四六級(jí)英語(yǔ)預(yù)測(cè)作文

1、大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試作文預(yù)測(cè)（2010.12）恩波教育英語(yǔ)研究所預(yù)測(cè)作文（一）College StudentsLiving Condition1 反應(yīng)大學(xué)生生存狀況的詞語(yǔ)從“蝸居”、“蟻?zhàn)濉钡健笆笞濉?，不斷涌現(xiàn)。2 對(duì)于這種現(xiàn)象，你有什么看法？【范文】Recently, the living condition of some college students is frequently referred to as “dwelling-narrowness”. In fact, this embarrassing situation is very serious that few of us

2、can fail to meditate on the causes of it.In the first place, its difficult for graduates to bear the high cost of life in big cities. Poor payment thus gives rise to bad living conditions. Next, college students are more ambitious. Many of them are eager to compete in big cities like Shanghai and Be

3、ijing, where talents are abundant and positions are limited. Refusing to go back hometown let them suffer in big cities, which indirectly make their situation worse.Generally speaking, college students should be more qualified to better themselves and adjust their goals according to the reality. 【點(diǎn)評(píng)

4、】首句交待背景，用無(wú)生命的名詞詞組(inanimate noun phrase)作主語(yǔ)并使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，文章更加客觀中立。第二句話使用單詞embarrassing，深入地挖掘了當(dāng)今大學(xué)生生存狀況艱難與大學(xué)生十年寒窗之間令人無(wú)奈的矛盾。第三句話為承上啟下句，fail to do sth.表示沒(méi)能、不能做某事。文章第二部分闡釋了作者的個(gè)人看法。認(rèn)為此社會(huì)現(xiàn)象的一個(gè)原因是大城市的高消費(fèi)與大學(xué)生剛剛畢業(yè)收入相對(duì)較低之間產(chǎn)生的矛盾。第二個(gè)原因來(lái)自大學(xué)生對(duì)自身期許過(guò)高與大城市人才濟(jì)濟(jì)之間的矛盾。使用單詞ambitious，表示雄心勃勃。在形容人才濟(jì)濟(jì)時(shí)，使用abundant，表示充足的。此外，文章還指出第一

5、個(gè)原因是直接原因，第二個(gè)原因是間接導(dǎo)致了大學(xué)生生存困境。最后一段給出了解決方法，better oneself指使某人自身更加優(yōu)秀，better此處作動(dòng)詞講。預(yù)測(cè)作文（二）Should we help others in need?1 現(xiàn)在經(jīng)常有這樣的現(xiàn)象發(fā)生：路上有人摔倒，沒(méi)人敢上前幫忙。2 這是人們的公德心缺失還是其他什么原因呢？3 你對(duì)此有何看法？【范文】Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture. But whats strange nowadays is that people dare

6、not show their helping hands to those in need. I would like to elaborate my views on this issue.Firstly, I think peoples moral sense has degraded. When egoism gains the upper hand, many people find it growingly hard to help others. Secondly, there is no denying that some tragic events turn out to be

7、 traps by people with evil intentions. So common people are becoming more risk-conscious and are more wary of traps and deceits. In general, I contend the idea that we should be warm-hearted and offer help as well as look out for potential hazards so as not to be deceived.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】第一句話介紹背景，使用“美德”virtue一詞

8、。第二句話為轉(zhuǎn)折句，除了使用but這個(gè)表示強(qiáng)烈轉(zhuǎn)折意味的連接詞，還采用了strange和首句形成鮮明對(duì)比。文章第二部分開(kāi)始闡釋人們公德心（moral sense）缺乏的原因。指出原因之一為自私。此處采用了egoism, 也可使用selfishness, 但不可使用individualism，后者在英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)境中通常作褒義詞講，即崇尚自尊自立之意。原因之一是內(nèi)因，原因之二是外因。Trap指陷阱，deceit指欺騙。第二段使用了內(nèi)外因、主客觀因素結(jié)合的方法，較全面地解釋了公德心缺失的根源。最后一段表明作者立場(chǎng)，提出既要堅(jiān)持善良之心也要有防備之心。預(yù)測(cè)作文（三）Food Safety1 食品安全問(wèn)題令人

9、擔(dān)憂。2 對(duì)此，你有什么看法（可從蔬菜、水果濫用農(nóng)藥、激素方面分析）？【范文】Currently, many problems concerning the safety of food have popped up. As for me, I believe at least three factors account for this issue.First, I observe that profits drive many food producers to commit illegal things. They aim to gain more money at the expens

10、e of consumers health. Second, the overuse of agricultural pesticide has resulted in the degradation of food quality. The excessive pesticide bears enormous health hazard for people. Furthermore, some food producers inject hormones into domestic animals so as to make them grow more quickly and thus

11、they can turn in more profit. As a result, peoples health has been seriously disturbed.All in all, food safety is such a great concern, and we all should do establish laws and implement them effectively to avoid producing toxic foods.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】首句直接點(diǎn)題，詞組pop up指彈起，這里指食品安全突然間成了一大社會(huì)問(wèn)題。文章第二部分從蔬菜生產(chǎn)商、水果濫用農(nóng)藥及激素方面

12、闡釋了食品安全問(wèn)題的根源。Observe除了有觀察之意，還可以表示某人的觀點(diǎn)；動(dòng)詞commit后面通常接違法或傷害性的事情，如commit a crime, commit illegal things, commit suicide等等?！耙韵M(fèi)者的健康為代價(jià)”除了使用at the expense of 還可以使用at the cost of 或者ignoring。 另外，在表達(dá)同一意思或相近意思時(shí)，此文避免了一詞多用，而是采用不同的單詞或詞組，如劣質(zhì)食品使用了problems concerning the safety of food, the degradation of food qua

13、lity和toxic foods。 最后一段再次點(diǎn)題，并提出了萬(wàn)能解決方案之一，即政府和相關(guān)單位要制定法律法規(guī)。預(yù)測(cè)作文（四）The Popularity of Micro-blogging1近年來(lái)“微博”越來(lái)越流行，許多人利用“微博”來(lái)表達(dá)心聲、交流想法。2微博流行的原因。3微博可能引起的弊端?！痉段摹縈icro-blogging is no longer a strange word. More precisely, it has become part of our life. As for me, many factors contribute to the widespread of

14、 Micro-blogging. First, it is very convenient for people to express their instant feelings at any time. Second, it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress. By revealing their heartfelt emotions on the Micro-blogging, their friends may also know about their conditions and can offer

15、 in-time comfort. However, Micro-blogging can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away peoples privacy and other significant information.All in all, Micro-blogging provides us comfort and also inevitably some concerns. We should be careful while using it.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】第一段直接切入主題。首句在說(shuō)明微博越來(lái)越流行時(shí)沒(méi)有用肯定句mic

16、ro-blogging is more and more popular, 而是用否定句的方式“負(fù)負(fù)得正”。從第二段開(kāi)始闡釋流行的原因。Contribute to是固定詞組，表示為作出貢獻(xiàn)，其對(duì)應(yīng)的名詞是contribution。第一個(gè)原因是微博方便人們?cè)谌魏螘r(shí)候表達(dá)他們當(dāng)時(shí)的感覺(jué)。這里通過(guò)“at any time”和“instant feeling”突出了微博和傳統(tǒng)博客的區(qū)別。第二個(gè)原因是微博可以減壓。此處release表示釋放，除了跟release pressure, release stress, 還可以跟release news。第三段描述了微博的弊端，give away表示出賣，同義

17、詞有betray。最后一段是作者的對(duì)微博的態(tài)度，在充分肯定微博積極意義的同時(shí)提醒人們要謹(jǐn)慎使用微博。預(yù)測(cè)作文（五）Reflection on Natural Disasters1 最近國(guó)內(nèi)外災(zāi)害不斷發(fā)生，這些災(zāi)害引起了我們對(duì)于自然所做的行為的再一次思考。2 你是如何看待自然災(zāi)害的？3 我們應(yīng)該采取哪些措施來(lái)盡可能避免這些災(zāi)害和減少損失呢？【范文】Natural disasters happen almost every day，those devastating ones leave us to think about our behaviors towards nature again.Fi

18、rst of all，we need to set a sound pre-warning mechanism, which enables us to detect potential risks at an early stages. Accordingly，emergency measures can be taken，and losses can be minimized.Second，governments have to equipped with an excellent Disaster Assistance Response Team to rescue those disa

19、ster-stricken areas. The primary goal is to provide emergency services, such as drinking water and medical treatment, until long-term aid arrives.Third, citizens need to realize that the main cause of those disasters is largely due to climate crisis; therefore, they should purchase energy efficient

20、appliances, plant trees and economize our consumption on housing.From what has been discussed above, I maintain that minimizing the cost of disasters can be achieved by our persisting efforts.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】第一段為總起段，提出問(wèn)題并引起讀者的注意。在形容自然災(zāi)害時(shí)，用disaster。Devastating表示極具破壞性的，同義詞為destroying。Leave sb. to do sth. 意味著使某人做某

21、事。之后第二段中使用了連接詞accordingly, 用以表示順接或因果關(guān)系，連接詞的使用能夠使文章更具連貫性和邏輯性。而兩個(gè)被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)的使用則使文章更加客觀公正。第三段從政府的角度來(lái)進(jìn)一步論述。Disaster-stricken為形容詞，意思為飽受摧殘的。在講述政府提供的救援時(shí)，文中用了舉例的方法使文章更加具體有說(shuō)服力。第四段中的be due to主要用來(lái)表示不好的原因。Purchase表示大宗購(gòu)買，意為buy。這里用了三個(gè)并列的動(dòng)賓詞組，使文章更加有說(shuō)服力。最后一段maintain用來(lái)表示某人的觀點(diǎn)，同義詞還有observe, declare, insist。大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)考試作文預(yù)測(cè)（201

22、0.12）恩波教育英語(yǔ)研究所預(yù)測(cè)作文（一）Aging Before Wealthy1 物價(jià)上漲，通貨膨脹，社會(huì)壓力越來(lái)越大，很多白領(lǐng)出現(xiàn)“未富先老”的現(xiàn)象。2 作為一個(gè)大學(xué)生，走出校門后，你將如何應(yīng)對(duì)這種情況?！痉段摹縎tress has been around human beings ever since its existence; it is an unavoidable consequence of life. In current society, everyone is required to work in a fast pace with the competition ge

23、tting more and more hectic. What one earns does not make ends meet. Therefore a lot of white collars are suffering from “aging before wealthy”.As university students, we will face those issues in no time. The first thing we should do is to stay positive. Secondly, knowledge is power. A competent per

24、son will accomplish his/her goal easier than others. So when we are still in campus, we shall spend more time in improving our skills, as well as broadening our horizons. In addition, everyone needs to learn stress management that suits them in order to cope with the current pace of the society. All

25、 in all, by following the above steps and recognizing the seriousness of the reality, I am quite confident that we can face the future challenges and eventually survive. 【點(diǎn)評(píng)】首段交待“未富先老”的歷史和社會(huì)背景，先講壓力自古有之，后講現(xiàn)代社會(huì)的壓力更大。不僅如此，收入與支出的不和諧更是導(dǎo)致當(dāng)今社會(huì)白領(lǐng)壓力過(guò)大的重要原因。三句話步步深入，層層遞進(jìn)。“收支不平衡”使用what one earns does not make e

26、nds meet。第二段提供了三個(gè)應(yīng)對(duì)措施。第一是從心理上保持樂(lè)觀積極。第二是增強(qiáng)自身的業(yè)務(wù)技能。第三是進(jìn)行壓力管理。整段長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，在表達(dá)“某人應(yīng)該做某事”這個(gè)意思時(shí)，分別使用了sb. should do, sb. shall do, sb. needs to do等，使語(yǔ)言更加豐富。另外，在遇到和就業(yè)壓力、升學(xué)壓力、生存壓力、心理健康等話題時(shí)，可供參考的短語(yǔ)和詞組有：hectic（瘋狂的）competition, suffer from, stay positive, a competent person（有競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力的人），stress management, cope with, conf

27、ident和survive.。預(yù)測(cè)作文（二）Audaciousness (出位)1 目前，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上有很多出位的現(xiàn)象，比如裸奔 (streaking) 等。2 是不是在新時(shí)代要獲取關(guān)注，就要靠出位呢？3 你如何看待這種現(xiàn)象？【范文】Currently, audaciousness online like streaking has grabbed many peoples attention. It seems that in order to be famous, people have to resort to audaciousness. However, I believe that a

28、udaciousness may not be a proper way to draw public attention and realize ones self-value.To acquire fame and success, one has to consider three basic factors, namely goal, methods, and persistence. First, one needs to set a crystal-clear goal. This goal should aim at achieving the wholesomeness of

29、the society. Second, one has to make the most of the mass media, since we are in an information age, and people gain news from various kinds of ways. Finally, persistence makes sure that success is within ones reach.In conclusion, by doing right things at the right time, we can also grab the publics

30、 attention. Yet it is without doubt that audaciousness is not a good choice.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】第一句話開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，用sth. has grabbed（抓?。?sbs attention。接下來(lái)使用的 “have to resort to”表現(xiàn)了一種被迫和無(wú)奈之感，但轉(zhuǎn)折詞however馬上話鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，引出了作者的觀點(diǎn)。在表達(dá)對(duì)像搏出位這樣的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象時(shí)，切不可武斷使用bad一類的詞語(yǔ)進(jìn)行價(jià)值評(píng)判。一會(huì)顯得措辭魯莽，二會(huì)顯得過(guò)于主觀。所以這里推薦使用sth. be/not be a proper way to do sth. else.

31、 以顯示客觀中立。第二段講了對(duì)出位的認(rèn)識(shí)。文章沒(méi)有直接講這種行為的優(yōu)點(diǎn)或缺點(diǎn)，而是從追求成功的角度闡釋一個(gè)人應(yīng)該具備目標(biāo)、達(dá)到目標(biāo)的方法和堅(jiān)持不懈的毅力。言下之意是間接否定了出位。比較好的表達(dá)有：明確的目標(biāo)（crystal-clear goal），社會(huì)完整（the wholesomeness of the society），充分利用（make the most of ），志在必得（sth. is within ones reach.）。最后一段是重申主題和作者的立場(chǎng)。預(yù)測(cè)作文（三）Marriage: Is it still a tradition?1 剩男剩女越來(lái)越多。2 傳統(tǒng)的成家立業(yè)、結(jié)婚

32、思想是否會(huì)發(fā)生變化？3 未來(lái)社會(huì)是否會(huì)有更多的人選擇不結(jié)婚，單身過(guò)日子，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā！痉段摹縈arriage, what a holy and inspiring word for human beings is. However, with the passage of time, the concept of marriage changes dramatically, as can be seen from the increasing numbers of single men and women in contemporary society.From my perspective

33、, this interesting phenomenon well reflects the youngs value shift in the aspect of marriage, family and so forth. First, the substantial development of our nations economy greatly changes the way young people treat marriage. They are more financially independent and attempt to seek individual freed

34、om. Second, young people are becoming growingly competitive that they subconsciously raise the standards of their ideal partners, which lead to the fact that many find it hard to find their perfect matches.As far as I am concerned, I strongly believe that single life is not the main trend in the lon

35、g run for both men and women, because marriage can bring a lot happiness to us. Accordingly, the future of marriage will still be promising.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】首句欲抑先揚(yáng)，指出婚姻是holy and inspiring（神圣并振奮人心的）。接著通過(guò)轉(zhuǎn)折詞however, 狀語(yǔ)with the passage of time，非限制性定語(yǔ)從句和被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)as can be seen的使用，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)豐富，并不失連貫性與邏輯性。第二段講述了年輕人婚姻觀發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)變的社會(huì)和個(gè)人

36、原因。最后一段表達(dá)自己對(duì)婚姻樂(lè)觀積極的觀點(diǎn)。值得一提的是此文中的副詞和狀語(yǔ)。副詞如dramatically, greatly, financially, growingly, subconsciously, strongly等使它們修飾的動(dòng)詞和形容詞更加形象生動(dòng)；另外，中文里的動(dòng)詞在英語(yǔ)中通常可以用副詞和狀語(yǔ)來(lái)處理。如第一段中的with the passage of time(隨著時(shí)間的流逝)。預(yù)測(cè)作文（四）Government Officials and Their Words1 最近不斷有官員爆出“雷人”話語(yǔ)，令人咋舌。2 你如何看待這種現(xiàn)象？3 請(qǐng)反思這種現(xiàn)象背后的原因?！痉段摹縄t i

37、s reported that floods of stunning words have burst into our society out of the mouths of some government officials. Some of those words are really astonishing and audacious, which arouse significant concern among the public.As for me, I think that there are two major reasons accounting for this con

38、troversial issue. One is the misinterpretation of the mass media. It is universally acknowledged that lots of media exaggerate or uglify the facts in order to gain more attention from the public and achieve more profit. So they may have defamed some of the remarks made by the government officials so

39、 as to win the mass attention. Another reason is the government officials themselves. It is true that increasing numbers of officials fail to behave appropriately in public due to their lack of social etiquettes and poor education, which result in their improper remarks.In general, I do hope our gov

40、ernment officials can build up an upright and respectable image for the public and minimize the negative influence of those stunning words.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】第一段使用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)來(lái)描述一個(gè)社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，使文章客觀。在形容相關(guān)官員的“雷人”話語(yǔ)時(shí)，用了stunning, astonishing和audacious三個(gè)詞，語(yǔ)言豐富而深刻。接下來(lái)解釋了“雷人”話語(yǔ)頻現(xiàn)的原因。第一是大眾傳媒的誤讀（misinterpretation）。表達(dá)“it is universally a

41、cknowledged that”語(yǔ)出英國(guó)小說(shuō)家簡(jiǎn)·奧斯汀的名著傲慢與偏見(jiàn)的第一句話：It is a universally acknowledged truth that a young man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife, 譯為“是一件舉世公認(rèn)的真理”。在重復(fù)“誤讀”這個(gè)信息時(shí)，用了exaggerate（夸大）、uglify（丑化）和defame（使名譽(yù)掃地）來(lái)替代，不僅避免了一詞多用，還挖掘了誤讀的真正涵義。另一個(gè)原因是政府官員自身的素質(zhì)不夠，社會(huì)責(zé)任感不強(qiáng)。最后一段表達(dá)了作者對(duì)政府官員的希望，提出要樹(shù)立一個(gè)正直和令人敬重的形象（an upright and respectable image），并將“雷人”話語(yǔ)的負(fù)面影響降低到最低（minimize）。預(yù)測(cè)作文（五）Information Security1. 信息安全問(wèn)題日益重要。2. 信息安全事故可能導(dǎo)致的危害。3. 如何做到信息安全?！痉段摹縄nformation has already become a vital element in contemporary society. Therefore, the importance of information security has