高考英語書面表達高分寫作技巧ppt課件

1、高考英語書面表達 高分寫 作 技 巧,高考2/3式書面表達寫作步驟,Step1:仔細審題,確定人稱、時態(tài)和文體形式。 Step2:擬定67個要點（以動詞為中心，含開頭和結(jié)尾）。 Step3:草寫常用名詞實詞（作主語、賓語、表語）。 Step4: 連詞成句，補充定語、狀語。 （一般控制在7-10句x12詞左右） Step5 :連句成篇（2-3段式短文） （1015分） Step6 (2125分高分條件）：適度轉(zhuǎn)換 2-3個較高級的詞匯； 23個句型 23個豐富的句式（分詞作狀語、 定語，定語從句，強調(diào)句，主 語從句） 23個適當?shù)倪B接詞 （句與句之間和段與段之間補充） Step6（7）:檢查與對

2、應(yīng)：文體、大小寫、標點、字數(shù)、要點、拼寫等,高考英語書面表達之忌,書面表達不同于作家作文, 它不需要嚴格的布局謀篇、修辭潤色，而只需根據(jù)所給的情景、圖畫或要求、提示把主要內(nèi)容即要點按順暢的層次表達出來即可。但不得逐字翻譯，歸納起來，考生要做好此題，應(yīng)注意以下禁忌： 一、忌審題不清或不全 文不對題的作文失分最嚴重。往往表現(xiàn)為文體與要求不和、內(nèi)容與要求不和、忽略細節(jié)要求（如：要否自擬標題，有無附加條件等）。因此，考生應(yīng)仔細審題，確定人稱與時態(tài),并抓住所要表達的各個內(nèi)容要點(以動詞為要點中心)。審題時首先要弄清題目的主要內(nèi)容是什么，然后再考慮一下該用什么形式來表達,二、忌次序混亂，連接詞單一或缺乏

3、審?fù)觐}后，不少考生雖已知道了要寫的內(nèi)容，卻不能合理地組織所給的材料，東一句、西一句，寫得支離破碎，文理不通，讓人不知所云?？忌詈媚苎杆俚亓谐鲆c，在這個過程中，要考慮一下先寫什么，后寫什么，句與句之間，不得逐字或逐條翻譯。 段與段之間最好能使用一些能清晰表達邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)的連接詞或句子，如first of all , above all , secondly , next , in fact,besides, in a word , at last , the most important point is that等等，使文章過渡自然、流暢，做到前后連貫、層次分明、有條不紊,三、忌偷工減料、畫蛇

4、添足 書面表達必須嚴格按試題所提供的要求去寫，需要表達的內(nèi)容要點不可偷工減料、隨便刪減，也不能隨意增添。切不可憑自己的想象任意發(fā)揮，下筆千言，離題萬里，把沒用的內(nèi)容寫了很多，卻漏掉了規(guī)定的內(nèi)容、要點，或把次要的內(nèi)容當作主要內(nèi)容來寫，主次不分。也有的考生把沒有必要寫的東西寫得過多，超過了規(guī)定字數(shù)，結(jié)果弄巧成拙，也是要扣分的,四、忌基本語法及用詞錯誤 （就是要避免短文改錯的錯誤） 在寫英語句子時為了表達準確，要盡量避免語法、詞匯及拼寫方面的錯誤。使用動詞時，應(yīng)注意語態(tài)、時態(tài)在人稱和數(shù)上與主語的一致。應(yīng)注意名詞使用中的單、復(fù)數(shù)問題，是否要用冠詞以及形容詞或副詞在句中的位置問題，介詞的搭配問題等。例如

5、：想表達“我不知道要怎樣對付那臺收音機”時，會寫出“I dont know how to do with the radio”，而正確的表達應(yīng)是“I dont know what to do with the radio,五、忌非它莫屬，死般硬套。 選詞造句切忌死盯字面意思，凡拿不準，寫不出來的詞匯要學會“轉(zhuǎn)彎” 。例如：想表達“準備”，而又不會prepare時，可用短語get ready 來代替；“美化(環(huán)境)”的“美化（beautify)”，可用makebeautiful; “反對（ oppose）” 可用be strongly against；“考駕照”可寫成take an drivin

6、g license test（不可直譯成test driving lincense);就即便“駕照”寫不來，也可用driving pass表達(總比 driver photo或photo for driving好）。對用不來或?qū)懖怀龅囊M量避免“一詞”定終身，非它莫屬。提倡變相”多詞“轉(zhuǎn)換,六、忌充分自信、不回查 寫出來的東西，很可能有不正確、不恰當?shù)牡胤?，因此，在答完卷時，至少應(yīng)從以下幾個方面認真檢查：（1）對照題目要求，看全部要點是否都已包括進去，有無遺漏或誤解；（2）文體格式是否正確規(guī)范；（3）詞語使用是否合適、正確，有無語法與用詞上的錯誤， 表達是否符合英語表達習慣；（4）單詞拼寫、字

7、母大小寫有無錯誤，標點符號有無遺漏或用錯等等。 一句話，對書面表達應(yīng)盡量做到：不跑題，不漏點，語言精簡合習慣，靈活表達要規(guī)范，書法整齊詞有限,高考書面表達的評分標準,覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容；應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致；應(yīng)用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊；達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的,第五檔（很好）（2125分,書面表達高分技巧,書面表達高分技巧,注意：不能不用，且不能少用，但也不能濫用,1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all th

8、ink he is a great man. 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. 4.Mr.Zhang taught us English.He was 44 years old .He wore long hair. His character was very strange. 5. As a result the plan was a failure,The plan turned out to be a failure,Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable,一、怎樣使用較高

9、級的詞匯,We all think highly of him,A good idea occurred to me,A good idea suddenly struck me,Mr.Zhang，44 years old , used to be our English teacher of strange character with long hair,6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow. 7. She went to Austria in order to study music. 8. When he sp

10、oke more, he felt more excited. 9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms. 10.You can find my house easily,She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music,At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow,The more he spoke, the more excited he felt,Our school is made up of twentysix c

11、lassrooms,Youll have no trouble finding my house,1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail. 2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. 3. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. 4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. 5. I passed the physics ex

12、am because of your help,On his arriving, please give me an e-mail. （使用V-ing形式,What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. （使用名詞性從句,二、怎樣使用較豐富的句式,Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. (使用倒裝句,It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. (使用強調(diào)句

13、型,I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help. (使用虛擬語氣,6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. 7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school. 8.I wont believe what he says. 9.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. 10Our school is beautiful.It is ver

14、y large.It has 100mu.And there are 3500 students in it.Its staff (員工）teaches and serves us well,Our beautiful large school covers an area of 100mu,whose staff teaches and serves us well. (定語從句,Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab. (使用過去分詞,Singing and laughing, they went back to schoo

15、l. ( 使用V-ing形式,No matter what he says, I wont believe. （使用狀語從句,Study hard and youll make rapid progress. （用并列句,三、怎樣使用恰當?shù)倪B接詞,書面表達真題：(A,15分,Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school,This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people,It used to be very poor,However,it

16、 has changed a lot since 1978,and has been developing very fast,People here live a much better life than before,15分與25分差距對比,Now it is taking,on a new look,In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school.,But now it has been rebuilt and,which has 4 storeys

17、 is the most beautiful one in the village,All the school-age children can study here,Whats more,they enjoy free education,May you enjoy your stay here,the newly built teaching building,May you have a pleasant time here,Thank you,Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! This village is a small o

18、ne with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small and most chil

19、dren couldnt afford to go to school. But now it has been rebuilt and the newly built teaching building which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasa

20、nt time here! Thank you,書面表達：(B,一、題目 假設(shè)你是李越,你的加拿大筆友Steve來信說,他和他的一些同學正在學中文,請你推薦兩本學中文的詞典，根據(jù)下表提供的信息,請你給他寫一封回信,分檔評比,一）8分： I help you very happily. I recommend the English-Chinese Chinese-English dictionary. This Dictionary have 18000 English words and 20000 Chinese words.I recommend another dictionary i

21、s very good, too.That dictionary have 10000 chinese words, but it is only cost 11yuan. That is the most widely of China. I hope my recommendation can help for you.I hope you can learn Chinese earliy,二) 24-25分 Thank you very much for your last letter which asked me something about how to choose a dic

22、tionary for learning Chinese. Here I strongly recommend you the following two dictionaries which may be useful to you. One of them is the English-Chinese/Chinese English Dictionary which will cost you 52 yuan. There are 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words in it. As it has lots of examples

23、showing how to use the words,it will be much valuable for the beginners like you. The other one, Xinhua Dictionary(XD), which charges you only 11 yuan and has a collection of 10,000 Chinese words. It is the most commonly used one in China. If you need my help with your Chinese study, please write to me. Im looking forward to your reply,書面表達: (C) 你的英國朋友正在做一個課題：世界各地的生日慶祝方式。他請你介紹中國學生過生日的方式。請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇短文： （一）通常方式：1. 生日聚會 2. 生日禮物 3. 生日祝福 （二）我認為更有意義的慶祝方式和理由 詞數(shù)：100-120,In China, as is known,the most common way to celebrate