(duì)策略：課下注意關(guān)注相關(guān)重點(diǎn)話題；熟練掌握?qǐng)D畫作文的寫作模式及步驟。二、“熟”套路：作文評(píng)分原則和方法一般評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)適用于A、B兩節(jié)。但根據(jù)兩節(jié)不同的考查要點(diǎn)，評(píng)分時(shí)會(huì)有不同的側(cè)重點(diǎn)第五檔：A節(jié)（9-10分；B節(jié)（17-20分）/（英語(yǔ)二13-15分）很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)1）包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)2）使用了豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯3）語(yǔ)言自然流暢，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤極少4）有效地采用了多種銜接手段，文字連貫，層次清晰5）格式與語(yǔ)域恰當(dāng)貼切對(duì)目標(biāo)讀者完全產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期的效果第四檔：A節(jié)（7-8分）；B節(jié)（13-16分）/（英語(yǔ)二10-12分）較好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)1）包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，允許漏掉一兩個(gè)次重點(diǎn)2）使用了較豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯3）語(yǔ)言基本準(zhǔn)確，只有在試圖使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯時(shí)才有個(gè)別錯(cuò)誤4）采用了適當(dāng)?shù)你暯邮址?，層次清晰，組織較嚴(yán)密。5）格式與語(yǔ)域較恰當(dāng)對(duì)目標(biāo)讀者產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期的效果第三檔：A節(jié)（5-6分）；B節(jié)（9-12分）/（英語(yǔ)二7-9分）基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容,但包含多數(shù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求有一些語(yǔ)法及詞匯錯(cuò)誤，但不影響理解采用了簡(jiǎn)單的銜接手法，內(nèi)容較連貫，層次較清晰格式和語(yǔ)域基本合理對(duì)目標(biāo)讀者基本產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期的效果第二檔：A節(jié)（3-4分）；B節(jié)（5-8分）/（英語(yǔ)二4-6分）第一檔：A節(jié)（1-2分）；B節(jié)（1-4分）/（英語(yǔ)二1-3分）零檔：所傳達(dá)的信息或所用語(yǔ)言太少，無(wú)法評(píng)價(jià)；內(nèi)容與要求無(wú)關(guān)或無(wú)法辨認(rèn)。A節(jié)：本部分評(píng)分的重點(diǎn)在于信息表達(dá)的全面、準(zhǔn)確、適當(dāng)。主要包括信息點(diǎn)的覆蓋是否全面，語(yǔ)篇結(jié)構(gòu)和格式是否正確，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)是否準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)域是否恰當(dāng)?shù)确矫?。?duì)語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯多樣性的要求將根據(jù)試題的具體情況作出相應(yīng)規(guī)定。B節(jié)：本部分的評(píng)分重點(diǎn)在于內(nèi)容的完整性、文章的組織連貫性、語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的多樣性以及語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性。2）評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)給分。評(píng)分人員在檔內(nèi)有1-3分的調(diào)節(jié)分。3）文章長(zhǎng)度不符合要求的，酌情扣分。4）拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是反映語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面。5）如書寫較差，以致影響讀者理解，分?jǐn)?shù)將降低一個(gè)檔次。.遣詞造句的基本策略：a）在用詞上，首先，選詞要準(zhǔn)確，詞能達(dá)意，符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。在此基礎(chǔ)上，要盡量做到用詞豐富，避免多次重復(fù)同一詞匯，可考慮適當(dāng)使用代詞、同義詞及近義詞等，從而使表達(dá)形式多樣化。準(zhǔn)確用詞（書面語(yǔ)）：A.拼寫B(tài).詞義C.詞性D.搭配Inwriting,theproperuseofaword=A+B+C+DIconsiderthatyouarethebestteacherinmystudylife.Neitheryouhaveextensiveknowledgenoryouarefriendlytostudents.Iconsiderthatyouarethebestteacherinmystudylife.Ononehand,youhaveextensiveknowledge;ontheotherhand,youarekindtostudents.Iwouldstudyhardly.Iwouldstudyhard.Iheadache,shetookthemedicineforme.Ihadaheadache,andshegotthemedicinefbrme.Hetaughtmeforthreeyears,hisblackhairdisappearance.Hetaughtmeforthreeyears,andhisblackhairdisappeared.Thankstothevariousofweather,Ihadacold.Thankstothechangeableweather,Ihadacold.Teacherlikenoodle.Teachersarelikecandles.Myteacherlikesmymomverymuch.Myteacherislikemymomverymuch.Theteacherlikecandleandburnstudent.Ateacherisjustlikeacandle,whichburnsitselfandgivesofflighttopeople.Alargenumberofwater???alargeamountofwaterHecost$10onthatbook.Hespent$10onthatbook./Thebookcosthim$10.Ihadahighcold.Ihadabadcold.Youdidnotrememberyourbody.Younevercaredaboutyourownhealth.Shehasabadbody.Sheisinbadhealth.Sheoftenreachedmyhome.Sheoftencametomyhome.Oneshouldbeselectiveinreadingbecausesomebooksareyellowbooks.Oneshouldbeselectiveinreadingbecausesomebooksarebadbooks/domuchharmtotheirreaders.Thechengjioflastyearwasmuchgood…Imadealotofprogresslastyearwiththehelpofmyteacher.巧用詞匯：Mostyoungpeoplelikepopsongs.Mostyoungpeopleenjoypopmusic.Mostyoungpeoplearefondofpopmusic.Mostyoungpeopleareinterestedinpopmusic.Mostyoungpeopletake/have/showmuchinterestinpopmusic.Withthedevelopmentofoursociety,it'sbecomingmoreandmorenecessarythatacollegestudent(should)learnEnglishwell.Withthedevelopmentofoursociety,it'sbecomingincreasinglynecessarythatacollegestudent…Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplerealizetheimportanceofkeepingfit.Nowadays,agrowingnumberofpeople/anincreasingnumberofpeople Nowadays,peopleingrowing/increasingnumbers b)在句子的寫作方面，首先要確保語(yǔ)法正確，句子的意義與結(jié)構(gòu)完整，意思連貫，邏輯合理，同時(shí)符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。其次，要做到句式句型靈活多樣，長(zhǎng)短句搭配協(xié)調(diào)，并適當(dāng)采用倒裝、強(qiáng)調(diào)等特殊句型，同時(shí)要注意盡量使用自己熟悉和有把握的句型。清晰的句子結(jié)構(gòu)意識(shí)：Don'tyourememberthe Isay,youlisten.Don,tyourememberthe Ifyoudon't,justlistentomenow./1'11tellyounow.Whenyourinlovewithabeautifulwomanisveryhard.Itisnotaneasythingtoloveabeautifulwoman.rmverysad,eventhethoughtthatkillmyselfwascomeout.IwassosadthatIevenwantedtokillmyself.SimpleSentence(簡(jiǎn)單句)：S+V主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)(不及物動(dòng)詞)(S=subject;V=verb;O=object)S+V+O主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)(及物動(dòng)詞)+賓語(yǔ)S+V+O+C主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)(及物動(dòng)詞)+賓語(yǔ)+賓補(bǔ)S+V+C主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)(被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài))+主補(bǔ)S+linkV.+P主語(yǔ)+系動(dòng)詞+表語(yǔ)(linkverb=系動(dòng)詞；P=predicative=表語(yǔ))Bushwonhiselection.ushwonhiselection,becauseheheldapositiononmoralissuewhichunderscorestheimportanceofthechurch*seffortstoprotecttraditionalvaluesregardingthefamilyandlife.［原因］2.AlthoughtheIraqwarhasbeenadisaster,andBush'selitistdomesticagendaisunpopularwithvoters,Bushwonhiselectionanyway.［讓步］3.Bushwonhiselection,sothatheplungedU.S.intofurtherthreatofterrorism.［結(jié)果］4.AshasbeenexpectedbythehundredsofRepublicansupporterswhogatheredtwoblocksfromtheWhiteHouseafteralongnightofpollwatchinganduncertainty,Bushwonhiselection.［情景］CoordinateSentence(并列句)： ,and/but/while/whereas/so/fbr ? ;moreover/however/therefore, Hehadbeeninthebusinessforsometime;hewasregardedasthebestcandidatefbrtheposition.Hehadbeeninthebusinessforsometime,and/sohewasregardedasthebestcandidatefortheposition.Hehadbeeninthebusinessforsometime;therefore,hewasregardedasthebestcandidatefortheposition.ComplexSentence(主從復(fù)合句)：adverbialclause(狀語(yǔ)從句)時(shí)間：when,while,as,before,(soon/shortly)after,since,assoonas(themomentthat),bythetime(when)Shehadjustfallenasleepwhensomeknocksatthedoorwokeherup.Theplanehadtakenoffbythetimewearrivedattheairport.Shewenttoseeherparentsassoonas/themomentthatshereturnedtoBeijing.Hehasbeenworkingveryhard(ever)sinceheenteredthatschool.原因：because,since,asHefailedinthefinalexambecausehedidn,tpreparefbritatall.Since/Ashehadnointerestinit,herefusedtheoffer.條件：if,aslongas,onconditionsthat,once,or/otherwise,unlessWhatshallwedoifherefusestohelpus?IfIwereyou,Iwouldtakethejob.You'11suremakeitaslongasyoudoyourbest.r11letyouknowaboutitonconditionsthatyoujustkeepitasecret.Youhavetodecideonitnow,or/otherwiseit'11betoolate.Oncetheenvironmenthasbeendestroyed,ittakesmanyyearsforthesystemtorecover.Theproblemswon'tberesolvedunlesssomemoreeffectivestepsaretaken.讓步：although,though,evenif/though,nomatter+wh?words,as,whetherNomatterwhatIsaid,hejustwouldn,tbelieveme.You'11havetofaceitonedaywhetheryoulikeitornot.Althoughhetriedhisbest,hestillcouldn'tmakeit.Hewon'tdoitevenifyoupromiseabigreward.Childasheis,hebehavesmuchlikeanadult.e)目的：sothat,inorderthatHegotupveryearlythatmorningso/inorderthathecouldcatchthefirstcoachtoBoston.f結(jié)果：so…that…Hegotupsolatethatmorningthathemissedthefirstcoachtothecity.g比較：Heisolderthanmostofhisclassmates（are）.h）地點(diǎn)：Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.i）方式：Hedideverythingashewastold.attributiveclause（定語(yǔ)從句）:that,which,who,whom,when,where,whyOnlythosewho/thatarenotafraidofdifficultyhavethechancetoachievesuccessintheircareers.Thebook（that/which）hewrotealmosttenyearsagoisstillpopularwithmanyyoungpeople.1stillrememberclearlythedayswhenweworkedtogether;Thisistheschoolwhere/inwhichIspentmychildhood.Thereasonwhy/thatheleftisstillunknown.Today,thepublicismuchconcernedaboutthewaythat/inwhichnatureisbeingdestroyed.Twomen,neitherofwhomIhadseenbefore,cameintomyoffice.Asurveywascarriedoutonthedeathrateofnew-bornbabiesinthatregion,theresultofwhichwasshocking.nominalclause（名詞性從句）：that;wh-wordsa）主語(yǔ)從句：LitisimportantthatacollegestudentlearnEnglishwell.tisestimatedthattheearthquakehasclaimedmorethan200people'slivessofar..Whathehaddonemadeusallveryfurious..Whyhedidthatremainsamystery.b）賓語(yǔ)從句：.Hepromisedthathewouldreturnthebookassoonaspossible..Hesuggestedthatwegotherebytrainratherthanbyplane.c）表語(yǔ)從句：Thereasonwhyhewasabsentfromthemeetingwasthathesuddenlyfellill.d）同位語(yǔ)從句：.Aftersomeinvestigation,theycametotheconclusionthathewasthesuspecttheyhadbeenlookingfor..Weareallforyourproposalthatthemeetingbeputoff.【句式巧轉(zhuǎn)換】Therearemanywaysforcollegestudentstogetto Therearemanywaysinwhichacollegestudentcangetto Collegestudentscangettoknowtheworldoutsidethecampusinvariouskindsof/manyways.Collegestudentscanfindvariouskindsof/manywaystogetto Variouskindsof/Manywaysareavailableforcollegestudentstogetto 【范例】Wecanimaginethebeautifulsurroundings.Therearemanytreesalongthestreets.Thereisacleanriverinthecity.Therearemanyfishesintheriver.Therearewillowtreesontheoneside.Therearesomepiecesofgrasslandontheotherside.Therearemanyflowersonthem.Justimaginethebeautifulsurroundingsifwemakeourcitiesgreener.Greentreeslinethestreets.Acleanriverwindsthroughthecity,inwhichfishswimsfreely.Ontheonesidestandrowsofwillowtrees;ontheothersideliesastretchofgrasslanddottedwithmanyyellowandredflowers.2.熟練掌握重點(diǎn)應(yīng)用文體的寫作格式及規(guī)范(PartA:小作文)：(1)概述：A.大綱要求：應(yīng)能寫不同類型的應(yīng)用文(100字左右)，包括私人和公務(wù)信函、備忘錄、摘要、報(bào)告等B.重點(diǎn)命題形式：私人和公務(wù)信函、摘要、備忘錄(2)信函寫作策略：A.熟練掌握英文書信格式、結(jié)構(gòu)特征及不同書信類型的文體特征B.熟練掌握和運(yùn)用不同書信類型中的常用句型C.多背范文，靈活運(yùn)用a)英文書信格式布局：信頭(heading)-*信內(nèi)地址(insideaddress)f稱呼語(yǔ)(salutation)->主體(bodyofletter)一結(jié)束語(yǔ)(complimentaryclose)-簽名(signature)-附件(enclosure)一再啟(postscript)Sample:September22,1986DearMr.Johnson,ThankyouforinvitingmetogivealecturetothebusinessstudentsatMarkhamCollegeon“StressandtheWork-place”.1amdelightedtobeabletocomplywithyourre-quest.October12thisfinewithme,butatimeat12noonwouldbemoreconvenient.Asyouknow,myfeeforthiskindoflectureis$35,000.Thisincludesbothmytravelandhotelexpenses.SeptemberhasbeenabusymonthformewithlecturesatMcGill,Concordia,andtheUniversityofMontreal.I'mlookingforwardtogettingtoTorontoinOctober,andinparticularlecturingatyourschoolonthe12th.Yourstruly,(Signature)Dr.MatthewS.WalkerEncl.P.S.b)真題實(shí)例講解：【08年】Directions:YouhavejustcomebackfromCanadaandfoundamusicCDinyourluggagethatyouforgottoreturntoBob,yourlandlordthere.Writehimalettertomakeanapology,andsuggestasolution.Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use“LiMing“instead.Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)Sample1:January20,2008DearBob,rmwritingheretomakeanapologytoyou.IborrowedfromyouamusicCDwhileIlivedinyourhouse.But,unfortunately,whenIwasunpackingthismorning,Ifounditinmyluggage.1wasinsuchahurrythat1forgottoreturnittoyou.I'11senditbacktoyoubypostorexpressassoonaspossible.Ifnecessary,Filcompensateforanytroubleitmayhavecaused.Onceagain,Ifeelsosorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Pleaseacceptmyapology.Sincerelyyours,LiMingSample2:January20,2008DearBob,ItmsorryaboutforgettingtoreturnthemusicCD,whichIborrowedfromyoulastweek.Itwascompletelymyfault.Iwassobusypreparingformyleavethatitmusthaveslippedmymind.Tocompensateformycarelessness,Ihaveaskedoneofmyfriends,whoisgoingtoCanadaforavisitnextweek,tobringtheCDbacktoyou.Hewillcontactyouassoonashearrivesthere.Again,Iwouldliketoapologizeforanyinconveniencethismayhavecausedyou.Sincerelyyours,LiMing【07年】Directions:Writealettertoyouruniversitylibrary,makingsuggestionsforimprovingitsservice.Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use“LiMing“instead.Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)Sample1:January20,2007DearSirorMadam,I'mastudentintheuniversityandIspendmuchofmyfreetimereadinginthelibrary.Vmwritingheretomakesomesuggestionsonhowtoimproveyourservice.Ifindthatsomemagazinesinourlibraryareactuallyoutofdate.Itwillbemuchhelpfuliftheycouldbereplacedbynewonesintime.Also,somenewbooksandmagazinesshouldbeintroducedbecausestudentstendtoshowinterestinalargevarietyofsubjects.Furthermore,sincetherearesomanybooksinthelibrary,thecurrentsearchingsystemneedstobeimprovedsothatthestudentscouldfindthebookormagazinemoreeasily.ThankyouforyourtimeandI'mlookingforwardtosomechangessoon.Sincerelyyours,LiMingSample2:January20,2007DearSirorMadam,Imastudentoncampushereandafrequentvisitortothelibrary.Vmwritingtotellsomeofmyideas,whichIwishtobehelpfulforyou.Inoticethatsomemagazinesinourlibraryareactuallyoutofdate.Itwillbebeneficialtousstudentsalotifnewissuescouldbeshelvedintime.Also,itmayproveverynecessarythatsomenewjournalsandbooksbeintroduced,forstudentstendtoshowinterestinmoresubjectsthanthosethey'relearning.Furthermore,sincethelibraryhasahugestorageofbooks,amoreefficientsearchingsystemmaywellhelpthestudentsfindtherightthinginashortertime.ThankyouforyourtimeandI'mlookingforwardtosomechangessoon.Sincerelyyours,LiMing【06年】Directions:YouwanttocontributetoProjectHopebyofferingfinancialaidtoachildinaremotearea.Writealettertothedepartmentconcerned,askingthemtohelpfindacandidate.Youshouldspecifywhatkindofchildyouwanttohelpandhowyouwillcarryoutyourplan.Writeyourletterinnolessthan100words.WriteitneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter;use“LiMing”instead.Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)January20,2(X)6DearSirorMadam,rmacollegegraduateworkingwithacomputercompany.AssomeonewhohaseverbenefitedalotfromProjectHope,IwishtodosomethingfortheProject.Specificallyspeaking,Iwanttoofferfinancialassistancetoachildinaremotearea.Hence,Vmwritingthislettertoseekforyourhelptorecommendapropercandidate.Itispreferablethattwothingsaretakenintoconsiderationinpickingoutacandidate.First,thechildshouldcomefromSichuanProvince,forIintendtohelpachildfrommyhometown.Second,asIwanttooffermoreaidtothechild,itwillbebetterifheorsheattendsprimaryschoolnow.Myplanwillbecarriedoutasfollows.Ononehand,Iwillofferatleast2,000RMBincasheveryyearuntilheorshefinisheshisorherhighschooleducation.Ontheotherhand,I'11buyhimorhersomebooksfromtimetotime.Yourprompthelpwouldbehighlyappreciated.AndIamlookingforwardtoyourreplyverysoon.Yourssincerely,LiMing【05年】Directions:TwomonthsagoyougotajobasaneditorforthemagazineDesigns&Fashions.Butnowyoufindthattheworkisnotwhatyouexpected.Youdecidetoquit.Writealettertoyourboss,Mr.Wang,tellinghimyourdecision,statingyourreason(s),andmakinganapology.Writeyourletterwithnolessthan100words.WriteitneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter;use“LiMing“instead.Youdonotneedtowritetheaddress.(10points)Jun22,2005DearMr.Wang,rmwritingthislettertopresentmyresignation.I*mreallysorryforthisbecauseIdoknowthatthiswilldefinitelybringmuchtroubletoyou,but,anyway,1havemyownreasonsforit.Tobeginwith,havingworkedherefortwomonths,1seemtofindthejobasaneditorisnotsuitableforme.What'smore,itkeepsmebusyalltheweeksothatIhavenotimetoprepareforthedegreeIhavebeenpursuingformorethanthreeyears.Again,Iapologizetoyouformyresignation.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Sincerelyyours,LiMingc)重點(diǎn)書信類型推薦：A.LettersofApplicationforaJob(求職申請(qǐng)信)1)見廣告后應(yīng)聘職位Sample:May16,2006DearMr.Jones,PleaseconsidermyapplicationforthepositionofComputerProgrammer,asadvertisedinTheGlobeMailofMay14,2006.Asrequested,Iamenclosingacopyofmyresume.Asyouwillseefrommyresume,Iamagraduateofthethree-yearComputerProgramCourseatHumberCol-lege.Mythreesummersofexperienceasastudentprogram-merhavegivenmevariedandvaluableexperienceonseveralkindsofcomputers.AceComputershascaughtmyattentionoverthepastfewmonthsasoneofthefastest-growingcompaniesinthefield.Ireallydesiretojoinacompanywhichwillgivemevariedex-periencecoupledwithopportunitiesfbradvancement;thusIamparticularlyanxioustobeconsideredforthisposition.IamavailabletostartanytimeafterJune1andIwouldbepleasedtocomeinforaninterviewatyourconvenience;youcanreachmeafter3:00p.m.at358-9853toarrangeanappointment.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Yburstruly,(Signature)JanetBaker2)求職自我推薦信：Jun.5,2005DearMr.Goodwin,WouldyourfirmbeinterestedinemployingakeengraduateofCentennialCollegewithadiplomainAccounting?Iwillbegraduatinginafewweeks,andameagertofindachai-lengingpositionwhereIcanusemyaccountingandmanage-mentskills.Asyouwillnotefrommyresume,Ihavehadtwosummers*experienceassummerreliefinacharteredaccountant*sof-fice.Ihavealsotakenextracoursesintheuseofsoftwareaccountingprograms,andfeelIcouldbeanassettoyourcompany.BecauseofAtlanticBusinessMachines,solidrepu-tationinthebusinessworld,Iwouldverymuchliketobe-comeassociatedwithyourfirm.Sincemyhighschooldays,Ihavebeenawareofyoursteadyexpansionandgrowingin-fluenceinOntario'sbusinesslife.Ifyouwishtoseeme,Iwillbeverypleasedtocomeinforaninterview.Icanbereachedafter3:00p.m.at764-8693.Thankyoufbryourconsideration.Yourstruly,(Signature)BeverleyK.Robbing3)求職申請(qǐng)信常用句型：(一)開頭部分：表達(dá)自己的申請(qǐng)意愿.Pleaseconsidermyapplicationforthepositionof…，asadvertisedin….sawyouradvertisementfora???yesterdayandIbegtotendermyapplicationforthepost.3.The???jobwhichyoudescribeinyouradvertisementinisonefbrwhichIthinkIcanshowsomeexcellentqualifications..1wishtoapplyforthe…positionyouareoffering..InreplytoyouradvertisementinIrespectfullyoffermyservicesforthesituation..Withreferencetoyouradvertisementin…fora/an…，Ioffermyselffbrthepost..Pleaseconsidermeanapplicantforthepositionwhichyouadvertisedin…..HavingnoticedtheadvertisementinIwishtoapplyforthepositionreferredto..1nanswertoyouradvertisementin???fora/an???,Iwishtotendermyservices..Youradvertisementfora…in…h(huán)asinterestedmeandIfieelIcanfillthatposition..Wouldyourfirmbeinterestedinemployingakeengraduateof…withadiplomain,,,?.Shallyouneedanexperienced…foryournextsummer?（二）中間部分：A.個(gè)人情況介紹1.1amagraduateofUniversity.Myofexperienceas???havegivenmevariedandvaluableexperienceon….2.1willbegraduatingin…，andameagertofindachai-lengingpositionwhereIcanusemy…skills.3.Asyouwillnotefrommyresume,Ihavehadexperienceasa/an???inaIhavealsotakenextracoursesintheuseof….4.1havebeenfor…yearsintheemploymentofa/an…company.graduatedfrom…University,canspeakEnglishfairlywellandpossessconsiderableproficiencyin….havebeeninthebusinessforthelast???years,andworkedasthedirectorofthe…department..rvehad…years'experiencewithacompanyasa/an…..Forthelast…years,Ihavebeenandstillama/an….9.1*myearsofage,female/male,andhavehad???years'experienceinalimitedcompanyJsoffice.10.1havebeenforfiveyearsinthepresentposition.B.申請(qǐng)求職原因：1.…h(huán)ascaughtmyattentionoverthepastfewmonthsasoneofthefastest-growingcompaniesinthefield.Ireallydesiretojoinacompanywhichwillgivemevariedex-periencecoupledwithopportunitiesfbradvancement;thusIamparticularlyanxioustobeconsideredforthisposition.2.Becauseof ssolidrepu-tationinthebusinessworld,Iwouldverymuchliketobecomeassociatedwithyourcompany.Since…，Ihavebeenawareofyoursteadyexpansionandgrowingin-fluencein…'sbusinesslife.3.WhileI'mquitehappyinmypresentwork,thedescrip-tionofyourjobsoundsevenmoreappealing.ITdenjoydis-cussingmyqualificationswithyouatyourconvenience.（三）結(jié)尾部分：表達(dá)面試期盼、感謝及回信期盼1.1amavailabletostartanytimeafter…andIwouldbepleasedtocomeinforaninterviewatyourconvenience;youcanreachmeafter…a.m./p.m.at…toarrangeanap-pointment.Thankyoufbryourconsideration.2.1fyouwishtoseeme,Iwillbeverypleasedtocomeinforaninterview.Icanbereachedafter…a.m./p.m.at….Thankyouforyourconsideration.3.1shouldbeverygladtohaveapersonalinterviewandcanfurnishreferencesifdesired.4.1fyoudesireaninterview,Ishallbemosthappytocallinperson,onanydayandatanytimeyoumayappoint.5.Shouldyouthinkfavorablyofmyapplication,kindlygrantmeaninterview.6.1trustthatyou'IIgivethisapplicationyourfavorableconsideration.7.Shouldyougivemeatrial,1*11domyutmosttoaffordyoueverysatisfaction.8.ThankyouforyourtimeandI*mlookingforwardtoareplyatyourearliestconvenience.B.LettersofComplaint(投訴信/申訴信)Apr.26,2000DearMs.Vineberg,IamwritingthislettertocomplainabouttheswivelchairIpurchasedfromyourstoreonMarch16.Untillastweek,therewerenoproblems.ButonFriday,April20,whenIsatdowntowriteanessaywithmylaptop,Ifeltapaininmyleftleg.Uponfurtherexamination,Inoticedthatthetwoscrewswhichheldthecha