寫作中高級(jí)句型的運(yùn)用

寫作中怎樣使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)和高級(jí)詞匯,一.復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu):1.使用適當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài)2.適當(dāng)?shù)恼Z態(tài)3.使用不定式4.使用過去分詞5.使用V.+ing形式6.使用名詞性從句7.使用狀語從句8.使用定語從句9.使用虛擬語氣10.使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句,倒裝句,感嘆句11.使用并列句,一、怎樣運(yùn)用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)：,1.改變時(shí)態(tài),Thebellisringingnow.(一般),2.改變語態(tài),Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.(一般),Theregoesthebell.(高級(jí)),Itissuggestedthattheconferencebeputoff.(高級(jí)),3.使用不定式,4.使用過去分詞,Heissokindthathecanhelpme.(一般),Heissokindastohelpme.(高級(jí)),Shewalkedoutoftheroomandmanystudentsfollowedher.(一般),Followedbymanystudents,she.(高級(jí)),Onceitisseen,itcanneverbeforgotten.(一般),Onceseen,itcan.(高級(jí)),5.使用v-ing形式,Whenhearrivespleasegivemeane-mail.(一般),Iftheweatherpermits,Illcometomorrow.(一般),Onhisarriving/arrival,pleasegive.(高級(jí)),Weatherpermitting,Illcometomorrow.(高級(jí)),Nowourschoolhasthreeteachers.Theyteach48pupils.(一般),NowourSchoolhasthreeteachers,teaching48pupils.(高級(jí)),Itdisappointedeverybodythathedidntturnup.(一般),Ihappenedtohavemethim.(一般),6.使用名詞性從句,Thefactthathedidntturnupdisappointedeverybody.(高級(jí)),IthappenedthatIhadmethim.(高級(jí)),Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(一般),Whatsurprisedhimisthatthegirl.(高級(jí)),7.使用狀語從句,Iwontbelievewhathesays.(一般),Ifyoucomebackbeforesixoclock,youcangoout.(一般),Themealwasverynice.Weallenjoyeditverymuch.(一般),Nomatterwhathesays,Iwontbelieve.(高級(jí)),Youcangooutonconditionthatyoucomebackbefore.(高級(jí)),Themealwassonicethatweall.(高級(jí)),8.使用定語從句,Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.(一般),Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenwasspokenhighlyof.(高級(jí)),IstudiedChinese,maths,English,physics,chemistryandcomputeratschool.(一般),ThesubjectsIstudiedatschoolincludedChinese,maths,English.(高級(jí)),9.使用虛擬語氣,Theshipdidntsinkbecausethereweretheeffortsofthecaptain.(一般),Iwasntinvitedtotheparty,soIdidntattendit.(一般),IfIhadbeeninvitedtotheparty,Iwouldhaveattendedit.(高級(jí)),Butfortheeffortsofthecaptain,theshipwouldhavesunk.(高級(jí)),10.使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句、感嘆句,Regularradiobroadcastsbeganin1920.(一般),Itwasnotuntil1920thatregularradio.(高級(jí)),WeakasIam,Illmaketheeffort.(高級(jí)),ThoughImweak,Iwillmaketheeffort.(一般),Howgladweweretoseethecropsand.!(高級(jí)),Weweregladtoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingverywell.(一般),11.使用并列句,Ifyougothroughthegate,youllfindtheentrancetoBearCountry.(一般),Gothroughthegate,andyoullfind.(高級(jí)),Igotuplatethismorning,otherwiseIcouldhavecaughttheearlybus.(高級(jí)),Igotuplatethismorning.Ididntcatchtheearlybus.(一般),Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.(高級(jí)),Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(一般),四、怎樣運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯：,Asaresult,theplanwasafailure.(一般),ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.(一般),Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.(一般),Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.(高級(jí)),ShewenttoAustriaforthepurposeofstudyingmusic.(高級(jí)),Thankstothegoodweather,ourjourney.(高級(jí)),Atthenewsofherdeath,hewent.(高級(jí)),Shehastroubleinpronouncingtheword.(高級(jí)),Whoseturnisittobeondutytoday?(高級(jí)),Whenheheardshehaddied,hewentpalewithsorrow.(一般),Shecantcorrectlypronouncetheword.(一般),Whowillbeondutytoday?(一般),怎樣運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯：,Shedoesntlikesports.,Shecaresnothingforsports.,Wehadtogohome.,Whatwehadtodowasgohome.,五、常見語法錯(cuò)誤分析：,1.句子缺謂語,1)Thebuildinglikeamatchbox.2)Hetoldmethatallmyclassmatessittingintheclassroom.,1)Aworkerofthefarmleadustothefield.2)AllthestudentslikebooksthatwaswrittenbyLuXun.,2.主謂不一致，尤其是單數(shù)第三人稱作主語時(shí)，謂語的單復(fù)數(shù)形式出現(xiàn)錯(cuò)誤。,3.時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤,4.詞性混用,1)Whenhecameback,hefoundthathiswifehasgonetobed.2)Whatareyoudoingthistimeyesterday?,1)SheenjoysstudyEnglish.2)Ifanyoneagainsttheplan,pleaseletmeknow.,5.介詞誤用,6.冠詞誤用,1)Inmysurprise,hehasgotthefirstprize.2)Hecameheretoattendthemeetingbyanewcar.3)Dontreadunderthesun.,1)WeelectedLiHuathemonitoroftheClassFive.2)Onceuponatime,therewasanone-eyedlion.3)Thehistoryisactuallyaveryinterestingsubject.,7.名詞的數(shù)混淆,8.動(dòng)詞用法錯(cuò)誤,1)ItisraretoseesuchaniceweatherinBeijing.2)Thereisalwaystrafficjam.,1)Whereareyoucomefrom?2)WhenIarrivedHongKong,mymotherwastherewaitingforme.3)Hedidntnoticetheteachertocomeintotheclassroom.4)Theaccidentwashappenedin1999.,9.習(xí)慣用法錯(cuò)誤,1)Theactorinthismovieisverybeautiful.2)IandMyparentswereworkinginthefieldsatthattime.3)Thereasonisbecausehedoesnotknowwhattodonext.,六、學(xué)會(huì)使用恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞：,1.表示平行、對(duì)等或選擇關(guān)系,and，bothand,aswellas,togetherwith,neithernor,also,notonlybutalso,eitheror,aswell.,2.表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,but,yet,however,nevertheless(然而),inspiteof,although,otherwise,while,afterall.,3.表示對(duì)比關(guān)系,4.表示因果關(guān)系,onthecontrary,insteadof,ononehandontheotherhand,justlike,unlike,inthesameway,atthesametime,so,for,therefore,asaresult(of),because,owingto,dueto,thanksto,onaccount(理由)of.,5.表示時(shí)間、順序關(guān)系,6.表示遞進(jìn)、強(qiáng)調(diào)關(guān)系,shortlyafterwards,first,second,then,next,finally,foronething,foranother,intheend,eventually(最后,終于),besides,furthermore(此外),whatsmore,inaddition,moreover(而且),worsestill,tomakemattersworse,indeed,certainly,surely,aboveall,7.表示解釋、說明關(guān)系,8.表示結(jié)論,namely(也就是),actually,suchas,forexample,forinstance,thatistosay,inotherwords,andsoon,totellyouthetruth,accordingtothis,inshort,inbrief,inaword,ingeneral,asyouknow,asfarasIknow,onthewhole,inconclusion,atlast,finally,七、背誦一些題材的常識(shí)性語句：,通知：開頭語:結(jié)束語:,Attention,please.MayIhaveyourattention,please?Ihaveanannouncementtomake.,Dontforgetthetimeandtheaddress.Imsureyouwillhavealotoffun.Thatsall,thankyou.,歡迎詞：開頭語:結(jié)束語:,WelcometoNowletmetellyousomethingaboutImgoingtogiveyouadetaileddescriptionofLetmeshowyouaround,Imsureyoul