復(fù)旦、交大自主招生英語應(yīng)試指導(dǎo)及真題詳解-第_8_講：作文寫作技巧與注意事項(xiàng)

1、第 七 講：英 語 寫 作 （二） 大作文往年試題：Directions: write a composition of no less than 250 words according to the outline given below. Sample 1My View on Playing Computer Games 1. 有人認(rèn)為學(xué)生打電腦游戲有利于智力開發(fā)。2. 有人認(rèn)為學(xué)生打電腦游戲妨礙學(xué)習(xí)。3. 我的觀點(diǎn)。Sample 2：對(duì)貧富差距加大現(xiàn)象談?wù)効捶?評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)Global scoring a. Contentb. Language 2分: 條理不清， 思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大

2、部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。5分：基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯(cuò)誤。8分：有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語言錯(cuò)誤較多，其中有一些嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。11分：切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤14分：切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本上沒有語言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。注：白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有幾個(gè)獨(dú)立的詞而無法表達(dá)思想，給0分。嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤語法錯(cuò)誤There are many reasons caused the accident. The driver of the car no in. The life is becoming good

3、er and gooder. That day rain bigly.The man who through the streetThe car which in a fast speed hit him. The car which in a fast speed hit him. I got the place where happened the accident.Our city would happen many traffic. 寫作注意事項(xiàng)1. 審好題，想好再寫，不要寫了又劃掉，也不要寫完了發(fā)現(xiàn)字?jǐn)?shù)不夠有寫，這樣整篇文章就不聯(lián)貫了。2. 把握好文章的重心，一般“我的觀點(diǎn)”應(yīng)該是重

4、心。3. 注意寫作的格式縮進(jìn)式或齊頭式。4. 拿不準(zhǔn)的詞、短語或用法應(yīng)避免使用。5. 表達(dá)要清晰、簡(jiǎn)潔，不必一味追求結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)雜而盡可能多的使用從句，這樣文章會(huì)顯得很羅嗦。如：The economy is developing at a speed which is very fast. 6. 注意用詞和搭配。7. 檢查-s和-ed，盡量避免嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。Choice of Words 1. Three levels of English words English native words (core informal (oral French or Spanish words Latin or

5、Greek words (academic words formal (writtenExamples English French or Spanish Latin or Greekask inquire interrogate break sever separate fire flame conflagration house abode residence kingly royal regal manly male masculine rise mount ascend time age epoch I know that I am aware that I believe that

6、I am convinced that I have a good idea. A good idea occurs to me. Cause give rise to Emphasize lay emphasis onBecause of due to, owing to Stop, end come to a stop/end Suddenly all of a sudden Often more often than not 2. Connotation of Words (English explanationcommon, peasant, assassinate, gay, acq

7、uire, date, property, enemy, problem, issue 3. General Vs Specific terms (overuse of general termsbeautiful, delicious, famous, Chinas English 小康社會(huì)、緣分、丞相、風(fēng)水、三個(gè)代表 孔子、孟子、老子 容易用錯(cuò)的詞1. 詞性lack, serve, contact, last, marry, concern, like2. 漢語影響more perfect, very excellent, return back, repeat again, good m

8、emory power, listening ability, high quality goods learn the knowledge 常見錯(cuò)誤(1 two predicates in one simple sentenceEvery year lots of familys sit at the front of TV wait this game after have delicious meal. There have many people like SFG.My mother cooks food is very delicious.(2 Omission and overus

9、e of Be Nowday peoples life level is arise. Many person are like watch SFG in the eve. SFG was appeared since 1984. SFG is liked by many people. How fast time was gone! SFG can divide into several parts. We very busy. (3 Comparative degreemore and more betterbecome gooder and gooder, (4 Conjunctionb

10、ecause.soalthough.butWhile(5 I very like SFG. Very hate (6 Part of speech most of we Chinese, make me surprise, with the quick development of economic and social, In mys opinion, I advice to keep SFG. eating good, drinking good, playing good; good plays, good look, good use; I think it dues to the d

11、evelopment, Lets analysis and discovery the main factors leading the changes.To men, women just liked clothes. they like it like me like it. two weeks past choose, choice, succeed, success, successful, die, dead, death(7 Choice of words The whole family assemble to have a dinner. congratulate Spring

12、 Festival, abolish (stop, give up SFG, sit behind the TV to look SFG, Many people fall in love with watching SFG. We can elect other programs to see. celebrate SFG with bomb, stand in the shadow/shademosquito bite/stingIts a gay meeting/party (8 Phrasesin all in; one hand, another hand, third hand;

13、at one hand, at second hand, at last hand; in one hand, from other hand; last but not the last, last but not most; on my opinion; A coin has two hands (coins. Everything has two hands (coins. (9 Spelling We cant cansle (cancer, cancle it. SFG is watched by hole word. happyness, include (ing SF, Ever

14、y student include me enjoys Poor people maybe very angry (hungry. eat the soap (soup; BenefitialDrivedDispiteI will adopt to the campus life聯(lián) 貫1. 并列：and, as well as on the one hand on the other hand for one thing. for another firstly.secondly.thirdlyfinallysubsequently, then, thereafter, afterward,

15、in the following at first, initially, originally at last, eventually2. 遞進(jìn)：Moreover, Furthermore,In addition, Additionally  What is more  Besides  Apart from3. 轉(zhuǎn)折ButYet HoweverNeverthelessWhileWhereasOn the contraryIn contrast4. 結(jié)果SoTherefore,ThusHenceAs a result （consequence

16、）Consequently5. 原因Because (of Due to Owing to On the account of In view of Thanks to On the grounds that6. 假設(shè)If.Given that Provided that Unless On the condition of As (so long as 7. 其他(1 Sentence adverbs: absolutely, alternatively, currently, undoubtedly, certainly, consequently, subsequently , obvi

17、ously (2 PP: in general, on average, in fact, in effect, in theory, in practice, in reality, in particular,(3 Adv speaking: generally speaking, broadly speaking, strictly speaking, theoretically speaking (4 precisely because, mainly because, merely because, only because段落用語Beginning:With the develop

18、ment of As is well known to We all know that As we all know As a proverb says, As a saying goes As for some people hold the opinion that. While others argue (maintain that Every coin has two sides. It has merits and demerits.It has pros and cons. Supporters and opponents DevelopmentRecent researches have proven/shown/indicated that My arguments/reasons/ideas will be listed as follows: In the following paragraph, I will Firstly, secondly, and finally Why is it that .EndingAll in allIn a