2024-2025學(xué)年譯林版九年級(jí)英語(yǔ)上學(xué)期考點(diǎn) 專題11 書面表達(dá)（熱點(diǎn)話題預(yù)測(cè)滿分范文30篇）

專題11書面表達(dá)（熱點(diǎn)話題預(yù)測(cè)，滿分范文30篇）1．（23-24九年級(jí)上·江蘇蘇州·期中）在人生中，我們需要面對(duì)無(wú)數(shù)選擇。作為中學(xué)生也是如此，合理的選擇會(huì)指引我們成長(zhǎng)，錯(cuò)誤的選擇也許會(huì)影響一生。假設(shè)你的學(xué)校將要進(jìn)行一次以“Howtomakeaproperchoice”為題的英文演講比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示，寫一篇演講稿參賽，內(nèi)容包括：(1)你做出的一次合理選擇；(2)該選擇給你帶來(lái)的影響；(3)關(guān)于如何合理選擇提出你的建議。注意：(1)詞數(shù)：100左右；(2)內(nèi)容完整(照抄閱讀語(yǔ)篇不得分)；(3)文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Howtomakeaproperchoice_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowtomakeaproperchoiceLastSunday,whenIwasdoingmyhomeworkathome,IgotacallfrommyclassmateKate.

Sheinvitedmetogoshoppingthatnight.IwasreallywillingtobecauseIhadbeenstudyingforawholeweek.IwassotiredwiththeworkthatIwaslookingforwardtohavingagoodtimewithmyfriends.ButIstillgotlotsofworktofinish.Afterstrugglingforsometime,ItoldherIcouldn’tmakeit.It’saharddecisionbutIbelieveImadetheproperchoice.Ishoulddothingsinorderofpriority.Wemayfacealotofchoicesinourlife,andIknowtheymaybeveryhard.Thatiswhyfollowingyourheartandalwaysbelivinginyourselfareveryimportantwhilemakingchoices.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：這是一篇應(yīng)用文電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：應(yīng)用“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：開頭通過描述正在做作業(yè)時(shí)接到同學(xué)電話引出選擇情境；中間詳細(xì)敘述了選擇的過程和原因，即有作業(yè)未完成而拒絕了購(gòu)物邀請(qǐng)；結(jié)尾表達(dá)了對(duì)生活中面臨選擇的感悟。[寫作步驟]第一步，通過描述當(dāng)時(shí)正在做的事情接到電話，自然引出下文的選擇經(jīng)歷。第二步，詳細(xì)描述了選擇的具體情況。第三步，結(jié)尾表達(dá)對(duì)此次選擇的感受以及對(duì)生活中選擇的思考。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①invitesbtodosth邀請(qǐng)某人做某事②so…that…如此……以至于……③lookforwardto盼望[高分句型]LastSunday,whenIwasdoingmyhomeworkathome,IgotacallfrommyclassmateKate.(when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)2．（23-24九年級(jí)上·江蘇無(wú)錫·期中）成長(zhǎng)的道路漫長(zhǎng)曲折，沿途也有美麗的風(fēng)景，每一次困惑與進(jìn)步都是這場(chǎng)旅途中的回憶?；厥走@兩個(gè)月的初三時(shí)光，你肯定有一些進(jìn)步也有一些困惑。21世紀(jì)英語(yǔ)報(bào)正在向初三學(xué)生征文，談?wù)劤跞纳睢＜偃裟闶切腋Ｖ袑W(xué)的九年級(jí)學(xué)生劉紅，你要給編輯寫一封信，說說自己的進(jìn)步與困惑。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格中所列的信息，寫完這封信。NameLiuHongAnimalsignTigerFavouritecolouryellow,because...Problemsinthepast...Progressatpresent...Futureplanskeeponworkinghard,...注意事項(xiàng)：1.省略部分需自行發(fā)揮，合理補(bǔ)充，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；2.詞數(shù)在100個(gè)左右，短文的開頭已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.短文中不得使用真實(shí)的個(gè)人及學(xué)校信息；4.短文必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。DearEditor,IamaGrade9studentfromXingfuMiddleSchool._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiuHong【答案】例文：DearEditor,

IamaGrade9studentfromXingfuMiddleSchool.Myfavoritecolorisred,becauseredismyluckycolor.Timegoesby,andpeoplesurelychange.Iamnotthelittlekidanymore.IamquitedifferentfromwhatIusedtobe.

WhenIwasyoung,Icouldn’treadorwrite.Iwasaslowreader.NowIamabletoreadsomethingIenjoyeverydaytoincreasemyreadingspeed.Istarttobecomeinterestedinreading.What’smore,IhaddifficultyinlearningEnglishsoIdidn’tlikeEnglishinthepast.Atpresent,IhavefoundsomewaystoimprovemyEnglish,suchaslisteningtoEnglishsongs,readingEnglishnewspapersandmagazines.

Inthefuture,IhopeIcanbecomebetterandletmyparentsbeproudofme.Besides,Iwillworkhardertoentermyidealhighschool.

Bestwishes!Yours,LiuHong【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：主要時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)；③提示：結(jié)合導(dǎo)圖提示，介紹過去的自己和現(xiàn)在的自己，并談?wù)勛约旱氖斋@和打算，確保沒有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，行文連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，總體說明我和過去的自己不一樣；第二步，舉例介紹自己的改變與成長(zhǎng)；第三步，談?wù)勛约阂院蟮拇蛩?。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①beabletodosth.能夠做某事②atpresent目前③suchas例如[高分句型]①WhenIwasyoung,Icouldn’treadorwrite.(when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)②Inthefuture,IhopeIcanbecomebetterandletmyparentsbeproudofme.(賓語(yǔ)從句)3．（23-24九年級(jí)上·江蘇淮安·期中）請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇80詞左右的短文，自擬題目，介紹你參加玩雪的經(jīng)過。要點(diǎn)：1.上周五夜里，一場(chǎng)暴風(fēng)雪襲擊了我們城市；2.第二天早晨，冰天雪地，白雪皚皚；3.孩子們?cè)谏剿畯V場(chǎng)上打雪仗，又叫又笑的，非常開心；4.你和孩子們一起堆了一個(gè)可愛的大雪人，并拍照記錄很多美好的瞬間；5.……______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文LastFridaynightasnowstormhitourcity.Itwassoheavythatthegroundwascoveredwithheavysnowthenextmorning.AfterIgotup,Ifoundthatsomechildrenwerethrowingsnowballsateachother,screamingandlaughingatthesametime.TheyenjoyedthemselvesatShanshuiSquare.IfeltsoexcitedthatIjoinedthematonce.Wemadea2-metre-tallsnowman,andusedacarrotforitsnose.Wetookalotofpictures,too.Ilovesnow,anditwasreallyagreatexperience.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文。②時(shí)態(tài)：本文應(yīng)使用“一般過去時(shí)”。③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)應(yīng)注意題干給出的“上周五夜里暴雪襲擊了城市”；“暴雪后的場(chǎng)景”；以及“孩子們?cè)谏剿畯V場(chǎng)上打雪仗等活動(dòng)”等要點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹上周五夜晚下了暴雪。第二步，描述暴雪后第二天的場(chǎng)景，孩子們與作者是如何在山水廣場(chǎng)玩雪的。第三步，收尾并總結(jié)全文，告訴大家這次經(jīng)歷很美好。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①snowman雪人②experience經(jīng)歷③scream尖叫[高分句型]①Itwassoheavythatthegroundwascoveredwithheavysnowthenextmorning.（運(yùn)用了so…that結(jié)構(gòu)）②Wemadea2-metre-tallsnowman,andusedacarrotforitsnose.（運(yùn)用了and并列句）4．（23-24九年級(jí)上·江蘇無(wú)錫·期中）陽(yáng)光中學(xué)舉辦“Neverkeepproblemstoyourself”的主題活動(dòng)，在學(xué)生中展開了一些調(diào)查，得到一些學(xué)生的主要問題如下，假如你是李華，請(qǐng)選擇調(diào)查表中的2—3個(gè)問題，用英語(yǔ)寫封建議信給他們，幫助他們解決問題：

TeenageproblemsFeelingnotconfidentaboutmyselfNothavingenoughtimeforhobbiesNothavinganyclosefriendsMakinglittleprogressinstudyBeinglaughedatbyothersBeingunabletocommunicatewithparents要求：1.詞數(shù)100左右（已給出的文章開頭，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。2.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Dearfriend,I’malsoaGrade9student.Itiscommonforustohavesuchproblems.I’dliketogiveyousomeadviceonhowtodealwiththem.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文Dearfriend,I’malsoaGrade9student.Itiscommonforustohavesuchproblems.I’dliketogiveyousomeadviceonhowtodealwiththem.Firstofall,beconfident.Weshouldbelievenothingisimpossible.Don’tloseheart,oryoucanachievenothing.What’smore,it’simportanttobehard-working.Ifweworkhardenough,wearesuretomakeprogress.Also,weshouldalwaysrememberthatamissisasgoodasamile,sotrytobecareful.Tokeepabalancebetweenstudyandhobbies,perhapsyoushouldmanageyourtimebetterandgetyourselfmoreorganized.Besides,whenhavingstressorworries,remembertosharethemwithothers.It’salsoagoodchoicetogotoaskteachersorparentsforhelp.Ihopeyouthinkmyadviceisworthtaking.FacetheyearofGrade9wisely.Itisyouwhoshapeyourlifeandfuture!Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容給出建議，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接上文，表明寫作意圖，引出對(duì)后文的介紹；第二步，具體給出建議；第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①Firstofall首先②makeprogress取得進(jìn)展③keepabalance保持平衡[高分句型]①Ifweworkhardenough,wearesuretomakeprogress.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）②Ihopeyouthinkmyadviceisworthtaking.（賓語(yǔ)從句）5．（23-24九年級(jí)上·江蘇鹽城·期中）“愛”是人類永恒的話題，只有先學(xué)會(huì)愛自己，才有能力愛生活，愛他人。學(xué)校心理健社團(tuán)和英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)正在聯(lián)合舉辦“學(xué)會(huì)愛自己（Learntoloveyourself）”的征文比賽，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文參賽。注意事項(xiàng)：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；2.文章需包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順；3.詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。LearntoloveyourselfEveryonesometimescanbeunhappywiththemselves,andIamnoexception.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文LearntoloveourselvesEveryonesometimescanbeunhappywiththemselves,andIamnoexception.ThesedaysI’munhappywithmyweightbecauseIfindmyselfgettingfatter.Lookingatmyselfinthemirror,Ialmostgetmad.WhydoIlookcommonandfat?Luckily,mymumgottoknowmyproblem.Shetoldmeeveryoneisuniqueandweshouldlearntoloveourselvesfirstandthenwe’llhaveabilitiestolovelife.Also,shetoldmetoexercisemoreandeatlessjunkfood.Frommymum,Ilearnthateveryoneshouldacceptwhattheylooklikesothattheycanlovethemselves.Moreover,trytofindadvantagesofourownanddevelopthemsothatwecanimproveourselves.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，不要遺漏“信息提示”中每一項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，開頭已給出，接下來(lái)具體介紹自己不開心的原因，以及是如何解決的；第二步，談?wù)勀銖闹蝎@得了什么。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①getmad生氣②exercisemoreandeatlessjunkfood多運(yùn)動(dòng)，少吃垃圾食品③sothat以便[高分句型]①ThesedaysI’munhappywithmyweightbecauseIfindmyselfgettingfatter.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句）②Shetoldmeeveryoneisuniqueandweshouldlearntoloveourselvesfirstandthenwe’llhaveabilitiestolovelife.（賓語(yǔ)從句）③Frommymum,Ilearnthateveryoneshouldacceptwhattheylooklikesothattheycanlovethemselves.（賓語(yǔ)從句+sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句）6．（23-24九年級(jí)上·江蘇鹽城·期中）你校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)召開“成長(zhǎng)不煩惱”交流會(huì)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，分享在遇到問題時(shí)是如何尋求幫助和解決問題的。·Whatproblem(s)doyouhave?·Whocanyouaskforhelp?·Howcanheorshehelpyoudealwiththeproblem(s)?·…要求：1.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；2.詞數(shù)100詞左右，文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.文章必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。Hi,everyone.IamastudentinGrade9.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou!【答案】Onepossibleversion:Hi,everyone.I’mastudentinGrade9.IamanorganizedpersonandIcanplanallmythingswell.However,Iamnotverygoodatsports,especiallyrunning.WhenIrun,Ialwaysfallbehindmyclassmates.Lastmonth,Iwenttomyfatherforhelp.Hetoldmethatpracticemakesperfectandwheneverhehastime,hehelpsmepractiserunning.NowIhavemadealittleprogressandIcanrunalittlefasterthanbefore.Iamverythankfultomyfather.Healwaysencouragesmetoachieveabalancebetweenschoolworkandhobbies.Withhishelpandsupport,Icanmakemyselfabetterstudent.Thankyou!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)與一般過去時(shí)；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，突出重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己的問題；第二步，介紹是誰(shuí)以及怎樣幫助的自己。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①fallbehind落后②encouragesbtodo鼓勵(lì)某人做某事③bethankfulto感激[高分句型]WhenIrun,Ialwaysfallbehindmyclassmates.（時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）7．（23-24九年級(jí)上·江蘇南京·期中）假如你是張偉，你在微信里看到你校交流生Andy發(fā)的朋友圈。作為他的好友，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)Andy朋友圈的內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封電子郵件，表示關(guān)心并提供幫助。

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AndyChineseissohard!Ican’tfindanywaytolearnitwell.Also,questionslike“你吃了嗎?”“你爸媽是干嘛的呀?”oftenmakemealittleuncomfortable.Ireallydon’tknowhowtoanswerthem.IfinditdifficulttocommunicatewithmyChineseclassmates.Ireallymissmyfamilyandmyfriends!WhatshouldIdo?注意：1.內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，全文連貫通順。2.詞數(shù)不少于70詞(已給出的郵件開頭和結(jié)尾不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。DearAndy,I’msorrytoknowthatyouhavesomeproblemsnow._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Allthebest,ZhangWei【答案】例文DearAndy,I’msorrytoknowthatyouhavesomeproblemsnow.IsawyourrecentpostonMomentsandIwantedtoreachoutandoffermysupport.LearningChinesecandefinitelybechallenging,butdon’tworry,you’renotalone!Manyofushavefacedsimilardifficulties.ToimproveyourChinese,Isuggestfindingalanguageexchangepartner.Youcanpracticespeakingwiththemandtheycanhelpyouwithanyquestionsyouhave.Asfortheuncomfortablequestions,it’sokaytosimplysay“Idon’tknow”or“I’mnotsure”.Yourclassmateswillunderstandthatyouarestilllearning.Don’tbeafraidtoaskthemquestionstoo,astheycanprovidevaluableinsightsintoChinesecultureandcustoms.Iunderstandthatyoumissyourfamilyandfriends,buttrytostaypositiveandmakenewconnections.Remember,learninganewlanguagetakestimeandpatience.Don’tbetoohardonyourself.Keeppracticingandyou’llgraduallyimprove.Allthebest,ZhangWei【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。第二步，安慰并給出建議。第三步，鼓勵(lì)并書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①reachout伸手②helpsb.withsth.幫助某人做某事③asfor至于[高分句型]①Don’tbetoohardonyourself.（祈使句）②Iunderstandthatyoumissyourfamilyandfriends,buttrytostaypositiveandmakenewconnections.（賓語(yǔ)從句）8．（23-24九年級(jí)上·江蘇鹽城·期中）青年者，國(guó)家之魂。一個(gè)民族只有寄望青春、永葆青春，才能興旺發(fā)達(dá)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖提示，以“HowtoBeaGoodStudent”為題，談?wù)勎覀儜?yīng)該怎樣做好自己，不負(fù)時(shí)代賦予我們的責(zé)任。注意事項(xiàng)：1.詞數(shù)90左右（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名、人名等信息；3.文章必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。HowtoBeaGoodStudentIt’sveryimportanttobeagoodstudent.Asteenagers,whatshouldwedo?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：HowtoBeaGoodStudentIt’sveryimportanttobeagoodstudent.Asteenagers,whatshouldwedo?Firstofall,itisimportantforustokeephealthy.Wecandosomesports,suchasrunningorplayingbasketball.Doingsportsmakesusstrong.Weshouldalsohaveahealthydiet.Besides,weshouldgotobedearlyandgetupearly.Secondly,weshoulddevelopourowngoodhobbies.Goodhobbieslikelisteningtomusiccanmakeusfeelhappy.Thirdly,politenessandhelpfulnessarenecessary.Weshouldalwaysbereadytohelpthoseinneed.Weshouldbehonestandneverlie.Lastbutnotleast,weshoulddevelopgoodlearninghabits.Wemustlistencarefullytotheteacherinclass.Wecanreviewasmuchaspossibleandpreparefornewknowledgeinatimelymanner.Inaddition,wecanreaddifferenttypesofbooksinourfreetime.Ihopeeveryonecandothebesttobeagoodstudent.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第一人稱為主。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明成為一名好學(xué)生很重要；第二步，從四個(gè)方面具體介紹怎么做；第三步，表達(dá)美好愿望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①keephealthy保持健康②bereadyto樂意，準(zhǔn)備好③asmuchaspossible盡可能多④differenttypesof不同類型的[高分句型]①Doingsportsmakesusstrong.(動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ))②Ihopeeveryonecandothebesttobeagoodstudent.(省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句)9．（23-24九年級(jí)上·江蘇鎮(zhèn)江·期中）學(xué)生喜歡在家還是在電影院看電影？為此在學(xué)校做了調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你據(jù)此選擇一種方式，寫一篇短文在校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)主題活動(dòng)中進(jìn)行交流，并談?wù)勀愕倪x擇和理由。watchingfilmsinthecinema(64%)·enjoyhugescreens·feelexcellentsound·transportyoutothefilm(身臨其境)·...watchingfilmsathome(36%)·spendlessmoney·havemorechoices·befree·...要求：1.內(nèi)容必須包括某種看電影方式的所有信息，并對(duì)省略部分進(jìn)行適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充；2.語(yǔ)意通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3.文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名等信息。Recently,I’vedoneasurveyaboutwhetherstudentsliketowatchfilmsathomeorinthecinema.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Recently,I’vedoneasurveyaboutwhetherstudentsliketowatchfilmsathomeorinthecinema.Accordingtothesurvey,64%ofthestudentsliketowatchfilmsathomeandothersprefergoingtothecinema.Personallyspeaking,watchingfilmsinthecinemaisabetterchoice.Tobeginwith,Icanenjoyhugescreensandalsofeelexcellentsoundinthecinema.Besides,it’sagoodwaytotransportmetothefilmanditseemsthatIamjustthecharactersinthefilm,whichcanalwaysgivemeawonderfulwatchingexperience.Inaddition,Icanhangoutwithmyfriendsandit’sreallyexciting.Atthesametime,watchingfilmsinthecinemaoffersmeagreatchancetodevelopfriendship.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：寫作提示已給出，考生應(yīng)注意對(duì)省略部分進(jìn)行適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充，使上下文連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，仔細(xì)閱讀所給內(nèi)容；第二步，闡述調(diào)查結(jié)果；第三步，談?wù)勀愕倪x擇和理由。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①personallyspeaking就個(gè)人而言②wonderful極好的③hangout閑逛④develop發(fā)展[高分句型]①Besides,it’sagoodwaytotransportmetothefilmanditseemsthatIamjustthecharactersinthefilm,whichcanalwaysgivemeawonderfulwatchingexperience.（that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句，which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）10．（23-24九年級(jí)上·江蘇鹽城·期中）分享是一種享受，分擔(dān)是一種解脫。與別人共享的歡樂有很多，憂慮也不少。正是有了這共享的歡樂和共同分擔(dān)的優(yōu)愁，才有了堅(jiān)固的友情和溫馨的親情。學(xué)校網(wǎng)站聘請(qǐng)你做快樂大使，以“傳遞快樂”為主題分享你在生活中幫助他人、傳遞快樂的小故事。內(nèi)容包括：1.Whoisintrouble?2.Howdidyoumakehim/herhappy?3.Whathaveyoulearntfromthisexperience?要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名與班級(jí)。2.語(yǔ)意連貫，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范。3.不少于100詞。Mystoryabouthappiness___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MystoryabouthappinessAsaHappinessAmbassadorforourschoolwebsite,IwouldliketoshareaheartwarmingstoryabouthowIhelpedbringhappinesstosomeoneinneed.Oneday,InoticedthatmyclassmateEmmaseemeddownandtroubled.Iapproachedherandaskedifeverythingwasokay.Sheconfidedinmeaboutherstruggleswithadifficultmathproblem.Seeingherfrustration,Iofferedtohelpherunderstandtheconceptandsolvetheproblemtogether.Wespenthoursworkingonit,andeventually,shegraspedtheconcept.Thesmilethatlitupherfacewasworthalltheeffort.Fromthisexperience,Ilearnedthepowerofempathyandlendingahelpinghand.Thisexperiencetaughtmethejoythatcomesfromsharingknowledgeandhelpingothers.Itstrengthenedmybeliefinthepowerofkindnessandremindedmeoftheinterconnectednessweallshare.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為”一般過去時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意避免“信息遺漏”，從誰(shuí)陷入了麻煩、你如何幫助他、你從中學(xué)到了什么等方面敘寫。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。介紹“我曾經(jīng)幫助別人”，點(diǎn)明主題，引出下文；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從誰(shuí)陷入了麻煩、你如何幫助他、你從中學(xué)到了什么等方面敘寫；第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)會(huì)繼續(xù)幫助他人。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①approach靠近②struggle掙扎③eventually終于④beworth值得[高分句型]①Seeingherfrustration,Iofferedtohelpherunderstandtheconceptandsolvetheproblemtogether.(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ)）②Thisexperiencetaughtmethejoythatcomesfromsharingknowledgeandhelpingothers.（that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）11．（23-24九年級(jí)上·江蘇揚(yáng)州·期中）心理健康是青少年健康狀況的一個(gè)重要因素。為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學(xué)們中存在的心理壓力問題，學(xué)校將開展以“LessStress,BetterLife”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)寫一份英語(yǔ)演講講稿，談?wù)勀憔徑鈮毫Φ暮梅椒?，與同學(xué)們分享。LessStress,BetterLifeProblemsMoststudentshave1.Toomuchhomework

2...Ihave...Solutions1.Talkwithfriends

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3...Hopes...要求：1.表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2.必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)在100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4.不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。LessStress,BetterLifeHello,boysandgirls!Stressisaseriousproblemintoday’sworld.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：LessStress,BetterLifeHello,boysandgirls!Stressisaseriousproblemintoday’sworld.Studentsinourclassareundertoomuchpressure.Somestudentscan’tgetonwellwiththeirclassmates,whileothershavemuchhomework.I’malwaysunderpressure,too.Myparentswantedmetobethetopstudentinclass.Sotheysentmetoallkindsofafter-schoolclassesatweekends.Italkedmystresswithmyfriends.Besides,youcanlearnfromsomesuperheroesbecausetheyaresotoughoryoucantalktoyourparentsdirectly.LastMondayevening,Ihadatalkwithmymother.ItoldherIwasnotlazy.Ireallyfelttired.Ineededtimetorelax.Mymotheragreedwithmeatlast.SoIthinktherearemanywaystoreducestress.Youjustberelaxandkeephappy.IhopeeverythingwillbeOK.That’sall.Thankyou!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要求已經(jīng)給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，注意大小寫，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]①第一步，開篇點(diǎn)題，引出下文；②第二步，具體闡述通過什么途徑去減輕壓力；③第三步，表達(dá)感謝。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①getonwellwith和……相處融洽②agreedwith同意某人[高分句型]①Besides,youcanlearnfromsomesuperheroesbecausetheyaresotoughoryoucantalktoyourparentsdirectly.(原因狀語(yǔ)從句)12．（23-24九年級(jí)上·江蘇宿遷·期中）進(jìn)入九年級(jí)，我們?cè)诓粩喑砷L(zhǎng)并認(rèn)識(shí)了新朋友。你們學(xué)校舉行以“介紹新朋友”為主題的征文比賽，你打算根據(jù)下面表格中的提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文介紹你的好朋友Justin。Quality①聰明、勤奮、自信。②富有愛心，是一個(gè)動(dòng)物愛好者Hobbies①看訪談節(jié)目，原因(自擬一條)②另一愛好，原因(自擬一點(diǎn))Favouritestar①郎朗，自小有彈鋼琴天賦，憑借努力，獲得了許多獎(jiǎng)。②自擬……Dream自擬……注意：1.詞數(shù)：90詞以上，開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2.句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，要點(diǎn)齊全，內(nèi)容合理，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。3.表達(dá)中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。Justinismynewfriend.HeisalsoinGradeNine.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Justinismynewfriend.HeisalsoinGradeNine.Heissmart,hard-workingandconfident.Heiscaringandalsoananimallover.Justinlikestalkshowsbecausehecanlearnmanygoodqualitiesfromexcellentpersons.HelikesclassicalChinesenovelsbecausehecanlearnalotabouttraditionalChineseculture.HisfavoritestarisLangLang.LangLanghasbeengiftedatplayingthepianosincechildhoodandhaswonmanyawardswithhisefforts.HealsolikesZhangJiewhohasatalentforsinging.Heisinterestedinplayingthepiano.HewantstobeapianistlikeLangLanginthefuture.Ihopehisdreamcancometrue.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：這是一篇材料作文，為記敘文；②時(shí)態(tài)：主要采用“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，多處需要補(bǔ)充，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)；注意條理清晰，語(yǔ)法正確。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹好朋友Justin的個(gè)人品質(zhì)；第二步，介紹好朋友Justin的愛好；第三步，介紹好朋友Justin喜歡的明星；第四步，介紹好朋友Justin的夢(mèng)想。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①traditionalChineseculture中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化②begiftedat對(duì)某事有天賦③withhisefforts憑借努力[高分句型]①HealsolikesZhangJiewhohasatalentforsinging.(定語(yǔ)從句)②Ihopehisdreamcancometrue.(賓語(yǔ)從句)13．（23-24九年級(jí)上·江蘇宿遷·期中）人生如旅，在你的成長(zhǎng)過程中，許多人感動(dòng)著你，影響著你，如：父母、老師、朋友、故事人物……，最近我校正在舉辦以“Thepersonwhohasinfluencedmemost”為題的中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)，你的叔叔深深地影響著你，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表中的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)完成征文。基本情況1.四十多歲，是一名醫(yī)生，對(duì)工作嚴(yán)格要求；2.對(duì)音樂感興趣，喜歡彈吉他；優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)1.富有耐心，操持家務(wù)，照顧家人；2.細(xì)心并且有條理(舉1例說明)；3.充滿愛心，樂意幫助他人(舉1例說明)；對(duì)我的幫助幫助我的學(xué)業(yè)，傾聽煩惱，告訴我不放棄；我的感受寫出1—2點(diǎn)要求：1)表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2)必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3)詞數(shù)：90詞左右(征文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；4)不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。ThepersonwhohasinfluencedmemostThepersonwhohasinfluencedmemostismyuncle._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:ThepersonwhohasinfluencedmemostThepersonwhohasinfluencedmemostismyuncle.Youwillnotknowanythingunusualabouthimuntilyoulearnmore.Myuncleisinhisforties.Heisadoctorwhoisverystrictinhiswork.Heisinterestedinmusicandhecanplaytheguitarverywell.Hethinksmusiccanhelphimrelaxhimself.Heisverypatientandhenotonlyhelpsdothehouseworkbutalsotakesgoodcareofthefamilymembers.Moreover,heiscarefulandorganized,hecankeepeverythinginorder.Ialsothinkheiskindenoughtohelppeopleanytime.Heoftengiveshisseattopeopleinneedonthebus.Myuncledoesalotforme.Whensomethingworriesme,healwayslistenstomyproblemsfirstandgivesmelotsofusefuladvice.WheneverIwanttogiveup,heoftenencouragesmetokeeptrying.Inmypointofview,myunclehasaheartfulloflove.Iamproudofhavingsuchagooduncle.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，直入主題，并引出下文對(duì)叔叔的介紹；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。介紹叔叔的基本情況和優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)；第三步，介紹叔叔對(duì)我的幫助；第四步，表達(dá)自己的感受，并結(jié)尾。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①bestrictwith對(duì)某人要求嚴(yán)格②beinterestedin對(duì)……感興趣③notonly...butalso...不但……而且……④takegoodcareof照顧好⑤keep...inorder保持整齊⑥inmypointofview在我看來(lái)[高分句型]①Youwillnotknowanythingunusualabouthimuntilyoulearnmore.（until引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）②Heisadoctorwhoisverystrictinhiswork.（who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）③Hethinksmusiccanhelphimrelaxhimself