人教版八年級 英語 下冊《Unit 6 Pets Writing》課件

Unit6PetsModule3AnimalsWriting教學目標1.掌握議論文的體裁特點。2.掌握議論文的寫作方法：

提出觀點、論證觀點、總結觀點。3.能夠從框架、內容、連貫性方面評價和修改文章。1.Leading-inWhichoneisthebestpet?Why？cutefaithfulcolourfulquietlovelyindependent……KeepingapetdogOpinionReasonsSupportingdetails1.cute2.learnresponsibility3.faithful&bringhappinessnicetoholdwonderfultogrowupfeed,trainandplaywiththemlearntocareforothersConclusionagoodidea1.Leading-inArgumentation(議論文)Thestructureof

anargumentationOpinionConclusion.........1.Leading-inReason1Reason2…SupportingdetailsSupportingdetailsDaniel:Dogsmakethebestpets.2.Pre-writingOpinionIsitconvincing(有說服力的)enough?DanielTheoutlineof

anargumentationConclusion2.Pre-writingSupportingdetailsReasons…Daniel’swritingFindoutthesupportingdetails.Dogsmakethebestpets

Ithinkthatdogsmakethebestpets.

Firstly,dogsarelovely.Ienjoyplayingwiththem.It’spleasanttoholdtheminourarms.

Secondly,dogsarefaithful.TherewasonceafaithfuldoginJapan.Oneday,hisownerdiedsuddenlyofaheartattack.Thedogdidnotknowitandkeptonwaitingforhisownereverydayformanyyears,untilhedied.

Thirdly,walkingadogcanhelptheownerstayhealthy.Ifyoukeepapetdog,youneedtowalkiteveryday.So,youaredoingexercise.

Forthesereasons,Ibelievethatdogsmakethebestpets.HowdidDanieldevelopsupportingdetails?personalexperienceastoryoranexample3.anexplanation(解釋說明)…enjoy/love/befondof…It’s

adj.

(forsb.)todoTherewasoncea…If…,…2.Pre-writingDaniel’swritingDogsmakethebestpets

Ithinkthatdogsmakethebestpets.

Firstly,dogsarelovely.Ienjoyplayingwiththem.It’spleasanttoholdtheminourarms.

Secondly,dogsarefaithful.TherewasonceafaithfuldoginJapan.Oneday,hisownerdiedsuddenlyofaheartattack.Thedogdidnotknowitandkeptonwaitingforhisownereverydayformanyyears,untilhedied.

Thirdly,walkingadogcanhelptheownerstayhealthy.Ifyoukeepapetdog,youneedtowalkiteveryday.So,youaredoingexercise.

Forthesereasons,Ibelievethatdogsmakethebestpets.2.Pre-writingHowdidDanielmakehiswritingcoherent(連貫性)?表達觀點：Ithinkthat…Ibelievethat…inmyopinion,…分點論述：firstly,

…secondly,…/what’smore,…/besides,…thirdly,…/finally,…邏輯連詞：因果：so,…/forthesereasons,

并列：…and…

轉折：…but…/…though……Betty:Goldfishmakethebestpets.Betty’sopinion3.While-writing1.colourfulandbeautiful2.quietReasons1.Goldfisharecolourfulandbeautiful.2.Goldfisharequiet.Practice:choosingsupportingdetailsa.Theydon’tbite,barkorscratch.b.Ownersshouldchangewaterandfeedgoldfishcarefullyeveryday.Asanoldsayinggoes,“Withloveandpatience,nothingisimpossible.”c.Atankofgoldfishcanaddcolourtoyourroom.d.Yourneighbourswon’tcomplain.3.While-writinge.It’senjoyabletowatchtheircolourandmovement.f.Accordingtoastudy,goldfisharethefirstpetsforalmost80%ofchildren.ReasonsGoldfishmakethebestpets.Goldfisharethebestpets.OpinionConclusiong.Accordingtoastudy,goldfisharethefirstpetsforalmost80%ofchildren.3.While-writingWelearnhowtobepatientbykeepinggoldfish.It’spopularforchildrentokeepgoldfishaspets.Otherwaystodevelopsupportingdetails:asaying(commonsense常識)fact(number,..)Whatreasonsdotheysupport?b.Ownersshouldchangewaterandfeedgoldfishcarefullyeveryday.Asanoldsayinggoes,“Withloveandpatience,nothingisimpossible.”MorereasonsMoreSupportingdetails3.While-writingSummary:Howcanyoudevelopsupportingdetails?Youcan1.describepersonalexperience:…enjoy/love/befondof…It’sadj.(forsb.)todosthtellastoryorgiveanexample:Therewas

once

…giveanexplanation:If…,…4.useasaying(commonsense):Astheoldsayinggoes,…5.useafact:Accordingto…

個人的經(jīng)歷舉例子解釋說明名人名言事實3.While-writingPractice:developingsupportingdetailsBetty:Goldfishmakethebestpets.ReasonsKeepinggoldfishisnotexpensive.Accordingtoastudy,itonlycostsaround275dollarsayeartokeepagoldfish.It’smuchcheaperthankeepingadog,whichcoststhousandsofdollars.Goldfishareoneofthecheapestpets.Tips：Youcantalkabout:personalexperienceastoryoranexampleanexplanationasaying(commonsense)afact(number,…)Ifyouliveinaflatanddon’thavelargespaces,youonlyneedtobuyatankforyourgoldfish.SupportingdetailsHelpBettycompleteherwritingMakeherwritingbetter-organizedandmorereadable.3.While-writingGoldfishmakethebestpets.Goldfisharecolourfulandbeautiful.

It’senjoyabletowatchtheircolourandmovement.Atankofgoldfishcanaddcolourtoyourroom.IthinkthatgoldfishFirstly,goldfishGoldfisharequiet.Theydon’tbite,barkorscratch.Yourneighbourswon’tcomplain.Welearnhowtobepatientbykeepinggoldfish.Ownersshouldchangewaterandfeedgoldfishcarefullyeveryday.Asanoldsayinggoes,“Withloveandpatience,nothingisimpossible.”表達觀點：Ithinkthat…Ibelievethat…inmyopinion,…分點論述：firstly,

…secondly,…/what’smore,…/besides,…thirdly,…/finally,…Secondly,goldfishFinally,weGoldfisharethebestpets.Ibelievethatgoldfish,andaSo,your邏輯連詞：因果：so,…/forthesereasons…,

并列：…and…

轉折：…but…/…though……Forthesereasons,Summary:Awell-organizedargumentationIthinkthatgoldfishmakethebestpets.Firstly,goldfisharecolourfulandbeautiful.It’senjoyabletowatchtheircolourandmovement,andatankofgoldfishcanaddcolourto

your

room.Secondly,goldfisharequiet.Theydon’tbite,barkorscratch.So,yourneighbourswon’tcomplain.Finally,welearnhowtobepatientbykeepinggoldfish.Ownersshouldchangewaterandfeedgoldfishcarefullyeveryday.Asanoldsayinggoes,“Withloveandpatience,nothingisimpossible.”Forthesereasons,Ibelievethatgoldfisharethebestpets.Havea

structure：

anopinion

reasonssupportingdetailsaconclusionDevelopsupportingdetails：

personalexperienceastoryoranexampleanexplanationasaying(commonsense)afact(number,…)Uselinkingwords：

表達觀點

分點論述

邏輯連詞

4.Assignment_______makethebestpets.?Assignment:以“________makethebestpets”為題，寫一篇議論文。Step1:MakeanoutlinelovelyholdcatsinourarmscanbeleftathomealoneflatcatchmiceJason:Catsmakethebestpets.independenthelpful…OpinionReasonsSupportingdetailsStep2:Writethefirstdraft.Ithinkthatcatsmakethebestpets.Firstly,catsarereallycute.It’ssocomfortabletoholdtheminourarms.Catsareindependent.Catscanbeleftaloneathome.Catslikestayinginlittleboxes.Theydon’tneedlargespaces.Theyareperfectpetsforflats.Finally,catsarehelpful.Theycancatchmice.Forthesereasons,Ibelievethatkeepingcatsaspetsisagoodidea.…………+details+detailsStructureopinion3reasonssupportingdetailsconclusionSupportingdetailspersonalexperienceastoryoranexampleanexplanationasaying(commonsense)fact(number,…)Linkingwords表達觀點分點論述邏輯連詞Step3:Evaluatethefirstdraft.…^IthinkthatcatsmakethebestpetsFirstly,catsaresocutethattheycandriveawaysadness.It’scomfortabletoholdtheminourarms.Andaccordingtoastudy,pattingcatscanlowerthelevelofstressandbloodpressure.What’s

more,catsareindependent.Theycanbeleftaloneathome.And,catslikestayinginlittleboxes,sotheydon’tneedlargespacesorbewalkedoutside.Ifyouliveinaflat,catsareyourbestchoice.Finally,catsarehelpfulmembersofthefamilybecausetheyaregreathunters.Ifyou

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cat,miceandotherinsectswillbeawayfromyourhouse.Forthesereasons,Ibelievekeepingcatsaspetsisagoodidea.Step4:Polishthedraft.structurestrongsupportingdetailslinkingwordsafactexplanationsIthinkthatcatsmakethebestpetsFirstly,catsaresocutethattheycandriveawaysadness.It’scomfortabletoholdtheminourarms.Andaccordingtoastudy,pattingcats

canlowerthelevelofstressandbloodpress