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Itisagoodideato ITV ThecostofITVwillmakethefinancialburdenheavier ThecostofITVwill thefinancialburdenofsomefamilies Itcausessomeproblems It someproblems beequippedwith addto givesriseto vocabulary SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea Agoodideasuddenly me 高級 Asaresult theplanwasafailure Theplan afailure 高級 Asfarmersstillmakeupmorethanhalfofthepopulation iftheirgenerallivingconditionscanbeimproved itwillbegoodforthewholenation Asfarmersstill morethanhalfofthepopulation iftheirgenerallivingconditionscanbeimproved thewholenationwill 高級 occurredto turnedouttobe accountfor benefit vocabulary ITV是目前比較流行的網(wǎng)絡互動電視 它極大的方便了人們收看電視節(jié)目 但是 網(wǎng)絡電視也有其不利的一面 用戶 subscriber傳輸速度transmittingspeed詞數(shù)150左右 開頭已給 不計入總詞數(shù) ITVisaverypopulardevicecurrentlyusedbypeopletowatchTVprograms ITV是目前比較流行的網(wǎng)絡互動電視 它極大的方便了人們收看電視節(jié)目 但是 網(wǎng)絡電視也有其不利的一面 用戶 subscriber傳輸速度transmittingspeed詞數(shù)150左右 開頭已給 不計入總詞數(shù) ITVisaverypopulardevicecurrentlyusedbypeopletowatchTVprograms 互動電視的不利因素 增加家庭經(jīng)濟負擔 網(wǎng)絡傳輸速度慢 Itgivesrisetosomeproblems ITVwilladdtoone shouse holdfinancialburdens Thenettransmittingspeediscomparativelyslow Isthisagoodparagraph 互動電視的不利因素 增加家庭經(jīng)濟負擔 網(wǎng)絡傳輸速度慢 Despitethoseconveniences italsogivesrisetosomeproblems Foronething ITVwilladdtoone shouse hold sfinancialburden Foranother thenettransmittingspeediscomparativelyslow Isthisagoodparagraph Timesequencewords Causeandeffectwords Contrastingwords Additionwords 注意句子的組織和篇章結(jié)構(gòu) 合理地使用語句間的連接成分 使上下連貫通順 Timesequencewords firsly secondly finally intheend etcCaseandeffectwords nowthat thanksto dueto asaresult of inthatcase therefore thusContrastingwords onthecontrary comparedwith to similarlyAdditionwords moreover furthermore inaddition to moreimportantly worsestill tomakethingsworse 注意句子的組織和篇章結(jié)構(gòu)