自己高考英語寫作專題輔導(dǎo)課件寫作基礎(chǔ)基本句型特訓(xùn)

1、基本句型特訓(xùn) 這里的基本句型包括簡單句的五個基本句型和there be句型。 所謂簡單句就是由一個主語(包括并列主語) 和一個謂語(包括并列謂語)組成的句子, 即一個主謂關(guān)系的句子。根據(jù)歷年高考閱卷的情況, 考生寫句子最易犯的錯是：不用be時卻用了, 或者該用be時卻沒用。因此, 我們須注意：特別提醒：(1)英語句子通常要有謂語動詞, 否則就不完整。如表達(dá)“他很累”, 不能說He very tired.而要說He is very tired.因為tired是形容詞,句中無動詞。切記：當(dāng)句子意思完整, 但句中沒有動詞時, 一定要加上be。(2)當(dāng)句中已有謂語動詞時, 若不是進(jìn)行時態(tài)或被動語態(tài),

2、一定不要再用be。如表達(dá)“他昨天來過這里”, 不能說He was came here yesterday.而要說He came here yesterday.課堂練習(xí)用基本句型翻譯下列各組句子, 然后合并成一篇通順自然的5句話的短文。心中有夢單句翻譯1.David 7歲了。(主系表)1. David was seven years old.2.他有一個夢想。(主謂賓)2. He had a dream. 3.他想在天上飛。(主謂賓)3. He wanted to fly in the sky. 4.他做了一架紙飛機。(主謂雙賓)4. He made himself a paper plane.

3、5.他完成了作業(yè)。(主謂賓)5. He finished homework. 6.他玩紙飛機。(主謂)6. He always played with the plane. 7.天上有一架飛機在飛。(there be句型)7. There was a plane flying in the sky. 8. 他的父親鼓勵他努力學(xué)習(xí)成為飛行員。(主謂賓賓補)8. His father encouraged him to study hard and be a pilot. 9. 他非常努力地學(xué)習(xí)。(主謂)9. He worked very hard at his lessons. 10. 十八年后

4、他實現(xiàn)了他的夢想。(主謂賓)10. He made his dream come true 18 years later.合并成文：When David was seven years old, he dreamed of flying in the sky. Having finished his homework, he made himself a paper plane to play with. On his way to school, there was a plane flying in the sky. So his father encouraged him to be a

5、 pilot in the future. It was by working hard that he made his dream come true eighteen years later.課外作業(yè)爬山日記單句翻譯1. 爬山是一種很好的運動。(主系表)1. Climbing is a good sport. 2. 爬山有益于健康。(主系表)2. Climbing is beneficial to our health.3. 今天我和同學(xué)去爬西山。(主謂) 3. Some classmates and I went to climb the West Hill today.4. 我們是乘

6、出租去的。(主謂)4. We went there by taxi.5. 我們大約在早上八點到達(dá)那里。(主謂)5. We got there at about 8 oclock in the morning.6. 有許多游客在爬山。(There be)6. There were lots of tourists climbing.7. 我們很興奮。(主系表)7. We were excited.8. 我們一刻沒耽擱就開始爬山。(主謂賓)8. We began to climb without any delay.9. 班長小明幫了我很大忙。(主謂賓賓)9. Our monitor, Xiao

7、Ming, offered me a lot of help.10. 我是唯一的女孩。(主系表)10. I was the only girl.11. 我們中午到達(dá)山頂。(主謂賓)11. We got to the top of the maintain at noon.12. 我們很累但很高興。(主系表)12. We felt tired but happy.13. 男孩子們讓我跳舞。(主謂賓賓補)13. The boys asked me to dance to music.14. 我的表演讓他們忘記了疲勞。(主謂賓賓補)14. My performance made them forge

8、t their tiredness.合并成文：Climbing is a good sport, which is beneficial to our health. Today some classmates and I went to climb the West Hill. When we got there by taxi at about 8 oclock in the morning, there had been many tourists climbing. We were so excited that we began our climb without any delay

9、, during which our monitor, Xiao Ming, offered me, the only girl, a lot of help. After we got to the top at noon, tired but happy, the boys asked me to dance to music and my performance made them forget their tiredness.專題訓(xùn)練基礎(chǔ)寫作讀寫任務(wù)基礎(chǔ)知識:常用表達(dá)1.時間:星期: 月份: 在星期日 在2006年在二月份 在2006年二月份在2006年二月三號Sunday Janua

10、ry, February, March, April, May, June, July, August, September, October, November, December (縮寫形式)On Sundayin 2006in February, 2006in Februaryon February 3rd, 2006 / On the 3rd February, 2006MondayTuesday,WednesdayThursdayFridaySaturday在5點鐘在上午/下午/晚上 在九月5號的上午/下午/晚上 在一個陽光燦爛的上午/下午 在21世紀(jì)在20世紀(jì)30年代9:00-10

11、:00at five oclockin the morning/ afternoon/eveningon the morning/ afternoon/ evening of September 5thon a sunny morning/ afternoon in the 21st century in the 1930sfrom 9 to 102.人名:3. 地點( 由小到大)李華 李麗華 李教授 史密斯一家 Li HuaLi LihuaProfessor Lithe Smiths韶關(guān) 廣州 廣東省我住在韶關(guān)市湞江區(qū)建國路15號 我們學(xué)校在廣東省韶關(guān)市503房 四樓Shaoguan Gua

12、ngzhou Guangdong ProvinceI live at No 15 on Jiangguo Road, Zhenjiang District of Shaoguan. My school is located/ situated in Shaoguan, Guangdong Province. Room 503 on the fourth floor我18歲。在某人30多歲/40多歲的時候我身高160厘米。我體重50公斤。I am 18 years old./I am an 18-year-old student. in ones thirties/forties.I am 16

13、0cm tall./I am 160cm./I am 160cm in height.I am 50 kilograms./I am 50kg./I am 50kg in weight.5基數(shù)詞, 序數(shù)詞 百, 千, 百萬, 十億 :五百 成千上百四分之一 五分之三百分之十 第一第十: 第十二 第二十第十四 第四十 第四十五 第一課hundred , thousand, million, billion five hundred thousands ofa quarter/ one fourth three fifthsten percent / one in ten / one out of

14、 ten first, second, third, fourth, fifth, sixth, seventh, eighth, ninth, tenth twelfth twentieth fourteenth fortieth forty-fifthLesson One the First Lesson練習(xí):翻譯下面的簡單句年爆發(fā)了第二次世界大戰(zhàn).2.一天, 她高興地走進(jìn)我的房間.3.一輪紅日從東方升起.4.張飛在三年級六班.5.那個故事聽起來很有趣. The Second World War/ World War II broke out in 1939. One day she ca

15、me into my room happily. The red sun rises in the east. Zhang Fei is in Class 6, Grade 3. That story sounds interesting. 6.老師好像對我的工作很滿意.7.早睡早起對人的身體有益.8.胡姍姍讀過這本書多次了.The teacher seemed to be pleased with my work. Going to bed early and getting up early is good/beneficial for/does good to your health.

16、Hu Shanshan has read the book many times. 9.我還沒決定去還是不去.10.周蘭借給我一些錢.11.這件晚禮服花了她四十美元. I havent decided whether to go or not. Zhou Lan lent me some money. The evening dress cost her forty dollars. She paid forty dollars for the evening dress.12.王小明常常在課堂上問老師許多問題.13.同學(xué)們把課室保持得干干凈凈.14.我們注意到有許多人站在學(xué)校大門口.15.我

17、找人把自行車修好了.16.你不應(yīng)該讓他一個人去那兒.Wang Xiaoming often asks the teacher a lot of questions in class. The students keep the classroom clean. We noticed a lot of people standing at the gate of our school. I had the bike repaired. You shouldnt let him go there alone. 并列句1. 用連詞/副詞 (and, but , so, for, or , not o

18、nlybut also, eitheror, neithernor, while, bothand, however, therefore)1) Li Ming is 18 years old and he is a student in No.1 Middle School.2)Hurry up or youll be late for school.3)I must go now, for my sister is waiting for me.2. 用 “ ; ”3. 用 “ ; + adv ”1) We fished all day; we didnt catch anything.W

19、e fished all day; however, we didnt catch anything. 2) The car was almost new; besides, it was in excellent condition. ,but we,so all 2) Lily does well in study; all the teachers think highly of her. 練習(xí): 翻譯下列句子 1.他雖然有病, 但是還是上學(xué)去了.2.湯姆很窮, 而他的弟弟卻發(fā)了財. 3.他丟了工作, 因此這些天心情不好.He was ill;however,/but yet he we

20、nt to school. Although/Though he was ill, he went to school.Ill as/though he was, he went to school.While he was ill, he went to school.Tom was poor while his brother became very rich. He lost his job, so he was unhappy these days.He was in a bad mood because he lost his job. 4.韓惠不但歌唱得好, 而且舞也跳得好.5.我

21、本打算昨天告訴你, 但你不在辦公室. Han Hui can not only sing well, but also dance well.Not only does Han Hui sing well, but also she dances well. I meant to tell you yesterday, but you were not in your office. I had wanted/intended to tell you yesterday, but you were not in your office. 段落(設(shè)計好一個段落)一般說來, 一個段落由三部分組成:

22、 主題句,擴展句和結(jié)論句.主題句提出的論述的主題, 擴展句利用必要的細(xì)節(jié)對主題加以論證說明,結(jié)論句總結(jié)全文,在論證的基礎(chǔ)上得出結(jié)論. 這三者是段落的必要成分,他們相輔相成,構(gòu)成一個完整的段落. 有些段落還有過渡句,它起到段與段之間的順利過渡.1.主題句1) 主題句的位置 : 請找出段落的主題句Smoking is harmful to your health. Experiment show that smoking can cause cancer. Besides the most serious disease cancer, smoking can also cause other h

23、ealth problems. For example, it gives one a “smokers cough”. Finally, studies have shown it is easy for smokers to catch colds. Whether you get an unimportant cold or the terrible killer, cancer, smoking is harmful. Is it worth it? Albert Einstein, one of the worlds greatest scientists, failed in hi

24、s university entrance exam on his first attempt. William Faulkner, one of Americas famous writers, never finished college because he could not pass his English courses. Sir Winston Churchill, who is considered one of the masters of the English language, was very poor in English during middle school.

25、 These few examples show that school does not always predict failure in life. Karaok, which was invented by a Japanese, one of the greatest wonders of modern technology. Needless to say, Karaok is a good way of rest. You can learn a new song easily. Its also a good way to make your friends happy. Ne

26、arly every body has a chance to be a singing star. However, everything has two sides, so does Karaok. Its noisy to your neighbors. Besides, if you sing badly, they will feel uncomfortable. In fact, you are sure to make a sound pollution 2)寫好主題句, 有兩條原則1.主題句要明確, 句中須有一個詞,詞組,或從句讓讀者一目了然本段的確切主題, 明確本段的重點或觀

27、點. 例如: This paragraph will talk about birds.這句作為主題句就太籠統(tǒng), 不確切. 試比較以下幾句, 下列幾個主題句就確切地闡明了段落的主題:a. Birds have a great sense of direction.b. Pet owners prefer certain species of birds.c. In my opinion, a bird makes a better pet than a cat does.d. Birds are suffering from air-pollution.2.主題句要概括, 它陳述你要說明的重點

28、和觀點,句中必須包含有可擴展主題的詞,詞組或從句. 他應(yīng)該是你將進(jìn)一步表明你的態(tài)度和看法的概括. 同時, 主題句有利于控制作者本人的主題的擴展. 例如: The young girl studied Chinese History. 該主題句未能概括主題的要點,則不利于下面的擴展. 最好增添一個詞或一個短語來修改這個句子,以便順利地展開你的主題. 例如:a. The young girl eagerly studied Chinese History.b. The young girl found three reasons for studying Chinese History.2. 下面

29、各段沒有主題句,請根據(jù)全段內(nèi)容擬定一個主題句.1) _. For example teachers live by selling knowledge, philosophers by selling wisdom and priests by selling spiritual comfort. Though it may be possible to measure the value of material goods in terms of money, it is very difficult to calculate the true value of services which

30、 people perform for us. The conditions of society are such that sills have to be paid for in the same way that goods are paid for at shop. Everyone has something to sell. Everyone lives by selling something.2) _. Before entering a house in Japan, it is a good manner to take off your shoes. In Europe

31、an countries even though shoes sometimes become very muddy, this is not done. A guest in a Chinese house never finishes a drink. He leaves a little to show that he has had enough. In a Malaysian house, too, a guest leaves a little food. In England, a guest always finishes a drink to show that he has

32、 enjoyed it. It seems that manners in different countries are never the same.Different countries and different races have different manners.3) _. Fire can heat water, cook, give out light and keep your house warm. Sometimes, however, big fires can burn down houses and forests. For example, the big f

33、ire caused by Yuanming Palace, a famous palace in Qing Dynasty, ruined completely. So we must be very careful with matches, burning cigarettes, faulty electric appliances or unquenched(未撲滅的) fires Be careful with fire because it does not always do us good.擴展句 擴展句的作用是豐富,支持,擴展主題句的內(nèi)涵. 他們是段落的血和肉. 擴展句的表達(dá)

34、形式是多種多樣的, 可以按時間或空間順序, 從整體到局部從局部到整體的方法敘述,描寫, 說明或議論, 也可用比較,對比, 比喻, 推導(dǎo),歸納,演繹的手段來展現(xiàn). 單一性: 一個段落只說明一個問題, 講述一件事, 擴展句必須緊緊地圍繞著主題句, 不偏離中心思想. 通常對擴展句的要求有兩個 : 單一性和連貫性 找出一個違背單一性的句子. China has made great progress in reducing its population growth. China has already cut its rate of population growth by about one ha

35、lf since 1970. It is wrong of the western governments to find fault with its policies of elimination of poverty. China now urges each family to have no more than one child. And it hopes to reach zero population growth, the number of birth equaling the number of death, by the year 2000. 連貫性: 段落中各擴展句前

36、后銜接,條理清楚,合乎邏輯, 使讀者很容易抓住段落的中心思想.在議論文中, 我們常會談到首先, 其次, 然后, 該如何表達(dá)?1)first, second, third, last 2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally 3)the first, the second, the third, the last 4)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally5)to start with, next, in addition,/besides, last but not least 6)on the one hand,

37、on the other hand 7)for one thing, for another thing練習(xí):根據(jù)所給的主題句和提示, 寫好段落的擴展句 (1) 主題句: How excited we were when we learned that we were going to have a spring tour.afterdiscussionagreeclimbout of the cityweoften pass by mountainthe first timethink ofclimb itset outearlymorningaboutan hourbegintiredst

38、ill a long waygoshort breakgo onclimblunch timeget to the topmountainour beautiful citybelow ushappyvery tired結(jié)尾句: It proves that many things are just like climbing a mountain; they look attractive, but they are not easy to do. 參考答案:(1) After a heated discussion we agreed to climb the mountain outsi

39、de the city. We had passed by the mountain when we were taking a bus out of the city, but it was the first time we had thought of climbing it. We started early in the morning. About an hour later, we began to feel tired, but there was still a long way to go. We took a short break and then went on cl

40、imbing. Not until lunch time did we get to the top of the mountain. At sight of our beautiful city below us， we felt happy though we were tired out. 練習(xí):根據(jù)所給的主題句和提示, 寫好段落的擴展句 (2) 主題句: He was kind and shy before a group of naughty girls, but he was very strict in his teaching and with our students.tea

41、ch usa lot in knowledgeas well as in moralityI remembermy final examHave an idealook in dictionarysecretlyUnfortunatelydiscoversave my faceAfter examcallto his officemy heartbeat fastInstead of scoldingsay kindlyadvisedo goodmovedtears18 yearspasskeepremind mestudy hardhonest 參考答案:(2) He taught us a

42、 lot in knowledge as well as in morality. I remember the time of my final examination. I had the idea of looking in my dictionary secretly. Unfortunately, my secret was discovered by him and he said nothing to save my face. After the examination, I was called to his office. My heart was beating fast

43、. Instead of scolding, he talked kindly to me and advised me to do good.I was moved to tears. Eighteen years has passed, but the lesson remains deep in my memory and always reminds me to study hard and keep honest. 結(jié)論句結(jié)論句并非必不可少, 但它能起到以下的作用:(1) 表示段落的結(jié)束(2) 總結(jié)要點,與主題句相呼應(yīng)(3) 供讀者就本段落的主要內(nèi)容和見解有個深刻的印象或進(jìn)行思考 結(jié)

44、論句:(推薦)1. (主題句:Life is limited, but knowledge is boundless.)結(jié)尾句: How important it is to read good books!2.(主題句:Books are full of knowledge and wisdom.)結(jié)尾句: Why shouldnt we read more books to search more and use them to develop our splendid future? 3.(主題句:When I was a little girl, I lived with my gra

45、ndparents in a faraway village.)結(jié)尾句: Time was gone with the wind. But my childhood is like amber(琥珀), glittering in my life.感嘆句疑問句比喻結(jié)論句:(推薦)1. (主題句:From Monday to Friday we go to school, and we have to do homework on Saturday and Sunday. Our rights of enjoying our weekends have been taken away by th

46、ose who wish us to do well in our lessons.)結(jié)尾句: In short, for young people, not only are we eager for knowledge but also we are thirsty for colorful lives. Lets become the real masters of weekends.2.(主題句:Success comes with hard work.)結(jié)尾句:So, as Tomas Edison once said, genius is one percent inspirati

47、on and ninety-nine percent perspiration.總結(jié),概括引用名言基礎(chǔ)寫作四重奏: 1. 信息劃分 : 確定哪些相關(guān)的信息可用一句話表達(dá), 確保5個句子表達(dá)完所有的信息. 建議可在題目上用鉛筆做 ,的標(biāo)志 (完整性)2. 列出關(guān)鍵詞組和句型 (準(zhǔn)確性)3. 串聯(lián)句子: 用正確的語法結(jié)構(gòu)寫出準(zhǔn)確的句子, 并形成篇章 (連貫性)4.檢查(準(zhǔn)確性)寫作內(nèi)容 人物介紹：老師范例(1)1 李莎， 女，英語老師, 22歲， 米，身材苗條, 裝扮入時。2 性格活潑， 愛唱愛跳， 愛開玩笑。3 教學(xué)方法生動活潑，常做游戲，精講多練。4 與學(xué)生關(guān)系融洽，深受同學(xué)歡迎；5.常與學(xué)生

48、通過電子郵件和網(wǎng)上聊天交流。寫作要求1 題目：A Unique Teacher2 必須使用5個句子介紹全部所給的內(nèi)容3 將5個句子組織成連貫的短文步驟一：句子內(nèi)容完整性將所給信息整合成5個句子1 李莎， 女， 22歲， 1。65米，身材苗條，裝扮入時。2 性格活潑， 愛唱愛跳， 愛開玩笑。3 教學(xué)方法生動活潑，常做游戲，精講多練。4 與學(xué)生關(guān)系融洽，深受同學(xué)歡迎；5 常與學(xué)生通過電子郵件和網(wǎng)上聊天交流。本題不需要進(jìn)行信息整合, 每一點一句話2. activelikesplay jokes 3. be lively and interestingplay games, not speak muc

49、h, leaves more time4. get on well with,be popular with5. communicate with. by e-mail or Internet步驟二：句子所需的詞匯，短語和句型李莎， 女，英語老師, 22歲， 米，身材苗條, 裝扮入時。性格活潑， 愛唱愛跳， 愛開玩笑。教學(xué)方法生動活潑，常做游戲，精講多練。與學(xué)生關(guān)系融洽，深受同學(xué)歡迎；5.常與學(xué)生通過電子郵件和網(wǎng)上聊天交流。 be slim and fashionable：A Unique Teacher Li Sha，our English teacher, is a fashionable

50、 and slim young lady, who is 22 years old, and1.65 meters tall. The active teacher likes dancing, singing，and she plays jokes with us. Her lessons are interesting and lively; she leaves us much time to practise and we often play games in class. Miss Li gets on well with us and she is very popular. A

51、fter class, she also communicate with us by e-mail or Internet. 。范文1:步驟三：連詞成句，連句成篇A Unique Teacher Li Sha，our English teacher, is a fashionable and slim young lady, who is 22 years old, and 1.65 meters tall. The active teacher likes dancing, singing and joking. Besides, her lessons are interesting,

52、lively; her teaching methods are also very unique, during which we often play games. She never talks much in class, instead, she leaves us much time to practise by ourselves, so all of us are interested in her lessons. Miss Li gets on well with the students; she always communicates with us by e-mail

53、 or Internet.范文2:步驟四: 檢查1.時態(tài)2. 主謂一致3.名詞單復(fù)數(shù)4.單詞拼寫5.動詞的過去式, 過去分詞6.句子是否完整寫作內(nèi)容1.地理位置: 在廣東省深圳的南面2.人口約600萬,面積1000余平方公里3.交通: 有現(xiàn)代化的港口及著名的國際機場,新修建的京九鐵路把香港和祖國首都北京連接起來4. 歷史: 香港自古以來是中國領(lǐng)土. 150 多年前英國入侵香港, 占領(lǐng)香港5. 回歸: 1997 年7 月1日寫作要求1 題目：Hong Kong2 必須使用5個句子介紹全部所給的內(nèi)容3 將5個句子組織成連貫的短文步驟二：句子所需的詞匯，短語和句型步驟一: 信息劃分(本題提示清晰,

54、這步可省略)1.地理位置: 在廣東省深圳的南面 be located/situated-to the south of2.人口約600萬,面積1000余平方公里 has a population of/ The population ofis-cover an area of3.交通: 有現(xiàn)代化的港口及著名的國際機場,新修建的京九鐵路把香港和祖國首都北京連接起來4. 歷史: 香港自古以來是中國領(lǐng)土. 150 多年前英國入侵香港, 占領(lǐng)香港5. 回歸: 1997 年7 月1日 modern seaport-international airport- newly-built railway-co

55、nnectwithbelong to-invade-occupyreturn to China-on July 1st,1997： Hong Kong Hong Kong lies to the south of Shenzhen, Guangdong Province of China. It has a population of about 6,000,000 and covers an area of more than 1,000 square kilometers . It has not only the modern seaport but also the famous Ne

56、w International Airport;The newly-built railway from Beijing to Jiulong connects Hong Kong with the capital of our country. Since long ago, Hong Kong has belonged to China ; unfortunately 150 years ago the English soldiers invaded China and occupied Hong Kong by force. To the great delight of us Chinese people, Hong Kong returned to China on July 1