2013高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)講義及訓(xùn)練(5)及參考范文寫(xiě)作的.doc

2013高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)講義及訓(xùn)練（5）及參考范文：寫(xiě)作的最佳訓(xùn)練方法1第二節(jié) 書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿(mǎn)分25分）假如你是校報(bào)負(fù)責(zé)人, 急需在學(xué)校內(nèi)聘一位同學(xué)任英文版的編輯, 請(qǐng)你用英文以” An English Editor Wanted” 為題目寫(xiě)一則招聘啟事。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1、該工作主要包括兩部分：一是從英文報(bào)刊雜志及互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上選擇適合學(xué)生的文章； 二是選擇與編輯同學(xué)們的來(lái)稿。2、希望該同學(xué)滿(mǎn)足下列要求：1）樂(lè)意奉獻(xiàn)出一些業(yè)余時(shí)間為同學(xué)們服務(wù)；2）英文與美術(shù)皆好； 能熟練使用電腦。3）感興趣的同學(xué)請(qǐng)?jiān)诒局軆?nèi)與學(xué)生會(huì)（Students Union）聯(lián)系。注意： 1) 詞數(shù)100左右； 2) 不要逐字翻譯，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。76. holding held 77. praised前加were 78. For To 79. 去掉who 80. them us 81. Learn后加from 82 .will would 83. great greatly 84. 85. mark marks書(shū)面表達(dá)An English Editor WantedOur school newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition. The job mainly includes two parts: One is to choose proper English articles from other newspapers, magazines or Internet for us students. The other is to pick out articles from students in our school and edit them for use.We hope that he/she could meet the following requirements: First, he/she is willing to devote some of the spare time to serving the others. Second, its necessary for him/ her to be good at both English and fine art. Needless to say that the ability to use the computer is important as well.Those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with the Students Union this week. Students Union*結(jié)束2請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)向來(lái)訪的外賓介紹你校新建的網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)校（net-school）在教與學(xué)、交流信息與獲得知識(shí)、學(xué)校管理和培養(yǎng)現(xiàn)代化人才等方面為人們提供了方便。短文要求100個(gè)詞左右，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已給出。Ladies and gentlemen , Very nice to have you here in our school. One possible version :Ladies and gentlemen , Very nice to have you here in our school . Now Id like to tell you something about the net-school we have just set up .Our net-school is very helpful in many ways . First of all , it will make teaching and learning easier and more interesting . We can get more information and knowledge in class . We can communicate with other students at home and abroad by sending and receiving messages wherever wed like to . The net-school is open all day both to the students and to the teachers , so we can get the latest information through the Internet at any time . The net-school is very convenient to us and other people who can learn at home if they have a computer . It will help to improve our school management and meet the needs of the modern society as well .Thats all . Thank you .*結(jié)束一, 高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)基本策略: 仔細(xì)審題。 如果是看圖寫(xiě)文，看懂每幅圖之間的聯(lián)系至關(guān)重要。 寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)。據(jù)每幅圖寫(xiě)出一至兩句話(huà)。因?yàn)槊磕旮呖紩?shū)面表達(dá)一般控制在10句話(huà)，120個(gè)詞左右。 連句成文。每句話(huà)寫(xiě)好后，用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞連接起來(lái)，使之上下連貫，呼應(yīng)，通順，簡(jiǎn)潔。 查錯(cuò)漏。完稿后，檢查一下有沒(méi)有時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤并逐一加以改正。 卷面整潔。卷面整潔干凈甚至比準(zhǔn)確，通順，簡(jiǎn)介更重要。因?yàn)檎麧嵏蓛艚o閱卷人精神上帶來(lái)愉悅，相對(duì)而言，分?jǐn)?shù)自然要給得高一些。 為了幫助同學(xué)們?cè)谄綍r(shí)寫(xiě)作練習(xí)的時(shí)候時(shí)刻牢記這些寫(xiě)作的基本要領(lǐng)，特編順口溜如下：細(xì)審題，巧構(gòu)思，列要點(diǎn)，防遺漏。寫(xiě)日記，同漢語(yǔ)；書(shū)信，通知格式要牢記。看清圖表細(xì)梳理，寫(xiě)人記事按順序；完稿后查遺漏，整潔干凈莫忘記。 二, 高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)高分策略：從遣詞，造句，謀篇三個(gè)方面分析。 遣詞的原則：使用高等級(jí)詞匯及短語(yǔ), 如果僅僅記住幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單基礎(chǔ)的詞匯,而且一味的重復(fù)低水平的英語(yǔ)知識(shí)點(diǎn),還遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)沒(méi)有達(dá)到大學(xué)的入學(xué)要求。這就要求考生在平時(shí)的訓(xùn)練和考試當(dāng)中，有意識(shí)的強(qiáng)化“復(fù)雜，高級(jí)”這兩個(gè)概念，使自己的作文能力區(qū)別于普通學(xué)生的作文，使自己一下子就站在一個(gè)比別人高的位置上，充分顯示自己的實(shí)力。 平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程中注意總結(jié)各種各樣的詞匯。以描述人物的詞匯為例： 表達(dá)人物愛(ài)憎感情： like, love, be interested in, be fond of hate, dislike, be tired of, lose interest in happy, excited, pleased, satisfied, angry, sad, worried, disappointed, terrified, mad, frightened 介紹人物的影響及人們對(duì)人的評(píng)價(jià)： He became famous for his new theory. The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader. We regard Li Fei as our model. Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit. People spoke highly of him and all respected him. 常見(jiàn)描述人物性格，外貌和身體狀況等的詞語(yǔ) good-looking /funny-looking /strong-looking /ugly-looking /dirty-looking /ordinary-looking /blue-eyed /white-eyed /warm-hearted /light-hearted /kind-hearted /absent-minded /tall /short /beautiful /pretty /lovely /naughty/ be blind /lame in /be in good or poor condition/ healthy/ fine/ well /strong-tempered /bad-tempered /near-sighted /far-sighted /foolish /stupid /silly /clever /smart /wise /bright / diligent /intelligent /lazy /hard working, etc. 造句的原則：句式多變，語(yǔ)法活用，句子是表達(dá)一個(gè)完整意思的最小當(dāng)位，所以造句能力在英文寫(xiě)作中是非常重要的。好的英語(yǔ)句子能夠生動(dòng)，形象，準(zhǔn)確的表達(dá)內(nèi)容。所以要想寫(xiě)出漂亮的書(shū)面表達(dá)，必須從寫(xiě)好句子開(kāi)始。 英語(yǔ)基本句型及造句: 主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+狀語(yǔ)(介詞,名詞短語(yǔ)或從句) The sun rises up in the east and sets in the west. We get up early every morning. The meeting lasted 2 hours. 主語(yǔ)+不及物動(dòng)詞+副詞 This kind of wine drinks well and sells well. The suit wears well. Glass breaks easily. 主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+介詞+賓語(yǔ) We all agreed on the terms. He hates to argue with his wife about such small matters. All these things are to be answered for. 主語(yǔ)+系動(dòng)詞+形容詞 Good medicine tastes bitter to the mouth. He was so tired that he fell asleep the moment he went to bed. Your explanation sounds reasonable. 主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+直接賓語(yǔ) I want your promise. Have your fixed my watch? This factory produces 1000 cars a week. 主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+間接賓語(yǔ)+直接賓語(yǔ) He paid me a visit yesterday. He owed me 50 yuan. He wrote his family a letter yesterday. 主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)+賓補(bǔ) (to do) I will get someone to repair the recorder for you. I didnt mean to hurt you. He invited me to teach at a well-known university. 主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)+賓補(bǔ) (do) I often hear her sing the song. The boss made workers work 15 hours a day. Dont forget to have him come. 主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+現(xiàn)在分詞 I heard her singing in the next room. We could feel our heats beating fast. Did you observe the birds flying around the trees? 主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+過(guò)去分詞 I must have my watch repaired. We must get he task finished on time. Speak louder to make yourself understood by everybody. 主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)(動(dòng)名詞) I suggested putting off the meeting. They all avoided mentioning the matter. We cant help laughing at the news. 主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)(不定式) I cant afford to buy such a large house. Dont pretend to know what you dont. He feared to speak in her presence. 主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)(名詞/代詞)+介詞+賓語(yǔ) Nothing can prevent us from going forward. Thank you for your help. He demanded an answer from me. 練習(xí)寫(xiě)好句子的方法一：合并句子 It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flowers. Early in the morning, Mr. Smith was watering flowers in his garden. A girl was crossing a road. The girl was pretty. The road was wide. A pretty girl was crossing a wide road. 寫(xiě)好句子的方法二：改寫(xiě)句子 1) Mr. Green is a tall man, who wears a pair of thick glasses. (改成介詞短語(yǔ)做伴隨狀語(yǔ)) 1) The book cost me 300 yuan. Mr. Green is a tall man with a pair of thick glasses. 2) The ice on the lake is too thin for us to skate on. (使用sothat結(jié)構(gòu)改寫(xiě)句子) The ice on the lake is so thin that we cant skate on it. 練習(xí)方法三：一句多譯 這本書(shū)花了我300元。 I spent 300 yuan on the book. I paid 300 yuan for the book. The price of the book is 300 yuan. It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book. 我不懂什么英語(yǔ)，李明也不懂。 I dont know any English, nor does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, nor does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, neither does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, no more does Li Ming. I hardly know any English, so it is with Li Ming. I know no more English than Li Ming does. I know as little English as Li Ming does. 一到家，我就把所見(jiàn)到的一切都記了下來(lái)。 On/Upon arriving home, I wrote down everything I had seen. As soon as I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen. The moment I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen. The instant I arrived home, I wrote down everything I had seen. No sooner had I arrived home than I wrote down everything I had seen. 昨天下午他才來(lái)。 He came here yesterday afternoon. He didnt come here until yesterday afternoon. Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here. It was yesterday afternoon that he arrived here. It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here. 謀篇的原則： 滿(mǎn)分作文都有個(gè)共性就是有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。文章的連貫性和緊湊感是很重要的。句子作為最小的表達(dá)意思的語(yǔ)言當(dāng)位如果只是被隨意的整合，是無(wú)法達(dá)到有效表達(dá)的目的。 常見(jiàn)的句子之間的連接手段有： 使用代詞指代上一句中的名詞 重復(fù)使用上一句中的詞 使用連接詞 使用平行結(jié)構(gòu) 高考大綱中常用的連接詞: 表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系的: what is more, besides, also, as well, moreover, furthermore, in addition, 表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系的: but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, different from, in contrast to, despite, in spite of, whereas, unlike, nevertheless, not onlybut also, herethere, years agotoday, thisthat, the formerthe latter, thennow, the firstwhereas the second, oncenow, on the one handon the other hand, someothers, 表因果關(guān)系的: since, a