《課時把關練》英語必修第二冊RJUNIT 2 Part V Writing 寫作專練含答案

課時把關練PartVWriting妙筆生花讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。??What’sthebestwaytoexperienceAmerica?Iadviseonestepatatime.Andthat’sexactlywhatIsetouttodoin2006whenItriedtovisitallthefiftystatesinfiftydaysandrunamarathonineachofthemwhilestayingthere.??OnawarmdayinSeptember，Idecidedtobeginmytripofrunningfiftymarathons，infiftystates，infiftydayswiththeLewis&ClarkmarathoninSt.Charles，Missouri.Itseemedlikeafittingplacetobegin，becauseitwasthe200thanniversaryoftheLewis&Clarkexpedition（探險）.??AftervisitingMissouri，myplanwastoheadwestacrossthecountry，stoppingineachstatetovisit，exploreandrunamarathon.Asyoumightimagine，thepreparations，includingtheschedulesandresearch，wereeverybitaschallengingastherunningitself.Duetotheembarrassingtimingofdifferentmarathonsacrossthenation，weweren’talwaysabletofollowastraightlinefromonestatetothenext.Instead，wecouldonlytravelacrossthecountryinacomplex（復雜的）web.Butthatwaswhatmadethetravelsointeresting.??Besidesthecomplexweboftravel，thepresenceofmyfamilymademytripmoremeaningful.Mywife，adentist，hadchangedherscheduletojoinme，andourtwochildrenAlexandriaandNicholaswouldbetakingfiftydaysoffschool，sotheycouldtravelwithus.Mymom，aretiredschoolteacher，wouldalsobepartoftheteam.Myfatheralsocamealong.Well，we’refromGreece，whereonefamilymembergoes，andtheotherssoonfollow.Allofthemsupportedmyexpedition.??Itmightbeeasytoconcludethatseeingthecountrysoquicklywouldleadtoanunclearimpression，butjusttheoppositewastrue.Iremembereverysinglestateandeverydetailveryclearly，evenonthisveryday，morethanadecadelater.注意：續(xù)寫詞數應為150左右。??Afterwemadecarefulpreparations，myexpeditionplanbeganfinally.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________??Mygoodphysicalqualitywasshownintheexpedition.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________步驟一：品讀語篇——抓住要點很關鍵??前文概要??審體裁：記敘文??審時態(tài)：一般過去時??審前文大意以及要點??who：theauthor??when：inSeptember，2006??where：St.Charles，Missouri??what：runningfiftymarathonsinfiftystatesinfiftydays??why：stoppingineachstatetovisit，exploreandrunamarathon??第一段：作者計劃通過50天去50個州，并在每個州跑一次馬拉松長跑，來親身體驗美國。??第二段：在9月份一個暖和的日子開始了體驗美國的馬拉松計劃。??第三段：作者在每個州停下來參觀、探索和跑馬拉松，但是準備工作，包括日程安排和研究，都和跑步本身一樣具有挑戰(zhàn)性。??第四段：家人的參與使作者的旅行更有意義，他們都支持作者的探險。??第五段：作者看到這個國家，清楚地記得每一個州和每一個細節(jié)，甚至十多年后也不會忘記。步驟二：戴著鐐銬跳舞——研讀首句，高度融合原文，合理想象情節(jié)??第一段：根據所給第一句“Afterwemadecarefulpreparations，myexpeditionplanbeganfinally.”及原文情節(jié)推測可知，作者要橫跨50個州，中間作者和家人勢必面臨天氣方面的種種挑戰(zhàn)，此段要圍繞此內容展開續(xù)寫。??第二段：根據所給句子“Mygoodphysicalqualitywasshownintheexpedition.”和原文情節(jié)的推測可知，身體健壯是一個原因，但喜歡這次活動的主要原因是得到了家人的支持。步驟三：斟酌打磨——豐富續(xù)寫詞匯，生動描述情節(jié)話題激活詞匯??serious，feeltired，experience，expectation，successfully，drop，become，help，need，find，enjoy，meet，giveup，finish，drive，alongthehighway，flyto，dailymarathonroutine，aftereverymarathon，wetness，changesbecomemoreserious，behealthyandstrong句式翻譯??1.我們先從密蘇里州開車到科羅拉多州。（主謂）___________________________________________________________________________________________??2.我們去那兒要參加博爾德越野馬拉松。（介詞短語表目的）___________________________________________________________________________________________??3.沿著公路，濕度越來越低。（比較級）___________________________________________________________________________________________??4.當我們飛往阿拉斯加時，變化變得更加嚴重了。（主從復合句）??___________________________________________________________________________________________??5.我們遇到了一場暴風雪！（comeacross）?___________________________________________________________________________________________??6.那對我們的探險很有挑戰(zhàn)性。（主系表）___________________________________________________________________________________________??7.幸好一家戶外服裝公司幫了我們，所以我們有了很多暖和的衣服。（主從復合句）___________________________________________________________________________________________??8.暖和的衣服我們并沒有穿很久。（主謂賓）___________________________________________________________________________________________??9.第二天我們就發(fā)現(xiàn)自己在夏威夷的炎熱地區(qū)了。（主謂賓賓補）___________________________________________________________________________________________??10.除了每天的馬拉松之外，我還喜歡與大人物見面。（enjoydoingsth.）___________________________________________________________________________________________??11.通過這些名人，我體驗了不同的文化。（主謂賓）___________________________________________________________________________________________??12.雖然每次馬拉松后我都覺得很累，但我從未想過要放棄。（although引導讓步狀語從句）___________________________________________________________________________________________??13.真正的原因并不是我健康強壯，而是我得到了所有家庭成員的支持。（liein）___________________________________________________________________________________________??14.在他們的期望下，我成功地在50個州跑完了50場馬拉松。（with介詞短語）___________________________________________________________________________________________?步驟四：創(chuàng)造性表達——潤色注重細節(jié)，句式再造升級??1.將第1句和第2句變?yōu)橐粋€簡單句___________________________________________________________________________________________??2.將第4句用獨立主格結構改為一個簡單句___________________________________________________________________________________________??3.將第5句用becaughtin改寫，且與第6句變?yōu)橐粋€復合句___________________________________________________________________________________________??4.將第7句改寫為簡單句___________________________________________________________________________________________??5.將第8句和第9句變?yōu)橐粋€復合句___________________________________________________________________________________________??6.將第11句改為第10句的非限制性定語從句___________________________________________________________________________________________??7.將第13句用not...but結構改寫___________________________________________________________________________________________??步驟五：高分在即——連句成篇，結構緊湊邏輯銜接Afterwemadecarefulpreparations，myexpeditionplanbeganfinally.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Mygoodphysicalqualitywasshownintheexpedition._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________課時把關練PartVWriting參考答案步驟三1.WedrovefromMissouritoColoradofirst.2.WeweregoingtherefortheBoulderBackroadsmarathon.3.Alongthehighwaythewetnessdroppedlowerandlower.4.ThechangesbecamemoreseriouswhenweflewtoAlaska.5.Wecameacrossasnowstorm!6.Thatwaschallengingforourexpedition.7.Thankfully，asanoutdoorclothingcompanyhelpedus，wehadplentyofwarmclothing.8.Wedidn’twearwarmclothesforlong.9.ThenextdaywefoundourselvesinthehotareaofHawaii.10.Apartfromthedailymarathonroutine，Ialsoenjoyedmeetingthegreatpeople.11.Throughthesecelebrities，Iexperienceddifferentcultures.12.AlthoughIfelttiredaftereverymarathon，Ineverthoughtaboutgivingup.13.Therealreasondidn’tlieinthatIwashealthyandstrong；itlayinthatIgainedthesupportfromallmyfamilymembers.14.Withtheirexpectations，Ifinishedthefiftymarathonsinfiftystatessuccessfully.步驟四1.WedrovefromMissouritoColoradofirst，fortheBoulderBackroadsmarathon.2.WeflyingtoAlaska，thechangesbecamemoreserious.3.Wewerecaughtinasnowstorm，whichwaschallengingforourexpedition.4.Thankstothehelpfromanoutdoorclothingcompany，wehadplentyofwarmclothing.5.Wedidn’twearthemforlong，becausethenextdaywefoundourselvesinthehotareaofHawaii.6.Apartfromthedailymarathonroutine，Ialsoenjoyedmeetingthegreatpeople，throughwhomIexperienceddifferentcultures.7.Therealreasonwasnotbeca