九年級(jí)中考英語(yǔ)總復(fù)習(xí)-作文講評(píng)課件(共15張課件)

EnglishComposition英語(yǔ)作文

書面表達(dá)：近來(lái)，天津市正在創(chuàng)建全國(guó)文明城市，這一話題在我校引起了熱烈討論。作為一名中學(xué)生，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示信息給學(xué)校英語(yǔ)專欄寫一篇短文，呼吁大家如何為創(chuàng)建文明城市貢獻(xiàn)力量。1.見面跟人打招呼2.與同學(xué)友好相處3.保持教室及社區(qū)環(huán)境衛(wèi)生4.幫助家人做力所能及的事5.在公共場(chǎng)合遵守秩序6.如果友人不遵守規(guī)則，你會(huì)…要求:書寫規(guī)范，語(yǔ)句通順，行文流暢，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)法正確詞數(shù)80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)短文應(yīng)包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐字翻譯，但可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2018年九年級(jí)模擬考試英語(yǔ)作文提示詞：話題issue全國(guó)文明城市社區(qū)thenationalcivilizedcity

遵守公共秩序obeypublicorder絕望型抄寫型奮斗型精英型Problems

inyourwriting

要點(diǎn)不全詞數(shù)太少無(wú)頭無(wú)尾缺少過(guò)渡語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤書寫潦草卷面涂改

書面整潔干凈，行文連貫通順，句式多樣，語(yǔ)法基本無(wú)誤或有少量語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。Enjoythefollowingcompositions.Wehadbetterhelpourparentsdothehouseworkwhichwecando.(季建雯)It’sourdutytoprotect

ourenvironment.(周晶美)Weshoulddosomethingwecandotobuildanationalcivilizedcity.(郭爽)It’sagoodideatoget

onwellwithothers.

(姚春情)It’simportanttokeep

ourcommunityclean.(季雅杰)

Enjoythefollowingsentences.評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：第五檔（13-15分）能寫明全部要點(diǎn)，文章中語(yǔ)法無(wú)誤，行文連貫且通順，表達(dá)清楚且豐富。第四檔（10-12分）能寫明全部或大部分內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，文中有少量語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，行文基本連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚。第三檔（7-9分）

能寫明部分內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),文中有較多語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，尚能達(dá)意。第二檔（4-6分）

只能寫出少部分內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，文中有許多語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，只有個(gè)別句子可讀。第一檔（0-3分）

只能寫出語(yǔ)所要求內(nèi)容有關(guān)的一些單詞或1-2個(gè)要點(diǎn)。正確抄寫全部參考詞匯給1分；寫出相關(guān)要點(diǎn)的詞組給2-3分。評(píng)分：_______理由：______

Version1:First,studentssayhellowhentheypeople.Second,studentsarefriendlytoanybody.Third,studentsshouldkeeptheenvironmentiscleaninclassandincommunity.Fourth,studentshavebetterhelpparentstodohousework.Inpublic,wemustobeypublicorder.Finally,whenyoumetsomebodynottoobeyorder.Youmuststophis.andyoucantellherightisaction.

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Version2:

Englishtextbooksplayan

importantpartinourstudyof

English.Theycanhelpuslearn

Englishwell.Itcanalsohelp

openourmindsandmakeour

schoollifecolorful.We’velearned

manywonderfulthingsinthe

worldinourtextbooks.Wealso

learntalotaboutculturesaround

theworld.Myfavoritepersonis

SpudWebb.I’velearnedalot

fromhim.評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：第五檔（13-15分）能寫明全部要點(diǎn)，文章中語(yǔ)法無(wú)誤，行文連貫且通順，表達(dá)清楚且豐富。第四檔（10-12分）能寫明全部或大部分內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，文中有少量語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，行文基本連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚。第三檔（7-9分）

能寫明部分內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),文中有較多語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，尚能達(dá)意。第二檔（4-6分）

只能寫出少部分內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，文中有許多語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，只有個(gè)別句子可讀。第一檔（0-3分）

只能寫出語(yǔ)所要求內(nèi)容有關(guān)的一些單詞或1-2個(gè)要點(diǎn)。正確抄寫全部參考詞匯給1分；寫出相關(guān)要點(diǎn)的詞組給2-3分。評(píng)分：_______理由：______13

Version2:Asamiddleschoolstudent,weshoulddosomethingwecandotobuildthenationalcivilizedcity.Hereissomeadviceforus.Firstofall,whenwemeetsomeone,weshouldsayhellotothem.Andweshouldgetonwellwithourclassmates.Second,wehadbetterkeepourclassroomandcommunityclean.Becauseweshouldprotectourenvironment.Atlast,wemustobeypublicorderinpublicplaces.Ifsomeoneagainsttherules,weshouldstophimandtellhimabouttherules.Ifeveryonecandosomething,ourcitywillbecomebetterandbetter.

語(yǔ)法知識(shí)混亂，運(yùn)用不夠準(zhǔn)確代詞:Wemuststophefromdoingit.Youshouldgetonwellwithyouclassmates.時(shí)態(tài):Ibelieveourcitygetbetterandbetter.主謂一致:Ifsomeonedon’tobeytherules,…詞性：Wemustn’tagainsttherules.習(xí)慣搭配:Weshouldbefriendlywithothers.Weshouldkeepcleantheclassroom.

him

willgetbetterandbetter.break

doesn’ttoTypicalmistakes(典型錯(cuò)誤)yourkeeptheclassroomclean.句型結(jié)構(gòu)Chinglish現(xiàn)象

IverylikeTianjin.Whenweatschool…Ifhavepeopledoesn’tobeypublicorder…areatschool…

likeTianjinverymuch.

Ifsomeonedoesn’tobeypublicorder…Recently,Tianjinisbuildingthecivilizedcity.Atourschool,wearetalkingaboutthisissue.Thenwhatcanwedotohelpbuildthenationalcivilizedcity?First,Ithinkitispolitetosayhellowhenwemeetsomeone.Andalsoweshouldgetonwellwithourclassmates.Second,keepourclassroomsandcommunitycleansothatwecanliveinacomfortableenvironment.Andasastudent,weshouldhelpparentsdosomethingwecando.What’smore,whenweareinpublic,weshouldalwaysobeypublicorder.Andifsomeonedoesn’tobeypublicorder,it’sourdutytostophimandtellhimtodotherightthing.

Inmyopinion,Tianjinisourhometown,so

let’stryourbesttomakeitabetterplaceandhelpbuildthenationalcivilizedcity.英語(yǔ)作文萬(wàn)能的三段式“觀點(diǎn)--事例--總結(jié)“StandardofagoodcompositionNomistakes沒有錯(cuò)誤

Enoughcontent內(nèi)容充足Finelanguage語(yǔ)言豐富Beautifulhandwriting書寫工整1.Youshoulddo…2.Youhadbetterdo…3.It’sagoodideatodo…4.It’sbettertodo…5.It’simportant/necessarytodo…6.Let’stryourbesttodo…

7.It’sourdutytodo…

Giveadvice（提建議）Youaresupposedtodo…

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