北師大版高三英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)類型二第4講續(xù)寫話題人與動(dòng)物課件

第三部分寫作專題突破類型二讀后續(xù)寫第4講續(xù)寫熱門話題人與動(dòng)物閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。(2023·浙江1月卷)Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend'sfarminwesternWashington．Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears．Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention，soIenteredit．Itwasahummingbird(蜂鳥)，desperatelytryingtoescape．Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛網(wǎng))andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings．SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup．Withthebirdinmycuppedhand，Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin．Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer．Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside，closingthedoorsecurelybehindme．WhenIopenedmyhand，thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes．Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings．Still，shemadenoattempttofly．Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle，shebegantomove．Istopped，andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway．Hovering(懸停)，sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface．Foraverylongmoment，thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes，turningherheadfromsidetoside．Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight．Duringthecookout，Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident．Theypromisedtofixthewindow．AsIwasdeparting，myfriendswalkedmetomycar．Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering．Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome．Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes，thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone．Foramoment，allwerespeechless．Thensomeonesaid，“Shemusthavecometosaygood-bye．”注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。Afewweekslater，Iwenttothefarmagain．_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________寫作指導(dǎo)：Ⅰ．梳理原文細(xì)節(jié)，理清篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。Ⅱ．依據(jù)首句提示，構(gòu)思后續(xù)情節(jié)。第一段：由續(xù)寫第一段及續(xù)寫第二段的提示語(yǔ)可知，該段應(yīng)該描述我途經(jīng)那間擠奶房時(shí)回想起上一回拯救蜂鳥的經(jīng)歷，以及享用燒烤的過(guò)程。第二段：由續(xù)寫第二段的提示語(yǔ)可知，該段應(yīng)該描述兩方面的內(nèi)容：一是蜂鳥與我之間的互動(dòng)交流；二是關(guān)于人與動(dòng)物關(guān)系的啟示。范文佳作：A

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appeared．Withasqueakingcall，shedivedtowardsmeandhoveredbeforemyface，lookingatmewithherbrighteyes．Thenshestoppedonmyleftshoulder．Ipattedheronthebackwhichwascoveredbycolorfulfeathers．AndItookoutmywaterbottle，tryingtogivehersomewater．Contentandjoyful，sheflewabout2metersabovetheground，turningherheadfromsidetosideasifexpressinghergratitudeforsavingherlifetomeagain．Atthatmoment，happinessandthefeelingofbeingmovedmingled，wellingupintomyheart，tearsrollingdownmycheeks．話題佳句：1．Thedogturnedaround，eyeingus，withhistailswingingupanddown．這只狗轉(zhuǎn)過(guò)身來(lái)，上下擺動(dòng)著尾巴，注視著我們。2．Atfirstthebirdstuckhisheadoutofhiscagejusttotakeasipofwaterandfillhismouthwithfood．起初，這只鳥把頭探出籠子，只是為了喝一口水，往嘴里塞滿食物。3．AfraidImighthurtthelovelysmallcreature，Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse．我害怕會(huì)傷害這個(gè)可愛的小生物，我不假思索，發(fā)出一聲喊聲來(lái)阻止我的馬。4．Confusedandfrightenedatmyapproach，thewolfbackedoff，pullinghardthechain．狼被我的靠近弄得既困惑又害怕，向后退卻，使勁地拉著鏈子。5．Birdsweresinging，theairwasfilledwithlaughter，andeveryonewasinthebestofmoods．鳥兒在歌唱，空氣中充滿了笑聲，每個(gè)人都沉浸在愉悅當(dāng)中。6．Thewolfedgedcloser，earsupright，bodytense，andstoppedafewyardsoff，herbushytailwaggingslightly．狼慢慢靠近了，耳朵豎起，身體繃緊，在幾碼遠(yuǎn)的地方停了下來(lái)，毛茸茸的尾巴微微擺動(dòng)著。7．Atthesightofme，thedogcircledaroundme，wagginghistailandlickingmyhandscheerfully．一看到我，這只狗就圍著我轉(zhuǎn)圈，高興地?fù)u動(dòng)著尾巴舔著我的手。8．Shakingwithfear，Iapproacheditcautiouslyandsawthatitwasapigeon．Itlookedatmeinfear，tryingtoopenitswingsandstrugglingitsfeet，butapparentlypowerless．我心驚膽戰(zhàn)、小心翼翼地靠近它，發(fā)現(xiàn)是一只鴿子。它恐懼地看著我，試圖張開翅膀，雙腳在掙扎，但明顯力不從心。9．WheneverIsatatthetableeatingbiscuits，itlookedupatme，cooing(咕咕地叫)constantly．Tomyjoy，Icouldalsoreachintothecagetotouchit．WhenIgentlyfingereditshead，itplayfullypecked(啄)atme．每當(dāng)我坐在桌旁吃餅干，它就看著我，不斷咕咕叫。令我高興的是，我可以把手伸進(jìn)籠子撫摸它。當(dāng)我摸它頭的時(shí)候，它會(huì)開玩笑似的啄我。10．Thedogfirmlygrabbedmytrousersandmotionedmetothekitchen．AsIapproachedthekitchen，Icouldobviouslysmellastrongburningscentandinstantlyknewwhathadhappened．這只狗咬住我的褲子，拉我去廚房。當(dāng)我走向廚房時(shí)，我明顯地聞到強(qiáng)烈的燒焦味，立刻就意識(shí)到發(fā)生了什么。11．WithIndigo，ou