英語(yǔ)六級(jí)寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)與分類范文

1、英語(yǔ)六級(jí)寫作實(shí)訓(xùn)一、六級(jí)寫作評(píng)分規(guī)范大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)考試作文的目的旨在考核學(xué)生英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)的能力。作文考試時(shí)間為30分鐘，要求寫出不少于150個(gè)詞的短文。六級(jí)考試作文的出題方式有：命題作文，看圖畫或圖表作文， 根據(jù)所給文章（英文或中文）寫出文章摘要或大意，給出關(guān)鍵詞作文等?？荚嚨淖魑膬?nèi)容為社會(huì)、文化或日常生活的一般常識(shí)，不涉及知識(shí) 面過(guò)廣、專業(yè)性太強(qiáng)的內(nèi)容。對(duì)作文的要求是：切題，文理通順，表達(dá)正確，意思連貫，無(wú)重大語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。下面介紹六級(jí)考試作文的評(píng)分原則和規(guī)范，并通過(guò)五份樣卷作一個(gè)詳細(xì)說(shuō)明。（一）作文評(píng)分原則. CET是檢查考生是否達(dá)到大學(xué)英語(yǔ)教案大綱規(guī)定的六級(jí)教案要求，對(duì)作文的評(píng)判應(yīng)以此要求為準(zhǔn)

2、則。. CET作文題采用總體評(píng)分（Global Scoring）方法。閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分（ Reward Scores）,而 不是按語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)的錯(cuò)誤數(shù)目扣分。.從內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言兩個(gè)方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)行綜合評(píng)判。內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言是一個(gè)統(tǒng)一體，作文應(yīng)表達(dá)題目所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容， 而內(nèi)容要通過(guò)語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)。要考慮作文是否切題，是否充分表達(dá)思想，也要考慮是否用英語(yǔ)清楚而確切地 表達(dá)思想，也就是要考慮語(yǔ)言上的錯(cuò)誤是否造成理解上的障礙。.避免趨中傾向。該給高分的給高分，包括滿分；該給低分的給低分，包括 0分，一名閱卷人員在所閱的全 部作文卷中不應(yīng)只給中間的幾種分?jǐn)?shù)。（二）作文評(píng)分規(guī)范.本題滿分為15分。.閱卷規(guī)范共分五等：

3、2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有規(guī)范樣卷一至二份。.閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷規(guī)范，對(duì)照樣卷評(píng)分，若認(rèn)為與某一分?jǐn)?shù)（如 8分）相似，即定為該分?jǐn)?shù)（即 8分），若 認(rèn)為稍優(yōu)或稍劣于該分?jǐn)?shù)，即可加一分（即 9分）或減一分（即 7分），但不得加或減半分。.評(píng)分規(guī)范：2分條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。5分基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。8分基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò) 誤。11分切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。14分切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性好?；旧蠠o(wú)語(yǔ)言

4、錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。注：白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有幾個(gè)孤立的詞而無(wú)法表達(dá)思想，則給0分。5.字?jǐn)?shù)不足應(yīng)酌情扣分累計(jì)字?jǐn)?shù)140-149130-139120-129110-119100-10990-9980-8979扣分12345679注:1.如題目中給出主題句，起始句，結(jié)束句，均不得計(jì)入所寫字?jǐn)?shù)2.規(guī)定內(nèi)容未寫全者，按比例扣分。實(shí)例一2003年1月真題Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You s

5、hould write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:.當(dāng)今社會(huì)上存在著很多不誠(chéng)實(shí)的現(xiàn)象。.誠(chéng)實(shí)利人利己，做人應(yīng)該誠(chéng)實(shí)。It Pays to Be Honest In our modern social life, there are many examples around us show many people are cheated. Advertisements cheat people, salesmen cheat people, even o

6、nes closest friends cheat him or her. So many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot help asking: where is our honest exist?Everybody is taught honest in the primary school or even in the kindergarten. Honesty does good not only to ourselves, but to others as well. If we are honest to others.

7、 We will be happier and be in a better mood. Otherwise, well feel guilt at last. To a company and its advertisement, honesty will bring it more consumer and more profit. If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone. To a company, no consumer will buy your product

8、again.So, as the above is said, it pays to be honest. Lets create a morally outstanding social.(2) Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers。 some students cheat in the exams.Dishon

9、est people are short-sighted. Those who sell fake products may make money at first, but consumers wont buy their products any more. As a result, they will lose their fortune or even be sent to prison. By contrast, honest people gain a lot. Those who always tell truth or keep to their promise not onl

10、y let others trust them but gain respect from other people as well. Such persons are sure to have a lot of good friends. Because they are trustable and respectable, everyone is eager to make friends with them. Besides, it is easier for a person with a good record to get a good job. Generally speakin

11、g, every employer wants his employees to be honest. So we can say that anyone who is honest will be paid back later.In a word, honesty wins trust, respect and honor. So it is important that we should be honest.With the development of modern economic and industry, competitive is becoming more and mor

12、e obvious. At the same time, the performance of dishonest is becoming more and more clearly.Nowadays, there are many dishonest performance in our society. For example, some people found that he saled goods had past the preservation date. Not throw them away, they revised the perservation date, and s

13、aled them again after several days. Another case in the point, a pair of shoes was made from goat. However, in order to sale at a high price, the salers would say they were made from cow which has good quality.From the foregoing, we can see that dishonest dose not only harm to yourselves but also ha

14、rm to others. And it is no use only realise the harmness of dishonest. We should be honest from now on and be honest in our daily life. It is only that people all over the world are honest them our country will be beautiful and wealthy.Now in our society, many people are not honest in doing soming.

15、We often can meet with soming happened cause by people who are not honest. For example, Now we take the bus need carry cents own, and when you upstairs the bus, you should put the cent into the money box. Every people do that, but some of the people put the other things instead the cents. For anothe

16、r example, it is more normal that in the exams we can always find some students see others.I consider that every people should be honest. As a people, honest should be first, because it can make us to be increase and make our socity develop. In doing every thing we should be honest all, study, word,

17、 life and so on. If you are honest, every people will be friend to you, and who will regard you are good people.But if you dont be honest, people must unwilling to trath with you. So if you are want to be a good people, remember honest first.Nowadays, many people choose not to be honest in our moder

18、n society. We almost can find such things every day of our life: some students cheat in the exam for higher marks 。 some corporations tell wrong data to the public in order to get more investment。 and some doctors treat their patients with unnecessary and expensive medicines in order to make money,

19、sometimes damaged the patients health, even their life.Seeing this situation. I think it must be changed. Being honest will benefit not only others, but also ourselves. First, your honesty will make others willing to trust you. Second, being honest can lead you to face your problem bravely, which he

20、lps to solve it. And the last, honest surely helps to make the society more harmony.So. I think everyone should start to be honest and everyone should have the idea that our society can not do without honesty.實(shí)例二1999年6月真題Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on

21、 the topic Reading Selectively or Extensively? You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:.有些人認(rèn)為讀書要有選擇.有些人認(rèn)為應(yīng)當(dāng)博覽群書.我的看法Reading Selectively Or Extensively? When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a g

22、ood way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead

23、us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field

24、of information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more ” . So they believe that reading extensively is better.To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of readin

25、g. I think reading not only selectively but also extensively. Because the two sides are not contradict. Our time is limited. So we can not read every book in the world. However, we will not be interested in every book. We should read those books may be useful to ours, read those books which we like.

26、 But those books which we choose must be extensively so it can give ours all kinds of knowledge, news and so on, it also make ours become a wise man. On the one hand reading selectively let ours not waste our time which it is limitted. Moreover it can emphasis among all books that we can read. On th

27、e other hand reading extensively can deal with all kinds of need in our life. They are all useful to ours. Most people thought that read books should have been selectived. But others belived reading extentively was correction.Selective books or reading extensively?Sure, you can choice one from previ

28、ous ideas,on one hand, There are too book to read for us. We should choose those which we intrested, and it would be helpful for us.on another hand. Someones intresting was wide. Each book could bring you specific contain we couldnt reading at only one level.I confirmed all of these ideas were good

29、but werent wise.As a reader, the main task is to discover more and more books the second task is to held some which wonderful and helpful for us. Dont treat these books with rackless abandon.The best technology of reading is connect.How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Ever

30、yone has his own view.Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. Whats more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we sho

31、uldnt read them. Since we cant read all the books and we shouldnt read bad books, we must read selectively.But others may not agree. They emphasize that todays society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge hell have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but k

32、nows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.Whos right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.Some peopl

33、e think reading shall be choosed. Because some books are good to hummen beings and some books are harmful to people.Some people think that men shoud read books widely. Because wide reading can help man get much knowledge. And man can use it to change the world.It is my point that reading must be sel

34、ectively. Because reading is important to man. Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. It can be seen in the newspapers and watched on TV. We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge. It can make our life more beauiful. We must give up those u

35、nhelpful books. They are not good to us. Reading them is wasting time and money. So reading selectively is an important part in reading.二、寫作常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤分析一、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤(一)句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤1 主從句疊置There are more and more students like to use the computer.There are still many problems should be noted and resolved. 簡(jiǎn)單句疊置I like ch

36、atting on line very much, I go to the net bar almost every weekend. 從句疊置As is known to all that computers play an important role in many fields of our life. 句子成分缺失If work hard, we will surely be successful. 語(yǔ)序錯(cuò)誤Why college students spend more and more time on the computer?I often wonder where have t

37、hey got their money.(二)動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤Many people thought that the Internet will be more useful in the future.語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤I have excited several days at the news that you will come here.Most of the students satisfy with the service in the dining hall.單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤Wise man seek opportunities rather than wait for them.Someo

38、ne are afraid that computer may control men in the future.4非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤Let me to represent everyone to say“ hello ” to you.Do exercise in the morning is good for one s health.Having studied in our school for 3 years, the canteen service has changed a lot.(三)代詞錯(cuò)誤We can use computers in doing everything yo

39、u like.A college student should be able to do their washing on their own.(四)冠詞錯(cuò)誤Horse is an useful animal.The exam will be held in the December, 2004.(五)詞性錯(cuò)誤I wish you can consider my suggests.If a person wants to success, he must learn to endure sufferings and setbacks.二、用詞錯(cuò)誤Students must know how

40、to apply a computer.People can touch many new things on the Internet.The purpose of this letter is to react some opinions on the service in the dining hall.三、表達(dá)習(xí)慣錯(cuò)誤Why generated so large a change?Now 6000 yuan can buy a P4 computer.A room often lives 6-8 students.I think this great change has three

41、reasons.The prices of the food are too expensive.The reason for this is because some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard.四、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫錯(cuò)誤However, every coin has two sides, I think the surroundings in our canteen are the best among all universities.The man was racing down the street.

42、 Because he was late for the class.At last I want to let you know, I love our university very much.My favorite sports are swimming 、 jogging 、 mountaineering and playing table tennis.The best English film in my eyes is Forrest Gump .三、六級(jí)寫作題型分類(一)對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)型2000 年 6月Directions: For this part, you are allow

43、ed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is a Test of Spoken EnglishNecessary? The First sentence has already been written for you. You should write at least 120 words, and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 很多人認(rèn)為有必要舉行英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)考試，理由是也有人持不同意見(jiàn)， 我的看法和打算1999

44、 年 6 月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reading Selectively or Extensively? You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 有些人認(rèn)為讀書要有選擇 2. 有些人認(rèn)為應(yīng)當(dāng)博覽群書 3. 我的看法1998 年 6 月Directi

45、ons: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Do “Lucky Numbers ” ReallyBring Good Luck? You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:有些人認(rèn)為某些數(shù)字會(huì)帶來(lái)好運(yùn)我認(rèn)為數(shù)字和運(yùn)氣無(wú)關(guān)1997 年 6 月Directions: For this part,

46、you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Job-Hopping.You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:有些人喜歡始終從事一種工作，因?yàn)?有些人喜歡經(jīng)常更換工作，因?yàn)?我的看法1996 年 1 月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes t

47、o write a composition based on the title:Why I Take CollegeEnglish Test Band 6. You should base your composition on the following outline (given in Chinese).有些人認(rèn)為沒(méi)有必要參加大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)考試我參加 CET-6 考試的理由1995 年 6 月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Should Fi

48、recrackers Be Banned? You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 有人認(rèn)為放鞭炮是好事，為什么?有人認(rèn)為放鞭炮是壞事，為什么?我的看法4.1993年6月Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Opportunity.Y

49、ou must base your composition on the following instructions (given in Chinese): 有的人認(rèn)為機(jī)會(huì)是極少的，另一些人則認(rèn)為人人都會(huì)有某種機(jī)會(huì)。你的看法如何？ 寫出你的理由并且適當(dāng)舉例。在你的文章結(jié)尾處不要忘記寫出你的結(jié)論。Your composition should be no less than 120 words. Remember to write it neatly.(二)解決問(wèn)題型2003年12月Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minute

50、s to write a short essay entitled Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following theoutline given below: 1.有些大學(xué)校園浪費(fèi)的現(xiàn)象日益嚴(yán)重 2.浪費(fèi)的危害3.杜絕浪費(fèi)，從我做起2000年1月Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance My College Education.

51、 You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:.上大學(xué)的費(fèi)用(tuition and fees)可以通過(guò)多種途徑解決。.哪種途徑適合我(說(shuō)明理由)。1998年1月Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Fake Commodities. You should writ

52、e at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:.假冒偽劣商品的危害.怎樣杜絕假冒偽劣商品1995年1月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on the title: My View on the Negative Effects of Some Advertisements. You should base your compositio

53、n on the following outline (given in Chinese).現(xiàn)在有些不良的商業(yè)廣告.這些廣告的副作用和危害性.我對(duì)這些廣告的態(tài)度You must write your composition in no less than 120 words on the Composition Sheet and remember to write in readable handwriting.1990年6月Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the

54、topic How to Solve the HousingProblem in Big Cities. Four suggested solutions to this problem are listed below. You are supposed to write in favor of one suggestion (ONE only) and against another (ONE only). You should give your reasons in both cases. You should write no less than 120 words. Remembe

55、r to give a short introduction and a brief conclusion. Write your composition clearly.四種可能解決住房問(wèn)題的技術(shù)方案：多造高層建筑向地下發(fā)展建造衛(wèi)星城市疏散城市人口1990 年 1 月Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic according to the following OUTLINE

56、. Your composition should be no less than 120 words. Remember that the contents of the OUTLINE should ALL be included in your composition. But you are not supposed to translate the OUTLINE word for word.OUTLINE問(wèn)題：城市交通擁擠解決技術(shù)方案( solution ).建造(lay down)更多道路優(yōu)點(diǎn)： (1) 降低街道擁擠程度2) 加速車流( flow of traffic )缺點(diǎn)：占

57、地過(guò)多2.開辟(open up)更多公共汽車線路優(yōu)點(diǎn)：減少自行車與小汽車缺點(diǎn)：對(duì)部分人可能造成不方便結(jié)論：兩者結(jié)合(三)諺語(yǔ)警句型1997 年 1 月Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Haste Makes Waste. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below

58、.為什么“欲速則不達(dá)”？舉例說(shuō)明。(四)圖表圖畫型2003 年 9 月2003 年 6月2002 年 6月1996 年 6 月1992 年 1 月1991 年 6 月(詳見(jiàn)“九、歷年寫作真題”部分)(五)應(yīng)用寫作型2004年6月2002年1月2001年6月（詳見(jiàn)“九、歷年寫作真題”部分）四、六級(jí)寫作分類范文（一）對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)型Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of College English Test （CET）. So

59、me people argue that it is absolutely necessary to hold a test of spoken English in China because we have been informed frequently that a Chinese student who has been learning English for over ten years cannot even communicate with a native speaker. A test of spoken English will bring the college st

60、udents an awareness of the importance of oral English, and will thus help them with their communicating skills.On the other hand, some others still maintain that a good command of reading and writing skills will be enough for the English learners. To some extent their opinion derives from the fact t