考向68 獲取寫(xiě)作高分的六大綜合技能(解析版)-2022年高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)考點(diǎn)微

考向68獲取寫(xiě)作高分的六大綜合技能

一、寫(xiě)好簡(jiǎn)單句式，奠定語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)

1.主謂(SV):主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)(不及物動(dòng)詞)

此句式用來(lái)表達(dá)主語(yǔ)的動(dòng)作或狀態(tài)。其特點(diǎn)是句子的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為不及物動(dòng)詞，本身能表達(dá)完整的意思，可以根據(jù)

意思表達(dá)的需要添加副詞、介詞短語(yǔ)、狀語(yǔ)從句等。

【輸入經(jīng)典】

①Thebigdayhasfinallyarrived.

大日子終于到來(lái)了。

②Withbutterfliesinmystomach,Ibreatheddeeply.由于緊張，我深呼了一口氣。

【輸出佳句】

①上午七點(diǎn)鐘，我們從學(xué)校大門(mén)口出發(fā)。

At7a.m.westartedattheschoolgate.

②幾分鐘后，那只黑熊回來(lái)了。

Afewminuteslater,theblackbearcameback.

2.主系表(SVP):主語(yǔ)+系動(dòng)詞+表語(yǔ)

此句式側(cè)重說(shuō)明主語(yǔ)是什么或怎么樣，其中謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞需用系動(dòng)詞，表語(yǔ)多是形容詞，也可以是名詞、介詞短語(yǔ)、

不定式或動(dòng)名詞等。

【輸入經(jīng)典】

①ThecampuswasstillveryquietwhenIarrived.

當(dāng)我到達(dá)時(shí)，校園還很安靜。

②Thinkingismoreimportantthannote-takingandmemorizing.思考比記筆記和記憶更重要。

【輸出佳句】

①這次比賽的目的是鼓勵(lì)我們學(xué)生多關(guān)注身體鍛煉。

Thepurposeofthisracewastoinspireusstudentstopaymoreattentiontophysicalexercise.

②我的英語(yǔ)老師對(duì)我們既嚴(yán)格又有愛(ài)心。

MyEnglishteacherisbothstrictwithusandfullofloveforus.

3.主謂賓(SVO):主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)(及物動(dòng)詞)+賓語(yǔ)

此句式的特點(diǎn)為謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞均為及物動(dòng)詞，其后必須接一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)，即動(dòng)作的承受者，才能表達(dá)完整的意思。賓語(yǔ)可

以是名詞、代詞、動(dòng)名詞或不定式、賓語(yǔ)從句等。

【輸入經(jīng)典】

①Youwillhavetwooptionsforyourfuture.

你的未來(lái)可以有兩種選擇。

②Ihavedecidednottogotouniversity.

我己經(jīng)決定不去上大學(xué)。

【輸出佳句】

①我們的表演需要您的指導(dǎo)。

Weneedvourguidanceonourperformance.

②中國(guó)擁有悠久的歷史和豐富的文化。

Chinaenjoysalonghistoryandrichculture.

4.主謂賓賓(SVOO):主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+間賓+直賓

此句式中的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞必須接兩個(gè)賓語(yǔ)才能表達(dá)完整意思，其中一個(gè)是表示人的間接賓語(yǔ)，另一個(gè)是表示物的直接

賓語(yǔ).一般情況下間接賓語(yǔ)在前，直接賓語(yǔ)在后。

【輸入經(jīng)典】

①Giveyourfriendsahandwhentheyneedit.

當(dāng)朋友需要幫助時(shí)，就伸出你的援手。

②Whydidshesendmeawrongmessage?

為什么她給我發(fā)錯(cuò)誤的信息呢？

【輸出佳句】

①她表?yè)P(yáng)了約翰的提議并給他提供了一些建議。

ShepraisedJohnforhisproposal,andofTeredhimsomeadvice.

②自從我們上高中以來(lái)，他一直教我們英語(yǔ)。

HehasbeenteachingusEnglishsinceweenteredseniorhighschool.

5.主謂賓補(bǔ)(SVOC):主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)

此句式中的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞雖然是及物動(dòng)詞，但只接一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)還不能表達(dá)完整的意思，必須再加一個(gè)成分對(duì)賓語(yǔ)進(jìn)行補(bǔ)

充說(shuō)明才能使句子意思完整。賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)可以由名詞、動(dòng)詞、形容詞、副詞、動(dòng)詞-ing、動(dòng)詞不定式或動(dòng)詞的過(guò)

去分詞等充當(dāng)。

【輸入經(jīng)典】

①AlthoughIwasembarrassed,hiswordsmademealotmorerelaxed.

盡管我很尷尬，但是他的話讓我放松多了。

?Challengeslikethismightsometimesputyouunderpressure.

像這樣的挑戰(zhàn)有時(shí)可能會(huì)給你帶來(lái)壓力。

【輸出佳句】

①我們決定以優(yōu)秀同學(xué)為榜樣，讓我們自己對(duì)整個(gè)社會(huì)更有用。

Wearedeterminedtofollowtheexamplesofourexcellentschoolmatesandmakeourselvesusefultothewhole

society.

②最后，那頭熊在籬笆上撕了個(gè)洞，把頭伸了進(jìn)來(lái)。

Atlast,thebeartoreaholeinthefenceandputhisheadin.

6.Therebe句型

Therebe句型用來(lái)表達(dá)某處存在某人或某物，其基本結(jié)構(gòu)是“Therebe+主語(yǔ)”，動(dòng)詞be的人稱(chēng)和數(shù)要和后面的主

語(yǔ)保持一致。

【輸入經(jīng)典】

①TherearemanysimilarcitiesandtownsinChina.在中國(guó)有許多類(lèi)似的城鎮(zhèn)。

(2)Isthereanythingelseinparticularthatyouwouldliketosharewithus?

還有其他特別的你愿意和我們分享的嗎？

【輸出佳句】

①在我們周?chē)性S多值得尊重的人。

Therearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.

②有一條小河流經(jīng)這家農(nóng)場(chǎng)。

Thereisasmallriverflowingthroughthefarm.

二、錘煉高級(jí)詞匯，力求語(yǔ)言生動(dòng)

1.詞匯華麗變身：替換常用簡(jiǎn)單詞

(1)名詞變身

機(jī)會(huì)chance—opportunity

選擇choice—>altemative

課程course—>curriculum

影響effect—>influence/impact

后果result—consequence

缺點(diǎn)shortcoming—drawback

方法way—^approach

職業(yè)job—>career/profession

建議advice—>guidance

問(wèn)題problem—>issue

老人oldpeople—>theelderly/thcaged/seniorcitizens

青少年youngpeople—?youngsters/youths/adolescents

幾天前afewdaysago一theotherday

(2)動(dòng)詞變身

看見(jiàn)see—>catchsightof

遇見(jiàn)meet—comeacross

喜歡like—>haveapassionfbr/befbndof/haveanaffectionfor

引起cause—>leadto/resultin/giveriseto

擁有have—possess

提高develop/improve—promote

替代replace一substitute

注意到notice—spot

完成finish—accomplish

面對(duì)face—>befacedwith/beconfrontedwith

容忍bear^tolerate/putupwith

處理dealwith—>copewith

使某人意識(shí)到makesb.realize—>raisesb.'sawarenessof

決定decide^determine/makeupone'smind

考慮consider—>takeintoconsideration/account

應(yīng)該should—>besupposedto

理解understand—makesenseof/figureout

使用use—employ/makeuseof/takeadvantageof

道歉apologize一makeanapology

記住remember—*keepinmind

發(fā)生happen—>occur/comeabout

想起thinkoJoccurto/comeupwith

感謝thank—?appreciate

幫助某人helpsb.—>dosb.afavor

節(jié)省save—>setaside

參觀visit—*payavisitto

分發(fā)handout—?distribute

站起來(lái)standup—risetoone*sfeet

由……組成bemadeupof^consistof

習(xí)慣于beusedto一beaccustomedto

一定besuretodo—*beboundtodo

反對(duì)beagainst—^objectto

厭煩beboredwith—>befedupwith

忙于bebusywith—beoccupiedwith/beengagedin

聞名befamousfor—>haveareputationfor

感到舒服feelcomfortable—>feelatease

美化校園maketheschoolbeautifid一beautifytheschool

想做某事wanttodosth.-^intend/desiretodosth.

照看lookafter—?attendto

盡力做某事tryone'sbesttodosth.—>sparenoefforttodosth.

向某人尋求幫助asksb.forhelp—>turntosb.forhelp

(3)形容詞變身

令人驚奇的surprising一amazing/astonishing/shocking

貧窮的poor^needy/poverty/stricken

優(yōu)秀的excellent—^outstanding

明顯的obvious^apparent/evident

常見(jiàn)的common—>universal

充足的enough一adequate

勤奮的hard-working-^diligent

可用的useable—?available

困難的difficult—>challenging

堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的strong—tough

重要的important—>significant/vital

不可能的impossible—>outofthequestion

有趣的interesting—absorbing—striking/appcaling

小心謹(jǐn)慎的careful—>cautious

幸運(yùn)的lucky一fbrtunate

巨大的large—?enonnous

合適的proper—>appropriate

豐富的rich—abundant

古老的old—ancient

唯一的only-^unique

全部的whole—>entire

富裕的rich—wealthy

許多的many—>alargequantityof

有空的available

有益處的beuseful—beofbenefit

高興的glad一delighted

激動(dòng)的excited—>thrilled

壞的bad—disgusting/awfUl

著名的famous—distinguished

(4)其他詞類(lèi)變身

突然suddenly—>allofasudden

立即immediately—>inaflash

有時(shí)sometimes^occasionally/onceinawhile/fromtimetotime

另外；況且besides—>inaddition/what^more/moreover

因此so—>therefbre

第一；首先f(wàn)irst—>tobeginwith/startwith

第二；其次second—inaddition/what^more

最終finally—>eventually

關(guān)于about—^concerning

也too—>aswell

否則or—?otherwise

事實(shí)上infact—>asamatteroffact

故意地onpurpose—bydesign/deliberately

總之inaword—>tosumup/inconclusion/insummary

因?yàn)閎ecauseoJonaccountof/dueto/owingto/thanksto

【輸入經(jīng)典】

①Ontheonehand,toomuchpraisemightleadtochildren'slackofenthusiasmtoexplorenewthings,fortheyare

afraidtheywon'tmeetparents*expectations.

?Consideringtheenormousbenefits,whichwecanearnsteadilyfromtennispractice,includingpreventingus

fromgettingshortsightedandhelpinguskeepphysicallyhealthy,wearelostintrainingcourse.

【輸出佳句】

①Thespecialdayallowspeopletoshowtheirloveandaffectionfor（對(duì)...表達(dá)愛(ài)和情感）theirfathers.

②It'sadvisablc/wise（是明智的）forpeopletousetheircell-phonesmoreapprspriatelv/properly（更恰當(dāng)?shù)兀?

③Withoutsufficientpreparation（沒(méi)有充分準(zhǔn)備）,youcanhardlyexpecttoanswerallthequestionscorrectlyand

obtainsatisfactorymarks,letalonebeadmittedintoadesirableuniversity（夢(mèng)想的大學(xué)）.

④TracysaidshehadalreadyinformedSusanof（通知蘇珊）thechangeoftheappointment.

?PeoplegenerallythoughtitimpossiblefortheChineseteamtowinthechampionshipintheRioOlympicGames,but

theyovercameman、hurdles（克服許多障而導(dǎo)）andeventuallyworkedmiracles/wonders（最終倉(cāng)U造了奇跡）.

⑥D(zhuǎn)ramaNightisscheduledto（預(yù)定）beheldontheeveningofnextFridayinthetheatrehall.

?Additionally（止匕夕卜），havingbeenawardedscholarshiptwiceinourschool,Ihaveexcellentacademic

performance（極好的學(xué)術(shù)成就）.

⑧Thisphenomenonhasbecomeaccncem/focus（成為焦點(diǎn)）wemustfacetodaybecauseofmanyserious

consequences（許多嚴(yán)重后果）causedbyimproperuseofcell-phones.

2.變化所用詞的詞性

在作文中，可以通過(guò)改變一個(gè)詞的詞性，使文章富有變化，讓閱卷者感受到考生對(duì)詞匯各種用法的掌握水

平和靈活運(yùn)用的程度。常見(jiàn)的變化詞性的策略有名詞變動(dòng)詞、動(dòng)詞變名詞、形容詞變名詞等。

(1)名詞變動(dòng)詞

Peopleareconcernedaboutthegradualdisappearanceofthetraditionalvalues.

—Peopleareconcernedbecausethetraditionalvaluesaregraduallydisappearing.

傳統(tǒng)價(jià)值觀正在漸漸地消亡，這讓人們很擔(dān)憂。

(2)動(dòng)詞變名詞

Afterwatchinghisperformance,Ifoundhecouldreallydanceverywell.

—?Afterwatchinghisperformance,Ifoundhimareallygooddancer.

看了他的表演之后，我發(fā)現(xiàn)他跳舞跳得很棒。

(3)形容詞變名詞

IwrotealettertoTomtothankhimforhisbeingsokind.

—?IwrotealettertoTomtothankhimforhiskindness.

我寫(xiě)信給湯姆對(duì)他的善良表示感謝。

3.善用短語(yǔ)：富有變化，引人入勝

漢語(yǔ)高級(jí)短語(yǔ)

努力strugglefor=strivefbr=sparenoeffortsfbr

從事embarkon=setabout=goinfbr

在當(dāng)代incontemporarysociety=inpresent-daysociety=inthisdayandage

大量的ahostof=agreatnumberof=alargeamountof

更糟糕的是whal'sworse=worsestill=tomakemattersworse

遇見(jiàn)；偶遇meet=runinto=comeacross=meetwith

依我看inmyopinion=asfarasVmconcerned=frommypointofview

除了……之外（還

besides=inadditionto=apartfrom=aswellas=alongwith

有）

一方面，另一方面ononehand,ontheotherhand=fbronething,fbranotherthing

高度評(píng)價(jià)thinkhighlyof=singhighpraisefor=thinkwellof

把...考慮在內(nèi)take...intoconsideration=take...intoaccount

有資格的；有能力

befitfbr=beequalto=bequalifiedfor=becompetentin

的；勝任的

參加takepartin/participatein

一些如何...的

someadvice/tips/suggestionsonhowto...

建議

對(duì)……感到緊張feelnervous/anxiousabout

克服緊張；緩解ease/overcome/getover

焦慮nervousness/relieveanxiety

樹(shù)立信心；對(duì)自

buildupconfidence/haveconfidenceinyourself/beconfidentaboutyourself

己有信心

對(duì)……有益的beofgreatbenefit=bebeneficialto

對(duì)……有害的；

doharmto/dodamageto=beharmfulto

對(duì)……有損害的

接觸到；有機(jī)會(huì)

gain/haveaccessto=beaccessibleto

使用

對(duì)...（不）方便beconvenient/inconvenientforsb.todo=bringconvenience

的/inconveniencetosb.

對(duì)……有影響/作

haveaneffect/influence/impacton.../makeadifferencetosb.

用

【輸入經(jīng)典】

?Forexample,paper-cuttingandChineseknotsareallfeasiblemethodsofintroducingourculture,whicharealso

moreconvenienttoorganize.

②ThereasonswhyIamqualifiedforthejobareasfollows.

【輸出佳句】

①Frommypointofview（我認(rèn)為）,it'struethatcell-phonesbringuslotsofbenefitsandconvenience,butonlywhen

they'reusedmoreappropriatedv（恰當(dāng)?shù)兀ヽantheyserveusbetter.

②Allmyteachersandclassmatessinghiqhpraiseformyproficiency（高度贊揚(yáng)我的熟練）inbothChineseand

English.

③Takingallyourrequirementsintoaccuunt/consideratiuii（考慮至U你的全部要求）IfirmlybelieveI'mtheright

personyou'relookingfbr.

@Asforaccommodation,IprefertolivewithalocalfamilybecauseIwanttoimprovemyEnglishandexperience

authenticAmericanculturecloseup（近距離體驗(yàn)真實(shí)的美國(guó)文化）.

⑤Youareoptimisticaboutlifeandalwayshaveconfidence,whateverdifficultyyoumayencounter（遇見(jiàn)）,whichhelps

youstandoutamongtheclassmates.

⑥Withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingstandards（隨著人們生活水平的提高）,cell-phonesarefloodingintoour

life.

?Wearesorryforanyinconveniencethatwe'Hbrinitnyou（給您帶來(lái)的不便）.Thanksforyourunderstanding.

?Nowadays,thesmartphoneshavefoundtheirwaytoeveryfamilyandareplayingaveryimportantroleinourlife.

Theyarebeneficialtousinmanyways.However,theyalsodoharmtousmentallyandphysically（有'害于我們的身

心健康）.

⑨Inaddition,seldomdoIhavetimetokeepmyparentscompany,soIdecidetohelpmyparentswithsomehousework

torelease/ease/lessen/reducetheirpressure（緩解他們的壓力）whichIthinkisofbenefittoenhancingthe

relationship（加強(qiáng)關(guān)系）betweenmyfamilymembers.

三、運(yùn)用復(fù)雜句式，增添語(yǔ)言內(nèi)涵

1.句子形式多樣化：根據(jù)表達(dá)的需求，可以采用多種句式，這樣既能恰當(dāng)表達(dá)，又能避免形式單一

【輸入經(jīng)典】

?Theyweresoheavythatwecouldn'tliftthematfirst,（so...that...句型）

?Thereisnodoubtthatitisunwisetodependcompletelyontheratingsinconsumption.（同位語(yǔ)從句）

【輸出佳句】

①I(mǎi)nrecentyears,moreandmorepeoplestarttoprotectourenvironment,whichmakesourenvironmentmoreandmore

colorful.

—recentyears,withmoreandmorepeoplestartingtoprotectourenvironment,ourenvironmentisbecoming

moreandmorecolorful.（with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）

—>Inrecentyears,thereacesomanypeoplewhostarttoprotectourenvironmentthatourenvironmentisbecoming

moreandmorecolorful,（therebe句式）

②Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.

—Studyhardandyouwillmakerapid（并歹U句）

2.使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式，句子凝練高端

【輸入經(jīng)典】

①Afterlearningit,I'msureV11haveabetterunderstandingofthedifferencesandsimilaritiesbetweenChinese

cultureandWesternculture.

②Onarrivingattheteahouse,theforeignstudentswereimpressedbytheuniqueteapotsandteacups.

【輸出佳句】

①Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.（非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞）

—*Shewalkedoutofthelab,followedbymonystudents.

②Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.（非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞）

—>Theywentbacktoschool,singinqandlauching.

3.運(yùn)用定語(yǔ)從句，增加細(xì)節(jié)，填補(bǔ)內(nèi)容

【輸入經(jīng)典】

?Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek,duringwhichweinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofevery

aspectofschoollife.

②Iameagertoinviteyoutojoinourteamfortheupcomingevent,inwhichyouwilldemonstrateyourabilityand

makeacquaintancewithmorefriendswiththesameinterest.

【輸出佳句】

①You'dbettermakefullpreparationsbeforeclassandhaveabriefunderstandingofthehistoryofTangDynasty,which

makesiteasyforyoutog。throughtheclass（使你容易通過(guò)這門(mén)課）.

?Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChinese

culture（從中你對(duì)中國(guó)文化會(huì)有更清晰的認(rèn)識(shí)）.

（3）1havefoundaflatforyouonFangcaoStreetnearJianxinChineseschool.Itisonthethirdfloorwiththreerooms,one

ofwhichisbedroom（其中一個(gè)是臥室）,andtheothertwoarebathroomandkitchen.

4.巧用倒裝，增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力

【輸入經(jīng)典】

?Notonlywillourclub,sworksbedisplayed,butwealsohaveavaluablesetofpaper-cuttingcreatedbyafamous

artistofthisfield.

②NotonlydidyouhelpimprovemyEnglish,butyoualsogavememoreconfidenceinlearning.

③NextcamethemomentwhenIaskedthemtohaveatrythemselves.

【輸出佳句】

①Thoughrmweak,V11maketheeffort.（倒裝）

—Weakas/thoughIam,I'11maketheeffort.

②HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.（倒裝）

—?NusoonerhadhecomebackfromBeiiingthanhewassentabroad.

5.恰當(dāng)使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句，增強(qiáng)說(shuō)服力

【輸入經(jīng)典】

?ItisyouwhotaughtmehowtolearnEnglishwell.

②ItwasonFridaythatouractivitybegan.

【輸出佳句】

①Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.（強(qiáng)調(diào)句）

—?Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

②Itisworkinginteamsinsteadofonmyownthathasfreedmeoftroubleandmademyworkmoreefficient.（強(qiáng)調(diào)句）

6.自如應(yīng)用各種名詞性從句，精彩紛呈

【輸入經(jīng)典】

①I(mǎi)fyouareinterestedinwhatIhavestatedabove,signuponourschoolwebsitebeforeSeptember1st.

②That'swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverwillbeabetterchoice.

【輸出佳句】

@Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（主語(yǔ)從句）

—Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.

②IhavejustfoundthatIhavetoattendanimportantmeetingthatafternoon（我那天下午得參加一個(gè)重要會(huì)議）.

7.withorwithout精彩點(diǎn)綴，妙不可言

【輸入經(jīng)典】

?Moreover,withthestadiumsetup,awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld,ofwhichping-pong,

footballaswellasrunningcompetitionsenjoygreatpopularity.

②Withoutanyhesitation,webegantowork.

【輸出佳句】

?Asanoldsayinggoes,livingwithoutadearandachievableaim（沒(méi)有清晰可達(dá)到的目標(biāo)）islikesailingwithouta

compass.

②Ican，tthankyouenoughforyourgeneroushelp,withoutwhichIcoiildn'thavemadesuchgreetprogress（沒(méi)有

這些幫助我不能獲得這么大的進(jìn)步）.

8.巧用副詞，充分表情達(dá)意

【輸入經(jīng)典】

①I(mǎi)amexceedinglydelightedtohearfromyou.

②Igenuinelyhopethatyoucansqueezesometimeforourfestivalandhavefunwithus.

【輸出佳句】

①Shepatieetlv（耐心地）explainedalltherulestothestudentsandrequiredeveryonetofollowthem.

②Wewereperfectly（完全地）satisfiedwiththeresultoftheexperiment.

9.變主動(dòng)為被動(dòng)，凸顯英語(yǔ)思維

【輸入經(jīng)典】

①M(fèi)yfathergavemeanewbookonmybirthday.

-+Iwasgivenanewbook（bymyfather）onmybirthday.（間接賓語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)）

—>Anewbookwasgiventome（bymyfather）onmybirthday.（直接賓語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)）

@Andsomeworld-famousplayerswillbeinvitedtogivelessons.

【輸出佳句】

①Atmostfivebookscanbeborrowed（可以被借用）atatimeandtheycanbekept（可以保存）fortendays.

②Youareallowed（被允許）abouttenminutestoprepareforthework.

10.語(yǔ)氣委婉而中肯，易于接受

【輸入經(jīng)典】

①I(mǎi)fyouhavefurtherquestions,pleasefeelfreetoletmeknow.

（2）1sincerelyhopeyoucansetasidesometimefortheartfeast.

【輸出佳句】

①I(mǎi)wonderifyoucouldtellme（你能否告訴我）whatbooksIneedtoreadandtherequirementsofmyhomework.

②Whatdoyouthinkofit?Areyousatisfiedwithit?Ifnot,pleasetellmeasquicklyaspossible（請(qǐng)盡快告訴我）.

四、精準(zhǔn)審題謀篇，筆下運(yùn)籌帷幄

（2020?全國(guó)HI卷改編）

假定你是李華，你和同學(xué)根據(jù)英語(yǔ)課文改編了一個(gè)短劇，給外教MissEvans寫(xiě)一封郵件，請(qǐng)她幫忙指導(dǎo)。郵

件內(nèi)容包括：

1.劇情簡(jiǎn)介；

2.指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容；

3.商定時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。

【審題立意?確定中心】

體裁求助信

時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)

人稱(chēng)Iandyou

結(jié)構(gòu)三段或四段

1.故事梗概

要點(diǎn)

2.求助內(nèi)容

【結(jié)構(gòu)清晰?層次分明】

'Para1：thepurposeofwriting

Para2：theintroductionoftheplay

writing：A

Para3：askingforadvice

<Para4：endingandyourwishes

【行云流水?斐然成章】

rmwritingtoaskforyourhelpwithourEnglishshortplayadaptedfromourEnglishtextbook.

ThestorystartswithaboynamedHuckleberryFinn,whoranawayfromhomeandlivedwithhisfriendJim,a

formerslave,onaraftontheMississippiRiver.ThenFinnwascheatedbytwomen,withhisraftstolenandJim

soldtoafarm.FinnandhisfriendTomSawyermadeaplantosaveJimfromthefarm.Atlasttheymanagedtofree

Jim.

Iwonderifyouwouldliketogiveussomeadvice.Thevocabularyandgrammaroftheplotneedtobeadjusted,

andwealsoneedyourguidanceonourperfbnnance.Ifpossible,shallwemeetyouinyourofficeat10a.m.

tomorrow?

Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestregards!

Yourstruly,

LiHua

五、做好起承轉(zhuǎn)合，行文美不勝收

完成了審題的過(guò)程，有了具體要點(diǎn)和整體布局后，就要整合信息點(diǎn)，讓龐雜的內(nèi)容變得富有邏輯性和層

次感。在句與句內(nèi)在銜接的基礎(chǔ)上，做到段落間的起承轉(zhuǎn)合，使文章有整體性、連貫性。學(xué)會(huì)正確使用連接詞、

銜接句，能為寫(xiě)作助一臂之力。

I.用好連接詞

在句與句之間、段與段之間恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┏猩蠁⑾碌倪B接性詞語(yǔ)是語(yǔ)言連貫性得以實(shí)現(xiàn)的最常用手段。連

接性詞語(yǔ)歸納如下：

1.起始關(guān)系：tobeginwith,firstofall,asweallknow,asisknown,asisshownin...,accordingto等。

Asweallknow,goodlearninghabitscontributetoefficientstudy.

2.時(shí)間順序：atthebeginning,then,later,finally,atlast,intheend,afterwards,sincethen,afterthat,immediately,

meanwhile等。

Atthebeginning,Icollectedallthethingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.ThenIwipedthedustoffall

thefurniture.Afterthat,Imoppedthefloor.

3.條件關(guān)系：if,unless,incase(of),as/solongas,onconditionthat,provided(lhat)等。

Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldmeetmyuncleattheairport.

4.轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：but,yet,however,while,otherwise,onthecontrary,nevertheless等。

However,notuntilthematchwasoverdidwerealizethatwelostit.

5.因果關(guān)系：because,as,since,for,thanksto,dueto,asaresultof,so,therefore,asaresult/consequence等。

Therefore,thereisnoreasonforustolookdownuponordinaryjobs.

6.并歹!J關(guān)系：and,or,aswellas,notonly...butalso...,either...or...,not...but...,neither...nor...等。

WewillhaveagoodtimethereandIwillsendyousomephotostakenthere.

7.遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：besides,what'smore,moreover,furthermore,what'sworse,stillless,tomakemattersworse,worsestill,

moreimportantly等。

Manyofthemcanhardlylookafterthemselves,stilllessmanagetheirownlives.

8.歹U舉事實(shí)：suchas,forexample/instance,take...forexample,thatistosay,asfollows,inotherwords,ontheone

hand...ontheotherhand...,foronething...foranother...等。

Ontheonehand,Icanearnsomemoneybydoingittohelpmyparents;ontheotherhand,Icangainsomeexperience

fromit,whichwilldogoodtomyfuturelife.

9.表示觀點(diǎn)：inmyopinion,inmyview,frommypointofview,asfarasIamconcerned,asforme,personally等。

AsfarasIamconcerned,theystandforlove,friendshipandunity.

10.總結(jié)：inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,tosumup,allinall,onthewhole,ingeneral,generallyspeaking等。

Allinall,travelingisthebestchoiceforustoenrichourlivesandgetreadyforthenewchallenges.

II.寫(xiě)好銜接句

1.引出開(kāi)頭

Itiswellknowntousthat...

我們都知道……

Asfarasmyknowledgeisconcerned...

據(jù)我所知……

Recentlytheproblemof...hasbeenbroughtintofocus.

=Nowadaysthereisgrowingconcernovertheproblemof...

最近……問(wèn)題引起了關(guān)注

2.表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)

People'sviewson...varyfrompersontoperson.Someholdthat...However,othersbelievethat...

Peoplemayhavedifferentopinionson...

人們對(duì)……可能會(huì)持有不同見(jiàn)解

3.表示結(jié)尾

Inshort,itcanbesaidthat...

總之，……意思是……

Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove,wecancometotheconclusionthat...

從上面提到的，我們可以得出結(jié)論……

4.提出建議

Itishightimethatweputanendtothetrend.

該是我們停止這一趨勢(shì)的時(shí)候了。

Onlyinthiswaycanwe...

只有這樣，我們才能……。

5.預(yù)示后果

Obviously,ifwedon'tcontroltheproblem,thechancesarethat...willleadusindanger.

6.表示觀點(diǎn)

AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion...

就我來(lái)說(shuō)……

7.給出原因或順序

Foronething,…foranotherthing,

Ontheonehand,...ontheotherhand...

一方面……另一方面……

六、恰當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，語(yǔ)言魅力動(dòng)人

根據(jù)高考英語(yǔ)作文的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，作文被分成了五個(gè)檔次。其中分?jǐn)?shù)較高的檔次對(duì)于考生作文的要求都涉及

了覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、使用較多語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯、有效使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分。其中，一個(gè)重要的方面就是在

作文中要注意細(xì)節(jié)的體現(xiàn)。具體方法如下：

1.列舉具體的實(shí)例進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明

⑴我們青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護(hù)環(huán)境、拯救地球。

Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.

一Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,wecanuse

recyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,refusetousesingle-useproducts,plantmoretreesandsavewaterand

energy.

（2）我要花一些時(shí)間和父母在一起。

r11spendsometimestayingwithmyparents.

—*r11spendsometimestayingwithmyparents,chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework.

（3）我想找一個(gè)像我一樣喜歡旅行的筆友。

Iwouldliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.

—>1wouldliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.Ifpossible,wecantraveltogetheror

sharetraveling.

2.增添與所寫(xiě)信息相關(guān)的神態(tài)、動(dòng)作、心理描寫(xiě)以及背景渲染等內(nèi)容

（1）我有時(shí)去村西的小河游泳。

Iwentswimmingintheriverinthewestofthevillagenowandthen.

—Iwentswimmingintheriverinthewestofthevillagenowandthen.Thewaterintheriverwasveryclear.（背

景渲染）

—*Weatherpermitting,Iwentswimmingintheriverinthewestofthevillagenowandthen.（相關(guān)背景）

⑵我發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些不良行為。

Ifoundsomebadbehavior.

—>1foundsomebadbehavior.Somepeoplescribbledonthewall;someplayedsocceronthelawnandsome

peoplethrewrubbisheverywhere.（相關(guān)行為描述）

3.增加相關(guān)信息的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等內(nèi)容

（1）我要和父母一起去超市購(gòu)物。

rmgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarket.

—mgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarketandwon,tbebackuntilabout5:00inthe

afternoon.（增加時(shí)間）

⑵我已經(jīng)帶來(lái)了你讓我歸還的這兩本書(shū)。

Ihavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturn.

一IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.（增加地點(diǎn)）

4.適當(dāng)增加與所給信息相關(guān)的原因、結(jié)果、條件、讓步、手段、目的、地點(diǎn)等內(nèi)容

（1）假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Henry最近來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你高考后的暑假安排。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一封回信，說(shuō)明

你的計(jì)劃，并簡(jiǎn)述理由。

要點(diǎn)：［休息;2.讀書(shū);3.參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)。

①I(mǎi)needagoodrest.V11dosomereading.

—IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears.Ofcourse,I'11dosomereading

forfun,andforknowledgeaswell.（因果關(guān)系）

②I'11takepartinsomesocialactivities.

—IfIhavefreetime,V11takepartinsomesocialactivities.（條件狀語(yǔ)）

—>Ifpossible,I'11takepartinsomesocialactivities.（條件狀語(yǔ)）

—>Ifpossible,I'IItakepartinsomesocialactivitiessothat/inorderthatIcanknowmoreaboutsociety.（結(jié)果狀

語(yǔ)）

（2）Tracy來(lái)電話說(shuō)和你在咖啡屋（BoltonCoffee）的見(jiàn)面取消。

Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldn'tmeetyouatBoltonCoffee.

—>Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldn'tmeetyouatBoltonCoffeeasshehadsomethingimportanttodo.（原因狀

語(yǔ)）

5.結(jié)尾適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫(xiě)出個(gè)人感受、評(píng)價(jià)、希望、愿景、倡議等

（l）TiredasIwasthissummerholiday,Ifeltveryhappyforwhat1did.（個(gè)人感受）

（2）AsfarasTmconcerned,suchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful.（評(píng)價(jià)）

（3）Inaword,ifshewouldliketolearnChinese,Ihopeshewilldoitwell.（愿景）

（4）Asstudents,it'sourdutytoprotectourschoolenvironmentandmakeitclean.（倡議）

【檢測(cè)訓(xùn)練】

1.假定你是李華，你校原定于本周三舉辦的排球比賽延期，請(qǐng)告知你的國(guó)際班朋友Henry,內(nèi)容包括：

1.寫(xiě)信目