托福寫作常見語法錯(cuò)誤匯總

1、托福寫作常見語法錯(cuò)誤匯總托福寫作常見語法錯(cuò)誤匯總1. 托福寫作常見語法錯(cuò)誤之句子缺少連詞兩個(gè)句子之間不能只用逗號(hào)連接，要有連詞。誤：My sister loves to dance, she is very good at it.2. 托福寫作常見語法錯(cuò)誤之句式不平行句子中并列的成分應(yīng)該是相同的結(jié)構(gòu)。誤：I like to eat Japanese and eating Thai food（eating- eat）誤: Teenagers are more influenced by their peers than their parents（thantheir parents- than

2、by their parents）3. 托福寫作常見語法錯(cuò)誤之句子不完整句子缺少主語或謂語。誤：Because some necessary procedures such as transporting the factories,modifying equipment or planting more trees4. 托福寫作常見語法錯(cuò)誤之句意重復(fù)或冗余誤：The low-priced car was inexpensive（low-priced 和 inexpensive 重復(fù)）誤：personally, I believe what the newspaper prints（perso

3、nally 和Ibelieve 重復(fù)）5. 托福寫作常見語法錯(cuò)誤之時(shí)態(tài)，語態(tài)不一致我們來看兒種常見錯(cuò)誤（句例說明）:She did not adapt to the environment, but with time passing by, they find him more and more proficientshe和him是怎么個(gè)意思咧？I shall use my father s experience as an example My father went toAustralia several years ago. He see many birds and animals.

4、明明是過去，see怎么穿越回來了？The "ft I made are very pretty, g辻t 是單數(shù)啊，are 是怎么回事？6. 托福寫作常見語法錯(cuò)誤之連詞類缺失Successful men will have many places to live, a country house can provide a nice environment to relax, then it will be a new start point, but will not be an end one大家暫且忽略語法問題，且看這個(gè)句子。這個(gè)句子的笫一個(gè)問題就是連詞缺 失： 在 live

5、和 a country house 之間原作者使用逗號(hào)銜接的，但是呢，逗號(hào)并不能代替and等連詞的作用。因?yàn)?Successful men will have many places to live 和 a country house can provide a nice environment to relax都是兩個(gè)完整的句子，而沒有主從依附關(guān)系，所以必須得有連詞(and, but, therefore)等連接才能保證句子有效。總結(jié)：缺連詞的另一大原因是很多同學(xué)不知道什么是連詞，什么不是。and or but 是最有名的三個(gè)連詞。但是!however, so, yet, neverthel

6、ess也是連詞！ ！可以連接兩句句子！托?？荚囎魑莫?dú)立寫作范文：大學(xué)應(yīng)加強(qiáng)設(shè)施建設(shè)還是招聘好老師Do you agree or disagree: the universities should spend more money in improving facilities (libraries, computer labs) than hiring famous teachers寫作參考一：Cradles of cultivating talents, universities are supposed to provide most high-caliber education. Res

7、ponding to the expectation, universities haveto think the issue over Compared with hiring more teachers, from my own perspective, keeping facilities and resources in the universities most advancedand updated is more essential not only for students but also for renowned professorsFirst of all, studen

8、ts are able to enjoy a better study environment 辻their schools utilize advanced equipment With the assistance of exquisiteinventions such as electronic screen and projectors, as well as laboratory equipment, like microscopes and chemical reactors, studying would no longer be atedious and repetitious

9、 information engrafting process, but a way everyone wouldlike to get involved in. Similarly, definitions and formulas of physics andchemistry will graven in students' minds deeply if they are aided by the equipment when experimenting However, hardly can professors crystalize abstractconcepts int

10、o definite ideas without advanced teaching devicesWhat is more, as for famous teachers themselves, a university that does notinvest in its facilities would be appealing To be constantly enthusiastic onresearching their respective academic fields, teachers have a great demand forexquisite facilities

11、to maintain progressing on their own fields The most sophisticated technological devices offered in universities enable theseteachers to conduct successful researches and remain at the top, which is reallyattractive to those renowned professors By contrast, old and obsolete teachingand studying faci

12、lities will certainly not inspire teachers to keep furtheracademic researching Also, practically impossible will teachers haveinterestin making progressGranted, it is conceded that means guaranteeing education quality in be concerned and cared about Evenhiring more teachers in universitiessome sense

13、 because every student willslightest and most subtle academicperformancechanges of students will be noticed; therefore, teachers can encourage and guidefrustrated and upsetting students in time However, while weighing the benefitsbrought by investing in facilities and hiring more teachers, we can co

14、ncludethat facilities are moreworthwhile.In conclusion, I should reiterate that universities should updatetheir facilities, making a top priority. Without advanced facilities, a universitywill not be helped further improved寫作參考二：Advanced facilities, like libraries, research center, university hospit

15、alare indispensible parts of a good university while famous teachers are also abig component of a prestigious higher institution. Personally, I think it isbetter for universities to spend more money in hiring famous professorsAdmittedly, research centers can be a place where advanced technologyISinc

16、ubated, a library that incorporates state-of-the-art technology can also beconducive to students study, however, I still believe that famous professorsplay a more signifies nt role in assessing the reputation of a university First off, well-respected professors in a specific field can bring lots ofb

17、enefits not only to the whole community but also to the university To morespecific, prestigious professors can come up with theories and solutions to themost intriguing problems faced by human beings, like treatment of cancers, diabetes and even heart attack Economists can use data and economic mode

18、ls intheir empirical study to predict the economy, and it can provide lots of information for the authority to make timely adjustment to their policies Electronic engineers can design some micro-chips that can sustain large-scalecomputation. The benefits that professors bring to the school can be al

19、so enormous For instance, a Novel Prize laureate can attract countless research foundations and donations from both the private and public sectors, with thislarge sum of money, the university can in turn renovate labs, research centersand even librariesAdditionally, well-established professors and r

20、esearchers can educate and enlighten brilliant young students and cultivate future scientists Famous professors are usually expert in education, they might have been teaching and researching in their field for more than a few decades, thus have accumulated lots of rich teaching experience and develo

21、ped the most effective teaching approach Together with their superb charisma, lots of bright young adults will be motivated and inspired and therefore embark on the road of scientific endeavor and exploration. Such inspirations and motivations cannot be brought by improved facilities Indeed, it is t

22、he expertise and charisma of these famous professors that attract thousands of brilliant young students to enroll in a collegeTo conclude, hiring more famous professors are more advisable than renovating facilities since the scientific discoveries brought by professors can bring colossal benefits to

23、 both the community and the university, and also the expertise and charisma of well-established professors can attract, enlighten and cultivate future scientists托?？荚囎魑莫?dú)立寫作范文：老師針對(duì)青少年學(xué)生的不同教法Some believe that teachers (for students from age 14-18) should focus on lecturing and asking students to take n

24、otes during lectures Others believe that teachers should get students involved in discussion and encourage them to exchange ideas in class Which way of teaching do you think is more effective for students* learning?寫作參考：Educators and researchers have never stopped the examination of the importance a

25、nd relevance of collaborative and interactive learning that are encouraged by middle schools When compared with boring lecturing, I, personally, believe that it is far more beneficial to students when they share their ideas and exchange opinions with each other for the following reasonsFirst off, ex

26、changing ideas with fellow classmates help students develop critical thinking, presentation skills and other kinds of soft skillsets When discussing issues with peers, students tend to take a position on a certain issue In this learning process, students will collect their thoughts and synthesize th

27、e concepts learned in textbook or in the lecture to support his orher points Also, to respond to others' comments, students have to reflect onthe rationale of their own arguments and come up with persuasive reasoning. Itis obvious that such activities helps students to learning more meaningfully

28、 andextensively. Furthermore, students unconsciously learn how to express themselvesaffirmatively and make their points clear in front of a large audience It takesright amount of eye contacts, body language and facial expression to conveyone's idea in a convincing way and such presentation skills can be valuable asset for one' s future careerAdditionally, actively discussing issues with peers can help students tocope with different opinions When discussing issues with peers, not only dostudent contribute to the class, but als