(新高考)高考英語二輪復習專練28 應用文的用語錘煉之道(解析版)

備戰(zhàn)2021屆題型專練（新高考）28應用文的用語錘煉之道【策略1：關注結構之美】學會判斷句子成分是英語寫作的基礎。英語句子的構成也有其特定的規(guī)律,掌握了句子的基本句型、常見句式和詞語的習慣搭配,就能寫出完整、正確的句子。句子是寫作的基本單位，只有寫好句子才有可能寫好文章。1.主謂(SV):主語+謂語主語:一般由名詞(如boy)、主格代詞(如I)、動詞不定式或動詞-ing形式等構成。主語一般放在句首。謂語:由動詞構成,決定英語時態(tài)、語態(tài)變化,一般在主語后。不及物動詞(vi.)不能直接加賓語。[經典示例]①Icancommunicatewell.我能很好地交流。②Thefarmhousecameintosight.農場的房舍進入視野。[佳句賞析]①最重要的時刻終于到來了。Themostimportantmomentfinallyarrived.

②然而,在2018年這種上漲的趨勢慢了下來。However,thatincreasesloweddownin2018.

2.主(系)表(SP):主語+系動詞+表語該句式中的謂語動詞不能表達一個完整的意思,必須加上一個表明主語身份或狀態(tài)的表語構成復合謂語,才能表達完整的意思。這類動詞叫做連系動詞。作表語的可以是名詞、代詞、形容詞等。連系動詞有:(1)表示特征和存在狀態(tài):be,seem,appear;(2)表示感官:feel,look,smell,taste,sound;(3)表示狀態(tài)延續(xù):remain,stay,keep,continue,stand;(4)表示狀態(tài)變化:become,get,turn,go,run,fall,come,grow。[經典示例]①Ifeelhonored.我感到很榮幸。②Weshouldbeconsiderate.我們應該考慮周到。[佳句賞析]①我叫李華,晨光中學學生會主席。IamLiHua,presidentoftheStudentUnionfromChenguangMiddleSchool.

②在不久的將來,我們的學校將變成更讓人喜愛的地方。Ourschoolwillbecomeamoreenjoyableplaceinthenearfuture.

3.主謂賓(SVO):主語+謂語(及物動詞)+賓語該句式中的謂語動詞具有實義,是主語產生的動作,但不能表達完整的意思,必須跟有一個賓語,即動作的承受者,才能使意思完整。這類動詞叫做及物動詞。常用于這類句型的動詞有:like,hope,intend,learn,need,offer,promise,propose,refuse,want,wish等。[經典示例]①SoIcaneasilygetalongwithforeignstudents.所以我能很輕松地與外國學生交往。②Youshoulddoalotofpreparationexercise.你應該做很多準備練習。[佳句賞析]①學生和老師們都度過了一段愉快的時光。Thestudentsandteacherssharedagreattime.

②因此,它的票房收入可能會稍微上升一點。Therefore,itsbox-officeincomewillprobablyenjoyaslightincrease.

4.主謂賓賓(SVOO):主語+及物動詞+間接賓語+直接賓語該句式中的謂語動詞必須跟有兩個賓語才能表達完整的意思。這兩個賓語一個是動作的直接承受者,另一個是動作的間接承受者。通常這一間接承受者用一個介詞來連接,當動作的間接承受者在動作的直接承受者之前時,這一介詞往往被省略。[經典示例]①HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinner.他的妻子蒂娜給我們做了一頓美味的晚餐。②Thecompetitionoffersadolescentsagoodchancetoshowtheirtalents.這場競賽給青少年提供了一個很好的展示才華的機會。[佳句賞析]①我正寫信告訴你我最近的生活和學習情況。I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmylifeandstudyinrecentdays.

②這張畫向我們展示了一個令人心動的時刻。Thepictureshowsusatouchingmoment.

5.主謂賓補(SVOC):主語+及物動詞+賓語+賓語補足語該句式中的“賓語+賓語補足語”又叫做“復合賓語”,其特點是賓語與其補語之間是邏輯上的主謂關系,賓語具有雙重身份,它既充當前面謂語的賓語,又兼作其后賓語補足語的邏輯主語。充當賓語補足語的詞語和結構有:名詞、形容詞、副詞、介詞短語、非謂語動詞等。[經典示例]①Ourteacherencouragedustobepersonsenjoyingwork.老師鼓勵我們成為熱愛勞動的人。②Twodaysago,MomaskedmetofindrelevantinformationontheInternet.兩天以前,媽媽要求我在網上找一些相關信息。[佳句賞析]①另外,網上投票使得快速反饋成為可能。Furthermore,votingontheInternetmakesinstantfeedbackpossible.

②孩子們覺得燃放鞭炮很有趣。Childrenfindsettingofffirecrackersinteresting.

6.主謂狀(SVA):主語+謂語(不及物動詞)+狀語(副詞、名詞、介詞短語等)該句式中的謂語動詞都能表達完整的意思。這類動詞叫做不及物動詞,后面可以跟副詞、介詞短語、狀語從句等。[經典示例]①Asisscheduled,thematchwilltakeplaceat8:00amonSaturdayatourschoolplayground.正如計劃的那樣,比賽將在本周六上午八點在學校操場舉行。②Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.突然一只小兔子從我的馬前跳了出來。[佳句賞析]①從2012年至2019年中國電影票房的收入在持續(xù)不斷地上升。TheincomeofChinesefilmsincreasedconstantlyfrom2012to2019.

②這兩個騎自行車的人在馬路對面出現。Thetwocycliststurnedupacrosstheroad.

7.主謂賓狀(SVOA):主語+謂語+賓語+狀語[經典示例]①Youneedtoavoidmakingnoiseswhilechewingfood.咀嚼的時候你得避免發(fā)出噪音。②Expertswarnabouttwoextremeswhenitcomestoparents’praisefortheirchildren.當說到家長們表揚孩子的時候,專家們警告說要注意兩個極端。[佳句賞析]①我必須通過閱讀關于文化方面的書籍來提高自己。Ihavetoimprovemyselfbyreadingsomebooksaboutculture.

②你能夠寫一些有關你們當地的美國文化的東西嗎?WouldyoupleasewritesomethingaboutthecultureinyourpartoftheUnitedStates?

8.存現句:Therebe+主語+定語(介詞短語等)本句型又叫Therebe句型,常用來表示“在某地(某時)有某物(某人)”。若be后有兩個或兩個以上的名詞作主語時,be動詞應采取“鄰近原則”,即be應與鄰近的主語在數上保持一致。在此句型中,謂語動詞有時不用be,而用其他動詞,使語言表達更生動形象,如live,stand,lie等。[經典示例]①Thereisnodenyingthatsuchratingsmightbringconveniencetoconsumers.毫無疑問這種排名會給消費者帶來便利。②Thereisnobetterthemethanart,especiallyonthehistoryofwesternpaintingthatwillintereststudentsmore.沒有比藝術更好的主題了,特別是關于西方繪畫歷史的,那更能引起學生們的興趣。[佳句賞析]①不遠處有一座橋,沿著橋你就能找到那棵樹并摘到更多水果。Notfarawaythereisabridgethatcanleadyoutothetreeformorefruit.

②下一周我校將舉行中國剪紙展。NextweektherewillbeaChinesepaper-cuttingexhibitionheldbyourschool.

[策略演練]根據所給信息補全短文,注意句式結構的使用。(來源：2017·全國卷Ⅰ)DearLeslie,Howareyou?GladtoseeyouhavemadesomeprogressinChineselearningand（1）(我正給你寫信,告訴你一些我們下節(jié)課的事).

Thelessonwillbegivenfrom3pmto5pmontheafternoonofnextTuesdayintheclassroom502.Intheclass,（2）(你將主要學習唐詩),whichreflectstraditionalChinesecultureandisdeeplylovedbyChinese.YoucanfeelthebeautyofChinesebylearningTangPoetry.（3）(你最好課前做好充足的準備)andhaveabriefunderstandingofthehistoryofTangDynasty,（4）(它會讓你非常輕松地上完這節(jié)課).

(如果有什么我能幫你的),pleasedon’thesitatetotellme.Lookingforwardtomeetingyou.

Yourssincerely,LiHua.答案：（1）I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutournextlesson（2）youwillmainlylearnTangpoetry（3）You’dbettermakefullpreparationsbeforeclass（4）whichmakesiteasyforyoutogothroughtheclass（5）IfthereisanythingthatIcanhelpyou【策略2：關注用語之美】1.思維路徑1：替換常用簡單詞(1)動詞升級簡單詞匯高級詞匯say,believe,thinkfigure,holdtheviewthat,assumethat,Iamconvincedthatimprovepromote,enhance,strengthennevergiveupsticktoit,insistondoing,persistin,adheretoshouldbesupposedtodo,Itiswise/sensible/makessensetodo,nothingcouldbebetterthan...,It’sworthwhiletodo,deservedoing,finditrewardingandenjoyabletodo...likehaveapassionfor,befondof,fallinlovewith,haveanaffectionforcomeapproach,aroundthecorner,up-comingmakeenable,allowthankappreciate,begratefulto,conveymyheartfelthelpdosb.afavor,go/cometoone’said,withtheassistanceof,givesb.ahandusegainaccessto,beaccessibleto(2)形容詞、副詞、介詞升級簡單詞匯高級詞匯moreandmorepopularincreasinglypopularbigenormous,tremendousveryextremely,remarkably,overwhelmingly,pretty,perfectlyfamousaccomplished,haveahighreputation,distinguishedgoodamazing,unbelievable,incrediblebaddisgusting,awful,terribleimportantsignificant,vital,essential,fundamental,crucialallkindsofavarietyof,various,diverseaboutconcerning,relevant,related[經典示例]①Ontheonehand,toomuchpraisemightleadtochildren’slackofenthusiasmtoexplorenewthings,fortheyareafraidtheywon’tmeetparents’expectations.②Consideringtheenormousbenefits,whichwecanearnsteadilyfromtennispractice,includingpreventingusfromgettingshortsightedandkeepingphysicallyhealthy,wearelostintrainingcourse.[佳句賞析]①Thespecialdayallowspeopletoshowtheirloveandaffectionfor(對……表達愛和情感)theirfathers.

②It’sadvisable/wise(是明智的)forpeopletousetheircell-phonesmoreappropriately/properly(更恰當地).

③Withoutsufficientpreparation(沒有充分準備),youcanhardlyexpecttoanswerallthequestionscorrectlyandobtainsatisfactorymarks,letalonebeadmittedintoadesirableuniversity(夢想的大學).

④TracysaidshehadalreadyinformedSusanof(通知Susan)thechangeoftheappointment.

⑤PeoplegenerallythoughtitimpossiblefortheChineseteamtowinthechampionshipintheRioOlympicGames,buttheyovercamemanyhurdles(克服許多障礙)andeventuallyworkedmiracles/wonders(最終成功).

⑥DramaNightisscheduledto(預定)beheldontheeveningofnextFridayinthetheatrehall.

⑦Additionally(此外),havingbeenawardedscholarshiptwiceinourschool,Ihaveexcellentacademicperformance(極好的學術成就).

⑧Thisphenomenonhasbecomeaconcern/focus(成為焦點)wemustfacetodaybecauseofmanyseriousconsequences(許多嚴重后果)causedbyimproperuseofcell-phones.

2.思維路徑2：變化所用詞的詞性在作文中,可以通過改變一個詞的詞性,使文章富有變化,讓閱卷者感受到考生對詞匯各種用法的掌握水平和靈活運用的程度。常見的變化詞性的策略有名詞變動詞、動詞變名詞、形容詞變名詞等。(1)名詞變動詞Peopleareconcernedaboutthegradualdisappearanceofthetraditionalvalues.→Peopleareconcernedbecausethetraditionalvaluesaregraduallydisappearing.傳統(tǒng)價值觀正在漸漸地消亡,這讓人們很擔憂。(2)動詞變名詞Afterwatchinghisperformance,Ifoundhecouldreallydanceverywell.→Afterwatchinghisperformance,Ifoundhimareallygooddancer.看了他的表演之后,我發(fā)現他跳舞跳得很棒。(3)形容詞變名詞IwrotealettertoTomtothankhimforhisbeingsokind.→IwrotealettertoTomtothankhimforhiskindness.我寫信給湯姆對他的善良表示感謝。3.思維路徑3：短語富有變化漢語英語高級短語努力strugglefor=strivefor=sparenoeffortsfor從事embarkon=setabout=goinfor在當代incontemporarysociety=inpresent-daysociety=inthisdayandage大量的ahostof=agreatnumberof=alargeamountof更糟糕的是what’sworse=worsestill=tomakemattersworse遇見;偶遇meet=runinto=comeacross=meetwith=encounter依我看inmyopinion=asfarasI’mconcerned=frommypointofview除了……之外(還有)besides=inadditionto=apartfrom=aswellas=alongwith一方面,另一方面ononehand,ontheotherhand=foronething,foranotherthing高度評價thinkhighlyof=singhighpraisefor=thinkwellof把……考慮在內oconsideration=oaccount有資格的;有能力的;勝任的befitfor=beequalto=bequalifiedfor=becompetentin參加takepartin/participatein一些如何……的建議someadvice/tips/suggestionsonhowto...對……感到緊張feelnervous/anxiousabout克服緊張,緩解焦慮erase/overcome/getovernervousness/relieveanxiety樹立信心,對自己有信心buildupconfidence/haveconfidenceinyourself/beconfidentaboutyourself對……有益的benefit=beofgreatbenefit=bebeneficialto對……有害的;對……有損害的harm=doharmto/dodamageto=beharmfulto接觸到;有機會使用access=gain/haveaccessto=beaccessibleto對……(不)方便的beconvenient/inconvenientforsb.todo=bringconvenience/inconveniencetosb.對……有影響/作用haveaneffect/influence/impacton.../makeadifferencetosb.[經典示例]①Forexample,paper-cuttingandChineseknotsareallfeasiblemethodsofintroducingourculture,whicharealsomoreconvenienttoorganize.②ThereasonswhyIamqualifiedforthejobareasfollows.[佳句賞析]①Frommypointofview(我認為),it’struethatcell-phonesbringuslotsofbenefitsandconvenience,butonlywhenthey’reusedmoreappropriately(恰當地)cantheyserveusbetter.

②Allmyteachersandclassmatessinghighpraiseformyproficiency(高度贊揚我的熟練)inbothChineseandEnglish.

③Takingallyourrequirementsintoaccount/consideration(考慮到你的全部要求),IfirmlybelieveI’mtherightpersonyou’relookingfor.

④Asforaccommodation,IprefertolivewithalocalfamilybecauseIwanttoimprovemyEnglishandexperienceauthenticAmericanculturecloseup(近距離體驗真實的美國文化).

⑤Youareoptimisticaboutlifeandalwayshaveconfidence,whateverdifficultyyoumayencounter(遇見),whichhelpsyoustandoutamongtheclassmates.⑥Withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandards(隨著人們生活水平的改善),cell-phonesarefloodingintoourlife.

⑦Wearesorryforanyinconveniencethatwe’llbringtoyou(給您帶來的不便).Thanksforyourunderstanding.

⑧Nowadays,thesmartphoneshavefoundtheirwaytoeveryfamilyandareplayingaveryimportantroleinourlife.Theyarebeneficialtousinmanyways.However,theyalsodoharmtousmentallyandphysically(有害于我們的身心健康).

⑨Inaddition,seldomdoIhavetimetokeepmyparentscompany,soIdecidetohelpmyparentswithsomehouseworktorelease/ease/lessen/reducetheirpressure(緩解壓力),whichIthinkisofbenefittoenhancetherelationship(加強關系)betweenmyfamilymembers.

4.思維路徑4：變主動語態(tài)為被動語態(tài)考生在寫作中習慣使用主動語態(tài),其實,如果不知道動作的執(zhí)行者、沒必要強調執(zhí)行者或者想要表達更加客觀一些的話,被動語態(tài)就是一個很好的選擇。例如:(1)Myfathergavemeanewbookonmybirthday.(爸爸在我過生日的時候給了我一本新書。)→Iwasgivenanewbook(bymyfather)onmybirthday.(間接賓語作了主語)→Anewbookwasgiventome(bymyfather)onmybirthday.(直接賓語作了主語)(2)Andsomeworld-famousplayerswillbeinvitedtogivelessons.并且會邀請一些世界著名的球員來上課。(3)Besides,youareexpectedtobringsomenicesmallgifts.除此之外,(大家)會期望你帶一些小的美好的禮物。[思維演練]根據所給信息補全短文,并注意高級詞匯的使用。(來源：2018·全國卷Ⅲ)DearPeter,(我非常高興)tohearfromyou.Youaskedmeinyourlastletteraboutthephysicalexerciseinourschoolandthefollowinginformationmay（2）(給你一個粗略的理解).

Tobeginwith,（3）(一座美麗的新體育館已落成),which（4）(已成為新的地標)inourschool.Moreover,withthestadiumsetup,（5）(各種體育項目)areabletobeheld,ofwhichping-pong,football（6）(以及)runningcompetitions（7）(越來越受歡迎).Asforme,（8）(熱愛籃球)sinceithasbeengivingmestrength（9）(去迎接生活中的挑戰(zhàn)).

Allinall,I（10）(誠摯邀請)youtocometoourschoolandseeforyourself.

Yours,LiHua答案：（1）Iamexceedinglydelighted（2）giveyouaroughsketch（3）afabulousnewstadiumhasbeenbuiltup（4）hasbecomethenewlandmark（5）awiderangeofsportsevents（6）aswellas（7）enjoygreatpopularity（8）I’mintoxicatedwithbasketball（9）toconfrontthechallengesinmylife（10）sincerelyinvite【真題再現】【2020·全國卷III】假定你李華，你和同學根據英語課文改編了一個短劇。給外教MissEvans寫封郵件，請她幫忙指導。郵件內容包括:1.劇情簡介；2.指導內容；3.商定時間地點。注意:1.詞數100左右;2.結束語已為你寫好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMissEvans,Howiseverythinggoing!Iamwritinginsinceritytoaskyouafavorregardingaplayweadaptedaccordingtothetextbook.We’dliketocombineyourculturewithoursbyadaptingtheclassicnovelTheSteamboatforashortEnglishplay.Theplayissetonabigstormaftermidnight,ontheraftdowntherivernavigation,weseeasteamboatthatisgoingtosink.Wesavedascaredboy.However,theadaptionisquiteachallenge.HavingwrittentheEnglishscript,wedon’twantanythinginappropriatetospoiltheplay.Sowouldyoupleasesparesometimetoreviewthedraftscriptattachedtothisemailandmakenecessarychanges?Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?Givenyourbusyschedule,I’dbeveryappreciativeifyouoffertogivesomeprofessionaladvice.Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestregards!Yourstruly,LiHua【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，請求外教MissEvans對于《theSteamboat》改編短劇的支持?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應用文時態(tài)：根據提示，時態(tài)應為一般現在時，一般過去時和一般將來時。結構：總分總法第一段說明寫這封郵件的目的；第二段詳細說明英語戲劇的劇情介紹和指導內容細節(jié)問題；第三段表達感謝，并期待早日得到回復。第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）writeto；accordingto；combine；adaption；challenge；attachedto；convenient第三步：連詞成句根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。第五步：潤色修改【點睛】范文內容完整，要點全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數適當，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。作者在范文中使用了較多主從復合句，如：Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?這句話運用了if引導的條件狀語從句。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉換自然，為文章增色添彩?！绢}型演練】1為豐富校園生活，你校將組織迎新年籃球賽，地點設在校體育館。假定你是學生會主席，面向本校留學生寫一則通知，告知相關事宜。內容包括：1.比賽時間和地點；2.報名時間和方式；3.活動意義。注意：1.詞數80左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】NoticeToenrichinternationalstudents'lifeoncampus,wewillorganizeaninternationalbasketballmatchtowelcometheNewYearinourschool.Asscheduled,thematchwillstartintheschoolgymnasiumat3:00p.m.onMay14th.Throughtheactivity,thestudentswillgainalot.Notonlycanyoubuildupyourbodies,butalsoyoucanstrengthenteamspiritandenhancefriendshipbetweenstudents.Ifyouwanttobepartofit,pleasesignupforitbeforeMay2datourschoolwebsite.Welcomeyouractiveparticipation!TheStudents’unionApril19th【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生給向本校留學生寫一則通知，希望留學生報名參加你校組織的迎新年籃球賽。第一步：審題體裁：應用文時態(tài)：根據提示，時態(tài)主要為一般將來時,少量用一般現在時。結構：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內容。要求：1.比賽時間和地點；2.報名時間和方式；3.活動意義。第二步：列提綱（重點詞組）oncampus;asscheduled;notonly…butalso…;bepartof;signupforit第三步：連詞成句1.Toenrichinternationalstudents'lifeoncampus,wewillorganizeaninternationalmatchtowelcometheNewYearinourschool.2.Asscheduled,thematchwillstartintheschoolgymnasiumat3:00p.m.onMay14th.3.Notonlycanyoubuildupyourbodies,butalsoyoucanstrengthenteamspiritandenhancefriendshipbetweenstudents.4.Ifyouwanttobepartofit,pleasesignupforitbeforeMay2datourschoolwebsite.根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）（供參考）1.表文章結構順序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列補充關系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表轉折對比關系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(從句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果關系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰?！痉段狞c評】[高分句型1]Toenrichinternationalstudents'lifeoncampus,wewillorganizeaninternationalmatchtowelcometheNewYearinourschool.(運用了不定式作目的狀語)[高分句型2]Notonlycanyoubuildupyourbodies,butalsoyoucanstrengthenteamspiritandenhancefriendshipbetweenstudents.(運用了部分倒裝結構)[高分句型3]Ifyouwanttobepartofit,pleasesignupforitbeforeMay2datourschoolwebsite.(運用了if引導的條件狀語從句)2假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Tom給你發(fā)來郵件，說他最近幾次考試成績不太理想，他現在很難過。請你給他回封郵件，內容包括：1.理解他的處境；2.給他提一些建議。注意：1.字數100左右；2.開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數?！緟⒖挤段摹緿earTom,Knowingthatyouaresadrecentlyduetoyourpoorscores,IfeelsorryforyoubutIcanunderstandyoursituation.Asyourfriend,Ihavesomethingtotellyou.Don’tworryaboutyourstudytoomuch.Aslongasyoukeeponworkinghard,youwillmakeprogressstepbystep.Besides,facingdifficulties,youarenotalone.Thosewholoveyouwillalwaysstandbyyou.Lastbutnottheleast,itdoesn’tmatterhowothersthinkofyou.Whatmattersisthatyoushouldbeconfident.Therefore,followyourowncoursenomatterwhatotherssay.Ihopeyoucanwalkoutquicklyandbehappyagain!Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生給英國朋友Tom寫一封郵件，針對他最近幾次考試成績不太理想的問題表示理解并給出建議。第一步：審題體裁：應用文時態(tài)：根據提示，時態(tài)主要為一般現在時，少量一般將來時。結構：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內容。要求：1.表示理解他的處境；2.給他提一些建議。第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）dueto;worryabout;keepondoingsth.;makeprogress;standbysb.;thinkof;walkout第三步：連詞成句1.Knowingthatyouaresadrecentlyduetoyourpoorscores,IfeelsorryforyoubutIcanunderstandyoursituation.2.Aslongasyoukeeponworkinghard,youwillmakeprogressstepbystep.3.Thosewholoveyouwillalwaysstandbyyou.4.Whatmattersisthatyoushouldbeconfident.5.Therefore,followyourowncoursenomatterwhatotherssay.根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結構順序：lastbutnottheleast2.表并列補充關系：besides;and3.表轉折對比關系：but4.表因果關系：therefore連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰?！痉段狞c評】[高分句型1].Aslongasyoukeeponworkinghard,youwillmakeprogressstepbystep.（由aslongas引導的條件狀語從句）[高分句型2].Thosewholoveyouwillalwaysstandbyyou.（由關系代詞who引導的限制性定語從句）3假定你是高中學生李華，代表自己班級，邀請Dr.Frost給班級同學做一場關于“如何保持身心健康”的在線講座。請你寫一封信，發(fā)出邀請。要點：1.時間，地點；2.主題，可簡述原因；3.期望與感謝。注意：1.詞數100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearFrost,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearForest,I’mwriting,onbehalfofmyclass,toearnestlyinviteyoutodeliveranonlinelectureconcerningstudents’healthissuesbetween4p.m.and5p.m.nextFriday.Wewouldbemorethangratefulifyoucouldlectureonrelevantapproachestoimprovingourphysicalandpsychologicalhealth,especiallyasmanyofusareexhaustedanddepressedduetocontinuouseffortsinstudyaswellassufferingfrominadequatesleepandexercise,eatingdisorder,andfeelingstressedoutbeforeexams.It’llbeourgreatprivilegetobenefitfromyourexpertiseinhealthcare.Lookingforwardtoyourpositivereply.YoursLiHua【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封邀請信，邀請Dr.Frost給班級同學做一場關于“如何保持身心健康”的在線講座。第一步：審題體裁：應用文時態(tài)：根據提示，時態(tài)主要為一般現在時和一般將來時。結構：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內容。要求：1.時間，地點；2.主題，可簡述原因；3.期望與感謝。第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）onbehalfof；deliveranonlinelecture；physicalandpsychologicalhealth；dueto；aswellas；sufferfrom；stressedout；benefitfrom；lookforwardto第三步：連詞成句1.I’mwriting,onbehalfofmyclass,toearnestlyinviteyoutodeliveranonlinelectureconcerningstudents’healthissuesbetween4p.m.and5p.m.nextFriday.2.Wewouldbemorethangratefulifyoucouldlectureonrelevantapproachestoimprovingourphysicalandpsychologicalhealth,especiallyasmanyofusareexhaustedanddepressedduetocontinuouseffortsinstudyaswellassufferingfrominadequatesleepandexercise,eatingdisorder,andfeelingstressedoutbeforeexams.3.It’llbeourgreatprivilegetobenefitfromyourexpertiseinhealthcare.4.Lookingforwardtoyourpositivereply.根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結構順序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast（供參考）2.表并列補充關系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including（供參考）3.表轉折對比關系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(從句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…（供參考）4.表因果關系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult（供參考）連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，【范文點評】[高分句型1]I’mwriting,onbehalfofmyclass,toearnestlyinviteyoutodeliveranonlinelectureconcerningstudents’healthissuesbetween4p.m.and5p.m.nextFriday.(動詞不定式作目的狀語)[高分句型2]It’llbeourgreatprivilegetobenefitfromyourexpertiseinhealthcare.(it作形式主語，真正的主語的動詞不定式)4假定你是李華，你校將舉辦英語文化節(jié)，要求每個班級出一個節(jié)目。你的同學王明善于演唱英文歌曲，但是因為月考臨近，他不愿參加此項活動。請你給他寫一封建議信，內容包括：1.理解他的想法；2.建議協(xié)調好學習和活動的關系；3.陳述參加集體活動的好處。注意：1.寫作詞數應為80左右；2.信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。DearWangMing,SorrytolearnthatyouchoosenottoattendthecomingEnglishCultureFestival.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourpromptreplyandexpectingyourattendance.Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearWangMing,SorrytolearnthatyouchoosenottoattendthecomingEnglishCultureFestival.Sincethemonthlyexaminationisnear,Itotallyunderstandthereasonwhyyourejectedtotakepartinthisactivity.Butinmyopinion,thisisagreatchanceforyoutoshowyourself.Myadviceisthatyou’dbetterproperlyhandletherelationshipbetweenstudyandactivity.What’smore,gettinginvolvedingroupactivitiesnotonlymakesiteasierforyoutogetonwithothers,butalsocanbuildupyourconfidence.Lookingforwardtoyourpromptreplyandexpectingyourattendance.Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生給同學王明寫封建議信，建議他參加班級活動并說明理由。第一步：審題體裁：應用文時態(tài)：根據提示，時態(tài)主要為一般現在時。結構：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內容。要求：1.理解他的想法；2.建議協(xié)調好學習和活動的關系；3.陳述參加集體活動的好處。第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）monthlyexamination;understand;reject;takepartin;inmyopinion;relationship;getinvolvedin;notonly…butalso…;getonwith;buildup;lookforwardto第三步：連詞成句1.Sincethemonthlyexaminationisnear,Itotallyunderstandthereasonwhyyourejectedtotakepartinthisactivity.2.Butinmyopinion,thisisagreatchanceforyoutoshowyourself.3.Myadviceisthatyou’dbetterproperlyhandletherelationshipbetweenstudyandactivity.4.What’smore,gettinginvolvedingroupactivitiesnotonlymakesiteasierforyoutogetonwithothers,butalsocanbuildupyourconfidence.5.Lookingforwardtoyourpromptreplyandexpectingyourattendance.根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表并列補充關系：Whatismore,notonly…butalso…2.表轉折對比關系：but連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。【范文點評】[高分句型1]Sincethemonthlyexaminationisnear,Itotallyunderstandthereasonwhyyourejectedtotakepartinthisactivity.(運用了since引導原因狀語從句)[高分句型2]Myadviceisthatyou’dbetterproperlyhandletherelationshipbetweenstudyandactivity.(運用了that引導表語從句)5假定你是李華，你的留學生同學Elvis想要了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。請你寫封郵件向他介紹一下元宵節(jié)(theLanternFestival)。內容包括：1.節(jié)日簡介；2.風俗習慣；3.邀請他一起過節(jié)。注意：1.寫作詞數應為100左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。DearElvis,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearElvis,KnowingthatyouareinterestedintheLanternFestival,nowIamwritingtointroduceittoyou.AsoneofthemostimportanttraditionalfestivalsinChina,theLanternFestival,whichisalsoacontinuationoftheSpringFestivalcelebration,fallsonthefifteenthdayofthefirst

lunarmonth.Onthatday,weofteneatgluepuddings.Besides,peoplewouldgooutsidetoenjoythelanternsandguesstheriddles.PerhapsyoucanseeDragonDanceandsomewonderfulfolkperformances,whichareveryinterestingandexciting.I’dliketoinviteyoutojoinusfortheLanternFestival.Lookingforwardtoyourcoming.Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生給留學生Elvis寫封郵件中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日-元宵節(jié)。第一步：審題體裁：應用文時態(tài)：根據提示，時態(tài)主要為一般現在時。結構：總分法要求：1.節(jié)日簡介；2.元宵節(jié)風俗習慣；3.邀請Elvis共度元宵節(jié)。第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）beinterestedin;introduce...to...;oneof;acontinuationof;enjoythelanterns;folkperformances;invite...to...;lookforwardto第三步：連詞成句1.KnowingthatyouareinterestedintheLanternFestival,nowIamwritingtointroduceittoyou.2.AsoneofthemostimportanttraditionalfestivalsinChina,theLanternFestival,whichisalsoacontinuationoftheSpringFestivalcelebration,fallsonthefifteenthdayofthefirstlunarmonth.3.Nowmanyofushavebeenstudyingwiththehelpofonlinecourses.4.peoplewouldgooutsidetoenjoythelanternsandguesstheriddles.5.Perhapsyoucans