高中英語短文改錯課件--公開課

1、How to do proof-reading短文改錯Class 198 Senior 1Mr. Wu In our everyday lives, if we make some mistakes, we should correct them, and then we are still a good fellow. Chairman Maos words 1. I can go to home now.2. I like history of China.3. I am fond at English.theWrong wordMissing wordofUnnecessary word

2、高考短文改錯的考察方式高考短文改錯的考察方式 下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。 增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除:把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。 修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意:1.每句不超過兩個錯誤； 2.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 3.只允許修改10處,多者（從第11處起）不計分。 從錯誤比例上看，基本上是從錯誤比例上看，基本上是 1：1：8多多 缺缺 錯錯一般以三種題型出現(xiàn)一般以三種題型出現(xiàn): :增加增加,刪除或修改刪除或修改。設問的角度有三個設問的角度有三個：詞法、句法和行文邏輯詞法、句法

3、和行文邏輯。動詞形動詞形， 名詞數(shù)名詞數(shù)還要注意還要注意形和副形和副代詞代詞格，細領悟格，細領悟介詞介詞短語須關注短語須關注習慣用法習慣用法要記住要記住冠詞連詞冠詞連詞常光顧常光顧 A Limerick請先念一遍請先念一遍“咒語咒語”吧吧復雜句子復雜句子不放過不放過.一、動詞一、動詞形形 1.1.動詞的動詞的時態(tài)時態(tài)和和語態(tài)語態(tài)錯誤錯誤. . 高考鏈接高考鏈接1： but once I started the car, my mind goes blank . (2017 全國）全國）went It is always crowded with customers at meal times,

4、some people even had to wait outside.（2016 ）have2.主謂不一致主謂不一致的錯誤的錯誤.高考鏈接高考鏈接: : I stayed there for one and a half hours and made sure that the girl were all right. (2009 全全國卷國卷) was3 3. 非謂語動詞非謂語動詞 錯誤高考鏈接高考鏈接: : The instructor kept repeating the words, “Speed up”“Slow down”“Turning left”.（2017全國卷）全國卷）

5、Turn I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out of a building. (2011全國全國卷卷)disappointed5. He used to getting up early to take physical exercise. werelikes excitingget1.Not only the students but also the teacher like the film. 2. When they came here tomorrow, I will show them.3.

6、 They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions. 4. I found the game excited and my dad explained the rules. practicecomePractice二、名詞二、名詞數(shù)數(shù) 指指名詞單、復數(shù)形式名詞單、復數(shù)形式的用法錯誤。的用法錯誤。高考鏈接高考鏈接2：The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up”“Slow down”“Turn left”.（2017全國卷）全國卷）words In

7、 early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady, around three per weeks.(2011）week1.Dont lose hearts, youll be successful in time. 2.I need some more informations. heartinformationpractice不可數(shù)名詞不可數(shù)名詞progress, furniture, weather, fun, news, information, advice Practice 三、還要注意形和副三、還要注意形和副

8、形容詞和副詞的誤用形容詞和副詞的誤用高考鏈接高考鏈接3： It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle of the road.（2017）sudden2 2比較級和最高級的混用或誤用比較級和最高級的混用或誤用. . The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected.(2009）faster還要注意形和副還要注意形和副 高考鏈接：高考鏈接： Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another Unfortunatel

9、yA few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car.(2017全國卷全國卷）later 1. He asked angry if we had finished the work. 2. Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is quite different from mine. 3. His father looks much more happier today.angrily clear 4. So I grateful accepted the off

10、er. gratefullypracticePractice四四、 代詞代詞格，格，細領悟細領悟3. it3. it作形主、形賓作形主、形賓、指代時有缺漏指代時有缺漏 (make, find, think)或或固定搭配固定搭配. .高考鏈接高考鏈接4：With the help of Katia, a roommate of me (2011 ）mineIt was only when we did their chemistry project together that I began to understand (2010 ）He found difficult to learn mat

11、h well.ourit1. 1. 人稱代詞，反身代詞，不定代詞人稱代詞，反身代詞，不定代詞2. 2. 代詞指代的人或事物前后不一致的錯誤代詞指代的人或事物前后不一致的錯誤. .2. I was learning to express me in simple English. 3. I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. 4. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. myselfeverythingit1.Som

12、e students may also save up for our college or future use .theirpracticePractice五、五、介詞短語介詞短語須關注須關注，習慣用法習慣用法要記住要記住 1. 1.主要考查主要考查固定短語，固定介詞固定短語，固定介詞的搭配。的搭配。2.2.介詞的介詞的多用，漏用多用，漏用和和誤用誤用3 3.時間狀語前有指示代詞時間狀語前有指示代詞this, thatthis, that或或one, one, next,lastnext,last等修飾時不用介詞等修飾時不用介詞. . eg. I was so much nervous t

13、hat I could hardly tell which direction was left.五、五、介詞短語介詞短語須關注須關注，習慣用法習慣用法要記住要記住高考鏈接：高考鏈接： Two years before, I travelled to Brazil and I rented for a car.(2012 浙浙 江卷江卷)ofIt was a relief and I came to a sudden stop just in the middle on the road.practice1.Im sure they will laugh to me and see meas

14、a fool. 2. At last we reached to the village at the foot of the hill.3. When a young man starts to earn hisown living, he can no longer expect others to pay his food .4. The gentleman insisted at my receiving the money.atforonPractice連詞連詞butbut，andand，or, soor, so和和althoughalthough的邏的邏輯性用法錯誤輯性用法錯誤高考

15、鏈接：高考鏈接：六六、冠詞連詞冠詞連詞常光顧常光顧He was right here in the front of me. (2011）I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor. . . 冠詞冠詞a, ana, an和和thethe的用法錯誤的用法錯誤and1. I came into the living room and saw one of them just go through the kitchen door but turn on the light.2. He will stay

16、 there one and two days.3. Every kind of the Chinese food is worth trying. 4. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella. andoran The smaller piece is that you want, right ? It is known to us all, all efforts will be paid. Practice makes perfect, that is very important for us .七七、復雜句子復

17、雜句子不放過不放過whatAswhich1.單詞拼寫不改單詞拼寫不改.2.大小寫不改大小寫不改.3.詞序不改詞序不改.4.標點符號不改標點符號不改.5.原意不改原意不改.五不改原則五不改原則考查目標1 1）識別錯誤）識別錯誤 并正確校正語篇的能力并正確校正語篇的能力2 2）綜合運用英語知識的能力）綜合運用英語知識的能力3 3）準確理解語篇，掌握內(nèi)容及行文邏）準確理解語篇，掌握內(nèi)容及行文邏輯的能力輯的能力 下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。 增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除:把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。 修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,

18、并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意:1.每句不超過兩個錯誤； 2.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 3.只允許修改10處,多者（從第11處起）不計分。解題步驟解題步驟1. 通讀全文，掌握大意通讀全文，掌握大意2.整句理解，上下兼顧整句理解，上下兼顧3.復讀全文，復讀全文，檢查驗證檢查驗證動詞形動詞形，名詞數(shù)名詞數(shù)還要注意還要注意形和副形和副代詞代詞格，細領悟格，細領悟介詞介詞短語須關注短語須關注習慣用法習慣用法要記住要記住冠詞連詞冠詞連詞常光顧常光顧 A Limerick請先念一遍請先念一遍“咒語咒語”吧吧復雜句子復雜句子不放過不放過再叮囑幾句：再叮囑幾句：1.單詞拼寫不改單詞拼寫不改.2.大小寫

19、不改大小寫不改.3.詞序不改詞序不改.4.標點符號不改標點符號不改.5.原意不改原意不改.解題步驟解題步驟1.1.通讀全文，掌握大意通讀全文，掌握大意2.2.整句理解，上下兼顧整句理解，上下兼顧3.3.復讀全文，檢查驗證復讀全文，檢查驗證五不改原則五不改原則 At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! They put them in the corner of the sitt

20、ing room. Jim was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmas tree lights was shinning brightly. Jim and his parents singing and dancing happily.At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his1.

21、_father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose 2._a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!3._They put them in the corner of the sitting4._On_chose_tall_it動詞形動詞形介詞短語常?？?，習慣用法要記住介詞短語常常考，習慣用法要記住還要注意形和副還要注意形和副代詞格，細領悟代詞格，細領悟room. Jim was covered it with a lot of5._Christmas light. The sitting room

22、 looked6. _really beautifully at the moment. There was 7. _a fire burning in the fire place, but the Chistmas8. _tree lights was shinning brightly. Jim and his9. _parents singing and dancing happily.10._was_lights_beautiful_andwerewere動詞形動詞形還要注意形和副還要注意形和副動詞形動詞形名詞數(shù)名詞數(shù)冠詞連詞須關注冠詞連詞須關注 I was a high school student then, from the low-income family. So I have to support my family. My first one job was to clean the tables in a small restaurant. I still remember going there early and felt anxious about the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of losing th