四級評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)示例

1、能在閱讀難度與課文相仿的書面材料時做筆記，回答問題，寫提綱和摘要，能就一定的話題，提綱，表格或圖示在半小時內(nèi)寫出不少于120詞，不超過180詞的短文，能寫日常應(yīng)用文（信函，簡歷），內(nèi)容完整，條理清晰，文理通順。1二、大學(xué)英語四級考試大綱對寫作的要求共1題，考試時間30分鐘。要求考生寫出一篇120詞的短文，試卷上可能給出題目，或規(guī)定情景，或要求看圖作文，或給出段首句要求續(xù)寫；或給出關(guān)鍵詞要求寫成短文。要求能夠正確表達思想，意義連貫，無重大語法錯誤。寫作的內(nèi)容包括日常生活和一般常識。短文寫作部分的目的是測試學(xué)生運用英語書面表達思想的初步能力。2三、評分原則 1. CET是檢查考生是否達到大學(xué)英語教

2、學(xué)大綱規(guī)定的教學(xué)要求，對作文的評判應(yīng)以此要求為準(zhǔn)則 2. CET作文題采用總體 (Global Scoring) 評分方法。閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎勵分(Reward Scores)，而不是按語言點的錯誤數(shù)量扣分。 3. 從內(nèi)容和語言兩個方面對作文進行綜合評判。內(nèi)容和語言是一個統(tǒng)一體。作文應(yīng)表達題目做規(guī)定的內(nèi)容，而內(nèi)容要通過語言來表達，要考慮作文是否切題，是否充分表達思想，也要考慮是否用英語清楚而適切地表達思想，也就是要考慮語言上的錯誤是否造成理解上的障礙。 4. 避免趨中傾向。該給高分的給高分，包括滿分；該給低分的給低分，包括0分。一名閱卷人員在所評閱的全部作文卷中不應(yīng)只給中間的幾種分數(shù)。3

3、四、評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 1. 本題滿分為15分 2. 閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共分五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分。各有標(biāo)準(zhǔn)樣卷一至二份。 3. 閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對照樣卷評分，若認為與某一分數(shù)（如8分）相似，即定為該分數(shù)（即8分）；若認為稍優(yōu)或稍劣于該分數(shù)，則可加一分（即9分）。但不得加或減半分。 44. 評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)： 2分條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎。 5分基本切題。表達思想不清楚，連貫性差。大部分句子均有錯誤，切多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯誤。 8分基本切題。有些地方表達思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫；語言錯誤相當(dāng)多，其中一些是嚴(yán)重錯誤。 11分切題。表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。 14分切題。表達思想清楚，

4、文字通順，連貫性較好?；旧蠠o語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯。 5白卷、作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達思想，則給0分 篇幅：120字 達不到字數(shù)要求的，要酌情扣1-5分；累計字數(shù)不足扣分注：（1）如題目中給出主題句、起始句和結(jié)束句，均不得計入所寫字數(shù)。 （2）只寫一段為0-4分，只寫兩段0-9分（指規(guī)定三段的作文）。范文示例6Part I Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduct

5、ion to a Tourist Attraction. You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines Your role: a tour guide Your audience : a group of foreign tourists Your introduction should include some welcoming words the schedule for the day a description of the place the tourists will be vi

6、siting (e.g. a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.) You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody. 7Ifeelitagreathonortobeyourguidetoday.First,onbehalfofmycom-pany,IwarmlywelcomeallmydistinguishedguestsfromAustraliatovi-sitShanghaiandtheOrientalP

7、earlTVTower.LocatedontheHuangpuRiver,theOrientalPearlTVTowerisnowthesymbolofthecity.Builtin 1994andopenedtothepublicin1995,itisnowthehighestbuildingin ShanghaiandthethirdhighestinAsia.TheTowerhasaquiteunique structureandconsistsof3largeballsand5smallballs.Insidetheballs,youcanhaveabirdseyeviewofthec

8、ity. OurscheduleforthetriptotheTVTowerisasfollows:youhaveanhourfrom9:30 -10:30amtoexperiencethehistoryofShanghaionthefirst floor.Thenwellassembleinthemiddleofthehallat10:30andhave anotherhourtooverlookatthebeautifulcitysceneriesinthemiddleball.Finallypleasedoremembertogotothetopballat11:30toenjoyyou

9、r lunch. Thanksforlistening.Haveagoodtime!14points 切題。表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好?；旧蠠o語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯。 （漂漂亮亮）8 Welcometothisbeautifulcity Hangzhou.Imveryhonoredtobeyourtourguidetoshowyouthemostcharmingsceneryofthecity.ImsureyouwillneverforgetthewonderfulvisitIwillleadyouto. Now,Imgoingtogiveyoutheintroductionofto

10、daysschedule.Inthemorning,wewillvisittheLingyinTemple.ItsoneofthemostfamoustempleinChinabecauseofitslonghistoryandgoodlocation. Aftervisitingthetemple,weplantohavelunchattherestaurantneartheWestLake.There,youwillhavetherealtraditionalChinesefoodandenjoythelandscapeofWestLake.Intheafternoon,wewillgot

11、oLeifengTowerwhichhasanromanticChineselovestorywhichIwilltellyouduringthevisiting.Afterdinner,Iwillshowyouthemostwell-knownscenery-WestLake.Youcanboatinginthelakeandenjoythebeautifulviews.Whatdoyouthinkoftheplan?Ifyouhavesomeadvise,pleasetellme.Iwillarrangeitandgiveyouamostcomfortabletrip. 11points

12、切題。表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。 （清清楚楚）9WelcomeeveryonecometovisitShanghai.Imthetourguide.ImgladtointroduceyouthecitywhereIgrowIup. Nowthefollowingisthescheduleforthedaywherewewillgo.Atfirst,wellgototheShanghai Museumat9am.Ibelieveyoulllikethere.YoucanlearnsomehistoryofChinaasyourareinterestinourcountry.Sec

13、ondly,atnoon,wellgototheYuGardenandhavearest.Youcannotonlybuysomethingthat youlikebutalsohavesomethingtoeat.ThefoodissodeliciousthatImsurethateveryonewilllike.At2pmwellgotothenextsitewhichis alsothelastonetoday.ThelastplaceisPudong.Youllfindthedevelop-mentofShanghaiisfast.Andatabout4pm,itwillbeendan

14、dwellgo backtothehotel. Ihopeeveryonewillhaveagoodtimetoday.Ifyoumeetwithtroubles, youcanturntomeforhelpatanytime. 8points 基本切題。有些地方表達思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫；語言錯誤相當(dāng)多，其中一些是嚴(yán)重錯誤。 （馬馬虎虎）10Hello!Everybody.Welcometohere!TodayImyourguide.Ibelievewewillhaveagoodtrip. WewillgototheAnJi.AnJiisverybeautifulcityinZheJia

15、ng.Ithinkyouwillbeintrestinit.Thedaysplanissomuch.First,wewillgototheZhuZhongYuanat8:00am.TherehavesomuchandveryofZhuzi.At11:30am,Wewilleatinglunch. Andattheafternoon,WewillgototheCangLongBaiPu.At1:00pmInthemountain,ariverstillaroundit.Theriversoclearandcold.Wecanseesomesmallfishintheriver.Walkalone

16、thestoneroad.Wewillbeseeingtheviewbesideofthestoneroad.IbelievethatYouwillverylikeit.At5:30pmWewilltakethebusandbacktohotel.Later,Youcaneatingthedinnerinthehotel.Thisistheplanoftoday.Now,Areyouhavesomequestions?Ifhavethenaskedme,AndIwillgiveyouaperfectanswer! SoIhopeandbelievethatWewillhaveagoodtrip

17、. 5points （稀里糊涂）基本切題。表達思想不清楚，連貫性差。大部分句子均有錯誤，切多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯誤。11ImverygladtoyourcometoShanghai.Welcome.wearevisitJinMaoBuildingtoday. JinMaoBuildingstandLujazuiFinanentTrade,inPuDong.TheshoppingandeatingallaboveinLujazuiFinanentTrade.ZhengDaGuangChang.DoFangMingZhuetc. JinMaoBuildingis800miller-higher.JinMao

18、KaiYueHotelinit.ItsthehighestforBuildinginShanghai.At88stairs,WecanlookallofShanghai,JinMaoBuildingissteelaboveall,glassabovewith.ItsveryclearintheSunny. Somebusinessofficeinhere,soitsthefamousFinanentTradeinShanghai. WearevisitingJinMaoBuildingcanintroducepeopleslivinginShanghai. Imwishyouvisithapp

19、ytoday.2points 條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎。 (一塌糊涂)12 A brief introduction to a tourist attraction Good morning, ladies and gentleman, welcome to Beijing. To begin with, I would like to introduce myself: I am the tourist guide from China Travel Service and its great honor to stay here with all of you for a whol

20、e day. Just as the old saying goes, “It is always a pleasure to greet a friend from afar”, I wish all of you to enjoy yourselves during this trip. The following is schedule of the day. The first spot we are going to visit is the Great Wall, the grandest fortification in ancient China. The next sight to look around is the Ming Tombs, which is one of the best-preserved tombs for 13 emperors in Ming Dynasty more than one thousand years ago. In the afternoon, we will go for the Summer Palace, the royal park for Chinese