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1、精選課件 中中 考考 專專 題題 復復 習習 課課Writing精選課件書面表達書面表達: 是中考英語中的必考是中考英語中的必考題，占卷面總分的題，占卷面總分的12.5%，分，分值為值為15 分分 。精選課件文章的形成過程：文章的形成過程：單詞單詞 短語，結構短語，結構 +符號符號 句子句子 段落段落 文章文章如何把這些組織一篇文章？如何把這些組織一篇文章？分析文章的形成過程首先，我們必須在頭腦中構成一幅mind map.在map的幫助下，我們就能有效的到達我們的目的地。精選課件分析結構分析結構 Mike is crazy about football!He loves watching fo

2、otball matches. Of course, he loves playing football too. He often spends about one hour playing football with his classmates after school. His parents dont like this and have asked him to go home before 5.30. He thinks it is important for him to spend some time on his hobbies. He wishes his parents

3、 could give him their support for his hobbies . IntroductionMain bodyConclusion精選課件DiscussionHow to Write English Compositions精選課件抄抄組組集集連連抓抓審審作文作文集句成段集句成段組段成篇組段成篇審清題意審清題意連詞成句連詞成句抓住要點抓住要點抄寫規(guī)范抄寫規(guī)范 Writing skillssix steps精選課件自從實施教育新政策，中學生有了更多自主支配的時自從實施教育新政策，中學生有了更多自主支配的時間，但有些同學不知如何利用好這些時間，針對這間，但有些同學不知如

4、何利用好這些時間，針對這種現(xiàn)象，你校廣播室種現(xiàn)象，你校廣播室“校園英語之聲校園英語之聲”欄目就欄目就“如如何更好地利用課余時間何更好地利用課余時間”進行征文。請你用英語給進行征文。請你用英語給該欄目寫一篇廣播稿。內(nèi)容要點包括：該欄目寫一篇廣播稿。內(nèi)容要點包括：注意注意: 100詞左右，廣播的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)詞左右，廣播的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)參考詞匯參考詞匯: make good use of, interest groups social activities, do sports, net bar 不良現(xiàn)象和行不良現(xiàn)象和行為（至少為（至少3點）點）1. 花太多時間在興趣愛好上花太

5、多時間在興趣愛好上2. 迷戀網(wǎng)吧，上網(wǎng)打游迷戀網(wǎng)吧，上網(wǎng)打游 3. 看法看法我認為我認為建議（至少建議（至少3條）條） 合理安排時間合理安排時間參加興趣小組參加興趣小組 精選課件Hello, everybody! Its time again for our English Broadcasting Program. Todays topic is “ How to Make Better Use of Our SpareTime”._精選課件第一步第一步:審清題意審清題意認真審題認真審題，明確寫作，明確寫作主題主題、體裁體裁、人稱人稱、字數(shù)字數(shù)、結構結構、時態(tài)時態(tài)、提示、提示要點要點和和補充

6、信息補充信息具體做法：具體做法：用筆勾畫用筆勾畫精選課件自從實施教育新政，中學生有了更多自主支配自從實施教育新政，中學生有了更多自主支配的時間，但有些同學不知如何利用好這些時間，的時間，但有些同學不知如何利用好這些時間，針對這種現(xiàn)象，你校廣播室針對這種現(xiàn)象，你校廣播室“校園英語之聲校園英語之聲”欄目就欄目就“如何更好地利用課余時間如何更好地利用課余時間”進行征文。進行征文。請你用英語給該欄目寫一篇廣播稿。內(nèi)容要點請你用英語給該欄目寫一篇廣播稿。內(nèi)容要點包括：包括： 不良現(xiàn)象和不良現(xiàn)象和行為（至少行為（至少3點）點）1. 花太多時間在興趣愛好上花太多時間在興趣愛好上2. 迷戀網(wǎng)吧，上網(wǎng)打游戲迷戀

7、網(wǎng)吧，上網(wǎng)打游戲3. 看法看法我認為我認為 建議（至少建議（至少3條）條）合理安排時間合理安排時間參加興趣小組參加興趣小組 注意注意: 100詞左右，廣播的開頭已給出，不計入詞左右，廣播的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)總詞數(shù)主題主題體裁體裁人稱人稱結構結構時態(tài)時態(tài)字數(shù)字數(shù)已知信息已知信息未知信息未知信息以一般以一般現(xiàn)在時現(xiàn)在時為主為主精選課件第二步：第二步：列出寫作提綱（列出寫作提綱（Outline）。）。具體做法：具體做法：根據(jù)段落整理寫作要點根據(jù)段落整理寫作要點不要遺漏不要遺漏要點！要點！精選課件Introduction Main body Conclusionproblemsopinionss

8、uggestionsWrite an outline 花太多時間在興趣愛好上花太多時間在興趣愛好上 迷戀網(wǎng)吧，打電腦游戲迷戀網(wǎng)吧，打電腦游戲 - 合理安排時間合理安排時間 參加興趣小組參加興趣小組 -精選課件 List some keywords about problems. Phrases: _ _2. List some keywords about opinions. Phrases: _ _ 3. List some keywords about suggestions. Phrases: _ _ 第三步：抓住要點，列關鍵詞第三步：抓住要點，列關鍵詞精選課件1.List some k

9、eywords about problems. spend too much time on their hobbies be crazy about play computer games watch too much TV refuse to do homework2. List some keywords about opinions.not good for our health and study do harm to focus on Pay more attention to 1. 花太多時間在興趣愛好上花太多時間在興趣愛好上2. 迷戀網(wǎng)吧，上網(wǎng)打游戲迷戀網(wǎng)吧，上網(wǎng)打游戲.精選課

10、件3. List some keywords about suggestions. plan time carefully achieve a balance between study and bobbies take part in different after- school activities join interest groups do some sports do some housework合理安排時間合理安排時間參加興趣小組參加興趣小組 精選課件spend too much time on their hobbies refuse to do homeworkwatch

11、too much TV be crazy about play computer games Whats worse, 1.Make sentences with the keywords about problems. sothatMany students spend much time on their hobbies they cant finish their homework on time.some of them watch too much TV, others students often go to the net bar and are crazy about play

12、ing computer games.Nowadays, we students have much more free time than before. But quite a number of students dont know how to use the time properly. We dont think its good for their study and health.2. Make sentences with the keywords about opinions. 第四步：連詞成句第四步：連詞成句第五步：集句成段，組段成篇第五步：集句成段，組段成篇精選課件第五

13、步：集句成段，組段成篇第五步：集句成段，組段成篇 we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, and take part in some good social activities. we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some ho

14、usework.However, how can we make better use of our spare time? For exampleBesides these,And alsoWe注意添加注意添加主題句，主題句，連接詞！連接詞！plan time carefully achieve a balance between study and bobbies take part in different after- school activities join interest groups do some sports do some housework3. Make sente

15、nces with the keywords about suggestions. There are many things we can do.精選課件How to give this writing an end? Lets make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!Why not put our free time to better use ? It is a good way to have a more colorful future. 精選課件范文展示范文展示Hello, every

16、body! Its time again for our English Broadcasting Program. Todays topic is “ How to Make Better Use of Our Spare Time”. Nowadays, we students have much more free time than before. But quite a number of students dont know how to use the time properly. They spend so much time on their hobbies that the

17、y cant finish their homework on time. Also some of them watch too much TV, Whats worse, some students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games. We dont think its good for their study and health. However, how can we make better use of our spare time? There are many things we

18、 can do. For example, we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. And also we can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in some good social activities. Besides these, we can do some sports. If we have time, we should hel

19、p parents do some housework. Lets make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!精選課件 how to write a goodcomposition開頭開頭:開門見山開門見山中間中間結尾結尾:抓要點抓要點,列短語列短語短語擴句短語擴句找連接詞找連接詞連句成段連句成段與主題相呼應，與主題相呼應， 緊扣主題緊扣主題精選課件1. 壓線壓線 2. 斜度一致斜度一致3. 扁扁 4. 飽滿飽滿 5. 間隔間隔精選課件常見錯誤常見錯誤時態(tài)是否正確時態(tài)是否正確主謂是否一致主謂是否一致

20、要點是否全面要點是否全面人稱是否正確人稱是否正確語序是否有問題語序是否有問題語言是否符合習慣語言是否符合習慣固定短語是否恰當固定短語是否恰當精選課件如今，中國掀起了廣場舞(public square dancing)熱潮。對于這種現(xiàn)象，人們褒貶不一。請你根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇短文，談談廣場舞的利與弊，并提出解決措施。要求：1.短文須包括所有要點，不要逐字翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮；盡量運用本講的重點句子。2詞數(shù)：80100詞左右。開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：遭受suffer from；音量volume精選課件Nowadays，public square dancing is becoming m

21、ore and more popular. Most of the public squares are crowded with dancers，especially in the morning and evening. We all agree that public square dancing is a good way to keep healthy，especially for the old. Besides，it is money saving. But it also causes noise pollution. Many people suffer from the n

22、oise caused by the loud music. They cant work，study or sleep well. They feel very angry and some even argue with the dancers. In my opinion，the dancers should turn down the volume while dancing. In addition，our government should build more public places for them，such as squares and parks. We hope th

23、at people can have fun dancing without disturbing other people.精選課件范文展示范文展示Hello, everybody! Its time again for our English Broadcasting Program. Todays topic is “ How to Make Better Use of Our Spare Time”.Nowadays, we students have much more free time than before. But quite a number of students don

24、t know how to use the time properly. They spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant finish their homework on time. Also some of them watch too much TV, Whats worse, some students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games. We dont think its good for their study and h

25、ealth.精選課件However, how can we make better use of our spare time? There are many things we can do. For example, we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. And also we can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in some goo

26、d social activities. Besides these, we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework. Lets make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!精選課件The structure of the article IntroductionMain body ConclusionSummary ProblemsSuggestions opinions 精選課件寫作

27、：寫作：第一步就是要第一步就是要認真審題認真審題，明確寫作，明確寫作主題主題、體裁體裁、人稱人稱、字數(shù)字數(shù)、結構結構、時態(tài)時態(tài)、提示、提示要點要點和和補充信息補充信息第二步就是要第二步就是要列出寫作提綱列出寫作提綱（列關鍵（列關鍵詞詞、連詞成、連詞成句句、集句成、集句成段段、組段成、組段成篇篇）寫作前：寫作前：確定確定人稱、時態(tài)人稱、時態(tài)寫作后：寫作后： 查錯改錯查錯改錯精選課件中學生在成長過程中經(jīng)常會碰到一些煩惱。假設你是李華，請根據(jù)提示，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會上談談你遇到的煩惱以及你自己的做法。寫作實踐寫作實踐你的煩惱你的做法個頭不高，相貌平常 不必在意，相信自己父母不理解，朋友少 學

28、會溝通，友善待人學習壓力大，課外活動少（自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點）精選課件變換句式變換句式并列句并列句復合句復合句結果狀語從句結果狀語從句Some students spend too much time on their hobbies. They cant finish their homework on time.Some students spend too much time on their hobbies and they cant finish their homework on timeSome students spend so much time on their hobbie

29、s that they cant finish their homework on time精選課件思路構建思路構建構思列綱提出問題Im not tall and Im not goodlooking.My parents cant understand what I do and say. I have few friends at school.I have too much pressure in study. I have few afterschool activities.提出建議I dont care about these, and I believe in myself.I

30、communicate with them and Im friendly to my classmates at school.I relax myself: I do sports or listen to music. I go shopping with my parents or friends.精選課件自我展示自我展示Hello everyone,Im Li Hua. Id like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. Im not tall and Im not good-looking. But I dont

31、care about these. I always believe in myself. My parents sometimes cant understand what I do and say. I have few friends at school. So I often communicate with them and Im always friendly to my classmates at school. I have too much pressure in study too and often have few after-school activities. So

32、 I often relax myself. When I have free time, I often do sports or listen to music. Sometimes I go shopping with my精選課件_Thats all. Thank you!parents or friends. In this way, we can get better grades and enjoy the colorful life.高分點評：高分點評：本文采用本文采用“總總分分總總”的寫作結構。首先提出了分享問的寫作結構。首先提出了分享問題與解決方法的意愿，然后談論每個問題及解決的方法，題與解決方法的意愿，然后談論每個問題及解決的方法，最后用禮貌性的語言作出總結。本文作者能夠較好地處理最后用禮貌性的語言作出總結。本文作者能夠較好地處理表格中所提供的寫作信息，并能發(fā)揮自主性，提出自己的表格中所提供的寫作信息，并能發(fā)揮自主性，提出自己的合理建議。合理建議。精選課件短語：短語：care about, believe in, communicate with, be friendly to; relax oneself; go shopping句型：句型：When I have free time, I often do sports or listen to mus