2020年中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)之《日記》

1、2020年中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)之日記1 .體裁解讀日記常用來(lái)記述一天中所發(fā)生的重要的或有趣的事情，也可以用來(lái)敘述自己當(dāng)天觸景而發(fā)的感受等。日記的主要體裁通常是記敘文或簡(jiǎn)單的議論文。2 .寫(xiě)作攻略英文日記通常由書(shū)端和正文兩部分組成。書(shū)端是專(zhuān)門(mén)記載寫(xiě)日記的日期及天氣狀況的。正文的格式與其他文章相近，一般縮進(jìn)4個(gè)字母，也可以頂格寫(xiě)。由于日記所寫(xiě)的事件都是發(fā)生過(guò)的事情，所以日記通常用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。因?yàn)槿沼浂酁橛洈⒆约旱挠H身經(jīng)歷或抒發(fā)自己的感想，所以一般用第一人稱(chēng)。寫(xiě)日記的時(shí)候一般遵循以下步驟：第一步：介紹事件：第二步：具體闡述事情經(jīng)過(guò)，補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)；第三步：表達(dá)感想或總結(jié)該事件的意義。寫(xiě)日記要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1

2、.日記的第一行要寫(xiě)清日期、星期和天氣狀況。日期和星期寫(xiě)在正文的左上角，月份 與星期可以縮寫(xiě)。天氣狀況寫(xiě)在正文的右上角。如果是游記，還可以寫(xiě)明地點(diǎn)。2 .日記通常使用過(guò)去時(shí)記錄所發(fā)生的事件。若為議論、抒情或描述景物和人，為了生 動(dòng)，也可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。3 .日記的正文可以是敘事、描寫(xiě)、說(shuō)明或議論等形式，且通常用第一人稱(chēng)。4 .日記雖然是記錄事件，但應(yīng)該適當(dāng)加一些個(gè)人感悟，寫(xiě)出亮點(diǎn)。我們以【2018年四川成都市】為例：假如你是圖中女孩，你與家人于 4月29日共度周日。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖中所示寫(xiě)一篇英文日記，講 述你當(dāng)天所見(jiàn)和所做之事。注意：1.日記應(yīng)包含圖中所有信息2 .日記中須寫(xiě)出當(dāng)天的一些感受3 .日

3、記應(yīng)格式正確，語(yǔ)句通順，句式多樣4詞數(shù)：100左右。參考詞匯：城堡castle螃蟹crab【答案】Sunny Sunday,April 29（th）Today I had a good time with my parents on the beach It was so fine that I could see the rising sunand flying sea birds. a boat sailed itself in the distance. What a beautiful scene! Dressed inswimming suit, I swam in the blue

4、 and clear sea. Then, I played volleyball with my parents. Finally,I managed to make a sand castle with tools. It looked so true to life that a crab even wanted to live init.What a pleasant day! I not only got close to nature but also shared happiness with my family.【解析】假如你是圖中女孩j你與家人于4月的日共度周日,閽艮據(jù)圖中所

5、示寫(xiě)一篇英文日記:講述餌當(dāng) 天所見(jiàn)和所做之事&根據(jù)圖片提示j動(dòng)第前要先認(rèn)吏閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮學(xué)寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意 描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合梆4內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一大稱(chēng)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行 敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系 緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系”寫(xiě)作模板Day of the week DateWeather介紹今天是什么日 子，引出事件詳細(xì)描寫(xiě)了今天所做 的事情T(mén)oday is. I did some meaningful things.In the morning, I （事件一） .In the a

6、fternoon, I（事件二）.After that, I （事件三）.What a warm and meaningful day! I will never forget the memorable day! /表達(dá)感想Although I was very tired, I felt very happy because.【模板范文】Sunday May 10thFineToday is Mother's Day. I did some meaningful things to show my love to my mother.In the morning, I bought

7、 my mother some flowers with my pocket money. In the afternoon ,I went shopping and then cooked a delicious dinner for my family. After that , I gave mother the15card made by myself and said "Happy Mother's Day" to her. I told her I would study hard andnever let her down. Hearing this,

8、 my mother was moved to tears.What a warm and meaningful day! I will never forget the memorable day!常用表達(dá)亮點(diǎn)詞匯搭配1. 表示天氣fine adj. 晴朗的cloudy adj. 多云的snowy adj.下雪的rainy adj. 下雨的windy adj. 有風(fēng)的hail n. 冰雹2. 抒發(fā)感想moved adj. 感動(dòng)的enjoy oneself 玩得高興memorable adj. 值得紀(jì)念的meaningful adj. 有意義的worry about 擔(dān)憂(yōu)delicious a

9、dj. 美味的3. 其他finish v. 完成classmate n. 同學(xué)voluntary adj. 志愿的，義務(wù)的although conj. 雖然經(jīng)典句子背誦：開(kāi)頭句1. It was a fine/nice day. 天氣晴朗。2. Today is.今天是3. I went to the park to.我去公園4. We decided to go out for a picnic today.我們決定今天出去野餐。5. My classmates and I went to the park to do some voluntary work.我和我們班的同學(xué)去公園做義務(wù)勞動(dòng)

10、。中間句1. First we were divided into three groups and then began working.我們首先分成了三個(gè)組，然后開(kāi)始工作。2. The task for Group Two was collecting the litter and cleaning benches.第二組的同學(xué)收集垃圾和清理長(zhǎng)凳。3. Group Three wiped all the equipment in the park.第三組的同學(xué)擦洗公園里所有的設(shè)施。結(jié)尾句1. I had a good time today. / I enjoyed myself today

11、.我今天玩得很高興。2. I will never forget it. 我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記這件事。3. What a warm and meaningful day!這是多么溫馨而又富有意義的一天！4. I will never forget the memorable day!我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記這難忘的一天！5. Although everyone was very tired, we felt very happy because we had done a meaningful job.雖然大家都很累，但我們很開(kāi)心，因?yàn)槲覀冏隽艘患幸饬x的工作。真題訓(xùn)練【2018年浙江寧波市中考】今年5月11

12、日，你校組織了一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，部分學(xué)生選擇去了紅星農(nóng)場(chǎng)（見(jiàn)導(dǎo)圖一），其余學(xué)生選擇去了科技博物館（見(jiàn)導(dǎo)圖二）。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你所選擇Our trip the Scare-n cr的實(shí)踐活動(dòng)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)日記，記錄當(dāng)天的經(jīng)歷和感受。Our trip taHongxing Farr.配F ing t:gMrnoMbJT.m . wkKi ACUE -導(dǎo)圖二注意：（1）日記必須包括你所選擇導(dǎo)圖的所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；詞數(shù)：80 -100。日記格式及首句己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Friday, May 11thToday I had a school trip. （二）【2018年

13、湖北省孝感】 本周一是端午節(jié)，你校外教Tony對(duì)中國(guó)文化很感興趣，你陪他去槐蔭公園觀(guān)看了龍舟比賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇日記。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1 .現(xiàn)場(chǎng)情況。人多擁擠，16支龍舟隊(duì)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)激烈，人們歡呼，隊(duì)員們閉隊(duì)合作，最終 勇 氣隊(duì)”獲勝。2 .賽后活動(dòng)：我給 Tony介紹端午節(jié)，下午帶他參加有關(guān)端午節(jié)的其它活動(dòng)，如3 .感想：Tony,我寫(xiě)作要求：1 .短文內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)句通順，條理清晰；2 .省略號(hào)處須作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮（1-2句即可）；3 .100詞左右，短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。June 18thToday is the Dragon Boat Festival.中考預(yù)測(cè)Writing

14、1根據(jù)下列提示信息，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇不少于80詞的日記。提示：1.著名教授Mr. Robert今天（6月5日，星期五，晴）上午來(lái)你校作了一場(chǎng)報(bào)告;2.其報(bào)告內(nèi)容包括：1）如何與同學(xué)友好相處；2）如何與家長(zhǎng)、老師有效溝通；3）如何控制不良情緒。4）這場(chǎng)報(bào)告對(duì)你今后的學(xué)習(xí)和生活都很重要。要求：1.日記中必須包括提示中的所有要點(diǎn)；2 .不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3 .必須用第一人稱(chēng)寫(xiě)作；4 .條理清晰，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；5 .文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名等相關(guān)信息;6 .日記的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)。參考詞匯：effectively有效地professor教授Writing 2請(qǐng)以下述內(nèi)容為題，寫(xiě)一篇日記。3

15、月15日，星期一。詞數(shù)： 60 80詞。提示：今晚，你去參加李江的生日宴會(huì)，大家又唱又跳，玩得很開(kāi)心。離開(kāi)李江家時(shí)，天開(kāi)始下雨，由于已很晚了，你步行回家；一輛摩托車(chē)急馳而過(guò)，在十字路口撞倒了一個(gè)男孩。摩托車(chē)沒(méi)停，逃跑了。你十分氣憤，記下了車(chē)號(hào)（FD 2819 ）后馬上打電話(huà)報(bào)警，并把孩子送往醫(yī)院。March 15th, MondayWriting 3假設(shè)今天是XX 年 3 月 12 日，星期天，天晴。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面通知內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的日記。參考詞匯：ride， arrive， dig a hole， put， carry water， leave， tiredWriting 4假如你

16、叫王若琪，今天上午你帶著寵物狗Coco 散步時(shí)遇到一位外國(guó)人，他看上去很著急，你上前詢(xún)問(wèn)后，得知他找不到去火車(chē)站的路，于是你幫助了他請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇日記，記敘所發(fā)生的事情并描述你的心理感受。詞數(shù)90 左右，日記的格式和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Thursday October 1stToday was the first day of the National Day holiday. Writing 5在初中三年的學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程中，不同的學(xué)生獲得的英語(yǔ)課堂知識(shí)或多或少各不相同。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)篇英語(yǔ)日記，記敘你所上的一堂英語(yǔ)課的過(guò)程和感受。要求如下：1 .語(yǔ)句完整，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確。2 .詞數(shù)

17、6080詞，日記的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。要點(diǎn)詞7匚：sing a song; come into; say hello to; ask sb. questions; praise sb. for sth.; teach sb.真題訓(xùn)練【滿(mǎn)分作文一】Friday. May 11thToday I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to Hongxing Farm by bus early in the morning.The minute we arrived, we took a

18、walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excitement and some of them even walked into their friends. The most exciting thing was that we picked strawberries after lunch. While we were picking, we ate a lot. How sweet they were!I had a w

19、onderful time today! I do hope to go there again in the near future!(98 words)【滿(mǎn)分作文二】Friday, May 11thToday I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to the Science Museum by subway at 7 :00.As soon as we reached the museum, we were amazed to see lots of pictures about sc

20、ience. Then we watched a video about different inventions and their inventors. It's unbelievable that technology has progressed in such a rapid way. In the afternoon, we played chess with some special robots. It was surprising to find that nobody could beat them. Before leaving, we bought some g

21、ifts for our friends.I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again! (99 words) 【解析】寫(xiě)作分析：苜先要確定文宣的體裁i這是一篇日記.這就;夬定了文童的人稱(chēng)。其次要看到要求是*艮據(jù)你所選擇的實(shí)踐 活動(dòng)”進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作,所以要在兩個(gè)導(dǎo)圖中挑選一個(gè)進(jìn)行JS迷不需要都寫(xiě)，在完全明白題目含義后就要根據(jù)導(dǎo) 圖中的要點(diǎn)(包括人物、交通方式、感受、活動(dòng))進(jìn)行作文F使用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)句進(jìn)行連接' 保證作文連貫得體即可?！緷M(mǎn)分作文】Today is the Dragon Boat Festival For the

22、reason that Tony has a strong interest in Chinese traditional culture. I invited him to come to watch the dragon boat races which was held in Huaiyin Park this morning When we arrived, it was crowded. There were 16 colorful dragon boats floating in the river. During the race, the dragon boat teams c

23、ompeted with each other, while people on each bank cheered up. Both Tony and I felt the exciting atmosphere. At last, the Courage Team won.After the competition, I introduced the Dragon Boat Festival to Tony and welcomed him to many other activities about the festival. We went to learn how to make z

24、ongzi and admire a picture exhibition.At the end of the day, tired as we were, we felt excited. Tony though our traditional Chinese culture was so amazing and I am proud of my great motherland.【解析1【詳解試題分析二本書(shū)面表達(dá)以U端午節(jié)啕話(huà)題的日記。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可失除文會(huì)使用到一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài), 用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)表達(dá)。注意一些掌見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交曹使用？使文意連接緊密, 還要注意使用豐富

25、的語(yǔ)句注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系最后最好要表達(dá)出人物的感想和會(huì)去* 寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊， 語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練、要點(diǎn)齊全。文中invite sb.to do, during the race, competewith, cheere up, at last, bothat theaend- of the day, be proud of 等詞匯的恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；本文還采用了豐富的句型，比如：運(yùn)用了 there be句型；定語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。中考預(yù)測(cè)Writing 1【思路分析】1 .審題：本文屬于一篇日記，根

26、據(jù)英文日記書(shū)寫(xiě)要求，通篇要用第一人稱(chēng)；為對(duì)經(jīng)歷的紀(jì)錄，時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去去時(shí)。再根據(jù)提示，寫(xiě)清要點(diǎn)。首先寫(xiě)教授來(lái)做報(bào)告，包括：howto get along with classmates, how to communicate with parents and teachers efficiently 和 how to control ourselves ;然后闡明自 己的感受 (an important lesson; help us study better, live a happier life)。2 .寫(xiě)作思維： (1)開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題： This morning, Mr. Robert, a

27、 famous professor, came to our school.(2)報(bào)告內(nèi)容:He told us. He also asked us. At last, he.(3)闡明感受:I learned. I think his report.【參考范文】Friday,June5thSundayThis morning, Mr. Robert, a famous professor, came to our school to give us a useful report.He asked us how we can get along well with our classmate

28、s. He told us that honesty is the bestpolicy. He also taught us how to communicate with our parents and teachers. When he talkedabout how we can control ourselves, he said, “Count to ten when you get angry." I learned animportant lesson from Mr. Robert. I m sure his report will help us study be

29、tter and live a happier life in future.【寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】1. 重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)a) give a report 作報(bào)告b) get along well with.和相處融洽c) communicate with與溝通 /交流d) learn. from.從學(xué)至U2. 高級(jí)句型a) He also taught us how to communicate with our parents and teachers. 他還教我們?nèi)绾胃改负屠蠋煖贤?。b) I m sure his report will help us study better and live a h

30、appier life in future. 我相信他的報(bào)告對(duì)我們的未來(lái)更好地學(xué)習(xí)和生活有一定幫助。Writing 2【參考范文】This evening I went to Li Jiang's birthday party. We sang and danced. We had a good time at the party. When I left Li Jiang's house, it began to rain. It was late. I had to walk home. A motorbike ran by me very fast. It hit a b

31、oy at the crossing. But the motorbike didn't stop. It ran away. I felt very angry. I wrote down its number: FD 2819. I telephoned the police at once. Then I sent the boy to the hospital.Writing 3March 12， XX ， SundayFineToday is fine. All our teachers and we students went to plant trees. At 8 in

32、 the morning we met outside the school gate. Then we rode our bikes to West Hill. About half past eight, we arrived there. As soon as we got there, some of us dug holes, some put the young trees in the holes, and others carried water and watered the trees. We all worked hard. About 11： 30, we left t

33、here. Though we were very tired, we felt very happy.Writing 4【思路分析】這篇作文要求我們寫(xiě)一篇日記，記敘自己幫助了一個(gè)外國(guó)人的事情。日記記敘的都是已經(jīng)發(fā)生的事情，所以這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式形式。題目中只給出了事情的大概，而具體的內(nèi)容需要學(xué)生們自己來(lái)補(bǔ)充，因此寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意組織語(yǔ)言，完整地?cái)⑹鍪虑榈慕?jīng)過(guò)，并描述自己的心理感受。還應(yīng)注意的是英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，英語(yǔ)的句式與漢語(yǔ)是不同的，所以寫(xiě)作時(shí)不應(yīng)逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~和句型，寫(xiě)符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣的句子，

34、以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，輔以并列句和復(fù)合句，增強(qiáng)文章的節(jié)奏，并注意上下文意的連貫和流暢?！痉段馁p析】Thursday October 1stToday was the first day of the National Day holiday. In the morning when I was taking a walk with my pet dog Coco along the street, I met a foreigner. He was looking around and looked worried. I went over to him and asked him what I co

35、uld do for him. He told me he couldnthe way to the train station. I showed him the right way. He thanked me and went away happily.I was very proud of myself because I could speak English and I could help a foreigner in trouble. This made me feel very happy!【寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，首先短文內(nèi)容完整，作者在文章中完整地?cái)⑹隽俗约簬椭@個(gè)

36、外國(guó)人找到火車(chē)站的經(jīng)過(guò)，敘述清楚、有條理，語(yǔ)言明確，簡(jiǎn)潔明了。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，文章以過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)為主，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞都用了過(guò)去式形式，尤其注意了不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式形式的改變，如met, told, could 等。最后整篇短文表達(dá)流暢，意思連貫，使用了比較豐富的句型和短語(yǔ)，如In the morning when I was taking a walk with my pet dog Coco along thestreet, I met a foreigner. 、 He told me he couldn t find the way to the train station. 、 I was very proud of myself because I could speak English and I could help a foreigner in trouble. 等。Writing 5【思路分析】本篇作文要求我們記敘自己上過(guò)的一堂英語(yǔ)課，講述這節(jié)課的過(guò)程和自己的感受。題目中給出了我們這一話(huà)題和文章中需要用到的一些要點(diǎn)詞匯，但具體的內(nèi)容需要學(xué)生們自己來(lái)完成， 因此這個(gè)題目的開(kāi)放性程度比較大，并沒(méi)有給學(xué)生規(guī)定要寫(xiě)什么內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮的范圍就很大，學(xué)生們可以聯(lián)想自己的實(shí)際生活，印象比較深刻的一堂課，將