2021屆高考英語二輪復習書面表達說簡潔易懂的話學案

1、2021屆高考英語二輪復習書面表達說簡潔易懂的話學案2021屆高考英語二輪復習書面表達說簡潔易懂的話學案PAGE PAGE 102021屆高考英語二輪復習書面表達說簡潔易懂的話學案說簡潔易懂的話請閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。More than 100，000 volunteers in 132 cities spent a weekend picking up plastic and other waste across the country， in a joint worldwide effort to clean up the planet。To celebr

2、ate the 10th World Cleanup Day on Sept 15, some 700 non-profit NGOs （nongovernmental originations） and social groups held activities aimed at cleaning up the environment and tackling the waste crisis throughout China， mobilizing an estimated 1 millionplus people。 From snowcapped mountains to vast oc

3、eans, people united in taking action to remove waste from the environment to raise awareness of the severity of the crisis?！癢here there is a will， every day can be and should be Cleanup Day，” says Ma Yongjian， a volunteer from Beijing who recently did “plogging”jogging while picking up trash-with hi

4、s friends in Yudong Park in the northwest of the city。“We must change the way of living we are used to, to reduce waste from its source,” says Joe Harvey， a British national and promoter of “zero waste” lifestyles in China. He and his girlfriend Carrie Yu created The Bulk House， a brand that provide

5、s zero-waste solutions for daily living。 They are urging people to reduce or eliminate the use of plastic and singleuse disposables, such as plastic utensils, bags and beverage bottles.Sounding a note of caution， Mao Da, a specialist in environmental history at Beijing Normal University, says： “In r

6、ecent years， the massive consumption and materialistic craze have worsened the waste situation as trash has been produced at a faster pace and in greater quantities.”【寫作內(nèi)容】1。 以約30個詞概括文章大意。概括寫法一找、二并、三換概括大意需要文體，無非：新聞體、故事體、論說文.就本文而言，是新聞體。新聞體的大意主要看：事實和評論（facts and opinions),評論有時和寫作目的交織在一起。關注點:首段和末段(目的非常

7、重要）步驟：1。找關鍵信息More than 100，000 volunteers in 132 cities spent a weekend picking up plastic and other waste across the country， in a joint worldwide effort to clean up the planet。To celebrate the 10th World Cleanup Dayactivities aimed at cleaning up the environment and tackling the waste crisispeople

8、 united in taking action to remove waste from the environment to raise awareness of the severity of the crisis。2。提煉和合并去掉細節(jié)信息（例如數(shù)字)，換為：某人做了某事，目的+方式，即：sb do sth to do。by doing。More than 100，000 volunteers in 132 cities spent a weekend picking up plastic and other waste across the country, in a joint w

9、orldwide effort to clean up the planet。To celebrate the 10th World Cleanup Dayactivities aimed at cleaning up the environment and tackling the waste crisispeople united in taking action to remove waste from the environment to raise awareness of the severity of the crisis。這里面目的有好幾處，但基本相同，因此:clean up

10、the planet, raise awareness of the severity of waste crisis最終是：In celebrating the 10th World Cleanup Day， people make a joint worldwide effort to clean up the planet and raise awareness of the severity of waste crisis。但這個句子由于和原文相似多，稍微變換一下，改成：sb do sth to do.by doing。The 10th World Cleanup Day has ra

11、ised public awareness of the severity of waste crisis by encouraging more and more people worldwide to clean up the planet together.主體材料中來，材料中去（1）你對于“世界清理日”及類似活動有哪些看法？所謂看法，無非你覺得這件事的好處或壞處，說白了就是影響。當然談影響，就要說明原因.此類是環(huán)保話題，毫無疑問，從positive方好寫：思維要點：環(huán)保，健康環(huán)保reduce waste， create a clean environment where people

12、live in harmony with nature健康-價值觀，生活方式 serve as a wake-up call / reminder that we should pursue a healthy lifestyle.Undoubtedly， such activities can benefit the whole society a lot in many ways.（說明主旨)First， they contribute to a clean and harmonious environment.(要點一：干凈和諧） People have been suffering t

13、he consequences of the worsening environment and unfortunately the mounting waste is one of the root causes。（解釋，先從反面寫垃圾的負面作用）With volunteers cleaning up the waste, people work and socialize happily physically and psychologically。（承接前一句，形成對比） Besides， they serve as a wake-up call that people should p

14、ursue a healthier lifestyle such as avoiding overconsumption。 （要點二:生活方式的變化。同時用舉例法)（2）你覺得要采取哪些措施來保持環(huán)境整潔?公共性的措施無非是一大一小一意識,即：個人怎么做,政府怎么做。措施：1。 awareness：2. regulations3. recycling products但首先要明確一點，先要學會從材料中找要點,如果能找到的話,盡量先用材料中的要點來拓展。原文有:Where there is a will, every day can be and should be Cleanup Dayred

15、uce waste from its sourcereduce or eliminate the use of plastic and singleuse disposables, such as plastic utensils， bags and beverage bottles綜合一下：Honestly speaking, holding activities alone is far from enough。(說明主旨) For one thing, each individual should do his part to clean the environment around h

16、im instead of throwing rubbish at will.（要點一：個人責任,注意instead of的信息添加豐富骨干，避免說空話)A little effort can make a big difference。(承接前一句，說明原因）For another， producers should obey environmental rules and regulations and be subject to supervision.(要點二：生產(chǎn)商做法。為了避免觀點走空，加一個接受監(jiān)督.） Only in this way can a clean earth be

17、in sight. （最后總結）完整的作文：The 10th World Cleanup Day has raised public awareness of the severity of waste crisis by encouraging more and more people worldwide to clean up the planet together.Undoubtedly, such activities can benefit the whole society greatly. First， they contribute to a clean and harmoni

18、ous environment. People have been suffering the consequences of worsening environment and unfortunately the mounting waste is one of the root causes. With volunteers cleaning up the waste， people work and socialize happily physically and psychologically. Besides， they serve as a wake-up call that pe

19、ople should pursue a healthier lifestyle such as avoiding overconsumption.Honestly speaking, holding activities alone is far from enough. For one thing, each individual should do his part to clean the environment around him instead of throwing rubbish at will. A little effort makes a big difference.

20、 For another, producers should obey environmental rules and be subject to supervision. Only in this way can a clean earth be in sight. （共158詞)心得不要過于自信，慢慢說，小心寫我一直認為，寫作不要用太多的長句子，畢竟寫作是讓讀者(這里就是閱卷老師)在最短時間內(nèi)明白你說的要點，用短句子說明主旨，用長句子（但不要都是）解釋主旨句，長短結合.另外,句子一長了，各種漢式說法就冒出來了,神不知鬼不覺的?？傊?，寫作文應該讓讀者讀得舒服，那么能用一個常見的容易理解的詞就

21、不要用復雜生僻的，能一個名詞作主語的，就不要用動名詞短語，能一個簡單句說明白的，就不要硬湊上定語從句和非謂語動詞。一些搭配要牢記.參考答案說明：個人感覺答案第二部分說看法時,只是把材料復述一遍,并非發(fā)表了看法，因此需要斟酌。A great many volunteers throughout the country made joint efforts to pick up rubbish scattered around so as to bring the severity of environmental crisis into the public focus.The past decades have witnessed the development of economy, but we pay a high price for it