安徽省2024八年級英語上冊Unit4Doityourself寫作能力提升練課件牛津譯林版

Unit4DoityourselfUnit4寫作能力提升練目

錄CONTENTS01寫作實踐02話題寫作常見錯誤呈現03實戰(zhàn)演練你的生日快要到了，你的媽媽決定自己為你做蛋糕，你

花了兩個小時的時間幫助媽媽做蛋糕。請你寫一篇日記，記

錄你們如何做蛋糕，不少于80詞。

3.時態(tài)：以一般過去時為主［審題指導］1.體裁：記敘文

2.人稱：以第三人稱為主［思路構建］［精彩范文］Saturday，29OctoberMybirthdayiscoming，somymother

decidedto

makea

cakeformebyherself.Ittookmetwohourstohelpmymother

finishthework.FirstIhelpedmymotherputthreecupsofflourintoabowl.

Nextmymotheraddedonecupofbuttertotheflour.Thenshe

mixedthebutterandtheflourtogetherandaddedaglassofmilk.

Finally，shebroketwoeggsintothebowlandaddedonecupof

sugar.Whenwecompletedthework，therewasflouron

everything：thetable，ourclothes，ourhandsandourfaces！Ibelievewecanmakeabettercakenexttime，because

practicemakesperfect.下面句子均有1～2處錯誤，請找出并寫出正確的句子。1.Ittookmefivehourtogetschool.

?2.Hethenspentfivehoursputuptheshelfonthewall.

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?Ittookmefivehourstogettoschool.

Hethenspentfivehoursputtinguptheshelfonthe

wall.

3.WhenIcompletedthecard，thereispaintoneverything.

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?4.NowIknowmanymoreaboutDIYthanmycousin.

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WhenIcompletedthecard，therewaspainton

everything.

NowIknowmuchmoreaboutDIYthanmycousin.

5.Keeptry，andyouwillfindyoucanrememberthings

better.

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Keeptrying，andyouwillfindyoucanremember

thingsbetter.

請閱讀下面的內容，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，介紹怎樣做西

瓜冷飲。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。Whatyouneed：somewatermelon，1cupoforange

juice，3spoonsofsugar，icecreamHowtomakeit：1.Cutthewatermelon.2.Putthe

watermeloninthefridgefor20to30minutes.3.Mixandadd

otherthings.4.Putitinaglass.Manyofyoumustwantsomethingcoldandtastytodrinkin

summer.Nowyoucanmakesomebyyourself，forexample，a

watermeloncooler.

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Tomakeawatermeloncooler，youneedsome

watermelon，acupoforangejuice，3spoonsofsugarand

someicecream.Firstofall，cutthewatermelonintosmall

pieces.Thenputthemintoafridgeandtakethemout20to3