讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)-Arthur

1、Continuation Writing （讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)）,讀后續(xù)寫(xiě): 提供一篇350詞以內(nèi)的材料，要求考生依據(jù)材料內(nèi)容、所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)及所標(biāo)關(guān)鍵詞續(xù)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的短文。（滿分25分）,新高考考試說(shuō)明,評(píng)分原則,本題總分為25分，分5個(gè)檔次給分,Step 1. Read for basic information,1. tone (情節(jié)基調(diào)): ?,A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. .,funny,a happy ending,Step 1. Read for basic info

2、rmation,one day; when he was on the way to work,along Park Avenue near the First National Bank,Arthur & a young man,Arthur helped a young man carry a suitcase but made himself a suspect of the bank robbery.,2. content - “6W”,How will the story develop?,When:,Where:,What:,How:,Who:,Why:,the suitcase

3、in his hand,Main idea:,One day, Arthur helped a young man carry a suitcase along Park Avenue near the First National Bank, but made himself a suspect of the bank robbery.,Step 2. Predict possible plot development,The underlined key words: Park Avenue the young man suitcase in the back seat loud nois

4、e of an alarm the bank robbery the shouts people the bank thief,Tip1: The key words that respectively stand for the most important information, the main character and the main object should be chosen in your writing.,Step 2. Predict possible plot development,Find out the key clues(線索) based on the b

5、eginnings:,Para1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”,Para2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur.,_ is inside the suitcase?,What,Step 2. Predict possible plot development,(tone: funny a happy ending),money,other things,Tip2: Focus on th

6、e given sentence of paragraph2 first. And some information in it must be mentioned in paragraph 1.,Tip3. Use the key nouns in the given sentences to infer more information.,Key Words: Park Avenue the young man suitcase in the back seat loud noise of an alarm the bank robbery the shouts people the ba

7、nk thief Paragraph1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ” Two characters：Arthur and the young man Arthur might realize that the young man was the bank thief. Arthur took a taxi and went to the police station. The young man wanted to get his suitcase back. The

8、re may be some money or something else in the suitcase. The young man may (not) be the bank thief. Paragraph2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur.,Para 1,Para 2,Para 1&2,Tip4. Use the characters and their actions to infer more information.,Step 2. Predict possible plot develo

9、pment,Paragraph 2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur. Arthur took a taxi and went to the police station. In Paragraph1, Arthur might have said something to the taxi driver. For example, “Sir, please take me to the police station quickly. I have something important to report

10、to the policeman.” What will Arthur do in the Police Station? In Paragraph2, there may be a conversation between Arthur and the policeman.,Tip5. Write proper conversations between the related characters in each paragraph.,Step 2. Predict possible plot development,Have a try!,Paragraph 1: As he was r

11、unning, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”_ _ Arthur might realize that the young man was the bank thief. Arthur took a taxi and went to the police station. Arthur might have said something to the taxi driver. For example, “Sir, please take me to the police station quickly. I

12、have something important to report to the policeman.”,Correct, logical, reasonable, rich in vocabulary and sentence pattern Underline the key words,Step 3. Draft a continuation(起草續(xù)篇),Paragraph 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ” Arthur realized that the y

13、oung man was the bank thief. He continued running, stopped a taxi and got into it. He said to the taxi driver, “Please go to the Police Station as soon as possible. I have a robbery to report to the policeman.” Then the taxi went away. Which kind is more suitable? therefore, however, in addition/bes

14、ides/whats more/ furthermore, on the contrary, on the other hand. -unfortunately, suddenly(all of a sudden), to his joy, worried about., with the help of.,add some details,Use different structures,Use transitional words (銜接詞),Step 4. Polish your writing,Paragraph 1: As he was running, Arthur heard t

15、he young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ” Arthur realized that the young man was the bank thief. He continued running, stopped a taxi and got into it. He said to the taxi driver, “Please go to the Police Station as soon as possible. I have a robbery to report to the policeman.” Then the taxi went

16、 away.,add some details,Use different structures,Use transitional words,“Give my suitcase back to me!” Hearing this, Arthur immediately realized that the young man was the bank thief.,So he continued running until he stopped a taxi. Then he quickly got into it and sat in the back seat .,Out of breat

17、h/breathlessly, Arthur said to the taxi driver, “.”,The moment the taxi driver got the request, he drove straight to the police station without hesitation.,like an arrow/straight to the police station.,Step 4. Polish your writing,Paragraph 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting be

18、hind, “Stop, stop! ” “Give my suitcase back to me!” Hearing this, Arthur immediately realized that the young man was the bank thief. So he continued running until he stopped a taxi. Then he quickly got into it and sat in the back seat. Out of breath, Arthur said to the taxi driver, “Please go to the

19、 Police Station as soon as possible. I have a robbery to report to the policeman.” The moment the taxi driver got the request, he drove straight to the police station without hesitation.,add some details,use different structures,proper transition,Step 4. Polish your writing,Have a try!,Paragraph 2:

20、The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur _ _ In Paragraph2, there may be a conversation between Arthur and the policeman. The young man wanted to get his suitcase back. There may be some money or something else in the suitcase. The young man may (not) be the bank thief.,Step 3. Dra

21、ft a continuation,coherent, correct, logical, reasonable, rich in vocabulary and sentence patterns, Underline the key words,The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur ran into it, shouting, theres a bank robbery and I know the bank thief. Quickly after Arthur told his story, the poli

22、cemen started to rush to the bank without delay. When they arrived at the spot, they were surprised to find that the people who gathered before the bank were now crowded around the young man, who seemed quite worried. Finally, Arthur realized that he had made a mistake. The loud noise of the alarm w

23、as incorrectly made by the banks system and nothing happened to the bank, but the young man was worried that someone had stolen his suitcase.,Paragraph 1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting (動(dòng)作) behind, “Stop, stop!” And at that moment (時(shí)間), Arthur suddenly (時(shí)間) realized (心理) tha

24、t maybe (心理) the young man was the bank robber. Arthur was a bit frightended (情感), and he continued to rush (動(dòng)作) until he saw a taxi. He stopped it, jumped in with the suitcase and told (動(dòng)作) the driver, Go to the police station, please. The man shouting (動(dòng)作) behind is the bank thief !The taxi raced away like the wind. Paragraph 2: The taxi stopped in front of the Poli