初中英語寫作課件 (2)

1、一、題型與特點 中考“書面表達”屬于開放性的主觀題，在命題中力求體現以下特點：所選用的題材貼近考生生活和情感；需要使用的語言材料是考生掌握的；對字數的要求相對穩(wěn)定（80左右）；對語法不做過高要求；通過文字說明或圖畫對考生所寫內容進行限定，這類題型要求考生根據提示寫出內容連貫、意思完整的短文?？忌纫紤]人稱、時態(tài)，還要考慮前后的聯系，也給考生的發(fā)揮留下了很大的空間。典型病例名詞的單復數問題主謂一致問題時態(tài)和語態(tài)問題Chinglish 現象行文的邏輯性問題詞類錯用名詞的單復數問題：1. Joy found there was much fish in the lake.2.The water w

2、as so clear that they could see all kinds of fish.3.Many place are very dry.Joy found there were many fish in the lake.The water was so clear that they could see all kinds of fishes.Many places are very dry.時態(tài)和語態(tài)問題Her mother jumped into the lake and swimed to Joy. At last her mother saved Joy. They

3、were all got wet.2. Toms mother jumped into the water. She saves her daughter at last.3. On Tree Planting Day,many trees planted in Yongan Park. Her mother jumped into the lake and swam to Joy. At last her mother saved Joy. They all got wet. On Tree Planting Day,many trees were planted in Yongan Par

4、k. Toms mother jumped into the water. She saved her daughter at last.4.The 29th Olympic Games will hold in China.The 29th Olympic Games will be held in China.主謂一致問題1. And now many rivers becomes very dirty.2. Everything are going very well.3. David with his little brother go to the park every Sunday

5、.4. There are a man teacher and two women teachers in the office. And now many rivers become very dirty. Everything is going very well. David with his little brother goes to the park every Sunday There is a man teacher and two women teachers in the office.Chinglish 現象1. Last Sunday,Ann with her moth

6、er and brother went to a park. The park with a lake.2. I and my classmates by bus to Dayang Foreign Language School.Last Sunday,Ann went to a park with her mother and brother. There was a lake in the park.My classmates and I took a bus to Dayang Foreign Language School.行文的邏輯性問題1. At once, she jumped

7、 into the water to save her daughter with her mothers help.2. But she wasnt careful, so that she fell into the river. At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter.She wasnt careful, and she fell into the river.詞類錯用1.When I was sadly, I played with it. When I was happily, I played with it.

8、 2. All of us are excited in it. Because it can make we happy and healthy. When I was sad, I played with it. When I was happy, I played with it. All of us are excited about it. Because it can make ushappy and healthy.請你當老師書面表達 自行車在北京仍然受歡迎，騎車上學或上班都很方便。如今越來越多的人這使得。騎車既可以，又可以。那么你更喜歡哪種交通工具呢？為什么？請你當老師 Bic

9、ycle are still popular on the streets in Beijing. Its easy to by bike go to school or go to work. Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bike. But I think that running cars make air dirty. It was harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, and energy can be sav

10、e. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, so I prefer to go to school by bike.Please read it carefully, then find the mistakes and correct them. Bicycles are still popular on the streets in Beijing. Its easy to go to school or go to work by bike. Now more and more people plan to buy cars in

11、stead of bikes. But I think that running cars makes air dirty. It is harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, and energy can be saved. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, I prefer to go to school by bike.English Writing寫過去的事書面表達六 步 法書面表達六步法書面表達六步法一、審題確定基本要素:5W

12、1H何 時 何 地 何 人 為何 如 何 做 了 何 事書面表達六步法二、抓要點確定主要行為What happened?書面表達六步法三、擴展成句形成基本語義單位Who did what?書面表達六步法四、連句成文時間 空間 細節(jié)連貫 呼應書面表達六步法五、查錯改錯要盡量剔除錯誤書面表達六步法六、謄寫卷面不工整扣5分Write a short passage talking about feelings when receiving a gift. What was the gift? Who gave it to you and why? How did you feel when you

13、opened it?(4) Did the person who gave it think carefully about it.Have a try!You may use some sentences like the following: 1. My best/worst gift is 2. I got it on my thirteenth birthday. 3. gave it to me. 4. It made me 5. I hope my gift is 書面表達經典示例假設你是李華，在美國探親。2000年2月8日清晨，你目擊了一起交通事故。警察局讓你寫一份材料，報告當時

14、所見情況。根據下列圖畫寫出報告。1、目擊者應該準確報告事實； 2、詞數100左右； 3、結尾已為你寫好。_About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li Hua附圖1234一幅圖，一要點時態(tài)直達 語態(tài)到位介/副詞緊隨抓要點，配動詞精 彩 范 文 賞 析At 7:15 a.m. on the morning of Feb. 8th, 2000, I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road,

15、 taking my morning walk as usual. I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park. 精 彩 范 文 賞 析He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing. 精 彩 范 文 賞 析The car was so fast that the old man even didnt have time t

16、o dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.精 彩 范 文 賞 析I thought the driver would have stopped to help, but she didnt. Instead, she just drove off, leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain. 精 彩 范 文 賞 析Fortunately, I noted down the details: it was a yellow car, the plate number of which was AC864, and the driver was a young lady. After that, I went over