高三英語記敘文---看圖作文課件[1]

1、看圖作文高考作文評(píng)分細(xì)目1.對(duì)內(nèi)容的要求全面2.對(duì)句式的要求多樣3.對(duì)詞匯的要求豐富4.對(duì)語篇的要求流暢，順暢的連接和轉(zhuǎn)折5.對(duì)書寫的要求正確，工整6.對(duì)目的的要求符合寫作要求1. 下面4幅圖片描述的是星期天上午在中山公園里發(fā)生的一件事。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片所提供的信息用英語為你校的“英語園地”寫一篇短文。注意：短文須包括所有圖片的主要內(nèi)容。短文的內(nèi)容要連貫、完整；短文單詞數(shù)：100左右（已給句子中的單詞不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）； 參考詞匯：貨攤stand (n.);搶奪 snatch (v.) ; 逮捕 arrest (v.)例文內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.公園，冰淇淋貨攤旁 ,年輕婦女的包被搶 2.人們追趕搶包者 , 3.

2、長排椅上坐著一位老人, 4搶包者從老人身旁跑過，老人用傘將他絆倒,5兩名警察逮捕搶劫者 , 6婦女感謝老人，人們稱贊老人的機(jī)智One Sunday morning, there were some people in Zhongshan Park. At a stand, a woman was buying an ice-cream when a young man behind her snatched her handbag away. She shouted: “Stop thief! Hes snatched my bag! ”Hearing this, a few people b

3、egan to run after him. There was an old man sitting quietly on a bench nearby. As the snatcher was running past him, the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put it between the snatchers legs. The young man fell down on the ground hard. Soon two policemen came in a police car and arrested him.

4、 The woman thanked the old man, and the people around praised the old man for his cleverness (107) How to write a picture story Step1: Watch the pictures from the first one to the last one and get the main idea of the whole story.通看全圖，掌握大意根據(jù)每幅圖提示找要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)要點(diǎn), 找詞組。Step2: Choose the correct main point or

5、phrase for each picture.clock didnt ring woke up lateCookingburned my handran outmissed the busran three miles to the schoolarrived therefound that it was Sunday Step3: Put each group of words into a sentence. (Pay attention to the correct verb form.) 根據(jù)詞組組句子In the morning, my alarm clock didnt ring

6、 .I woke up late. I burned my hand when I was cooking breakfast.I ran out of the house to catch the bus. I missed it. I had to run three miles to the school.(I had to go to school on foot.) When I arrived there , I found that it was Sunday.Step4: Choose correct connectives to join the sentences into

7、 a passage使用恰當(dāng)連詞，連句成文。In the morning, my alarm clock didnt ring so I woke up an hour late. I was in such a hurry that I burnt my hand when I was cooking breakfast. Then I ran out of the house to catch the 8:30 bus, but of course I missed it. May 18th cloudy I was very unhappy because I knew my teach

8、er got angry if anyone was late for class. So I ran three miles to the school. But when I arrived there in the end, I found that it was Sunday.昨天下午你到越秀公園游玩，剛好看到個(gè)救人的過程。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所拍下的幾幅照片，用英語寫篇報(bào)導(dǎo)，寄給“英文早報(bào)”。要求：字?jǐn)?shù)約100，不包括已給出的開頭部分。 最后一幅照片因底片曝光，請(qǐng)自行補(bǔ)充合理的情節(jié)，使報(bào)導(dǎo)完整。Yesterday afternoon I went to Yuexiu Park. It happ

9、ened that I saw a touching event.Yesterday afternoon I went to Yuexiu Park. It happened that I saw a touching event. At that time, some people were boating on the lake. Among them was a happy family. They were taking photos when suddenly the girl fell off the boat into the water. She was struggling and her parents cried out, “Help! Help!” It was obviously that they couldnt swim at all. From nearby a young man immediately rushed to the lake. Without taking off his clothes, he jumped into the water and quickly swam towards the girl, who was already