2021屆高考英語二輪復習讀后續(xù)寫深度解讀一

1、2021屆高考英語二輪復習讀后續(xù)寫深度解讀一2021屆高考英語二輪復習讀后續(xù)寫深度解讀一2021屆高考英語二輪復習讀后續(xù)寫深度解讀一2021屆高考讀后續(xù)寫深度解讀（一）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事?！癐m going to miss you so much, Poppy，” said the tall， thin teenager。 He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye。 He stood up, hugged his parents， and smiled， trying not to let his emotio

2、ns (情緒) get the better of him。His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least。 The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes a

3、nd then laughed。The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it，” he said. “Ill see you back home in a month, okay?” His parents nodded， and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boys mother turn

4、ed to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didnt seem interested in her dinner， her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk。 Her owners were sad too， but they knew their son would be back to visit。 Poppy didn

5、t。They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats。 They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasnt her usual cheerful self。 Her owners started to get worried. “What should we do to cheer Poppy up？” asked Dad。 “Weve tried everything?！薄癐 have an idea， but it might be a li

6、ttle crazy,” smiled Mom. “Without anybody left in the house but us， this place could use a bit of fun。 Lets get a little dog for Poppy?！盜t didnt take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box。 Poppy welcomed them home as usual， but when she saw the box，she stopped。 She put he

7、r nose on it。 Her tail began wagging (擺動） ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell。續(xù)寫要求:所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右;至少使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1：Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Paragraph 2：A few weeks later, the boy arrived home fro

8、m the university. 【思路點撥】文本細解讀，確定續(xù)寫結(jié)局本文是一篇記敘文，文章主要講述了家庭的主要成員之一兒子要去上大學了，收拾好行李和父母、年邁的狗狗波比告別。雖然一個月后男孩就可以回家看望他們,但是年邁的狗狗波比是不懂這些的,她只知道自己的小主人不在家，所以她非常難過,寢食難安。男孩的父母為了安撫波比，買了一只小狗給她作伴.續(xù)寫部分是故事的結(jié)局,波比是否因為新伙伴的到來而恢復了活力,以及男孩回家時兩只狗狗的反應。根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容可知，波比是因為失去男孩的陪伴而感到孤獨寂寞，因此續(xù)寫結(jié)局可以設置為波比接納了新伙伴，并且在男孩回家的時候，幫助新伙伴接受男孩。段首句解讀，確定續(xù)寫方向

9、續(xù)寫第一段首句寫道“爸爸打開了盒子，一只可愛的小狗出現(xiàn)在面前”，第二段首句寫道“幾周后，男孩從大學回到了家里”，由此可知第一段內(nèi)容應著重描寫打開盒子之后的場面，可設想，盒子里的小狗面對陌生環(huán)境略有害怕，波比卻因為有了同伴感到開心，然后和新伙伴一起愉快玩耍并且盼著男孩回家，這與第二段段首“幾周后，男孩從大學回到了家里”形成巧妙銜接。續(xù)寫第二段內(nèi)容應著重描寫男孩和波比、新伙伴見面的場景,可設想：男孩和波比彼此想念,欣喜無比；新伙伴看著波比對男孩那么親近，也上前湊熱鬧。劃線詞解讀,規(guī)劃續(xù)寫細節(jié)分類劃線詞人物-parents，boy環(huán)境university事物-Poppy，dog，box動作-hugg

10、ed,watched，back情感cheerful構(gòu)思具體情節(jié)第一段情節(jié)：父親打開盒子新伙伴膽怯的露出腦袋然后是爪子扒著盒子(box）波比(Poppy）繞著盒子跑了兩圈爸爸把小狗（dog）抱出來兩只狗開始在房間里跑來跑去父母(parents)和狗狗一起快樂的（cheerful）生活并且等待男孩回家（back）；第二段情節(jié)：男孩回來了,和父母擁抱在一起（hugged）波比看到男孩,欣喜萬分新伙伴遠遠看著（watched）他們倆一點點靠近嗖地跑上前，也把腦袋湊到男孩身上學著波比的樣子，搖搖尾巴男孩和兩只小狗一起打鬧.【范文欣賞】Paragraph 1：Dad opened the box and

11、a sweet little dog appeared。 It slowly showed its head, blinking its little eyes, then， two claws picked up the edge of the box and stood up。 Unluckily， it fell in the box in a second。 Poppy ran around the box twice, barking and barking. Dad took the dog to the ground gently。 At first, the dog didnt

12、 move. Poppy pushed his beloved toy to the dog. Soon, the two puppies ran after each other in the house happily。 Day by day, the boys parents lived a cheerful life together with two puppies， while waiting for their boy to be back.Paragraph 2:A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the universit

13、y。 As soon as he entered the house, the boy and his parents hugged each other。 Seeing the boy coming back, Poppy rushed forward to the boys feet with delight， shaking her head and wagging her tail. Her new partner watched them silently and moved to them a little bit。 At last， he swished forward, lea

14、rned how Poppy looked, and wagged his tail， too。 Finally, the boy and two puppies were playing on the sofa excitedly。亮點積累詞匯blink v. 眨眼睛；beloved adj。 心愛的短語rush forward 向前沖；with delight 開心地提分句式Day by day， the boys parents lived a cheerful life together with two puppies， while waiting for their boy to

15、be back。分析 本句是一個主從復合句。主句是“the boys parents lived a cheerful life”，“Day by day”是時間狀語，“while waiting for their boy to be back是省略了主語they和系動詞were的狀語從句。譯文 一天又一天，男孩的父母一邊帶著兩只小狗快樂地生活著,一邊等待兒子回家。（2) Seeing the boy coming back， Poppy rushed forward to the boys feet with delight, shaking her head and wagging he

16、r tail。分析 本句是一個簡單句,主句是“Poppy rushed forward to the boys feet with delight”,“Seeing the boy coming back”和“shaking her head and wagging her tail作伴隨狀語。譯文 看到男孩回來了,波比開心地沖到男孩腳邊，搖頭又擺尾。閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。課后練習A few weeks before Thanksgiving one year， my thenhusband and I decided to invite a guest

17、over for the holiday. I called a senior center and they suggested Ilse， a woman I imagined would be quiet, softspoken. Unexpectedly, she was a stubborn 78year-old gambler (賭徒)。On Thanksgiving， within minutes of arriving， Ilse threw her oversized purse on the kitchen counter and, with a wide smile, w

18、elcomed the glass of wine my husband offered。 We felt as if she were an old friend after dining. Two weeks later， I invited her to lunch. The more time I spent with Ilse, the more she became like a grandma。 She wasnt afraid to share her opinion or to ask me when I was finally going to have children.

19、 “Youre not getting any younger,” shed say。I soon became her personal driver. And I noticed the more favors I agreed to do， the more she asked of me. Six months after we met, I called her only child， Ralph for help, but he claimed he didnt have time。 I doubted his “Im too busy” excuse。 A few months

20、later， Ralph passed away. After the funeral， having realized Ilse was too upset to be left alone, I helped her hire a caregiver。 She was like family to me, I felt responsible for her. And I was the only one left in her side.Each time I stopped by her apartment, Ilse seemed more disconnected than the

21、 time before. Late one afternoon, she called from the emergency room to tell me she had tripped over her coffee table. Using the spare key shed insisted I make before, I searched her apartment and took the table away. The next morning, Ilse called to ask about her table。 She was angry and told me ho

22、w upset she was without it. Then she hung up on me。 When Ilse called that evening to apologize， I told my husband to say I wasnt home. I was still angry and hurt。續(xù)寫要求:1. 所續(xù)寫短文詞數(shù)應為150左右；2。 至少使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語;3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1：The following day, I returne

23、d her call but was unable to understand what she was saying。 _Paragraph 2:The morning after Ilses death, I pulled her will out。 _【范文欣賞】Paragraph 1:The following day, I returned her call but was unable to understand what she was saying. I drove her to the emergency room, where the doctor confirmed she had suffered a mild stroke。 During the next few days, I dropped by her apartment， but she was no long