2015年第一次月考作文學(xué)案

1、2015年上期高年上期高一一第一次月考作文學(xué)案第一次月考作文學(xué)案假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生張華張華。 你們班從外地轉(zhuǎn)來一名同學(xué)李明李明。他一時無法融入新的班集體中，感到很苦惱。請根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，用英語給他寫封建議信。書信需要包括以下要點(diǎn)：1. 要他分析原因；要他分析原因；2. 給他提出建議；給他提出建議； 3. 陳述你幫助他的具體打算陳述你幫助他的具體打算。 I. Typical mistakes :1.這是一篇材料作文，跑題的可能性很小。但部分學(xué)生也出現(xiàn)如下問題：A.遺漏要點(diǎn)，如：陳述你幫助他的具體打算，部分學(xué)生沒有要他分析原因； B.未注意書信格式；且有部分同學(xué)在正文部分在正文部分用用1,2,3

2、點(diǎn)列舉建議點(diǎn)列舉建議。 C.最后未做總結(jié)，突然結(jié)尾； D.部分同學(xué)未注意分段； E.少部分同學(xué)時間分布不均衡，作文未寫完或根本沒寫；2. 詞匯貧乏，詞性概念不清，缺乏高級詞匯；甚至出現(xiàn)特別低甚至出現(xiàn)特別低級的表達(dá)錯誤，如：級的表達(dá)錯誤，如：you is3.表達(dá)漢式，未有效地使用過渡詞尤其是陳述理由時，語句生硬；4.句子結(jié)構(gòu)缺乏多樣性，篇章連接手段單調(diào)；5.卷面不整，亂涂亂改，標(biāo)點(diǎn)不明，字跡難辯。有將近有將近80位同位同學(xué)字體過小，特別影響老師閱卷，也嚴(yán)重影響自學(xué)字體過小，特別影響老師閱卷，也嚴(yán)重影響自己的得分。己的得分。 II. Analysis.1.人稱：_2.時態(tài):_3.結(jié)構(gòu)：第一段_第二

3、段_第三段_簡明扼要地問候和點(diǎn)簡明扼要地問候和點(diǎn)明明所要提出建議的問題所要提出建議的問題.1.鼓勵對方分析自身原因鼓勵對方分析自身原因 2.提出建議和理由提出建議和理由.對對方進(jìn)行鼓勵對對方進(jìn)行鼓勵（告訴他你將如何幫助他）（告訴他你將如何幫助他）.第二人稱第二人稱一般現(xiàn)在時一般現(xiàn)在時1. 對感到苦惱_ 2.對有困難_3.與某人相處_4.適應(yīng)新的班級_5.對熟悉_6.振作起來_7.分析你自己的原因_8.改善關(guān)系_be upset aboutcheer upbe familiar withget along/on with sbhave difficulty/trouble in doing fi

4、t in/adapt to/adjust to a new classanalyze your own reasonimprove the relationship 9.盡可能地參加班級活動 10.我將盡我所能幫助你。 _ take part in class activity as much as you canI will do as much as I can to help you.I will do whatever I can to help you.1.你很少與我們交流，這就是為什么你適應(yīng)不了一個新班級的你很少與我們交流，這就是為什么你適應(yīng)不了一個新班級的原因。原因。示例：We

5、spent all of yesterday waiting for him, and that is why we had no time to clean the house.(M1U1 Home alone) ,that is why仿寫：You seldom communicate with us, and that is why you cant fit in a new class.2.你應(yīng)該考慮如何做來適應(yīng)新的生活，而不是只為問題多么嚴(yán)重而心神你應(yīng)該考慮如何做來適應(yīng)新的生活，而不是只為問題多么嚴(yán)重而心神不安。不安。示例：Why didnt they ask me what hap

6、pened instead ofshouting at me? (M1U1 Home alone) instead of doing仿寫：You should consider how to adjust to the new life, instead of just being upset about how serious the problem is.3.你太害羞了，所以你很難向同學(xué)敞開心扉你太害羞了，所以你很難向同學(xué)敞開心扉。 示例示例: Since teenagers have difficulty balancing these needs, they often questio

7、n who they are and how they fit in society.仿寫仿寫:4.你應(yīng)該多與同學(xué)交流以便他們能夠更多地了解你。你應(yīng)該多與同學(xué)交流以便他們能夠更多地了解你。示例示例:The aliens took me aboard the UFO so that they could do research on me. Since you are too shy, you have difficulty opening your heart to other classmates.You are supposed to communicate with our classm

8、ates as much as possible so that we can learn more about you.Dear Li Ming, Welcome to our class. I know you havent 1._ (adapt) to the new life in our class since the start of this term. Cheer up! The trouble is temporary and I believe you will become one of us soon.2._ the first place, the truth is

9、that you are afraid to talk to others. I think thats3._you dont communicate with us. You should contact us as much as you can, 4._means we can know more about you. Apart from those, 5._(be) confident in yourself. Instead of just being upset about 6._serious the problem is, you should think about what you can do 7._(adjust) to the new life. adaptedInwhywhichbehowto adjust I think itll have 8._good effect on you. In my opinion, most of us are willing to help you. However, you must rely on9._(you). In fact, we really want to mak