山西省2012高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專題訓(xùn)練 短文改錯(cuò) 寫作（66）

1、山西省2012高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專題訓(xùn)練：短文改錯(cuò)+寫作（66）短文改錯(cuò)假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出改正后的詞。注意：1每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。Dear Sir or Madam,I'm written to make the complaint about the poor qu

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4、meLooking forward to your replyYours sincerelyLi Ming書面表達(dá)假如你是李華，在最近的研究性學(xué)習(xí)當(dāng)中，受英語周報(bào) (English Weekly)之邀，你對(duì)本校2000（男女生人數(shù)各半）名同學(xué)進(jìn)行了使用手機(jī)情況的調(diào)查?，F(xiàn)將調(diào)查結(jié)果（如下表所示）用英語給報(bào)社的編輯寫一封信，報(bào)道此事以引起大家的關(guān)注，并給出你的觀點(diǎn)和建議。注意：1、報(bào)道應(yīng)包括圖表所示內(nèi)容，為使行文連貫可適度添加細(xì)節(jié)。2、文章的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3、詞數(shù)：100左右4、參考詞匯：調(diào)查： make a survey; send SMS (send short messages)Dear editor,I have recently made a survey among 2000 students in our sch