新高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)題型歸納與變式演練專題23 書信類02（告知信、建議信、道歉信）（原卷版）

專題23書信類02（告知信、建議信、道歉信）（原卷版） 書信類寫作包括邀請信、感謝信、推薦信、求職信、祝賀信、告知信、求助信、建議信、道歉信、咨詢信以及慰問信等類別。 以下對告知信、咨詢信、道歉信類別提供對應(yīng)的模板和基本寫作技巧。四、告知信 1.布局思維導(dǎo)圖段落要點首段告知內(nèi)容（原因、背景等）正文告知具體事宜（時間、地點等）結(jié)尾表達(dá)期待愿望 2.基本模板寫作模板①Dear______(稱謂)Awareofyourenthusiasmfor/Delightedtolearnthat______(活動主題、你對主題的興趣),I’mwritingtoextendmy______(看法、關(guān)心、歡迎等)andinformyouofsomerelevantinformation. ______(活動信息).Tobeginwith,______(要點一).Furthermore,______(要點二).Tosumup,______(要點三). Ihighlyexpecttheexperiencetoberewarding,perfectlymixinglearningandfun.Yoursincerely,LiHua寫作模板②Dear________，Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto________________，andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestionshere.Inmyhumble(謙虛的)opinion，youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions：________________(建議的內(nèi)容)．Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful，andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyour________________(祝愿)．Yourssincerely，LiHua 3.高頻詞句【常用詞匯】1.inform

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對于你來信問我關(guān)于……的事，現(xiàn)提供幾條有益的建議。Iwouldliketosuggestthat...

我建議……Whynot.../Whydon'tyou...？為何不……？Ithinkitwillbeagoodidea/morebeneficialifyoucould...

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我提出幾條有關(guān)于……的建議。Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice.Thanks.

請仔細(xì)考慮我的建議，謝謝。Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationshelpful/useful.

希望這些建議對你有幫助。Thankyouforyourattention.感謝你對此事的關(guān)注。 4.寫作實操技巧 假定你是校排球隊隊長李華。請寫封郵件告知你的隊友Chris球隊近期將參加比賽，內(nèi)容包括： 1．比賽信息； 2．賽前準(zhǔn)備； 3．表達(dá)期待。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearChris(稱謂)Delightedtolearnthatanimportantvolleyballgamewillbelaunchedinourschoolstadium(活動主題、你對主題的興趣),I’mwritingtoextendmyexcitement(看法、關(guān)心、歡迎等)andinformyouofsomerelevantinformation.. Firstandforemost,thecompetitiontobeheldwillbeginat2P.M.andlastforroughly3hours(活動信息).Preparationsshouldbemadeinadvance,rangingfromdoingregularexercise,keepingpositiveattitudetopresentingyourselvesaheadoftime(要點一).Furthermore,itisnecessaryforyoutotakeagoodrest,whichwillprovideenoughenergyforyou(要點二).Tosumup,Iwishthatwithjointeffortsandexcellentteamwork,wecouldliveuptotheexpectationsofourschool(要點三). Ihighlyexpecttheexperiencetoberewarding,perfectlymixinglearningandfun.Yoursincerely,LiHua 5.仿寫演練 假定你是學(xué)生會主席李華，你校的交換生Bob已學(xué)習(xí)中國象棋長達(dá)一年，特發(fā)郵件向你詢問將由學(xué)生會舉辦的中國象棋大賽的情況。請你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括： 1．舉辦比賽的目的； 2．比賽的時間和地點； 3．建議他報名參加并說明理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右； 2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 參考詞匯：中國象棋大賽ChineseChessContest________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearChris(稱謂)AwareofyourenthusiasmfortheChineseChessContesttobeheldbytheStudents'Union(活動主題、你對主題的興趣),I’mwritingtoextendmyopinion(看法、關(guān)心、歡迎等)andinformyouofsomerelevantinformation.. Firstandforemost,Aimedatraisingstudents'awarenessoftraditionalChinesecultureanddevelopingstudents'loveforChinesechess,thecontestwillbeheldattheStudentCenteronSeptember8th(活動信息).SinceyouhavelearnedtoplayChinesechessforayear,Isuggestthatyoushouldparticipateinthecontest(要點一).Furthermore,Iamconvincedthatyourparticipationwillsurelymakeadifference(要點二).Tosumup,throughthecontest,notonlycanyouimproveyourskillsofplayingChinesechessbutalsoyoucanmakefriendswithotherexcellentplayers(要點三). Ihighlyexpecttheexperiencetoberewarding,perfectlymixinglearningandfun.Yoursincerely,LiHua 6.高考真題【2022年1月浙江卷】假定你是李華，在“中國一愛爾蘭文化節(jié)”活動中結(jié)識了愛爾蘭朋友Chris，現(xiàn)在他已回國，請你給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．回憶活動經(jīng)歷；2．分享個人收獲；3．希望保持聯(lián)系。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【2019·天津卷】假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津，英國友好校將派教師來你校參加為期一周的暑期交流活動?；顒悠陂g，英方教師Chris將做一個有關(guān)西方藝術(shù)的講座、現(xiàn)就講座內(nèi)容征求你校學(xué)生的意見。請根據(jù)以下提示給Chris寫一封電子郵件：（1）你喜歡的講座話題（從音樂、美術(shù)、舞蹈中任選其一）；（2）選擇該話題的原因及關(guān)于該話題你感興趣的內(nèi)容；（3）希望從中有何收獲。注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；（3）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出、不計入總詞數(shù)。DearChris，I'mLiJim，astudentatChenguangHighSchool.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourtime.Yours，LiJin【2019年1月廣東卷（春考）】你是李華，就讀于國同學(xué)校。你寫信給《英文早報》的編輯Bob，希望結(jié)識一位來自英語國家的筆友（penpal），以便相互學(xué)習(xí)對方的語言和文化：你容易相處，熟悉中國歷史，喜歡中國傳統(tǒng)音樂。內(nèi)容要點：1.寫信目的；2.自我介紹；3.表示感謝。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不算詞數(shù)；3.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并將開頭型結(jié)尾抄寫在答題卡上，以使行文連貫。Dearbob,

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【2019年新課標(biāo)全國卷II】假定你是校排球隊隊長李華。請寫封郵件告知你的隊友Chris球隊近期將參加比賽，內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽信息；2.賽前準(zhǔn)備；3.表達(dá)期待。注意:詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【2018·全國卷1】假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國朋友家做客，發(fā)郵件向你詢問有關(guān)習(xí)俗。請你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．到達(dá)時間；2．合適的禮物；3．餐桌禮儀。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【2017·全國卷1】假定你是李華，正在教你的英國朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語。請你寫封郵件告知下次上課的計劃。內(nèi)容包括：（1）時間和地點；（2）內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩；（3）課前準(zhǔn)備：簡要了解唐朝的歷史。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【2017·天津卷】假設(shè)你是李津，與你以前的外籍教師Mrs.Green一直保持聯(lián)系。近日她來信詢問你的近況，請根據(jù)以下提示給她回復(fù)一封郵件。（1）簡要介紹自己的學(xué)習(xí)和生活；（2）告知你已成為八月底在津舉辦的第十三屆全運(yùn)會的志愿者，并介紹為此所做的準(zhǔn)備（如深入了解天津等）；（3）希望她有機(jī)會重訪天津。注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；（3）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：第十三屆全運(yùn)會the13thNationalGamesDearMrs.Green,I’mgladtohearfromyou._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiJin五、建議信 1.考情分析1、學(xué)習(xí)類：給圖書館建議，提高服務(wù)質(zhì)量；給選修課提建議；給讀書節(jié)提建議2、環(huán)境保護(hù)類：給相關(guān)部門或報紙?zhí)峤ㄗh①限制使用白色塑料袋，②節(jié)約食物③合理使用共享單車。3、文化自信類（★★★★★）：外國留學(xué)生，來你們學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)，給他們的學(xué)習(xí)生活或?qū)W習(xí)中文提建議。4、身心健康：給校長寫信，關(guān)于提高學(xué)生身心健康：身體健康，減壓等。 2.布局思維導(dǎo)圖段落要點首段寫信目的正文提出建議、說明原因結(jié)尾表達(dá)期望和祝愿 3.基本模板寫作模板①Dear______(稱謂)Youcan’timaginehow______(情感)Iamhearingabout______(寫信的原因).I’mmorethangladtooffermyadviceforyourreference.Firstly,youaresupposedto______(建議一).Additionally(Foronereason),itmakessenseto______(建議二/理由一).Moreover（Foranotherreason）,______(建議三/理由二)isalsoagoodchoice.Dobearinmindthat（Therefore）______(建議四/理由三) Iamfullyconvincedthatusethe

tipsaboveandwewill______(以上建議的好處).Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoaccount(表達(dá)希望接受建議).Yoursincerely,LiHua寫作模板②Dear________,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto________________,andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:________________(建議的內(nèi)容).Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyour________________(祝愿).YoursSincerely,LiHua寫作模板③Dear_______,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto_________________(引出對方需要建議的主題).Hereareafewsuggestion(引出作者的建議).First,Itisimportantto______________.Then,italsohelpsto___________.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato__________.Youcanalso___________.(可以根據(jù)要求用不同的句式提出建議，如下)Asto__________,Isuggest_____________(需要具體到某一方面).Inaddition,_________(其他的建議).I’msure______________(預(yù)測可能的結(jié)果，給對方以行為的信心和決心).Ihope____________(表達(dá)愿望)。YoursSincerely,LiHua1.建議信寫作注意事項建議信的寫作目的是提出建議或忠告，不是投訴信。觀點要合情合理，注意禮貌當(dāng)先。2.寫作方法①首段：a.簡介自己，不要羅嗦；b.說明目的，注意語氣。②主體：a.提出具體建議；b.首先肯定優(yōu)點，再寫改進(jìn)內(nèi)容，否則會變成投訴信；c.經(jīng)常進(jìn)行交流，注意對方感受，時時提到你和我，否則容易跑題寫成議論文。=3\*GB3③尾段：總結(jié)建議，注意禮貌，使對方易于接受。3.寫作流程圖說明寫信目的介紹詳情、說明原因提出建議提出希望采納建議，并表示謝意，盼望回復(fù) 4.必備詞句 Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...

我寫此信來表達(dá)我關(guān)于……的觀點。Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout...，andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestions.

對于你來信問我關(guān)于……的事，現(xiàn)提供幾條有益的建議。Iwouldliketosuggestthat...

我建議……Whynot.../Whydon'tyou...？為何不……？Ithinkitwillbeagoodidea/morebeneficialifyoucould...

我認(rèn)為……是個好辦法/有利的。It'simportantto.../Ithelpsto...Itshouldbeagoodideato...

很重要/有幫助/是個好主意。Iamwritingtoputupsomesuggestionsconcerning...

我提出幾條有關(guān)于……的建議。Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice.Thanks.

請仔細(xì)考慮我的建議，謝謝。Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationshelpful/useful.

希望這些建議對你有幫助。Thankyouforyourattention.感謝你對此事的關(guān)注?！颈乇吃~句】第一部分：說明寫信的目的套語：1.I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublefittinginyournewschool.Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpful.很遺憾聽說你在適應(yīng)新學(xué)校方面有困難。這樣的問題是很正常的?？赡芟旅娴慕ㄗh會有一些幫助。2.IhavereceivedyourlettersayingyouplantoplayavisittoChinafortendaysnextmonth.

Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpfultoyou.我已經(jīng)收到了你的來信。信上說你打算下個月來參觀中國十天?？赡芟旅娴慕ㄗh對你是有幫助的。3.I'mwritingtoyoutopresentwhatIthinkonthefurtherimprovementofourhotelsoastoattractmoreclients（顧客）.我給你寫信是想說明一下我對于進(jìn)一步改善我們旅館的一些想法，以吸引更多顧客。4.

YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtohowtolearnChinese,andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.你關(guān)于如何學(xué)習(xí)漢語詢問我的建議，那么我就在這里給出一些建議。5.I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtofitinthenewschoollife.Hereareafewsuggestions.很高興收到你的來信，信上詢問我關(guān)于如何適應(yīng)新的學(xué)校生活。下面是我的一些建議。6.I'mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.NowI'mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwellinhighschool.很高興收到你的電子郵件?，F(xiàn)在，關(guān)于如何在高中學(xué)好英語，我寫信給你一些建議。第二部分：介紹詳情、說明原因套語：(1)它將于下午兩點鐘開始，四點鐘結(jié)束，在此期間將會有十五位準(zhǔn)備充分的參賽者發(fā)表演講。Itwillbeginat2:00pmandlasttwohours,duringwhichtime15well-preparedcontestantswilldelivertheirspeeches.(2)我們將會在上午八點出發(fā)，九點到達(dá)那里。Wewillstartat8:00amandarrivethereat9:00.(3)下午，我們會一起……Duringtheafternoon,we’lltogether.(4)記得帶上水和午餐。Remembertotakewaterandlunchwithyou.(5)順便說一下，你可以乘坐322路公交車，它會直接把你帶到俱樂部。Bytheway,youmaytakeBusNo.322anditwilltakeyoudirectlytotheclub.(6)我知道你的母語是英語，還是一名英語老師。我代表我們學(xué)校真誠地邀請你來比賽現(xiàn)場。IknowyouareanativespeakerofEnglishandanEnglishteacher,andI,onbehalfofourschool,sincerelyinviteyoutobepartofthecontest.(7)既然你如此渴望提高英語，這會是一個很好的機(jī)會。SinceyouaresoeagertoimproveyourEnglish,itwillprovetobeagreatchance.(8)我保證你在那里會過得很愉快。I’msurethatyouwillenjoyyourselfthere.第三部分：提出建議套語：我建議……I’dliketosuggestthat…MayIsuggestthat…?Inmyopinion…Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat…Iamwritingtoadvise…IfIwereyou,Iwould…第四部分：希望采納建議，并表示謝意，盼望回復(fù)套語：1.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:wherethereisawill,thereisaway(有志者事竟成).我希望這些建議會對你有用。記?。河兄菊呤戮钩伞?.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:

Themanwhohasmadeuphismindtowinwillneversay“impossible”(一個決心要成功的人從來不說“不可能”).我希望這些建議會對你有用。記住：一個決心要成功的人從來不說“不可能”。3.Bestwishes!（給你）最美好的祝愿！4.

Ihopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyouanyway.

Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovement.無論如何，我希望這些建議對你有所幫助。我會非常高興看到情況改善。5.

Ibelievethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoseriousaccount.

Whateveryoudecidetodo,goodluckwithyourstudies/work！我相信你會認(rèn)真考慮我的建議。無論你決定做什么，祝你學(xué)習(xí)/工作好運(yùn)。6.Isincerelyhopemyadvicewillbesomehelpforyou.IfthereismoreIcandotohelp,pleaseletmeknow.我真誠的希望我的建議對你有一些幫助。如果有更多我可以幫忙的，請告訴我。 5.寫作實操技巧 假如你是李華，你的外教MrGeller計劃讓8歲的女兒在中國學(xué)習(xí)一門傳統(tǒng)藝術(shù)作為興趣培養(yǎng)，正在書法、剪紙與象棋中選擇，寫郵件尋求你的看法和學(xué)習(xí)建議。請你給他回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括： 1.推薦內(nèi)容及簡要原因； 2.切實可行的學(xué)習(xí)建議； 3.祝福與希望。注意：1．詞數(shù)：80詞左右； 2．內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以上要點，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；參考詞匯：書法：calligraphy剪紙：paper-cutting象棋：Chinesechess__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Dear______(稱謂)Youcan’timaginehowoverjoyed(情感)Iamhearingaboutyourplan(寫信的原因).I’mmorethangladtooffermyadviceforyourreference.Firstly,youaresupposedtochooseChinesecalligraphybecauseit’sanaturalcombinationofbeauty,strength,historyandtechnique(建議一).Additionally,aimingatlearningitwell,itmakessensetodevotehimself/herselftolonghoursofpractice(建議二).Moreover,signingupforacalligraphycourse(建議三)isalsoagoodchoice,whichwouldhelpherstudyinasystematicway.Dobearinmindthatit’dalsobebeneficialtostudyandimitatetheworksoffamouscalligraphers(建議四) Iamfullyconvincedthatusethe

tipsaboveandyouwillgainbenefit(以上建議的好處).Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoaccount(表達(dá)希望接受建議).Yoursincerely,LiHua 6.仿寫演練 假定你是李華，你朋友張帥在美國學(xué)習(xí)，你們經(jīng)常用英文通信。他即將完成學(xué)業(yè)，前不久,他來信就是否回國工作征求你的意見。請根據(jù)下列提示回信。1.建議他回國。2.你的理由是國內(nèi)形勢好、學(xué)有所用、就業(yè)機(jī)會多、便于照顧父母、報效祖國等。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右：2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearZhangshuai(稱謂)Youcan’timaginehowoverjoyed(情感)Iamhearingaboutyouaregoingtograduate(寫信的原因).I’mmorethangladtooffermyadviceforyourreference.Inmyopinion,youaresupposedtocomebackafteryoufinishyourstudiesabroad(建議).Foronereason,whatyouarestudyingisbadlyneedednowadaysinChinaanditwillbequiteeasyforyoutofindagoodjob(理由一).Foranotherreason,itwillbemuchmoreconvenientforyoutolookafteryourparentsastheyare

gettingold(理由二).Therefore，it'sagoodideaforyoutoreturn.(總結(jié)) Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoaccount(表達(dá)希望接受建議).Yoursincerely,LiHua 7.高考真題 【2022年全國乙卷】學(xué)校英文報正在開展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom為題的討論。請使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.學(xué)習(xí)活動狀況描述：2.簡單評論;3.你的建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.短文的題目和首句已為你寫好?！緟⒖挤段摹縇earningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomNowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroominvariousways.ItcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudentswhochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%.However,thosechoosingreadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%.

AsfarasI’mconcerned,itisadisturbingtrend.Forstudents,whatbenefitsmosttotheirstudyisreadingEnglishbooks.Becauseoftheirlackofself-discipline,they’remoreeasilyaddictedtochattingonlineorplayinggames.It’surgentforstudentsthemselvestoimprovetheirself-discipline,andit’salsourgentforparentsandteacherstostrengthentheguidance.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于說明文。要求考生請使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文給學(xué)校英文報投稿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累選擇：choose→select提高：improve→strengthen各種各樣的：various→diverse就我而言：asfarasI’mconcerned→frommyperspective2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheClassroominvariousways.拓展句：Nowadays,becausesmartphonesandcomputersarebecomingmoreandmorepopular,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheClassroominvariousways.【點睛】【高分句型1】ItcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudentswhochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%.(運(yùn)用了it作形式主語，that引導(dǎo)主語從句以及who引導(dǎo)的定語從句)【高分句型2】It'surgentforstudentsthemselvestoimprovetheirself-discipline(運(yùn)用了it作形式主語，toimprovetheirself-discipline為真正的主語)【2021年6月全國乙卷】你校將舉辦英語演講比賽，請你以Besmartonlinelearner寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽,內(nèi)容包括：分析優(yōu)勢及不足；提出學(xué)習(xí)建議。注意：詞數(shù)100詞左右；題目和首句以為你寫好?！緟⒖挤段摹緽esmartonlinelearnersJustliketheoldsayinggoes,"eachcoinhastwosides."Ontheonehand,providinganeasyaccesstoplentyofexcellentlearningsources,onlinelearningisreallyahelpinghand.Ontheotherhand,whatwelearnonlineisn'tnecessarilywhatweneed,nottomentionitsconstantdamagetooureyes.Forme,onlinelearningis,afterall,justatool.It'snotthenewmethoditselfbutthepersonwhouseitthatreallymatters.Tobecomeasmartonlinelearner,notonlyshouldwecarefullychoosefromcountlessalternativeswemayface,butextraattentionneedstobeattachedwhenwetakelessonsonline.What'smore,onconditionthatwecouldapplywhatwelearnonlinetoourdailylife,onlinelearningwouldbemoremeaningful.Thanks,everyone.Hopeweallcouldbesmartonlinelearners.【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)是演講稿，一種常見的應(yīng)用文，與去年英語作文比賽稍有差別。英語書面表達(dá)近幾年來穩(wěn)中求變，在測試考生的英語表達(dá)能力，看其是否能夠運(yùn)用學(xué)過的英語知識和掌握的技能，進(jìn)行思想交流的同時，注重文體變化，突出實用性，更考查學(xué)生能否利用所學(xué)語言知識、文化知識等，根據(jù)不同目的和受眾，通過書面形式創(chuàng)新語篇?！军c睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫。復(fù)合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多的高端句式，如非謂語動詞：providinganeasyaccesstoplentyofexcellentlearningsources,onlinelearningisreallyahelpinghand.；名詞性從句：whatwelearnonlineisn'tnecessarilywhatweneed,nottomentionitsconstantdamagetooureyes.倒裝：Tobecomeasmartonlinelearner,notonlyshouldwecarefullychoosefromcountlessalternativeswemayface,butextraattentionneedstobeattachedwhenwetakelessonsonline.；狀語從句：onconditionthatwecouldapplywhatwelearnonlinetoourdailylife,onlinelearningwouldbemoremeaningful.等。文章思路清晰，層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然。為文章增色添彩?！?019年6月天津卷】假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津，英國友好校將派教師來你校參加為期一周的暑期交流活動?；顒悠陂g，英方教師Chris將做一個有關(guān)西方藝術(shù)的講座、現(xiàn)就講座內(nèi)容征求你校學(xué)生的意見。請根據(jù)以下提示給Chris寫一封電子郵件：（1）你喜歡的講座話題（從音樂、美術(shù)、舞蹈中任選其一）；（2）選擇該話題的原因及關(guān)于該話題你感興趣的內(nèi)容；（3）希望從中有何收獲。注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；（3）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出、不計入總詞數(shù)。DearChris,I'mLiJin,astudentatChenguangHighSchool.

Thankyouforyourtime.Yours,LiJinDearChris,I'mLiJin,astudentatChenguangHighschool.

Hearingthatyouwillbesenttoourschooltoparticipateinaone-weekcommunicationactivityonbehalfofourpartner-school,Ifeelexcitedtogivesomeadviceonthespeechaboutwesternart,whichwillbegivenbyyou.Herearesomeofmysuggestions.Frommyperspective,amongallthethemesonwesternculturelikemusic,drawinganddancing,Iwouldliketohaveabetterunderstandingofmusic,foragreatnumberofmyclassmatesarefondofmusic.Toenhanceourknowledge,Iwouldappreciateitifyouaddsomeinformationaboutthehistoryanddevelopmentofwesternmusic.Inaddition,someexcellentworksofmusicandtheintroductionofseveraldistinguishedmusicianswouldbeagoodwaytobroadenourhorizon.Anyway,Ican'twaittomeetyoufromthebottomofmyheart!Thankyouforyourtime!Yours,LiJin本篇寫作為應(yīng)用文體，書信類的建議信。第一步：審題。（1）判斷時態(tài)與寫作主語：時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱第一人稱。（2）根據(jù)細(xì)節(jié)判斷文章段落：三段式：開頭寒喧說明理由（需要補(bǔ)充），中間發(fā)展說明具體事項，結(jié)束表達(dá)感謝或祝福（已給出）。第二步：細(xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充：第一段：說明寫信目的：根據(jù)題目提示，說明寫信背景（友好?；顒右约袄蠋熤v座），點名主題（關(guān)于講座給出建議）。第二段：針對寫作細(xì)節(jié)詳細(xì)介紹：從三個話題中做出選擇，并說明選擇的理由。補(bǔ)充想要了解的內(nèi)容（建議1-2點）。第三段：表達(dá)見面的期望并感謝閱信。（由于最后一段文章已給提示為感謝，可考慮將期望放到第二段結(jié)尾）。最后，整潔的卷面是寫作獲得良好印象分的關(guān)鍵，記得用心謄抄哦?！?019北京卷】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國好友Jim打算暑假期間來北京、天津和上海旅游，發(fā)來郵件詢問相關(guān)信息。請你給他回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括:1.交通出行；2.必備衣物。注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于50；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearJim,I’mpleasedthatyou’recomingtotourinChina.IsuggestthatyoubeginfromBeijing,andI’llshowyouaround.Tianjinwillbeyournextstop.Afterthat,youcangotoShanghai,whereyoucanstayforaweek.Youcantakehigh-speedtrainstobothcities.Summerinthesecitiesishotandrainy,sot