高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：挑戰(zhàn)極限：非牛仔女孩的馬術(shù)特技之旅+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)挑戰(zhàn)極限：非牛仔女孩的馬術(shù)特技之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文NeverinmywildestimaginationdidIpicturemyselfstandingonthebackofarunninghorse.I'mnotacowgirlanddon'tevenridehorsesforpleasure.ButIwasdoingatelevisionfitnessshow,andsomeoneinthegrouphadthebrightideathatweshouldgototherodeo(牛仔竟技表演)groundsandaskthetrickrideriftheycouldteachmeastunt(特技表演)todooncamera.Wecouldusethisshortvideoasthenewopeningtotheshow.Iagreedthestuntwouldbeeye-catchingandprovehowflexibleafitpersoncanbe.4續(xù)寫原文ThatwashowIendedupattherodeogroundswithacameragroup,watchingtheremarkableperformancesofthreetalentedyoungcowgirls.Oncetheirshowwasover,weapproachedthem,detailingourideasforthetelevisionshow.ThecowgirlsaskedmewhichparticularstuntIwasinterestedinlearning.Iespeciallylikedonestunt-oneofthegirlsledahorsetocontinuouslyandslowlyrunaroundthegroundswhileoneoftheothergirlsranacrossthegroundstowardasmalltrampoline(蹦床).Itwastimedperfectlysothatshejumpedontothetrampoline,upintotheair,andthenontothehorse'sback.Asshelandedonitsback,shestoodupandstretchedherarmsoutwardasthehorsecontinuedslowlyrunning.Itlookedimpressive.5續(xù)寫原文Theytalkedmethroughthenecessarymoves,stressingthetimingsinceIwouldneedtobeintheairatthecorrecttimewhenthehorseranpast.Ialonewouldjudgethespeedofthehorseandmyownspeedtojumpontothehorseontime.Itwasclearlydifficult.Iwasalittlehesitant,afraidofbeingunabletodothatwellandslowingdownthefilming.ButIknewthemostimportantthingformewastoconcentrateonthetaskathand.6段首句Paragraph1：SoonRubyarrivedwithherteamandsheknewexactlyParagraph2:Tenminuteslater,theyheardanambulancesiren(鳴笛聲)7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9“我”從未想過(guò)自己會(huì)站在奔跑的馬背上，“我”不是牛仔女孩，平時(shí)也不會(huì)為了消遣而騎馬。但“我”在做一檔電視健身節(jié)目，團(tuán)隊(duì)里有人提議去牛仔競(jìng)技表演場(chǎng)地，請(qǐng)教特技騎手教“我”一個(gè)特技用于節(jié)目拍攝，還打算用這段視頻作為節(jié)目的新開(kāi)場(chǎng)?！拔摇庇X(jué)得這個(gè)特技很吸睛，能展示出一個(gè)健身者的柔韌性，于是同意了。就這樣，“我”和攝制組來(lái)到了表演場(chǎng)地，觀看了三位年輕且才華橫溢的牛仔女孩的精彩表演。表演結(jié)束后，我們向她們說(shuō)明了電視節(jié)目的想法。牛仔女孩們?cè)儐?wèn)“我”對(duì)哪個(gè)特技感興趣，“我”特別喜歡其中一個(gè)：一位女孩牽著馬在場(chǎng)地里緩慢持續(xù)地奔跑，另一位女孩從場(chǎng)地對(duì)面跑向小蹦床，她精準(zhǔn)地把握時(shí)機(jī)，跳上蹦床，彈向空中，然后落在馬背上，落地后她站起身，伸展雙臂，而馬繼續(xù)緩緩奔跑，這一幕十分震撼。她們向“我”講解了必要的動(dòng)作，強(qiáng)調(diào)了時(shí)機(jī)的重要性，因?yàn)椤拔摇毙枰隈R跑過(guò)時(shí)準(zhǔn)確地跳到空中?！拔摇币?dú)自判斷馬的速度和自己的速度，以便準(zhǔn)時(shí)跳上馬背。這個(gè)特技顯然很難，“我”有點(diǎn)猶豫，擔(dān)心做不好耽誤拍攝進(jìn)度，但“我”知道當(dāng)下最重要的是專注于這項(xiàng)任務(wù)。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1：SoonRubyarrivedwithherteamandsheknewexactly第一次嘗試時(shí)，我撞到了馬的背部，然后摔倒在地上。周圍的人都發(fā)出了驚呼，我躺在地上，一時(shí)有些懵。牛仔女孩們迅速跑過(guò)來(lái)，關(guān)切地詢問(wèn)我有沒(méi)有受傷。我拍了拍身上的塵土，強(qiáng)忍著疼痛站了起來(lái)，告訴她們我沒(méi)事。雖然身體有些疼，但我內(nèi)心的斗志卻被激發(fā)了起來(lái)。我告訴自己，不能就這樣放棄。于是，我仔細(xì)回憶著牛仔女孩們教我的動(dòng)作要領(lǐng)和時(shí)機(jī)把握的技巧。我再次站到了蹦床前，深吸一口氣，眼睛緊緊地盯著那匹正在奔跑的馬。當(dāng)馬漸漸靠近時(shí)，我開(kāi)始助跑，然后奮力跳上蹦床。這一次，我感覺(jué)自己的節(jié)奏把握得比上次好了一些，但還是沒(méi)有準(zhǔn)確地落在馬背上，而是滑落到了一邊。不過(guò)，我沒(méi)有氣餒，繼續(xù)進(jìn)行下一次嘗試。在接下來(lái)的幾次嘗試中，我不斷地調(diào)整自己的速度和跳躍的時(shí)機(jī)，雖然還是沒(méi)有成功，但我能感覺(jué)到自己在一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)地進(jìn)步。11續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:At6:00pm,wecompletedthestuntfilming,withmykneeinjured.下午六點(diǎn)，我們完成了特技拍攝，我的膝蓋受了傷。經(jīng)過(guò)無(wú)數(shù)次的嘗試，我終于成功地完成了這個(gè)特技。當(dāng)我穩(wěn)穩(wěn)地站在馬背上，伸展雙臂的那一刻，我心中充滿了成就感。攝制組的人都為我鼓掌歡呼，牛仔女孩們也對(duì)我豎起了大拇指。雖然拍攝過(guò)程十分艱辛，我的膝蓋也受了傷，但我覺(jué)得這一切都是值得的。這次經(jīng)歷讓我明白了，只要有勇氣去嘗試，并且堅(jiān)持不懈地努力，就沒(méi)有什么困難是克服不了的?；氐郊液?，我看著膝蓋上的傷口，心里卻滿是欣慰。這段經(jīng)歷不僅為我的電視節(jié)目增添了精彩的開(kāi)場(chǎng)，更讓我突破了自己，讓我變得更加自信和勇敢。我相信，在未來(lái)的生活中，無(wú)論遇到什么困難，我都能像這次一樣，勇敢地去面對(duì)，努力去克服。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Thefirsttimeout,Ihitthehorse'sbackpartandfelltotheground.Everyonearoundletoutanexclamation.Ilayontheground,feelingabitdazedforamoment.ThecowgirlsquicklyranoverandaskedmewithconcernifIwasinjured.Ipattedthedustoffmybody,stoodupenduringthepain,andtoldthemIwasokay.Althoughmybodyhurtabit,myinnerfightingspiritwasaroused.ItoldmyselfthatIcouldn'tgiveuplikethis.So,Icarefullyrecalledtheactionessentialsandtheskillsoftimingthatthecowgirlshadtaughtme.Istoodinfrontofthetrampolineagain,tookadeepbreath,andstaredintentlyattherunninghorse.Whenthehorsewasgettingcloser,Istartedtorunupandthenjumpedontothetrampolinewithallmystrength.Thistime,IfeltthatIhadgraspedtherhythmbetterthanlasttime,butIstilldidn'tlandexactlyonthehorse'sbackandslippedasideinstead.However,Ididn'tloseheartandcontinuedtomakethenextattempt.Inthefollowingseveralattempts,Iconstantlyadjustedmyspeedandthetimingofthejump.AlthoughIstilldidn'tsucceed,IcouldfeelthatIwasmakingprogresslittlebylittle.14范文呈現(xiàn)At6:00pm,wecompletedthestuntfilming,withmykneeinjured.Aftercountlessattempts,Ifinallysucceededincompletingthisstunt.WhenIstoodsteadilyonthehorse'sbackandstretchedoutmyarms,Iwasfilledwithasenseofachievement.Thefilmingcrewallapplaudedandcheeredforme,andthecowgirlsalsogavemeathumbs-up.Althoughthefilmingprocesswasverydifficultandmykneewasinjured,Ifeltthatitwasallworthit.ThisexperiencemademeunderstandthataslongasIhavethecouragetotryandkeepworkinghard,thereisnodifficultythatcannotbeovercome.Afterreturninghome,Ilookedatthewoundonmyknee,butmyheartwasfullofrelief.ThisexperiencenotonlyaddedawonderfulopeningtomyTVshowbutalsomademebreakthroughmyselfandbecomemoreconfidentandbrave.Ibelievethatinthefuturelife,nomatterwhatdifficultiesIencounter,Icanfacethembravelyandtrymybesttoovercomethem,justlikethistime.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)ThefirsttimeImadetheattempt,Islammedintothehorse'sbackandtumbledtotheground.Gaspsofshockechoedfromthosearoundme.Ilaythere,momentarilydazed,astheworldaroundmeseemedtospin.Inaninstant,thecowgirlsrushedover,theireyesfilledwithconcernastheyinquiredaboutmywell-being.Summoningallmystrength,Idustedmyselfoff,rosetomyfeetdespitethepain,andassuredthemthatIwasfine.Althoughmybodyached,afiercedeterminationignitedwithinme.Iresolvednottobedefeatedsoeasily.Withthat,Imeticulouslyrecalledtheactiontechniquesandthecrucialtimingskillsthatthecowgirlshadimparted.Onceagain,Ipositionedmyselfinfrontofthetrampoline.Takingadeep,steadyingbreath,Ifixedmygazeintentlyonthegallopinghorse.Asitdrewnearer,Ilaunchedintoasprint,propellingmyselfontothetrampolinewithallmymight.Thistime,IsensedthatIhadabettergraspoftherhythm,yetIstillmissedthemark,slidingoffthehorse'sbackinsteadoflandingsecurely.Undeterred,Ipressedonwithanotherattempt.Inthesubsequenttries,Icontinuouslyfine-tunedmyspeedandthetimingofmyjump.Althoughsuccessstilleludedme,Icouldfeelmyselfedgingclosertoachievingmygoalwitheacheffort.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)At6:00pm,wewrappedupthestuntfilming,andIboreawoundonmyknee.Aftercountlessarduousattempts,Ifinallymanagedtoexecutethestuntflawlessly.ThemomentIstoodfirmlyonthehorse'sback,armsoutstretched,awaveofprideandaccomplishmentwashedoverme.Thefilmingcreweruptedintoapplauseandcheers,andthecowgirlsgavemeanapprovingthumbs-up.Despitethepaininmykneeandthehardshipsenduredduringthefilmi