2020年英語高考作文指導(dǎo)-第4講潤色習(xí)作的四種策略

1、2020年英語高考作文指導(dǎo)-第4講潤色習(xí)作的四種策略2020年英語高考作文指導(dǎo)-第4講潤色習(xí)作的四種策略從書面表達(dá)的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中可以看出, 恰當(dāng)選用貼切、地道的高級詞匯句式對提高書面表達(dá)的得分非常重要。寫作時恰當(dāng)使用一些大多數(shù)考生有可能想不到的詞匯句式, 恰當(dāng)?shù)厍笮虑螽惢蚴褂幂^為高級的短語、習(xí)語等來代替普通表達(dá), 可以提高文章的得分檔次, 為寫作增添色彩。從書面表達(dá)的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中可以看出, 恰當(dāng)選用貼切、地道的高1. 地道的英語詞匯(1)The system has been designed _ the digital resources of the library. The system h

2、as been designed _ the digital resources of the library. to provide studentswithto give students quickand easy access to1. 地道的英語詞匯to provide studentsw(2)The lecture is _ their skills of English learning. The lecture _ their skills of English learning. to let students be interested in Englishand impr

3、oveis aimed at arousing students interest inEnglish as well as improving(2)The lecture is _(3)That evening, there will be _ shows of many local operas, which might be _. That evening, there will be _ shows of _ local operas, which might be _. wonderfulenjoyablemarvelousvariousa great visualand audit

4、ory feast for us(3)That evening, there will b(4) _; cellphones are _. _, cellphones _. Peoples living standards are improvingmore and more popularWith the improvement of peoples living standardsare flooding into our life(4) _2. 豐富的句型結(jié)構(gòu)(1)Because the Earth Day was coming, our school has put up many p

5、osters to appeal to us to join in the action for a greener earth. _, our school has put up many posters to appeal to us to join in the action for a greener earth. As the Earth Day was drawing near/ As the EarthDay was approaching/ As the Earth Day was aroundthe corner2. 豐富的句型結(jié)構(gòu)As the Earth Day was(2

6、)Could we go to the bookshop this Sunday? _ go to the bookshop this Sunday? Would it be convenient for you if we(2)Could we go to the bookshop(3)You will hold an art exhibition and are collecting suggestions about it. _ and you are collecting suggestions about it. Ive learnt that an art exhibition i

7、s to be held(3)You will hold an art exhibi(4)I think holding the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum is better than in community libraries. _ the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. Personally speaking, its more advisable to hold(4)I think holding the art exh(5)You can meet

8、him at the airport and take him to his hotel. _ you can meet him at the airport and take him to his hotel. I wonder whether youd be so kind that(5)You can meet him at the air(6)I deliver a farewell speech here on behalf of the students in our school. I think its a great honor. _ a farewell speech he

9、re on behalf of the students in our school. I feel it a great honor to deliver(6)I deliver a farewell speech(7)There is a saying: Rome wasnt built in a day. _, “Rome wasnt built in a day”. As a proverb goes(7)There is a saying: Rome wa3. 多樣的表達(dá)方式(1)Ive received your letter. You say that you are anxio

10、us about the coming Chinese speech contest. Im writing to offer you some advice. _ you are anxious about the coming Chinese speech contest, Im writing to offer you some advice. Having received your letter saying that3. 多樣的表達(dá)方式Having received your(2)I was motivated by the experience to have an open h

11、eart of learning. Im always trying to figure out what Im uncertain about. _, Im always trying to figure out what Im uncertain about. Motivated by the experience to have an open heartof learning(2)I was motivated by the expe(3)Our school life is busy. We should never forget to spare some time to do e

12、xercise and build our body. _, we should never forget to spare some time to do exercise and build our body. Busy as our school life is(3)Our school life is busy. Bu(4)We experience failures. We should believe in ourselves and keep trying. _, we should believe in ourselves and keep trying. Whatever f

13、ailures we experience(4)We experience failures. Wha(5)You should know compromise isnt shameful. On the contrary, it may show how modest you are. _ should know compromise isnt shameful. On the contrary, it may show how modest you are. It is you who(5)You should know compromise (6)Volunteering is a go

14、od method. It is beneficial to both the schools construction and the individuals development. _, volunteering is a good method, _beneficial to not only the schools construction but also the individuals development. Admittedlywhich is(6)Volunteering is a good meth4. 自然的順承銜接(1)明承: On the one hand, we

15、improve our skills by practice. On the other hand, we can cultivate our sense of cooperation and mutual help by participating in games. 4. 自然的順承銜接暗接: Apart from practicing regularly, we take part in some matches on behalf of our school. By participating in such activities, we broaden our horizons an

16、d strengthen our sense of cooperation. 暗接: Apart from practicing reg(2)明承: Firstly we held a meeting to discuss the procedures, and then we asked some students talented in computer to program the video. After that, we played the video in the school lecture hall. (2)明承: Firstly we held a meet暗接: We b

17、egan our work with a meeting discussing the procedures of making it. When all the work was done, we invited some gifted students to design the video. To our great joy, the video turned out to be a huge success. 暗接: We began our work with a【技法點金】巧妙潤色妙筆生花1. 高級句式使用三原則: 高考英語書面表達(dá)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)鼓勵考生使用高級詞匯和多種表達(dá)方式。但使用

18、高級詞匯并不等于使用一些偏難、古怪的詞匯, 而是使用一些表意準(zhǔn)確、形象生動、【技法點金】語法正確且符合以英語為母語的人的習(xí)慣表達(dá)方式的詞匯。在使用多種句式時, 應(yīng)遵循以下原則: 高級但不造作, 多變但不離譜, 復(fù)雜但不晦澀。平時注重有意識地積累和背誦原汁原味的英語句子或文章, 有意識地嘗試使用或模仿。語法正確且符合以英語為母語的人的習(xí)慣表達(dá)方式的詞匯。在使用多2. 注重行文邏輯兩連接: 對于連貫、自然的表達(dá), 要注重作文的邏輯, 以及學(xué)會明承與暗接兩種連接方式。明承需要有大量連接詞積累, 能夠在合適的地方借助連接詞實現(xiàn)明確過渡; 而暗接可以通過代詞或者上一句話提過的事物等進(jìn)行銜接。如, 上一句是, Young adults may never return to2. 注重行文邏輯兩連接: their studies or find it difficult to readapt to an academic environment. 下一句是, They may think it is better to continue in a job. . . . 其中, “they”作為代詞指代上一句的“young adults”, 實現(xiàn)了邏輯上緊密的承接