(完整word版)2019中考英語(yǔ)作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

1、英語(yǔ)作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評(píng)分原則 ：1. 總分 15 分，按 5 個(gè)檔次給分。中檔屬于第三檔（7-9 分）。2. 評(píng)分時(shí)，先跟據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。3. 總詞數(shù)不足的，可在本題總得分中扣去1 分。4. 評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和正確性、上下文的連貫性及語(yǔ)言的得體性。各要素的權(quán)重大體為：卷面書(shū)寫(xiě)（1分），內(nèi)容9 分（其中要點(diǎn)5 分，語(yǔ)意連貫4 分），語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)、單詞拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)（ 4 分），詞數(shù)（1 分）。5. 拼寫(xiě)與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言正確性的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度 予以考慮。【各檔次的給分范

2、圍和要求】第一檔（13-15 分）：寫(xiě)出全部?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句流暢?；緹o(wú)語(yǔ)法和詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤， 少數(shù)錯(cuò)誤主要是由于較高級(jí)詞匯或復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)所致。詞數(shù)達(dá)到要求?；緹o(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)及標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。第二檔（10-12 分）：寫(xiě)出大部分要點(diǎn)類容。語(yǔ)句較流暢。有少量語(yǔ)法和詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，但不影響理解。有少量單詞拼寫(xiě)及標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。第三檔（7-9 分）：寫(xiě)出部分要點(diǎn)。語(yǔ)句基本通順。有一些語(yǔ)法和詞匯錯(cuò)誤，有少量單詞及標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。第四檔（4-6 分）：寫(xiě)出少量?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句不通順。語(yǔ)法、詞匯、單詞拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤較多。只有少量句子表達(dá)正確。第五檔（0-3 分）：基本上沒(méi)有寫(xiě)出內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)法、詞匯、單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤較多?；旧蠜](méi)有通順的

3、句子。只寫(xiě)出一些單詞，不知所云?！?說(shuō)明 】1、要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)。2、對(duì)緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分。凡不寫(xiě)任何內(nèi)容，抄襲、所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容無(wú)法看清者一律給0 分。2016河南中考英語(yǔ)作文預(yù)測(cè)（一）1 每個(gè)人的成長(zhǎng)都是一種蛻變的過(guò)程，從幼稚走向成熟，從逆境走向成功。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇80 詞以上的短文，談?wù)勀阍诔砷L(zhǎng)過(guò)程中所經(jīng)歷的最大的一次蛻變。內(nèi)容要求：1.變化前后分別是什么樣子的？2.促成你轉(zhuǎn)變的主要原因是什么？3.你為變化而付出了怎樣的努力？注意：短文中不允許出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān)的真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息。I used to be a naughty boy and my mother used to

4、be angry with me. NowI d like to say I vcehanged a lot. In fact, It is because of mymother s diaries.One day I saw mymother s diary book by accident while I was looking for my notebook. I was surprised and began to read mmy other s diaries. In her diaries, she showed her deep love for me. She also e

5、xpressed her disappointment when I made mistakes. She said she loved me so much and she believed I could be a good boy. I couldn help crying after reading my mother diaries.Since that day, I have changed a lot. I work hard and share some housework. Ill try to understand my mother s feelings.2 .最近，你們

6、班就 幸福是什么”進(jìn)行了一次討論，學(xué)生們發(fā)表了自己的看法， 他們認(rèn)為：1.認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)是幸福，父母總是關(guān)心他們的生活與健康，是幸福 2.有 時(shí)當(dāng)他們做錯(cuò)了事，周圍的人會(huì)幫助他們改正，他們感到幸福。3.你同意同學(xué)們的看法，你認(rèn)為當(dāng)你做 你也會(huì)感到幸福。要求：第三要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容需用 三到四句話展開(kāi)合理想象，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出， 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Happiness is for everyone. Some students think happiness comes from studying hard at their lessons. Their parents are alw

7、ays taking good care of their life and their health. They feel happy.Some students say when they do something wrong, people around them will help them to correct it. They believe this is happiness.I agree with them. I love my friends congratulating me when I enjoy success. When I do something kind t

8、o others, like congratulating them, I feel happy, too.When we think of these things, we realize that happiness is all around us.3 .安全你我他，幸福千萬(wàn)家”，關(guān)愛(ài)生命，確保平安，讓我們的生活更加幸福 安康。請(qǐng)以 “Keepingsafe(at home/ at school /on thad )為題寫(xiě) 篇 80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。要求：補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題：條理清晰，語(yǔ)言流暢；文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名。內(nèi)容 包括：(1) Is it important to keep safe

9、.?(2) Why do you think so?, (3)How can you be safe.?Keeping safe at schoolIt important for us to keep safe at school and it will make us study better and live mo re happily. In order to keep safe at school, we must do like these.First, be in order wh en we are going upstairs or downstairs. Second, m

10、ake sure to be safe when we are doi ng sports. Try not to be hurt. Third, know about some knowledge of safetyt helpful to us.If we follow the advice, we lmake ourselves safe at school.4.醉酒駕車，已經(jīng)成為嚴(yán)重的社會(huì)問(wèn)題，越來(lái)越受到人們的關(guān)注，根據(jù)下面提 示，寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā，F(xiàn) 象許多人不遵守交通規(guī)則，仍酒后駕車，對(duì)自己和他人的安全不負(fù)責(zé)任后 果因?yàn)榫坪篑{車，給自己和他人和很多家庭帶來(lái)傷害建

11、 議為了自己和他人的安全，呼吁司機(jī)不要酒后駕車，呼吁更多嚴(yán)格的規(guī)則 和制度出臺(tái)提示詞：酒后駕車 drunk driving 不負(fù)責(zé)的irresponsible交通事故 traffic accident 對(duì)造成傷害 do harm toEveryone should obey the traffic rules. Yet there are still many people drunk driving.It irresponsible沖負(fù)責(zé)任的）not only to the drivers themselves but also the others.Many drivers drive v

12、ery fast in the street, or even in the crowded traffic while they are drunk. Drunk drivers caused a lot of accidents. Thousands of people were killed and many more were injured every year. In order to keep the public safe, wsehouldn t drunk drive. We must obey the traffic rules. If you drink too muc

13、h, you shouldnt drive by yourself. Youd better take a taxi or ask others for help. The government is supposed to make more serious rules and laws as soon as possible.5. Keep HealthyEvery one wants to keep healthy today, especially our students. But wdeont pay attention to our health. Some of them go

14、 to school without breakfast in the mornin g. Some students and pupils play computer games or watch TV all day, especially at w eekends. Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke.It is important for us to have good habits. We should eat breakfast every morning . We can watch TV or play games for

15、a short time, then have a rest. We also can take part in some clubs. I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy.6. 以“ I want to do something for my scho0我想為學(xué)校做一件事）”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60 個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。） （注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I do

16、nt think so. Our teacher said, School is your home, you should keep it clean. But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmates to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean s

17、o that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple?7. 全國(guó)實(shí)施公共場(chǎng)所禁煙規(guī)定，針對(duì)這一話題，某中學(xué)對(duì)該校學(xué)生的吸煙情況 進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查，結(jié)果如圖所示。請(qǐng)就此話題用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇

18、短文。要求： 1. 對(duì)調(diào)查結(jié)果進(jìn)行描述；2表明自己的看法并提出建議；3詞數(shù)在80左右。提示詞：do a survey about （做一個(gè)有關(guān)的調(diào)查）3% of the students 百分之三的學(xué)生（）A survey about smokers in a middle school tells that although 90% of all students never smoke, 3% of them often smoke and 7% sometimes do. In other words, 10% of the students smoke. Tha t s terribl

19、e.As we know, smoking is harmful to our health. Every year, thousands of people lose their lives becauseof it. Smoking not only does harm to your health, but also wastes money. Because, a fire may be caused by cigarette ends. It s a pity to learn that one ends in death by smoking.In short, smoking i

20、s so dangerous that we should keep away from it.8. 目前，越來(lái)越多的中學(xué)生利用周末上各種各樣的培訓(xùn)班或請(qǐng)家教。對(duì)于這一 現(xiàn)象，存在兩種不同觀點(diǎn)： 有些人認(rèn)為有必要另一些人認(rèn)為沒(méi)有必要跟老師學(xué)比自己學(xué)好可以鞏固課堂所學(xué)內(nèi)容可以學(xué)到更多的東西容易養(yǎng)成依賴習(xí)慣學(xué)生需要時(shí)間休息請(qǐng)您根據(jù)以上提示，以 Is a Training Class of Family Teacher Necessaryi?題，寫(xiě)一篇 120 詞左右的短文，反映表中內(nèi)容，并簡(jiǎn)要闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。要求：層次清晰，連貫流暢；表達(dá)靈活，不要逐字逐句翻譯。參考詞

21、匯：鞏固strengthen；Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.【參考范文】Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?More and more mid

22、dle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.Some thinks it necessary. Firstly, it s more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Secondly, it can strengthen what we learnt in class. Bes

23、ides, they can learn a lot more. Others think it unnecessary. For one thing, students can easily form the habit of dependence. For another, students need time to relax from time to time. In my opinion, whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends. If you are really very weak at

24、or interested in a certain subject, maybe it s OK for you. But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money.9. 最近，你班同學(xué)就“父母是不是最好的老師”這一話題展開(kāi)了討論。有些人認(rèn)為父母是最好的老師，有些人認(rèn)為也不盡然。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文 介紹討論結(jié)果以及你的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。觀點(diǎn)原因 同意 不完全同意1 教會(huì)如何生活過(guò)分溺愛(ài)2 指出缺點(diǎn)，指明方向強(qiáng)加興趣、價(jià)值觀3 教

25、會(huì)富有愛(ài)心希望值過(guò)高要求：1、根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文通順連貫；2、詞數(shù)110左右；3、開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入單詞總數(shù)。【參考范文】Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers. Some students agree to the point because they think parents help to point out their mistakes in their lives. They teach them a lot about h

26、ow to live a meaningful life. What s more, parents love helps to teach them how to love others. So parents are their most important teachers.However, not all of us hold the same views. Some think that their parents give them too much love, and they are too eager to pass on their values and interests

27、 to them. Moreover, their parents sometimes expect too much of them, which makes them feel their goals too difficult to reach.In my opinion, parents are our important teachers. But parents should also try to understand their children more and limit the generation gap.10. 新農(nóng)村 -A New VillageYesterday

28、we went to visit a village. On our way to the village, we were glad to see a lot of nice rice, vegetablesand fruit in the fields. Also we saw new schools, factories and buildings.We got a warm welcome at the village. Some farmers invited us to their houses. They had moved to the new buildings. Their

29、 living room was large and bright. In it there were all kinds of new furniture. Nearly every family had color TV sets, fridges,washing machines and some of them even have bought motorbikes. Everyone had a smile on their faces. It was said that some guests from a foreign country would come to visit i

30、t.We were very glad to find the farmers life had changed a lot. We hope their life will become better and better.11. 許多學(xué)習(xí)生活中的煩惱都會(huì)使人產(chǎn)生壓力,為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學(xué)們中存在的心理壓力問(wèn)題，你們班特意開(kāi)展了一次以Less Pressure, Better Life”為主 題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽,請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備發(fā)言稿,談?wù)勀愕囊恍┚徑鈮毫Φ暮棉k法,與同學(xué)分享 ,內(nèi)容包括: 同學(xué)們中普遍存在的壓力是什么； 我的壓力是什么； 我是如何成功緩解我的壓力的。注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和

31、校名。詞數(shù)80100；短文的開(kāi)頭已給出 （不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls! Pressure is a seirous problem in today s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. That s all. Thank you!參考范文:Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls!Pressure is a serious problem in today s world.

32、Students in osusrcalrae under too much pressure. Some students can gt et on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.I malways under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.Last Monday

33、evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I neededtime to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.That s all. Thank you!12. 你心目中的好老師是什么樣子的？一名受歡迎的老師應(yīng)該有什么樣的特點(diǎn)?圍繞這個(gè)主題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇80 詞左右的短文。Th

34、e Good Teacher in Your HeartFirstly, a teacher should be able to play different roles in school. He can care about us like a mother. He can give us knowledge. He can play games and discuss problems with us like a friend.Secondly, a teacher should be patient and helpful. When we are in trouble, he ca

35、n always help us patiently.Thirdly, a teacher should be fair. He should have the same rules for everybody.Fourthly, a teacher should be fun. He can make his class interesting and make us laugh.13. 愛(ài)是心中的太陽(yáng)，融化你我身邊的冰雪。假設(shè)你是李明，你們學(xué)校的“ EnglishGarden”正在舉辦主題為 彳寸出即是收獲”的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你聯(lián)系自己平時(shí)的愛(ài)心 行為和感受寫(xiě)一篇文章投稿。要求：1.文中不得出

36、現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名等相關(guān)信息。2.1. 80 100詞。標(biāo)題和文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Giving is ReceivingI am a student from Green Middle School. My name is Li Ming. I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy. I often help my classmates with their schoolwork. Sometimes I help clean up my house. I go to the old peoples hom

37、e and do some cleaning for them once a month. I often visit the Childrens Hospital to cheer the sick kids up. I read stories and sing songs for them. I also help people in trouble. I think giving is receiving. Helping others is helping ourselves. Do you agree with me? 中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)背誦范文（二）1、 Great changes

38、 in my hometownMore than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few factories. The people didn t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life .Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years . The peop

39、le have found a lot of ways of making money . Now there are many tall buildings . They are very beautiful . Roads are wide and clean . People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work . Many people have cell phones and personal computers. People s living conditions have improved a lot . T

40、hanks to the government s efforts . My hometown is becoming more and more beautiful .2、 Save the earthHow to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world .It s our duty to protect our environment . No matter where we live , we should do something to keep our neighborho

41、od clean and tidy . We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields. We shouldn t leave rubbisheverywhere and spit in public places . We mustn t pick the flowers or

42、 step on the grass in public. If everyone tries his best to protect the environment , the world will become much more beautiful and our life will be better and better .3、 Improve our environmentGood environment can make people feel happy. To improve the environment means to qualify our life . What s

43、hould we do to improve our environment ?We should plant more trees . And we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers , lakes and fields . Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin . Don t spit in public places . Don t draw on p

44、ublic walls . It s our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy .4、 Pollution around usIn recent years, our life is becoming better and better. But our environment is becoming worse and worse. Its very bad for our life. Now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they produce (give off ) waste gas.

45、 More and more trees are being cut down. There are so much sand on the earth . We often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes. Water in the river is quite dirty. We haven t enough clean water to drink in cities. Now we are in danger. It s very necessaryand important to protect the environmen

46、t well. I think if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful , and our life will be better and better .5、 Make our world more beautiful !Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans . It s our duty to take care of the na

47、ture around us . Animals and plants are our best friends ., and we should share the world with them . We shouldn t kill wild animals , and we must protect forests because they are animals home . We must plant more trees and grass , they can make the world greener . The more beautiful the world is, t

48、he happier lives we will have . Let s do our best to make the world beautiful.6、 Keep our school cleanWe are studying in this school. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. It is not good to spit in public places, such as in the library, in the class. We shouldn t leave rubbish here and there. Do

49、nt draw pictures on the wall, they influence the look of our school . We should keep the classroom clean and tidy. And we should do some cleaning often. If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school, Im sure our school will be more beautiful .7、 My country lifeI like to live in th

50、e countryside. I live in a small village. There is a river near it. Lots of trees are around my house. I can see a lot of farms and birds. There is less noise. The air hereis cleaner and fresher. There are fewer cars. I read aloud early in the morning. When it is getting dark, the moon is bright in

51、the sky. It s very quiet . What a nice place I live in !8、 How to learn English wellAs we know , English has become an international language. It is more popular than any other language in China . English is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world . But how to

52、learn it well ?The best way is to use it all the time . If we can talk in English , think in English we can learn it well . At school , we should learn to hear , speak, read and write carefully . We should spend enough time in practicing English . If we keep on working hard at English , we will be a

53、ble to be good at it one day .9、 How I learn EnglishHello, everyone. It is my honor to talk with all of you about how to learn English well . I like English very much . I always preview and master the main idea of the lesson before class. In class , I listen carefully , speak loudly and write carefu

54、lly and take notes if necessary . After class , I do my homework carefully . I watch English movies and listen to English songs . I have booked an English newspaper . It s Times English Post , I can learn a lot from it . I am not afraid of remembering the new words because I master many good methods

55、 . I hope you work hard at English and make progress every day . That s all .十、 How I improved my EnglishWhen I began to learn English, I was poor at it. I was quite worried at that time. Later I1istened to the teacher attentively in class, and made notes carefully. If I had any question, I asked my

56、 English teacher or my classmates for help. Every morning I read the English texts aloud and listened to the English tapes. In the evening, after finishing my homework, I always read some English and magazines.Now I am one of the best students at English in my class.十一、 The importance of EnglishEngl

57、ish is the most widely spoken in the world. It s spoken by most people in the USA,Great Britain, Canada, Australia, and New Zealand. Its also very widely used as a foreign language in many other countries of the world. Its widely used for business between different countries. More than three quarter

58、s of the information on the Internet is in English, too. It is really a bridge to so much knowledge . English is used by travellers and business people around the world. Its one of the worlds most important languages as it is so widely used. Thats why more and more people in China are interested in learning English.English is so useful that we must learn it well . Now let s work hard at it and see who learns it faster and better in our cl