專題07 書面表達(dá)熱點(diǎn)話題10篇-2023年中考英語逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題特快專遞（深圳專用）-4

2023深圳市中考英語逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題速遞第四期專題07書面表達(dá)熱點(diǎn)話題10篇一、通知1．（2023·廣東深圳·統(tǒng)考一模）為豐富校園生活，學(xué)校的英語俱樂部決定舉辦以“最美深圳”(AmazingShenzhen)為主題的英文繪本大賽。請你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一則活動通知。要點(diǎn)：1.參賽對象：全校學(xué)生2.提交時(shí)間：下周五上午12:00前3.繪本內(nèi)容：選擇深圳這座城市的任一方面，如發(fā)展歷程、景點(diǎn)、文化、志愿服務(wù)等。4.參賽要求：①繪本必須原創(chuàng)；②……（至少補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)）參考詞匯：內(nèi)容content；原創(chuàng)的original要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右（開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.條理清楚，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。NoticeInordertoenrichstudents’campuslife,theschoolEnglishclubdecidestoholdanEnglishpicturebookcompetitionwiththetheme“AmazingShenzhen”._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________EnglishClub【答案】Onepossibleversion:NoticeInordertoenrichstudents’campuslife,theschoolEnglishclubdecidestoholdanEnglishpicturebookcompetitionwiththetheme“AmazingShenzhen”.Thefollowingissomethingyoushouldpayattentionto.Allthestudentscantakepartinthecompetition.Yourworksshouldbehandedinbefore12:00amnextFriday.YoucanfinishyourEnglishpicturebooksfromanyaspectofShenzhen,suchasitsdevelopmenthistory,scenicspots,culture,volunteerservicesandsoon.Rememberthatyourworksmustbeoriginalandthecontentsshouldbepositive.Wehopeallofyoucantakepartinthecompetition.EnglishClub【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇通知，介紹英文繪本大賽。②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”。③提示：題目要求根據(jù)提示寫一則通知，內(nèi)容為舉辦以“最美深圳”(AmazingShenzhen)為主題的英文繪本大賽。寫作時(shí)注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，補(bǔ)充要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)不要遺漏所給要點(diǎn)。[寫作步聚]第一步，先簡單介紹活動內(nèi)容。（開頭已給出）第二步，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)，依次介紹活動的具體內(nèi)容以及要求。第三步，最后號召大家積極參加。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①payattentionto注意②takepartin參加③handin上交[高分句型]①Yourworksshouldbehandedinbefore12:00amnextFriday.（含情態(tài)動詞的被動語態(tài)）②Rememberthatyourworksmustbeoriginalandthecontentsshouldbepositive.（肯定祈使句）二、材料作文2．（2023·廣東深圳·校聯(lián)考二模）目前我國生態(tài)環(huán)境保護(hù)任務(wù)依然艱巨，生態(tài)環(huán)境部表示：2023年將積極推進(jìn)美麗中國建設(shè)實(shí)踐，扎實(shí)推動綠色低碳高質(zhì)量發(fā)展，深入打好污染防治攻堅(jiān)戰(zhàn)，扎實(shí)推進(jìn)藍(lán)天保衛(wèi)戰(zhàn)、碧水保衛(wèi)戰(zhàn)、凈土保衛(wèi)戰(zhàn)，加強(qiáng)固體廢物和新污染物治理，深入推進(jìn)“無廢城市”高質(zhì)量建設(shè)，切實(shí)維護(hù)生態(tài)環(huán)境安全，加快健全現(xiàn)代環(huán)境治理體系。假設(shè)你校的英語校報(bào)正在征集有關(guān)“環(huán)保周”的文章，請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇關(guān)于環(huán)保的英語短文。生態(tài)環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀河水變臟、天空變成灰色、一些地區(qū)沒有干凈的飲用水環(huán)保措施1.不往河里亂扔垃圾；2.節(jié)約用水3.……（補(bǔ)充1—2點(diǎn)措施）呼吁攜手共建美麗中國要求：1.內(nèi)容完整，條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，語法正確；2.詞數(shù)不少于80詞（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；4.標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，卷面整潔。參考詞匯：rubbish垃圾

environmentalprotection環(huán)保Asisknowntoall,theenvironmentaroundusisgettingworseandworse._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Asisknowntoall,theenvironmentaroundusisgettingworseandworse.Nowtheriverhasbecomedirty,theskyhasturnedgray,andsomeareasdonothavecleandrinkingwater.Solet’sdosomethingtoprotecttheenvironment.Don’tlittertheriver.Atthesametime,wealsoneedtosavewater.Itisnecessaryforustogotoschoolbybusoronfoot,becauseitcancutdownonthewasteair.Wehadbetterplantmoretrees.Recyclingisgoodforourplanetbecauseitchangeslitterintosomethingthatwecanuseagain.Environmentalprotectioniscloselyrelatedtoourdailylife.Soitiseveryone’sresponsibilitytoprotectourenvironment.Let’sbuildabeautifulChinatogether.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)題干中的要求介紹如何保護(hù)環(huán)境，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題，并介紹生態(tài)環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀；第二步，詳細(xì)介紹環(huán)保措施；第三步，發(fā)出呼吁。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①atthesametime同時(shí)②hadbetter最好③berelatedto和……有關(guān)[高分句型]①Itisnecessaryforustogotoschoolbybusoronfoot,becauseitcancutdownonthewasteair.(because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句)②Recyclingisgoodforourplanetbecauseitchangeslitterintosomethingthatwecanuseagain.(that引導(dǎo)的定語從句)3．（2023·廣東深圳·統(tǒng)考二模）為了發(fā)展學(xué)生興趣愛好、豐富職業(yè)體驗(yàn)，你校成功舉辦了題為“ExperiencingFutureJob”的職業(yè)體驗(yàn)游園活動。學(xué)校英文報(bào)就此活動展開征文比賽。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容投稿。1.場景描寫：①多種職業(yè)②……2.體驗(yàn)描述：①你的選擇②……3.體驗(yàn)感悟：注意：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右（開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.條理清晰，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。參考詞匯：career職業(yè)；gametester游戲測試師；astronaut宇航員；fitnessinstructor健身教練Lastweek,theactivity“ExperiencingFutureJob”washeldinourschool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Lastweek,theactivity“ExperiencingFutureJob”washeldinourschool.Thereweremanyjobsforustochooseintheactivity,suchasteachers,doctors,astronauts,fitnessinstructorsandsoon.Wecouldchoosethejobweliked.Ichosetobeateacherasmyjob.BecauseIwantedtobeateacherlikemymother.Itaughtourstudentsalotofknowledge.Ialsotalkedwiththemabouttheirdreamsandfuturelives.WhenIwaswithmanystudents,Ifeltrealizedteachingisagreatprofession.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，不要遺漏，語句通順，表述完整。[寫作步驟]第一步，開門見山，直接引出職業(yè)體驗(yàn)游園活動；第二步，具體介紹活動場景和內(nèi)容；第三步，介紹自己的體驗(yàn)感悟。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①alotof大量的②talkwith交流[高分句型]①Thereweremanyjobsforustochooseintheactivity,suchasteachers,doctors,astronauts,fitnessinstructorsandsoon.（therebe句型）②WhenIwaswithmanystudents,Ifeltrealizedteachingisagreatprofession.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）4．（2023·廣東深圳·?？家荒＃┥钲谑亲F(xiàn)代化的花園城市，致力于率先實(shí)現(xiàn)碳中和。為了實(shí)現(xiàn)這個(gè)目標(biāo)，我們每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該為此盡一份力。假如你是李華，請你寫一篇英語短文向?qū)W校英文報(bào)投稿，寫一封倡議信，介紹你的想法和做法并號召大家都積極行動起來，為保護(hù)環(huán)境而貢獻(xiàn)自己的力量。要點(diǎn)：1）保護(hù)環(huán)境的意義。2）我們能夠做些什么：比如①做環(huán)保型消費(fèi)者；②節(jié)約水電……3）號召大家參加此活動。要求：1）詞數(shù)80左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2）要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）條理清晰，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范；4）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。Dearfollowstudents,WehaveonlyoneEarth,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua【答案】例文：Dearfollowstudents,WehaveonlyoneEarth.Earthisouronlyhome.Asweallknow,ourearthfacesmanychallenges,suchasglobalwarming,environmentalpollution,naturaldisastersandsoon.Thesethingsaremakingourearthworseandworse.Protectingtheenvironmentisprotectingourselves.Sowemustdosomethingtoprotectit.First,beenvironmentallyfriendlyconsumers.Weshouldtrytogotoworkbybikeoronfootinsteadofbycars.Secondly,savewaterandelectricityinourdaily.Inaddition,wecanworkasvolunteerstotellpeopletheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment.Let’stakeactiveactiontocontributeoureffortstoprotectingtheenvironment.Iamsureourcitywillbecomebetterandbetter.Lihua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：這是一篇材料作文，為應(yīng)用文；②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：3個(gè)寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，需要具體化；這是一篇倡議信，所以“能夠做些什么”部分可以用祈使句和情態(tài)動詞來表達(dá)。[寫作步驟]第一步，描寫保護(hù)環(huán)境的意義；第二步，描寫為了保護(hù)環(huán)境我們能夠做的事情；第三步，號召大家積極行動起來保護(hù)環(huán)境。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①beenvironmentallyfriendlyconsumers成為環(huán)保型消費(fèi)者②inaddition另外③tellpeopletheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment告訴人們保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性④contributeoureffortsto為……做出貢獻(xiàn)[高分句型]Iamsureourcitywillbecomebetterandbetter.（賓語從句）5．（2023·廣東深圳·南山實(shí)驗(yàn)教育集團(tuán)南海中學(xué)校考二模）傳統(tǒng)的長途旅行常常讓人疲憊不堪，越來越多的人選擇在自家周邊方便輕松地度過周末。假如你是深圳市南山區(qū)的一名九年級學(xué)生李華，請?jiān)诎嗌辖o同學(xué)們介紹一些南山區(qū)的好去處以及可開展的活動，并呼吁大家多出門走走。要點(diǎn)：1.大沙河公園（DashahePark）：野餐、放風(fēng)箏，……2.華僑城濕地公園（OCTWetlandPark）：觀鳥、騎自行車，……3.其他地點(diǎn)：……，……（自行補(bǔ)充至少2項(xiàng)活動）要求：1.詞數(shù)80—100詞（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.條理清晰，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范整潔；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。Nowadaysmoreandmorepeoplechoosetodo“staycation”.LetmeintroducesomeoftheattractionsinNanshanDistricttoyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Nowadaysmoreandmorepeoplechoosetodo“staycation”.LetmeintroducesomeoftheattractionsinNanshanDistricttoyou.First,youcangototheDashahePark.Itisbeautifulforitsnaturalscenery.Youcanhavepicnicswithyourfamilyorfriendsthere.Whentheweatherisfine,youcanflykitesandplaygameswithyourchildren.Therearelotsofotheractivitiesthatyouareinterestedin.Second,OCTWetlandParkisalsoagoodplacetorelax.Thereareallkindsofbirds.Youcangobird-watchingwithyourclassmates.Whenyougocyclingalongtheriver,youcanseefascinatingcloudsintheskyandenjoythesunset.Itisgreat.YoucanvisitsomeplacesofinterestandtakebeautifulphotosinNanshanDistrict.Itwillhelpyourelaxyourselvesaswellashavefun.【詳解】［總體分析］①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：本文為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生不要遺漏“信息提示”中大沙河公園中野餐、放風(fēng)箏；華僑城濕地公園中觀鳥、騎自行車等要點(diǎn)介紹，并自行補(bǔ)充至少2項(xiàng)活動，注意保證選詞準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范整潔。［寫作步驟］第一步，表明寫作意圖。以“介紹深圳市南山區(qū)的景點(diǎn)來度過輕松的周末，”來引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。大沙河公園中野餐、放風(fēng)箏；華僑城濕地公園中觀鳥、騎自行車等要點(diǎn)介紹，和其他一些活動；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。南山區(qū)還有更多其他景點(diǎn)可供放松和玩樂。［亮點(diǎn)詞匯］①staycation居家度假②attraction有吸引力的（事物）③scenery風(fēng)景④fascinating極有吸引力的；迷人的［高分句型］①Therearelotsofotheractivitiesthatyouareinterestedin.(that引導(dǎo)定語從句)②Itwillhelpyourelaxyourselvesaswellashavefun.(aswellas和……一樣；除……以外還）6．（2023·廣東深圳·?？级＃┙冢钲谑须娨暸_對中學(xué)生閑暇活動的安排進(jìn)行了采訪及調(diào)查，假如你是學(xué)生代表李華，請用英語寫一篇短文介紹你和同學(xué)們的閑暇活動開展情況。要點(diǎn)提示：1.內(nèi)容：體育，如跑步；藝術(shù)，如唱歌繪畫；勞動，如做家務(wù)、參加志愿者活動；其它，如閱讀……2.好處：休息放松，學(xué)習(xí)新知識，學(xué)會新技能，結(jié)交新朋友等。3.個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：……要求：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右（首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.要點(diǎn)提示均須涉及，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容；3.不用真實(shí)姓名、校名、地名。參考詞語：volunteer,relax,knowledge,skillFree-timeActivitiesFree-timeactivitiesaregoodforusteenagers__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Free-timeActivitiesFree-timeactivitiesaregoodforusteenagers.Differentpeoplehavedifferentfree-timeactivities,andI’dliketoshareouractivitieswithyou.Firstly,bothmyfriendsandIpaymuchattentiontophysicalhealth,soweoftendosportstogether,suchasrunning,playingbasketballandsoon.Theseactivitiescanalsohelptorelaxourselves.Secondly,wearefondofsinginganddrawing,whichhelpusmakemorefriends.Thirdly,labouristhesourceofhappiness.Iusuallyhelpmymotherdosomehouseworkandjoininsomevolunteeractivitiesinordertohelppeopleinneed.Atthesametime,Icanlearnsomenewskills.Finally,readingisoneofmyhobbies,andIcanalwayslearnsomeknowledgebyreading.Inaword,free-timeactivitiescannotonlyenrichourlife,butalsohelpuslearnsomethingnew.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文，所需要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出；②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)提示已經(jīng)給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充發(fā)揮，注意語句的通順，使用正確的詞匯和句型，使得行文連貫有邏輯。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，以“想和你分享我們的活動”引出下文；第二步，按照要點(diǎn)提示，從體育，藝術(shù)，勞動等方面闡述自己的閑暇活動，并注意補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容，可使用Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly等詞語使得文章連貫，并注意說明這些活動的好處；第三步，結(jié)尾表達(dá)自己的看法，表示自己對閑暇活動的贊同。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①sharesthwithsb和某人分享某物②paymuchattentionto很注意③befondof喜愛④enrichourlife豐富我們的生活[高分句型]①Wearefondofsinginganddrawing,whichhelpusmakemorefriends.（which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）三、電子郵件7．（2022·廣東深圳·統(tǒng)考二模）為落實(shí)國家教育部提出的加強(qiáng)中小學(xué)勞動教育的實(shí)施意見，你們學(xué)校安排了豐富多彩的勞動教育課。假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Linda對你參加的課程很感興趣，她發(fā)來郵件想了解有關(guān)情況。請你根據(jù)以下提示，給Linda回一封郵件。要點(diǎn):1.勞動教育的目的：樹立勞動光榮的觀念、培養(yǎng)良好的勞動習(xí)慣等；2.具體活動：學(xué)習(xí)傳統(tǒng)手工制作、學(xué)做家務(wù)等；3.你對學(xué)校開展的勞動教育課的看法。(至少給出兩點(diǎn))要求:1.80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi);2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校;3.包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫;4.條理清楚，語句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，書面整潔。參考詞匯：勞動教育thelaboreducation勞動課thelaborlesson/course

手工課themanualtraininglesson/courseDearLinda,I’mgladtohearfromyou._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文:DearLinda,I’mgladtohearfromyou.Yousayyouareinterestedinourlaborcourse.Iwouldliketosharesomethingaboutitwithyou.Asweknow,thelaborcourseissettoeducatestudentstorespectandhonorhardwork,andformgoodworkinghabits.Inourschool,weareofferedvariousChinesetraditionalmanualtrainingcourses,suchaspaper-cutting.Welearntodohouseworkaswell.Someteachersteachustocookseveralkindsofsimpledishes.Inmyview,throughthelaboreducation,westudentscanacquiresomelifeskills.Meanwhile,ourschoollifewillbecomemorecolorfulandmeaningful.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意補(bǔ)充兩點(diǎn)對勞動教育課的看法。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，和筆友分享關(guān)于勞動教育課的情況；第二步，詳細(xì)介紹開展勞動教育的目的以及具體的活動內(nèi)容有哪些；第三步，表達(dá)自己的看法。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①beinterestedin對……感興趣②sharesth.withsb.和某人分享某物③formgoodworkinghabits養(yǎng)成良好的工作習(xí)慣④teachsb.todosth.教某人做某事[高分句型]Yousayyouareinterestedinourlaborcourse.（省略that的賓語從句）8．（2023·廣東深圳·統(tǒng)考二模）2023年春節(jié)期間，深圳寶安區(qū)舉辦了首屆“民族美食嘉年華”活動，將民族美食融入新春文化。假如你是李華，你在春節(jié)期間參加了這次美食嘉年華。請根據(jù)以下提示，給你的外教Mr.Smith寫一封郵件，介紹此次活動。要點(diǎn)：1.時(shí)間地點(diǎn)：2023年1月15日，寶安萬達(dá)廣場2.內(nèi)容：①品嘗不同民族的美食；②欣賞少數(shù)民族舞蹈表演；③……（請自行補(bǔ)充兩點(diǎn)內(nèi)容）3.你的感受：……（請自行補(bǔ)充兩點(diǎn)感受）要求：1.80-100詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；4.標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，書面整潔。參考詞匯：美食嘉年華FoodCarnival少數(shù)民族e(cuò)thnicminority萬達(dá)廣場WandaPlazaDearMr.Smith,DuringtheSpringFestival,weheldaFoodCarnivalinShenzhen.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：DearMr.Smith,DuringtheSpringFestival,weheldaFoodCarnivalinShenzhen.ItwaswonderfulandIwouldliketotellyousomedetailsaboutit.TheFoodCarnivalwasheldatWandaPlazainBaoan,onJanuary15,2023.PeoplecelebratedtheSpringFestivalbyenjoyingdeliciousfood.Firstly,wetasteddifferentethnicfoodfromalloverthecountry,suchasTibetanfoodanddrinksandMiaofood.Then,weenjoyedadanceshowfromEthnicminorities.Thedancersworebeautifulclothes.Theperformancewassofantasticthatitattractsmanyaudiences.Also,therewasaDIYactivitywhichwecouldjoininandmakehandicraftsbyourselves.What’smore,thereweremanylanternsandpeoplecouldtrytosolvethepuzzlesonthelanterns.Thecarnivalwasreallyinterestingandunforgettable.WecanexperiencecolorfulChinesecultureinadifferentway.IhopeyoucanattendtheFoodCarnivalnextyear.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件，屬于電子郵件寫作；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：信件開頭以及要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，按照提示的要點(diǎn)逐點(diǎn)闡述，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接書信開頭，引出話題；第二步，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示介紹活動的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)，以及活動的具體內(nèi)容，需要自行補(bǔ)充至少兩個(gè)活動內(nèi)容，可列舉具體的事例；第三步，抒發(fā)此活動帶來的感受并書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①fromalloverthecountry來自全國各地②solvethepuzzlesonthelanterns猜燈謎[高分句型]①Theperformancewassofantasticthatitattractsmanyaudiences.（so…that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句）②Also,therewasaDIYactivitywhichwecouldjoininandmakehandicraftsbyourselves.（which引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句）9．（2023·廣東深圳·統(tǒng)考二模）假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Tony即將在暑假來深圳研學(xué)旅行。請你根據(jù)以下提示給他寫一封郵件，幫助他適應(yīng)在深圳的生活。內(nèi)容提示：（1）歡迎他來深研學(xué)旅行；（2）你的建議：學(xué)習(xí)一些中國習(xí)俗，如使用筷子等；購物時(shí)可以使用移動支付；……（3）你對他的祝福。要求：（1）80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；（3）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；（4）標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，書面整潔。參考詞匯：研學(xué)旅行studytrip

移動支付mobilepaymentDearTony,Iamsogladthat________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】(Onepossibleversion)DearTony,IamsogladthatyouaregoingtohaveastudytripinShenzhenthissummerholiday.Tohelpyouliveahappyandsafelifehere,Ihavesomeadviceforyou.First,youcanlearnsomeChinesecustoms,suchashowtousechopsticks,howtogreetpeopleandsoon.Second,whenyoushop,youcanpaywithmobilepayment.Besides,thetrafficrulesaredifferentfromthoseintheUK.Thedriversdriveontherightsideoftheroad,sowhenyoucrosstheroad,youshouldlookleft.IhopethatyoucanhaveagoodtimeinShenzhen.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并結(jié)合要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點(diǎn)題，歡迎他來深圳進(jìn)行研學(xué)旅行；第二步，具體介紹給他的一些建議；第三步，表達(dá)對他的祝福。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①andsoon等等②bedifferentfrom與……不同③haveagoodtime玩得開心④lookforwardto期盼[高分句型]①Tohelpyouliveahappyandsafelifehere,Ihavesomeadviceforyou.（不定式作目的狀語）②First,youcanlearnsomeChinesecustoms,suchashowtousechopsticks,howtogreetpeopleandsoon.（疑問詞+不定式）四、書信作文10．（2023·廣東深圳·統(tǒng)考二模）深圳是一座“愛閱之城”。假如你是李華，你的外教Sam發(fā)來一封郵件，說他對光明區(qū)隨處可見的24小時(shí)書香亭(self-servicelibrary)很感興趣，請你給他寫一封回信，向他介紹書香亭并邀請他參加書香亭推廣活動。1.介紹書香亭：1)光明區(qū)有71臺書香亭，每臺可放置約200本書；2)可以從書香亭拿到網(wǎng)上預(yù)借的圖