高考英語(yǔ)熱點(diǎn)話題指導(dǎo)與解讀：消費(fèi)江蘇學(xué)案

1、高考英語(yǔ)熱點(diǎn)話題指導(dǎo)與解讀：消費(fèi)江蘇學(xué)案高考英語(yǔ)熱點(diǎn)話題指導(dǎo)與解讀：消費(fèi)江蘇學(xué)案PAGE PAGE 8高考英語(yǔ)熱點(diǎn)話題指導(dǎo)與解讀：消費(fèi)江蘇學(xué)案熱點(diǎn)話題指導(dǎo)與解讀:消費(fèi)（江蘇高考)題目第五部分：書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分25分）請(qǐng)閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的文章。Li Jiang 6 July, SunnyOur family will go on a trip next month and need asuitcase。 Two days ago. Mom asked me to find relevant information on theinternet。 But the in

2、formation I got was rich and varied， or even contradictory。 Confused, I simply based my decision on the ratings。 Within five minutes, we ordered the one we were satisfied with。 Thisafternoon， Mom received the case and told me she liked it very much。Su Hua 6 July, SunnyThis morning, our family went o

3、ut, hanging round in the downtown area. We found a rating of the Top Ten Restaurants, and went into one of them. We spent quite a lot of money， but were not happy。 Mom complaineda lot， and said that despite its high ratings， the food was not to our taste。 Iwas puzzled。 Should I believe in these rati

4、ngs, or should I not？【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】1。用約30個(gè)詞概括上述利用排名( ratings）進(jìn)行消費(fèi)的現(xiàn)象；2.談?wù)勀闳绾慰创M(fèi)排名，然后用2-3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。【寫(xiě)作要求】1.寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句;2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng);3。不必寫(xiě)標(biāo)題【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】?jī)?nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。一、如何寫(xiě)概括:1.題干的關(guān)鍵詞關(guān)鍵詞：排名( ratings）進(jìn)行消費(fèi)，這就是概括的核心.2。段落的關(guān)鍵詞對(duì)于記敘文，一般有兩種情況，一是舉例;二是通篇一個(gè)故事。對(duì)于前者，只需要知道例子說(shuō)明什么論點(diǎn)，對(duì)于后者，需要知道主要角色做了什么事，帶來(lái)什么結(jié)果.結(jié)合題

5、干可知,要求概括現(xiàn)象，即兩個(gè)例子說(shuō)明了什么現(xiàn)象。切忌寫(xiě)例子里面的每個(gè)人發(fā)生了什么事.兩個(gè)故事都是對(duì)ratings的評(píng)價(jià)，第一個(gè)的評(píng)價(jià):like it; 第二個(gè)評(píng)價(jià)：complaining.3。關(guān)鍵詞的替換1. like it produce positive effects， a good impression2. complain dont meet needs, negativ eeffects, mislead基本上概括不需要很復(fù)雜的句型，主要是把大意說(shuō)明白：先看概括示范:The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack。 It notonly affec

6、ts our everyday life, but may also threaten peoples lives。 The threeselections presented above are typical examples。我的寫(xiě)法：Ratings for commodities are a doubleedged sword。They can help consumers make sound decisions， but sometimes mislead them and bring about complaints. The two stories presented abov

7、e are typical examples。 （30個(gè)詞)我的心得：針對(duì)現(xiàn)象的概括,不要具體寫(xiě)內(nèi)容，重點(diǎn)是：現(xiàn)象是什么,一般都是什么趨勢(shì)；結(jié)果或評(píng)價(jià)是什么,一般都是帶來(lái)什么影響，支持或反對(duì).二、如何寫(xiě)正文思維：我這里以反對(duì)為例：1.從政府角度（可能涉及到法規(guī)，監(jiān)管）：缺乏具體法規(guī)（there areno laws or policies and supervision）來(lái)規(guī)范市場(chǎng)排名2。從商家的角度（可能涉及到責(zé)任）:過(guò)多廣告投入，而不是質(zhì)量(give priority to ads）3.從個(gè)人角度：盲目隨大流（follow the crowd blindly)思維有了，但還需要整合的：前兩

8、個(gè)要點(diǎn)可以合并，政府缺少法規(guī)，導(dǎo)致商家可以不擇手段來(lái)提高排名。其實(shí)也可以舉例,譬如百度競(jìng)價(jià)排名，但寫(xiě)起來(lái)不容易。關(guān)鍵是如何論證消費(fèi)者只是盲目隨大流，考生可能有兩種思考:1。消費(fèi)者想當(dāng)然認(rèn)為排名代表了質(zhì)量實(shí)際上質(zhì)量高的很多產(chǎn)品因?yàn)橥度氩桓邿o(wú)法參加排名2。 消費(fèi)者想當(dāng)然認(rèn)為排名代表了受歡迎度實(shí)際上產(chǎn)品只是定制部分消費(fèi)者的,他們的體驗(yàn)被夸大而影響別人第一個(gè)論據(jù)和前面第一個(gè)論點(diǎn)重復(fù)了，因?yàn)榍懊嬲f(shuō)的是質(zhì)量,這里還是說(shuō)質(zhì)量；第二個(gè)論據(jù)就比較切合文章的第二個(gè)例子：the food was not to our taste。I dont support such ratings。 First,the abse

9、nce ofpolicies and supervisionsallowsproducers to earn high ratingsby all means。 Chances are thattop priorityis given to advertisement， which isan open invitation tomisleading information. Eventually, ratingsrely heavily oninvestment inadvertisementrather thanthe quality of services。 Besides，it is n

10、ot uncommon forindividuals tofollow the crowd blindlywithoutcritical thinking.Theytake it for granted thatratings definitely equal popularity. Actually， many productsare targeted atspecial consumers, whose experiencetends to beexaggerated and influences others.So，it is safe to conclude thatratings o

11、f purchases，if not handled properly，weigh againstthe development of a healthy market and cause unfair marketcompetitions（正文130個(gè)詞)Tips：1.the absence of缺乏也可以用:There is no，但是這個(gè)句型我比較喜歡用抽象名詞作主語(yǔ)來(lái)替換，這樣就省去了一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句。2.allow sb to do這里表達(dá)的是“使某人”。表達(dá)使動(dòng)概念，不一定用make。3.by all means無(wú)論如何。實(shí)際上這里我本來(lái)用by hook or by crook(不擇手

12、段），但考生考場(chǎng)上很難想到，而且不能保證閱卷人第一眼能識(shí)別出來(lái)，就舍棄了.4。chances are that有可能這是我代替it is likely that。的一個(gè)句型，超級(jí)順手5.表示重視的詞組:give top priority to6.be an open invitation to很大的誘因這是教材模塊7的一個(gè)詞塊，被我代替cause， be responsible for7。rely heavily on過(guò)度依賴(lài)于8.rather than不是9.it is not uncommon for對(duì)于是一個(gè)常見(jiàn)的現(xiàn)象10. follow the crowd隨大流11.critical

13、thinking批判思維12。take it for granted that想當(dāng)然認(rèn)為13.be targeted at目標(biāo)在于14.tend to往往15。it is safe to conclude that可以穩(wěn)妥得出這樣結(jié)論16.if not handled properly,省略句結(jié)構(gòu)17. weigh against對(duì)不利末段In short, internet voting, to someextent, is unfair，if not immoral， and cannot be trusted.Therefore, rules should be worked out a

14、nd strictly observed。 Everyone in oursociety should help those in need， but it is more important to be sincere andearnest。So,its safe to conclude thatit is reasonable to include English which facilitatesdaily communication.完整的文章:Ratings for commodities are a double-edged sword.They can help consumer

15、s make sound decisions， but sometimes mislead consumers and bring about complaints. The two stories presented above are typical examples.I dont support such ratings. First,the absence ofpolicies and supervisionsallowsproducers to earn highratingsby all means。 Chances are thattop priorityis given to

16、advertisement, which isan open invitation tomisleading information。 Eventually, ratingsrely heavily oninvestment inadvertisementrather thanthe quality of services. Besides，it is not uncommon forindividuals tofollow the crowdblindly withoutcritical thinking.Theytake it for granted thatratings definitely equal popularity。 Actually, many productsare ta