北師大版高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)類型一第5講建議信課件

第三部分寫作專題突破類型一提示類作文第5講建議信你的英國朋友Jim所在的學(xué)校要組織學(xué)生來中國旅行，有兩條線路可以選擇：“長江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim來信希望你能給些建議。請你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：1．你建議的線路；2．你的理由；3．你的祝愿。注意：1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2．請按如下格式作答。DearJim，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua[佳作欣賞]DearJim，I'mcheerfultoreceiveyourletterandknowyou'recomingtoChina．OfthetwotripstotheYangtzeRiverandMountTai，botharehighlyrecommended．Personally，IpreferthetouralongtheYangtzeRiver，thelongestriverandoneofthemotherriversofChinesecivilization，fromwhichyoucanlearnalotaboutthehistoryofChinaandChinesepeople．Moreover，thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing．That'swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverwillbeabetterchoice．Hopeyou'llhaveagoodtimeinChina．Yours，LiHua開頭：稱呼語第一段：表明寫信的原因。第二段：這是建議信的主體部分，主要圍繞要點1“你建議的線路”和要點2“你的理由”進(jìn)行詳細(xì)而又具體的描述，此處可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。第三段：表達(dá)你的祝愿。結(jié)尾：署名1．Iamwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions/offeryousomeadvice．我正寫信給你一些建議。2．Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout...andIwilltrytooffersomeusefulsuggestionshere．關(guān)于……你向我征求意見，在此我盡力提供一些有用的建議。3．AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion，itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction．在我看來，采取以下行動是明智的。4．Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...我認(rèn)為如果你能……會更有益處。5．Ihopeyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/considerationseriously．我希望你會認(rèn)真考慮我的建議。假定你是李華，你校交換生Mike準(zhǔn)備參加“美麗中國(AmazingChina)”短視頻大賽，特發(fā)郵件向你征詢視頻創(chuàng)意。請給他回一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．提出建議；2．闡明理由；3．表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[參考范文]DearMike，Learningyou'regoingtosignupfortheshortvideocompetitiononthethemeofAmazingChina，I'mwritingtosharemyideaswithyou．IfIwereyou，IwouldnothesitatetoshootashortvideoaboutChina'ssmartagriculture．Nowadays，youcanseemodernfarmersusingcutting-edgetechnologiesanddevicesforagriculturalproduction，monitoringandmanagement．Thankstothis，theefficiencyisgreatlyimprovedandthecountry'sgrainsecurityisguaranteed．Therefore，I'mconvincedthat