高中英語(yǔ)作文寫作如何寫建議信PPT

1、關(guān)于高中英語(yǔ)作文寫作如何寫建議信第一張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月寫作要點(diǎn)：1.建議信：作者就有關(guān)問題進(jìn)行分析并針對(duì)這些問題提出自己的看法和建議。2. 對(duì)象：1）寫給個(gè)人，就其遇到的某個(gè)問題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)；2）寫給某個(gè)組織和機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)提出建議或忠告。第二張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月3. 基本框架：開頭（beginning）- 開門見山，向?qū)Ψ疥愂鲎约旱挠^點(diǎn).(state your idea)主體(body)- 對(duì)所提出的問題進(jìn)行分析并說明理由，接著提出自己的建議(reasons and evidence)結(jié)尾(ending)- 呼應(yīng)開頭，重申觀點(diǎn)(res

2、tate your opinion.)第三張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月4. 注意事項(xiàng)：1）建議信要寫出寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，語(yǔ)氣一定要禮貌當(dāng)先。因此建議信要寫得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力；2）建議的角度要多樣化，避免重復(fù)?？蓮恼?、經(jīng)濟(jì)、文化、倫理、法律以及個(gè)人等多角度給出建議；3）符合英文信件的基本格式；4）基本時(shí)態(tài)多用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。第四張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月常用套語(yǔ)A建議信開頭常用句式(照應(yīng)材料,表明寫作意圖)1. After I read your letter in the newspape

3、r, I am sorry to know that 2. I am very glad to hear that you want to3. I know you have trouble inafter reading your letterI am writing to you for the purpose of I am writing to share some advice/opinions with you.You have asked me for some advice with regard to and I will try to make some conductiv

4、e suggestions.7. You have asked me for my advice about/on 第五張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月B. 表達(dá)建議（body）1 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could 2. I would like to suggest/recommend that3. If I were you, I would4. Why not ?/ How (What) about doing 5. is a good/great idea.6. You may consider doing 7

5、. It would seem/seems to me that you could 8. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.9. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should First,/Firstly,/ Secondly,/ Then,/ After that,/ In the end,/ Finally, /Meanwhile, /Whats more,/ In addition,/ Besid

6、es,/ Furthermore, 第六張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式 I believe you will take my advice into account/ consideration.I hope you will find these proposals/ suggestions/ recommendations practical/ useful/ helpful.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.I would appreciate it very muc

7、h if you could consider my suggestions.5. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.第七張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月假如你叫孫軍，是紅星高中的學(xué)生，要給市長(zhǎng)寫一封信，反映學(xué)校門前交通擁擠現(xiàn)象，包括以下要點(diǎn)：參考詞匯: 穿行 thread ones way 天橋 overpass 問題建議學(xué)校和一所小學(xué)毗鄰，對(duì)著大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小, 家長(zhǎng)接送

8、。交通更擁擠；學(xué)生過街在車輛中穿行危險(xiǎn)。政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。第八張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月第一步：審題養(yǎng)成重視審題的習(xí)慣。雖然基礎(chǔ)寫作題是半封閉性的，但審題仍然十分重要?，F(xiàn)以樣題為例，談?wù)勅绾螌忣}：思考的問題樣題分析第幾人稱？（person）文章的體裁是什么？要寫的文章主題是什么 (topic)怎樣安排信息點(diǎn)的順序？ (order)動(dòng)作是什么時(shí)候發(fā)生的？(時(shí)態(tài)) (when)第一人稱一封信建議政府采取措施舒緩交通擁擠的狀況說理邏輯性一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)第九張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月書面表達(dá)如何寫？三個(gè)步驟Step 1 List the key pointsStep

9、 2 Make sentences Step3. Form a passage and polish第十張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月適當(dāng)運(yùn)用模板第十一張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月模板二：Dear _(對(duì)象)， I am writing to express my views concerning _(問題). First and for the most, _(建議一). In addition, _(建議二). Whats more _(建議三). I hope youll find these proposals useful. Yours sincerely,

10、 Li Ming第十二張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月Dear Bob,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on (引出主題). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建議)As to , I suggest (有時(shí)根據(jù)需要具體到某一反面). In addition,

11、 (其他建議). Im sure (預(yù)測(cè)可能的結(jié)果，給對(duì)方以行動(dòng)的信心和決心).Im looking forward to (表達(dá)愿望).Sincerely yours,Li Hua第十三張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月第二步：搜索相關(guān)詞組或句型問題建議學(xué)校和一所小學(xué)毗鄰，對(duì)著大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小, 家長(zhǎng)接送。交通更擁擠；學(xué)生過街在車輛中穿行危險(xiǎn)。政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。第十四張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月學(xué)校與一所小學(xué)毗鄰,對(duì)著大街stand next to primary face/be faced with the main streetTheres

12、 a primary school near our school, and both schools face the main street.Our school stands next to a primary school, faced with/facing the main street.推薦句型：There be+并列句非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)Standing next to a primary school, our school is faced with/faces the main street.第十五張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月潤(rùn)色小建議可將stand next to替

13、換為高級(jí)詞匯/短語(yǔ)be located next to (near/beside/by) border/adjoin vt. be adjacent to與毗鄰在對(duì)面 be opposite to第十六張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月 The traffic is busy during the rush hours.高峰期交通繁忙.traffic. during the rush hoursDuring the rush hours, there are so many cars and buses going on the road that the traffic become

14、s extremely busy.so. thatwith結(jié)構(gòu)With so many cars and buses going on the road during the rush hours, the traffic becomes busy .第十七張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月 加之孩子小,家長(zhǎng)接送,交通更擁擠 sendto, fetch. , which 非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu).Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier.M

15、any parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes / making the traffic heavier.第十八張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月加之孩子小，家長(zhǎng)接送，交通更擁擠Whats more, pick up. make.To make things worse/ Whats worse, many parents coming to pick up their children make the street more crowded.Whats more, pa

16、rents often attend their kids to school, resulting in more serious traffic jams.What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age.第十九張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月making the situation more serious.making the traffic heavier可意譯為： so. that.=tootoThe childre

17、n are so young that parents have to send them to school and fetch them home, which makes/making the traffic heavier.making 可替換為：causing, leading to, resulting in“sendfetch” 可替換為短語(yǔ)：pick up潤(rùn)色小建議第二十張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月 學(xué)生過街在車輛中穿行危險(xiǎn)thread ones way，when doingIt is dangerous for the students to thread th

18、eir way among buses and cars when crossing the road.固定句型It is +adj. for to do.第二十一張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月Students are risking their lives to thread their way among cars.潤(rùn)色小建議2. Some are exposed to danger when crossing the ocean/ sea of cars. 靈活運(yùn)用其它的短語(yǔ)進(jìn)行意譯： 適當(dāng)增加形容詞和副詞： it is extremely dangerous，it is o

19、f great/ tremendous danger第二十二張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月suggest/suggestion, take steps/ measures/ action to do such as政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。My suggestion is that the government should表語(yǔ)從句固定句型 It is high time that(虛擬語(yǔ)氣)It is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like buildingI suggest that the go

20、vernment should take steps such as building an overpass.簡(jiǎn)單句第二十三張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月1. In order to release the stress of traffic problems, 潤(rùn)色小建議2. Aimed at solving these problems, the government shouldA. 適當(dāng)添加一些意思（過渡句）The government should pay more attention to it and try to solve it.B. 語(yǔ)義的意譯3. Seein

21、g these matters, never will I stop urging our government to take some measures. For the sake of improving the quality of traffic, it is significant to buildC. 添加形容詞和副詞I strongly suggest, active/effective measures第二十四張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月第三步. 連句成文但要注意：篇章的連貫性Next to a primary school stands our school,

22、 facing a main street. _, its crammed with cars during the rush hour. _ children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age. _, its of great danger for the students to go through the traffic. _, it is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like building an overpas

23、s.A. As a consequence B. According to the phenomenon stated above C. When it comes to traffic jamsD. What makes things worse is that A.C.D.B.第二十五張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月反面范例第二十六張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月反面范例第二十七張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月反面范例第二十八張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月反面范例第二十九張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月不推薦字體第三十張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)

24、，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月優(yōu)點(diǎn)：考生能靈活地處理各個(gè)信息點(diǎn)，大量運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)，介詞短語(yǔ)，從句，連詞等來提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯個(gè)性和語(yǔ)言功底。優(yōu)秀作文范例1第三十一張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月優(yōu)秀作文范例2優(yōu)點(diǎn)：考生的書面整潔，字體美觀，運(yùn)用there be句型，介詞短語(yǔ)，從句，非謂語(yǔ)，套用句式等來提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯內(nèi)涵和語(yǔ)言功底。第三十二張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月優(yōu)秀作文范例3優(yōu)點(diǎn)：考生運(yùn)用倒裝句，so that句式，精彩的表達(dá)以及虛擬語(yǔ)氣等來提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯內(nèi)涵和語(yǔ)言功底。第三十三張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月優(yōu)秀作文范例4優(yōu)點(diǎn)：該考生最大

25、的特色是運(yùn)用了大量的高級(jí)詞匯等來提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯深厚的語(yǔ)言底蘊(yùn)。第三十四張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月如何給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三部分Heading點(diǎn)題；一兩個(gè)句子；概括性；暗示性2. Body 中心記述部分；層次分明3. Ending 小結(jié)；呼應(yīng)主題第三十五張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月 假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文。 注意：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；開頭語(yǔ)已給出。Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice no how to l

26、earn Chinese well._ _Best wishes,Li Hua 參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班； 看電視，報(bào)紙，雜志； 學(xué)唱中文歌曲； 交中國(guó)朋友；第三十六張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from t

27、he teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In ad

28、dition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try writing to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes, Li Hua第三十七張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月為了迎接即將到來的期末考試，你校要取消所有的體育課。請(qǐng)你以學(xué)生王麗的身份給校長(zhǎng)寫一封信，建議不要取消體育課。注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120左右； 2. 文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Headmaster,

29、 Im writing to express my views concerning our schools decision that all physical education should be cancelled.第三十八張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月常見連接詞表時(shí)間關(guān)系： when / after / before / until / not until as soon as / later / afterwards / soon / lately / recently / since / eventually / from then on / in the meanw

30、hile (meantime) / then / finally/ at last / all of a sudden / after a while / since then / immediately / instantly / every time / each time / the first time第三十九張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月常見連接詞羅列觀點(diǎn)： Firstly / First of all / To begin with / Above all / In the first place / On one hand For one thing, Secondly / Besides / Apart from / Whats more, / In addition， / Furthermore, / Moreover，/ Worse still, / To make matters worse, / as well / On the other hand / For another thing, / Next, Finally / In the end / At last / Last but not least,第四十張，PPT共四十五頁(yè)，創(chuàng)作于2022年6月常見連接詞表列舉： for example (instance) / suc