英語短文改錯30篇附答案

1、學習資料收集于網絡，僅供參考改錯一Ihaveagoodfriendwho'snameisLiuMei.Sheisourmonitorandoneoftheexcellentstudentinourclass.Althoughsheisclever,butsheworksveryhard.Wehavealotoncommonandhavealottotalkabout.Oneeveningshetoldmethatsomethinghappenedwhenherparentswasout.ShewasdoingherhomeworksoneSundaymorningwhenshesmel

2、tsomethingburning.Shestoppedlookoutofthewindowandfindacloudofsmokecomingoutofherneighbour'shouse.Shecalled119immediate.Tenminuteslater,thefiremencameandputoutfire.Herneighbourwasverythankfulforherhelp.改錯二Iwenttoseethefilmaftersupper.Onmywaythecinema,ImetanEnglishwoman,wholostherway.Igaveupthecha

3、nceseethefilmandtookhertoherhotel.Whilegothere,Itoldheraboutgreatchangesthathadbeentakenplaceinthepastfewyearsandshehadtoldmeanythingabouthercountry.AlthoughImissedthefilm,Istillfeltveryhappy,forIhadnotonlyhelpedheroutoftroublebutpractisemyspokenEnglish.IfIhadnotworkedhardonEnglish,Iwouldhavebeenabl

4、etohelphim.改錯三DearRalph,I'maseniorstudent.Tmgettingwellwithaboyinmyclass.ButIhavefalleninlovewithhimforalmosthalfayear.Heisshyboy,soIwrotehimaletterfirsttoexpressmyfeeling.Hewroteback.Inhisletterhesaid,HWearestudents.Ourtaskisstudyhard.Letustowaitandseewhetherwehavesomechanceaftergraduation.11So

5、aftergraduationItelephonedtohim,askhimaboutgoingout.Buthesaidhedidn'twantto.HejustwantedtosleepandwatchedTV.WhatdoyouthinkIshoulddo?DoyouthinkIshouldcontinuetolovehimandgiveup?改錯四DearBob,Hello.IlearnaboutyoufrommyEnglishteacher,MissFang.Ipent1rienddljkaentdoyourgettoknowmoreaboutyourcountry.Firs

6、t,letmetellyousomethingmoreaboutmyself.MynameisLiHua.IliveinBeijing,whereisthecapitalofChina.IgotoHongqiMiddleSchool.Westudyquiteafewsubject,suchasmaths,Chinese,Englishandphysics.Iusetoplayping-pongalotonmysparetime,butnowIaminterestinginfootball.Doyouplayanyballgames?Whatyourfavoritesport?Ilookforw

7、ardtohearfromyousoon.Yours,LiHua改錯五Twomonthsago,Iwenttoabroadforfurtherstudy.BeforeIleft,Iwasgivenalotpresent.Amongthem,thereweretwopresentswhichwerereallyinterestedme.Mysisterbuysmeabookwithcolorpicturesaboutbodylanguageandwithwordsaboutcustomsofdifferentcountryinthem.Mybrothergavemeanotewhichread,

8、-Mypresenthasputinyourbedroom.WhenIhurriedintomybedroom,Ifoundabox,inthattherewasanelectronicdictionary.Iwasverygladbutafewsurprisedtoreceivethesetwopresents.改錯六DearLiMing,Ihavereceivedyourletteryesterday.Donworryaboutyo(u.Imgaelottninggwellwithmyresearchworksinthelab.But,tomysurprising,yousayyouwil

9、lgiveuplearnEnglish.Thereasonisthatyouhavenotdonewellinitrecentlyandyouhavelostinteresting.ImafraidIcantagreewithyou.IknowitisnoteasytolearnEnglish,andEnglishiswidelyusedintheworldtodayanditwillbeimportanttoolinyourfuturework.Besides,itisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantatourdailylife.Ifyoustudyhard,youw

10、illsucceed.Dorememberwhereisawill,thereisaway.改錯七DearSally,NowIdliketotellyousomethingaboutmypart-timejob,initIworklikeaguideinatravelagency.ThisisthefirsttimewhenIhaveearnedmoney.Iverealizedwhathardmyparentsworktosupportforthefamily.Iwasusedtoaskthemformoney,butnowIIIneverwastemoneyorlearntosharewo

11、rrywithmyparents.Ivelearnthowtogetalongwellwithother.What'havegainedsomesocialexperienceandIhavelearntsomethingcantbelearntfromtextbooks.Intheword,Ihadawonderfullyandvaluablesummervacation.改錯八Sportsisfunandmostpeopleintheworld,whethermenorwoman,boysorgirlsenjoythem.Sincelongago,manyadultsandchil

12、drencalledtheirfriendstogethertospendmanyhoursplaygames.Why?Oneofthereasonsisthatsportshelpmakethemlivehappy.Intheotherwords,theyhelptokeeppeoplestrongandfeelinggood.Whentheywereplayinggames,theymovealot.Thatiswhysportsaregoodactivitiesfortheirhealthy.Havingfunwiththeirfriendsmakethemhappy.Manypeopl

13、eenjoysportswithwatchingothersplay.No.9IwenttotheSummerPalaceonlastweek.AtthegateIhappenedtomeetsomeAmericatourists.IgreetedhiminEnglishandthenwebegantochat.IgottoknowthattheywerecollegestudentstravelinChina.Theywerebusywithtakingpicturesandweremuchimpressedwiththechangeshadtakenplaceinthepastfewyea

14、rs.Afterwhich,wewentboatingonalakeandhadagoodtime.Weexchangedouremailaddresssothatwecouldwritetoeachotheronthefuture.Theythankedmeagainandagain.IwasverygladtohaveachancetopractisingmyoralEnglishNo.10Myclassmateexceptmewereinhighspirits.AtthecomingpartyIwouldhavetodosomecleanings,forIwasn1tabletodanc

15、eandsing.Duringtheparty,Itriedtokeeptheroombeingclean.AfterthepartyIgotridtherubbish.Enjoyingmyclassmateseltthei'rjobsmilingfaces,Ifworthwhile.WhentoldtheroomwillhavebeenadustbinwithoutmeIthoughtofasaying,nTheremusthaveauseformytalent.11Youmayhavenospecialtalent,soaslongasyoutrytodogoodineveryth

16、inguseful,you'IIfindevebreyathuitnifgulisateverycornerofyourlife.No.11Recently,wehavehadadiscussingaboutifweshouldstudybydiscussinginfreeclass.Viewsvaryfrompersonstoperson.Mostofthestudentsconsiderthatitisofgreatlyhelpstudyingbydiscussinginfreeclass,that,theythink,canhelptofindbetterwaystosolvep

17、roblems.Whatismuch,theybelievethattheylearnbydiscussingcanlastlongerintheirmemories.However,thereare35percentsofthestudentsholdingtheoppositeviewitisnotgood.Theyinsistthatdiscussingmeanlackingthinkingandtheloudnoisesiscausedbyitwilldisturbothers.No.12Ourschoolliesonthefootofamountainwithasmallriverp

18、assesby.Itusedtobeaquiet,cleanandbeautifulplaceforaschool.Itisapitywhichthingshavechangedafterachemicalfactorywasbuiltnearourschooloneyearago.Everydaythefactoryproducesmanywastewaterandsomeharmfulgases.Theterriblypollutionisharmfultoourhealth.What'sbad,thegreatnoifromthefactoryhadabadeffectonour

19、activities.Asaresult,ourschoolisnolongerwhatitusedto.Ourteachersandstudentsaremiserablebeyondthedescription.No.13NowI1dliketotellyousomethingtookplaceinmyschoolyesterday.Intheafternoonweareallheldtogetherforour18-years-oldbirthday.Atthefirstwepromisedthatlikegrown-upsweshouldberesponsibleforoursocie

20、ty.Thenweexpressedthanktoourparentswhoexperiencedhardshipstobringusupandourteacherswhoeducatedusheartorsoul.Andourteachersalsogavetouscardsexpressingourgoodcongratulationsandwishestous.Finally,weputonwonderfullyperformances.No.14Inthecountrynow,therearemanychildrendonotattendtheschool.Ithinkoneofthe

21、reasonsisthattheirfamiliesareverypoortosendthemtoschool.Theyhadtostayathometomakemoneytosupporttheirfamilies.Otherreasonisthatmanyparentsthinkituselessofthegirlstostudyandtheydonotlikethemtogotoschool.Athirdreasoniswhatsomechildrenarenotinterestingintheirlessons.Inmyopinion,allchildren,includedgirls

22、,havethechancetoreceiveeducation.Everybodyshouldpayattentionfortheeducationofthechildren.No.15Itisknowntous,aseveretusnamioccurredintheIndianOceaninDecember26,2004.It'sreportedthatmorethan10countriesweresufferedfromthedisaster.Butitcausedmorethan200,000deathsandleftmillionofpeoplehomeless.Countl

23、esshousesandschoolshavedestroyed.Justimaginehowthestudentshereneedhelp.Schoolsshouldberebuiltsothattheycouldreturntoclassessoon.HeretheStudentUnioncallsforeveryonetodosomethingforthem.We'Ivoluntarycontributionthisweek.Let'sgiveawsaymoounrepyo.cket'No.16TheGuangmingMiddleSchoolisinwestoft

24、hecity,withtheChengxiRiverrunnearby.Whenyouentertheschool,youcanseeabigflowerbedinthefrontofyou,andtwolargebuildingsonbothside:thelibraryonyourrightandtheteachbuildingonyourleft.Walkonfurther,andyouwillfindthesportsbuilding.Behindwhich,therearetwobasketballcourts.Onthenorthofthemisthesportsground.On

25、itrseastsidestandtwobuildings:thedininghall,orthedormitory.Allthebuildingsoftheschoolissurroundedbybushesandflowers.No.17Onemorning,Mrs.Smith'sdogwashunger.Shetookoutapieceofpaper,thatread,“Givapoundofmeat."Thenshegaveittothedogsaying“Bringittothebuatcnhehrere's."Thedandgavethepape

26、rtothebutcher.Hereaditanddid.Soon,thedogcameagainandgavehimotherpieceofpaper.Withoutlooking,hedidsooncemore.Twohourslateitcameagain.HewanderedwhyMrs.Smithgaveitsomuchmeat.Hereadthepaperandfoundouttherewasnotasinglewordonit.Whatacleverdogitwas!No.18Mr.Chenhasahabitofdrink.Thebestpresenttohim,ofcourse

27、,iswine.HistheeldestsonbroughthimabottleofMaoTai.Hewasgladanddrankthemup.Thenhewrote“105”othnetrademarkwithapencil,meanthehadalreadydrunk105bottlesthewine.Twodayslate,astrangercameandofferedtopaying5Yuanfortheemptybottle.Mr.Chenwasverypleasntandsoldit.Severaldayslater,hissecondsonbroughthimotherbott

28、leofMaoTai.Whileenjoyingit,hesuddenlyfoundout-"T1h0e5v”erymarkonit.No.19Onedayalawyerhappenedtoseeamanbeatadonkeywithastick."Whywereyoudoingthat?askedthelawyer."Tomakethedotnokgeoy.”answeredthmean."Havyeourighttobeattheanimallikethat?''askedthelawyeronceagain."Certai

29、nIhave.''saidtheman."ItismandIcandothatI'dliketowithwhatismy''.Thelawyerthoughtforaminuteandtookhisownstickandbeattheman."Stopping!"criedtheman,“Areyoumad?”“Oh5yes.ThisismystickIcandowhatIlikewithwhatwasmine.”No.20Anoldmanwasseatinginanarmchairathome,readinghisnews

30、paper.Besidehimlayadogsleepsoundly.Theoldmandecidedtoleavinghomeforawhile,andhecouldnftgooutwithhisslipperson.Sohewokeupthedogandletitfetchedtheshoesforhim.Outofitsexpectation,thedogdidn4evenstand,butjustbarkedwithtwoeyesclosedagain.Hewascompletepuzzled.Ashewaswonderingwhatwashappening,acatappearedi

31、nthefrontofhim.Whydoyouthinkacatcamethere?No.21ShowrespecttoparentsisoneoftheChinesetraditionalmoralvalue.Asmostofthestudentstodayare“theonlychildMintheirthfaeymoilyft,enregardthemasthe“centre"ofthefamily,withoutcaringmanyabouttheirparents.Ourschoolstartaprogrammewhenthenewyearcame.Itis“Respect

32、ingparentsprogrammeMT.en“Do1sha"veworkedoutforthestudentstofollowclearlyandeasily.Theyinclud:"Rememberyourparents°birthdaysandexpressyoufrethebestwishestothem;tell“helloMtoyourparentsseethemreturninghome;andtellyourparentswhere學習資料學習資料收集于網絡，僅供參考yougowhenyouleavehome."Theprogramme

33、hasbeensuccessfully.No.22WelcometoHolland!Ihopeyouallenjoyyourstayinghere.I'mgladyouhavecomeonApril,forspringiscertainlyabestseasontogettoknowHolland.I'msureyouwillamazedbythecoloranvarietyofalltheflowers.Youwon'tbeabletostoptakingphoetohgaravpehm!Wanybeautifultowns.Isuggestyoustartbytak

34、ingaboatstripontheCanals.It*sarelaxedwayofvisitingthcanalhouses.Thenyoucanvisittoourmuseumsandchurches.Youdon4havetoworryaboutlanguageproblemsthere.Justhaveapleasedtripandcomeagainnextyear.No.23ThisissaidthatGreatbiologistDarwinwasamanwithasenseofhumor.Onceheisinvitedtodinner.Atthedinner,hehappenedt

35、ositnextayounggood-lookingwoman."Mr.Darwin,Mthewomanaskedabiologist,“Iheardofyouhavemadeasurprisingconclusionwhichtheperson'sancestoristhemonkey.Iamsuitableforyourowofjudgment?”“Certainly.Da"rwinwell-manneredreplied."Iamlikethemonkey?"Yes,youarentAndyouwerechangednotfromtheor

36、dinarymonkey,butfromtheextremeattractivemonkey.”No.24Iamshywhenatschool.Iwasafraidofspeakinginfrontoftheclass.WhenIhadtofacesuchmanyclassmates,Ifeltnervousbutmyvoiceandlegsshook.Myteachershelpedmealotof.Theyoftenencouragedmetoanswerquestioninclassandtogototheteachers'detoskreadlessons.SometimeIf

37、eltIdidn4dosowellbuttheyspokehighofme.Meanwhile,myclassmateskindlyaskedmetojointhemallkindsofactivities.Allthesehelpedmewithmyconfidence.SincethenonIdaredtodothatIwantedto.No.25WhenteaandcoffeewasfirstintroducedtoEuropeinthe18thcentury,peoplethoughttheywereharm.SothekingofSwededecidedtofindwhetherth

38、iswastrueornot.Itwashappenedthatthereweretwobrotherswhomwereinprisonthen.Thekingorderedoneofthemtodrinkteaeverydayandtheotherscoffee.Allofthemlivedformanyyearswithoutanyproblem.Theonewhohadtodrinkteadiedintheageof83andtheotherlivedevenlong.Therefore,Swedeisoneofthecountriestheremuchteaandcoffeearedr

39、unk.No.26MywifeandmespenttwoweeksinLondonlastyear.Wewenthereinautumn.WestayedinasmallhotelintheWestEnd.Itwasconvenientaswedomostofoursightseeingonfoot.Taxiswasquitetooexpensive.Wecouldntunderstandthebusroutes,butmywifedidn*tliketravelingtheunderground.Shesaiditmadehertofeelsick.Wewenttolookattheplac

40、eswhichalltouristssee.WesawtheBuckinghamPalace.WecameshoppinginOxfordStreetandspenttoomanymoney.Whatwelikedmost,though,wasgoingtotheatre.No.27OnedayIhappenedtofindoutachattingroominmyQQ,therepeoplewerechattinginEnglish.Itriedtochatwithsomeofthem.Tomysurprise,IfoundtheoralEnglishofsomejuniorstudentsw

41、erebetterthanme.Iaskedthemforadvices學習資料學習資料收集于網絡，僅供參考andtheytoldmetopractisemoreonQQ.ButeverydayafterthatIwouldspendonehourpractisemyoralEnglishonQQ.DaybydayIlearnedfrommanyusefulwordsandexpression.Withtimegoingby,IfoundIcouldevencommunicatesomecollegestudentsfreely.No.28TheInternetisacomputernetwo

42、rkusethetelephonesystemtolinktogethermillionofcomputersaroundtheworld.Onceyou-reconnectedtotheInternet,andtherearelotsofdifferencethingsyoucando.Youcansend-mailetoyourfriendsaslongastheywereontheInternet,orlookingthroughallsortsofinformationontheWorldWideWeb.YoudontneedknowhowtheInternetworksinorder

43、tousethem.ButifyouunderstandthebasicswhichmayhelpyousolvemanyproblemsyouhaveandyoucanimpressyourfriendsbyyourNetknowledge!No.29Mr.Huangissixtyyearsoldandhadretired.HetaughtourchemistrywhenwewereinGradeOne.Hetaughtverywell.Hetriedhisbesttomakehisclasseslive.Heusuallymadewellpreparationsforthelessonsa

44、ndwasstrictwithus.Eachtimewhenwemademistakesinourhomework,hewouldaskustocorrectit.Iwaspoorinchemistry.Heoftenhelpsmewithmystudypatiently.WithhishelpImadegreatprogresses.Hewasverykindtohisstudents.Asexperiencedteacherhewasrespectedorlovedbyallthestudents.No.30LastweekIwenttoamovie,whichwasverytouched

45、.Itwasasadmovieaboutamotherandhersons.Whenthechildwasalittleboy,hismotherwasverypoorthatshehadtosendhimforarichfamilywhohadnochild.Theboyreceivedaverygoodeducationandtwentyyearslatehebecameadoctor.Inhishospital,hehadapatient,anoldlady.Hedoesntcaretoomuchabouther,forcouldhardlyaffordforthemedicalcare

46、.Oneevening,theladydiedquietlyandonherbedthedoctorfoundaletter,inwhichhediscoveredtruthandfelttheloveofagreatmother.Hewantedtocallhismother,anditwastoolate.Everybodyinthetheatrewasmovedtotears.答案：改錯一：who's改為whose2.正確3.去掉but4.on改為in5.parents后力口were6.homeworks改為homework7.stopped后力口to8.find改為found9

47、.immediate改為immediatelyW.fire前加the改錯二：the改為a2.正確3.see前加to4.go改為going5.去掉been6.去掉had7.去掉but學習資料8.去掉had9.on改為at10.him改為her改錯三:1.getting后加on或along2.fallen改為been3.shy前加a4.feeling改為feelings當情感講時feeling常用單數5.study前加to或study改為studying6.去掉to7.去掉to8.watched改為watch9正確1O.and改為or改錯四：1.learn改為learnt或learned。2.to

48、后加be或become。3.刪去more。第一次告訴Bob關于自己的一些事情,此處用more不合邏輯。4.where改為which。在此非限定性定語從句中，關系詞在從句中作主語，故用which。subject改為subjectsoquitsafew意為“相當多”，修飾可數名詞復數。據下文butnow可知，此處應用usedtodo表示“過去常常做某事”in為固定短語，”對一感興趣”5.此行無錯。6.7.use改為eresting改為interestedobeinterested9.What后加is。此句無謂語。10.hear改為hearing。lookforwardtodoi

49、ngsth.為固定短語。改錯五：答案：76.去掉to短語錯誤。goabroad”出國”。77.presen&presents名詞的數錯誤。present”禮物”，是可數名詞。78.去掉第二個were動詞錯誤。interest在此是及物動詞用法，意為“使感興趣”beinterestedin”對一感興趣”。79.buysibought時態(tài)錯誤。由全文可知，用一般過去時態(tài)。80.81.themiit代詞錯誤。在這本書里有關于肢體語言的圖片和不同國家的語言習俗。用it指代這本書。82.put前加been語態(tài)錯誤。我的禮物被放在了你的臥室里了。禮物是被放在臥室里，所以用被動語態(tài)。83.thatw

50、hich定語從句關系詞錯誤。介詞后用which，不用that。84.butand連接邏輯錯誤。前后是并列關系而非轉折關系。85.fewTlittle混淆錯誤。alittle與little可以用作副詞，表示“有點“稍稍”，修飾動詞、副詞、形容詞或介詞短語。如:Heisalittletired.他有點累了。而afew不可用作副詞。改錯六1.have去掉2.about后的you改為erestingtinterest7.EnglishJhWand改為but8.be后加|an9.attinlO.whe

51、re后力口there改車昔六41.abouttwith/to母”o根據句意，可知此處是表達“和父母交談”，而不是“談論父42.astevenif意為“好像”，與句意不符；根據句意，此處應是表達讓步關系。故用evenif,意為“即使”。43.goingTgettinggetalongwellwith是固定短語，意為“和相片融洽”44.v45. waytwayssome在此處修飾可數名詞復數。46. walk前加agooutforawalk意為“出去散步”47. andtor此處表選擇關系。48. aretwere"他們年輕時候”應用動詞的過去式。49. ourttheir和they保持

52、一致。50. honestythonest形容詞honest作表語。改錯七1.itwhich2ikeas3.whenthat4.whathow5.wasused去掉was6.orand7.otherothers8.something后加that9.thewordta10.wonderfullywonderful改錯八1.Sportsistare2.womantwomen3.called前力口have4.playgamestplaying5.happythappily6.theother去掉the7.theyweretare8.healthythealth9. maketmakes10.with

53、tbyNo.91.onlast去掉on2.AmericatouriststAmerican3.greetedhimtthem4. studentstraveltravelling5.busywith去掉with6.changes后力口that7. Afterwhichtthat8.emailaddresstaddresses9.onthetin10. topractising(practiseNo.101.Myclassmatetdassmates2.somecleaningstdeaning3.andsing(or4. beingclean去掉being5.rid后加of6.theirjob

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55、e8.hadAhas9.usedto后加be10.去掉theNo.131.took前力口that2.areAwere3.18-years-old18-year-old4.去掉first前面的the5.likeas6.thankAthanks8.去掉gave后面的to9.expressingourtheir7.orand10.wonderfullywonderfulNo.141.children前力口who/that2.去掉attend后面的the3.verytoo4.hadAeresting9.includedti

56、ncluding10.forTtointerestedNo.151.ItistAsmillion(millions2.inDecemberTon6.destroyed前加been3.weresuffered去掉were4.ButtAnd5.7.studentsheretthere8.theycouldtcanNo.9.callsforton10.pocketstpocket161.west前力口the2.runtrunning3.thefront去掉the4.bothsidetsides5. teachbuildingteaching6.furthertfarther7.Behindwhichtit8.Onit'Stits9,orthetand10.schoolistare3. BringtTake4.ranheretthere7. late改為later10.WhattHow3. themtit4.meanttmeaning8. pleasanttpleasedNo.17l.hungenhungry2.thatreadt