Guidedwriting-學(xué)寫(xiě)關(guān)注、建議信

1、第5講書(shū)信、電子郵件文體透析: 書(shū)信、電子郵件的寫(xiě)作是高考中出現(xiàn)頻率最高的一種題型。從內(nèi)容上看，近幾年高考書(shū)信寫(xiě)作主要包括求助信、致歉信、致謝信、筆友信、慰問(wèn)信、投訴信、邀請(qǐng)信、介紹信、求職信、讀者請(qǐng)求的解答信及其答復(fù)讀者的信等?！緦?xiě)作任務(wù)】書(shū)信、電子郵件 書(shū)信的格式：大體相同，多半包括三個(gè)部分：開(kāi)頭、正文部分和結(jié)尾。 寫(xiě)信時(shí)，應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：. 在篇首寫(xiě)出信的意圖或目的；. 中間部分，不同類(lèi)型的信件表達(dá)的內(nèi)容不同，注意句式的多樣化。. 末尾處表達(dá)愿望或祝福?！緦?xiě)作任務(wù)】書(shū)信、電子郵件【寫(xiě)作提示】 關(guān)注、建議信是作者就某個(gè)問(wèn)題、現(xiàn)象提出自己的觀點(diǎn)或態(tài)度，并力圖說(shuō)服對(duì)方接受自己的觀點(diǎn)。 它通常由

2、簡(jiǎn)單介紹寫(xiě)信緣由并向?qū)Ψ街乱詥?wèn)候，就問(wèn)題本身做針對(duì)性鼓勵(lì)、安慰，并提出自己的建議，最后表達(dá)希望或祝福等內(nèi)容構(gòu)成。提建議時(shí)語(yǔ)氣一定要委婉，體現(xiàn)出自己的關(guān)切之情?！?常用語(yǔ)句】. .1. 普通信：I am so pleased to hear from you ，you want to know Im writing to tell you about . I m writing to you informing that. .【 常用語(yǔ)句】. .2.求職信：I am a student from University. Im glad to learn that you need a . Im

3、quite interested in it and I think I am fit for it. Im writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a . . For the past three years I have been in the, where I worked as . If I have a chance to work in your company, I will try my best to be a good employee.【 常用語(yǔ)句】. .3.求助信：I

4、 have a trouble these days and need your help/advice Im writing a letter to you to get some help about. .【 常用語(yǔ)句】. .4.邀請(qǐng)信：We are planning to on Sunday. Im writing to invite you to come .I wonder if you could come to this Saturday .My family and I would feel honored if you could come . 假如你是Jack, 你的好友L

5、i Ming來(lái)信說(shuō)他身體肥胖,給學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來(lái)諸多不便,很苦惱。請(qǐng)給她寫(xiě)一封建議信,提出一些減肥建議并要求他養(yǎng)成健康的生活習(xí)慣。 注意：1. 詞數(shù)100-120個(gè)；2. 信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出；3. 參考詞匯: 不吃早餐skip ones breakfast 。Dear Li Ming， Im sorry to hear that you are upset 【寫(xiě)作任務(wù)與要求】寫(xiě)一封建議信【 審題謀篇】1. 文章結(jié)構(gòu)：2. 主體時(shí)態(tài)： 建議信，格式要符合英文書(shū)信要求，正文可分三段：第一段表明收到來(lái)信時(shí)的心情和寫(xiě)信目的；第二段提出具體建議；第三段希望早日見(jiàn)效。時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主?！?

6、審題謀篇】 . 收到來(lái)信時(shí)的心情和寫(xiě)信目的; . 具體建議; . 希望對(duì)方考慮自己的建議，并能早日見(jiàn)效。4. 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：以第二人稱(chēng)為主。3. 主體人稱(chēng)：【 遣詞造句】1.詞匯：. 嘲笑：laugh at/make fun of/play a joke on.減肥：lose weight.過(guò)健康生活：live/lead a healthy life.給某人提 供某物：provide sb. with sth./ provide sth. for sb./ supply sth. to sb./ supply sb. with sth./ offer sb. sth. / offer sth. t

7、o sb.【 遣詞造句】2. 改寫(xiě)、合并句子：用狀語(yǔ)從句合并。 . I can fully understand your feelings at the moment. I used to be fat and was often laughed at by others. I can fully understand your feelings at the moment because I used to be fat and was often laughed at by others.【 遣詞造句】2. 改寫(xiě)、合并句子：用狀語(yǔ)從句合并。 . You want to lose weig

8、ht. You will need to eat less and exercise more. If you want to lose weight , you will need to eat less and exercise more.【 遣詞造句】2. 改寫(xiě)、合并句子：用狀語(yǔ)從句合并。 . A healthy breakfast is an important part of a balanced diet, and provides some of the vitamins and minerals we need for good health. A healthy breakf

9、ast is an important part of a balanced diet, which provides some of the vitamins and minerals we need for good health.Dear Li Ming, I am sorry to know/hear that you are upset because of your weight. I can fully understand your feelings at the moment because I used to be fat and was often laughed at

10、by others. Now Id like to tell you some ways to lose weight and live a healthy life. If you want to lose weight , you will need to eat less and exercise more. Eat only when you are hungry. Chew your food slowly and【 連句成篇】【 連句成篇】eat the right kind of food. Eat less salt and more fruit and vegetables.

11、 A healthy breakfast is an important part of a balanced diet, which provides some of the vitamins and minerals we need for good health. So never skip your breakfast. Try these suggestions, and youll be surprised to see the amazing results. Good luck. Yours, Jack 假如你是Li Hua, 你的好朋友蘇茹在交友方面存在著一些困難。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列

12、提示給她寫(xiě)一封信： 1. 交朋友首先要成為一個(gè)朋友；2. 要和朋友同甘共苦，患難之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；3. 友誼需要時(shí)間和投入（effort）?！緦?xiě)作任務(wù)與要求】寫(xiě)一封建議信【 審題謀篇】1. 確定文體：2.主體時(shí)態(tài)： 建議信。一般用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。3. 主體人稱(chēng)：4.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：以第一、第三人稱(chēng)為主。介紹寫(xiě)信緣由并向?qū)Ψ街乱詥?wèn)候，就問(wèn)題本身做針對(duì)性鼓勵(lì)、安慰，提出自己的建議，最后表達(dá)希望或祝福?！?遣詞造句】1.詞匯：. 成為一個(gè)朋友：be/become a friend.交朋友：make friends with.與分享：sharewith.全身心投入：put ones heart into

13、.需要： call for/need【 遣詞造句】2.句式：. 一般表達(dá)：.高級(jí)表達(dá)：要交朋友你應(yīng)該首先成為一個(gè)朋友。You should be a friend if you want to make friends . Why not be a friend if you want to make friends . 【 遣詞造句】2.句式：. 一般表達(dá)：.高級(jí)表達(dá)：患難之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。A friend in need is a friend indeed. Just as a saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. 【

14、 遣詞造句】2.句式：. 一般表達(dá)：.高級(jí)表達(dá)：你應(yīng)該全心全意地來(lái)交朋友。You should put your heart into making friends. Wouldnt it be a good idea if put your heart into making friends. 【 遣詞造句】2.句式：. 一般表達(dá)：.高級(jí)表達(dá)：我們都知道交友需要時(shí)間和投入。We all know that friendship calls for time and effort . It is well known to us all that friendship calls for ti

15、me and effort . Dear Su Ru, I am sorry to know/hear that you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. To begin with, why not be a friend if you want to make friends? In addition , you should share happiness

16、and sorrow with【 連句成篇】【 連句成篇】your friend. Just as a saying goes, a friendin need is a friend indeed. Last but not least, wouldnt it be a good idea if you put your heart into making friends? It is well known to us all that friendship calls for time and effort. I hope you will find these ideas useful.

17、 Yours, Li Hua 作為學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華,你校將舉辦一場(chǎng)英語(yǔ)才藝表演（talent show）, 按照以下內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一份電子郵件,邀請(qǐng)外教Black前來(lái)觀看并做評(píng)論。 主題：EnglishBridge to the World時(shí)間：3月31日上午8：3011:30地點(diǎn)：體育場(chǎng)內(nèi)容：每班一個(gè)節(jié)目，歌曲、舞蹈、課本劇、故事、演講等形式不限。聯(lián)系人：李華（電話(huà)136138568798） 詞數(shù)：100左右，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：評(píng)價(jià)comment ; 體育館gymnasium;課本劇textbook dramaDear Mr. Black,【寫(xiě)作任務(wù)】書(shū)信、電子郵件Dear Mr

18、. Black , There will be an English talent show in our school, so Im writing to invite you to watch and make comments it. The talent show, whose theme is “English-Bridge to the World”, will take place in our school gym from 8：30 to 11:30 a.m. on the March 31st . Every class is required to put on one

19、performance, in which students can sing songs, dance, act out 【 連句成篇】【 連句成篇】textbook dramas, tell stories or give speeches. Im sure we will have a good time enjoying the performances and will be inspired to learn English better. Id appreciate it if you could come . Im looking forward to you early re

20、ply. If you have any questions, please contact me at 136913856789. Yours, Jack 【任務(wù)與要求】寫(xiě)一篇回帖 Im a 16-year-old boy, but Im too fat. It troubled me for a long time. I am trying to lose weight but always fail, because I cant help eating a lot of unhealthy food .What should I do?Have a try Joe發(fā)布的一則帖子,引起了

21、你李華的注意,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列帖子內(nèi)容及寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)回帖: 要點(diǎn):1.對(duì)其苦惱表示理解和同情;2.給出具體建議;3.適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使行文連貫.Dear Joe, Im sorry for your trouble. I understand what you feel because I once had the same problem. In my view, the most important thing you can do is to have a healthy balanced diet. Eating healthily will help you control your weigh

22、t. Ask family and friends to eat healthily with you . But thats not the only thing to deal with your problem. Also , you need to do much exercise. If you need more help, talk to a doctor and he can give you a healthy diet plan which will also help you control the amount of food you eat at each meal.

23、 Good luck! Yours sincerely, Li Hua寫(xiě)作任務(wù) 現(xiàn)在,很多學(xué)生長(zhǎng)時(shí)間帶耳機(jī)聽(tīng)音、樂(lè)學(xué)英語(yǔ),Li Hua在來(lái)信中談到他感覺(jué)頭痛、注意力不集中、記憶力減退。根據(jù)以下提示，為其回信談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)和建議： .描述過(guò)度使用耳機(jī)的現(xiàn)象;.分析其危害;.提出你的建議。注意：詞數(shù)100左右,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫,開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出。 Nowadays , after-class activities are playing more and more important roles in our school life. Dear Li Hua, I received your letter yesterday. Nowadays many students listen to music and learn English with earphones. As for your trouble with ears and bad memory, Im afraid you spend too much time listening with earphones. Firstly, listening to music while doing