2024年中考英語書面表達類型模版與能力拔尖（全國）08.祝賀信（解析版）

備戰(zhàn)2024年中考英語書面表達類型模版與能力拔尖必備08祝賀信【真題示例】（2018·北京海淀·統(tǒng)考一模）假如你是李華，在你的幫助下，交換生Tom在中文演講比賽中獲得了一等獎。請你給他寫一封祝賀信，表達你的真誠祝賀，回憶他比賽時的表現(xiàn)，以及你從他身上學(xué)到了什么。提示詞語：win，prize，speechcompetition，pronounce，practice提示問題：WhydoyoucongratulateTom?Whatmadehimsuccessfulinthecompetition?Whatcanyoulearnfromhim?【參考范文】DearTom,IamveryhappytoknowthatyouwonthefirstprizeintheChinesespeechcompetition,soI’mwritingtocongratulateyouonyourwonderfulperformance.YoudidagoodjobintheChinesespeechcompetition.Youpronouncedreallywellduringyourspeechandyourvoicewasbeautiful.Youspokesofluentlythatweallfeltproudofyou.What’smore,weweresurprisedatyourrichandmeaningfulcontents.Asyourbestfriend,Iknowyoutriedyourbestforthecompetition.Youkeptpracticingyourspeecheverydayinordertomakeitbetter.Iknowitisimportanttokeepontryingandnevertogiveup.IhopeIcanbesuccessfullikeyouonedayinthefuture.Yours,LiHua【寫作分析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含題目中所提供的所有信息。靈活運用各種句式，采用不同的表達方式將各個要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確，簡潔。最后必須認真查驗是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。【寫作反思】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如：tryone’s

best;What’smore,feelproudof；inorderto；giveup；keepontrying.；Itisimportanttokeepontryingandnevertogiveup等；so；so···that等連詞的運用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯的范文?！颈乇尘涫健块_頭常用句式Itwasexcitingnewsformetolearnof…Pleaseacceptmysincere/hearty/warmcongratulationson…Itwasagreatpleasuretosendyoumycongratulationson…Iwasdelightedtolearnofyoursuccess/achievementsin…Iamreallyhappytolearnthatyouhavebeenelected…結(jié)尾常用句式Wishyougoodluck!Wewishtoshareyourhonorandjoy.Iwishyousuccessandfulfillmentintheyearsahead.Mayallgowonderfullyinyournewpost!Mayeveryhappinessbeyours!Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture/successfulcareer!Mayeachsucceedingyearbringyougreathappinessandprosperity.Everygoodwishtoyouformuchhealth,happiness,andprosperity!【模版示例】模板①Dear______,Ihavelearnedwithdelightthatyou______（祝賀事由）.Iwouldliketoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationson______.Youmustbe______.AndIfeelveryhappyforyou.______（所取得的成績）isquiteexcitingnews!Iknowthisissurelyowingto______（被祝賀人過去的努力）.Itisarewardyourichlydeserveforyour______（被祝賀人的優(yōu)點）.Kindlyletmeknowwhenyou______（咨詢對方何時有空）.Ihope______（表達自己的愿望）.Mybestwishesforyourfurthersuccess.Yourssincerely,LiHua模板②Dear_____________,Goodnewstravelsfast!Itwasdelightfulformetohearthat______________.Pleaseacceptmysincerecongratulationstoyour___________.Ihavebeenwatchingyourprogresswithadmirationalltheyears,andIknowmorethananyoneelsehowmucheffortyouhaveputin.Nowyouprovetomeamaturedandwell-rounded________ineveryrespect.Judgingfromyourcurrentsuccess/achievement,Iamconfidentthatinthefuture___________.Mayalltheyearsaheadfulfillyourdreams!Yourssincerely,LiHua模板③Dear_____________,Congratulationsonyour_______.IknowhowhardyouhavebeenworkingandIamveryproudofyouforyourachievement.Iunderstandforsurethatitisyourhardwork/yourexcellentabilitythatleadsyoutothecurrentsuccess.Thisnewposition,ontheotherhand,addsanewdimensiontoyourlifeandisboundto________.What’smore,Ialsobelievethat.Mayallgoesbeautifullyinyournewpost!Yourssincerely,LiHua【突破策略】日常生活中，無論是親朋好友畢業(yè)、晉升、獲獎、開業(yè)，還是訂婚、結(jié)婚、生日，都需要寫上一封信向?qū)Ψ奖硎咀ＹR。信中應(yīng)表示為對方而高興。祝賀信應(yīng)當(dāng)充滿真誠和熱情，收信人讀后會感到喜悅和振奮。祝賀信既可以正式寫，也可以隨便寫，具體視場合而定。對不太熟悉的朋友適合正式寫，以表示禮貌和尊重；對熟悉的朋友則可以隨便一些。但無論采用哪種方式，祝祝賀信是社交中的一種禮儀性信函。祝賀信通常包括以下幾個方面的內(nèi)容：說明祝賀事由，表達熱烈、誠摯的祝賀；圍繞祝賀事件表述賀喜內(nèi)容；表達美好祝福。祝賀信寫作分三步走:說明事由并表達自己衷心的祝賀->展開評論事件、贊揚收信人->再次表達良好祝愿。在寫作主要內(nèi)容的時候，可以重點贊揚一下當(dāng)事人的優(yōu)秀能力和取得成就的原因、并展望他將來的美好發(fā)展前景等。賀信必須表達由衷的感情，而且寫信要及時。Dear_______,(1)Ihavelearnedwithdelightthatyou______.(2)Iwouldliketoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationson____.(3)Youmustbeveryproudofyour______.(4)AndIfeelveryhappyforyou.(5)_____isquiteexcitingnews!(6)Youarereally__.(7)Iknowthisissurelyowingto___.(8)Itisarewardyoudeserveforyour__.(9)Withyour_____,Iamsurethatyouwillbeasuccessinwhateveryouundertake.(10)Kindlyletmeknowwhenyou____.(11)Ihope.(12)Mybestwishesforyourfurthersuccess.SincerelyYours,LiHua(1)獲悉值得祝賀的消息，說出祝賀事由(2)表達祝賀(3)描述對方的心情(4)表達自己的心情(5)被祝賀人所取得的成績(6)對對方的贊美(7)對方取得成績的原因(8)對對方取得成績的肯定，說出被祝賀人的優(yōu)點(9)被祝賀人的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)，表達對對方的祝福(10)咨詢對方的情況和時間(11)表達愿望(12)表達自己真誠的祝福【寫作演練】1．假如你是學(xué)生李明，請根據(jù)提示中所給出的要點，給兩個月后升入重點高中的自己寫一封信。提示：1.表達衷心祝賀；2.期望全面發(fā)展；3.做好未來規(guī)劃。注意：（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名，校名和人名；（2）100詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearLiMing,Bythetimeyoureadthisletter,youwillbeinhighschool.Howisitgoing?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Takecare,LiMing【參考范文】DearLiMing,Bythetimeyoureadthisletter,youwillbeinhighschool.Howisitgoing?I’dliketocongratulateyoufirst.Yourhardworkhaspaidoffandyou’veachievedyourgoalofgettingintoyourideal(理想的)highschool.Ihopeyoucancontinuetofocusonyourstudiesandachievegreatersuccess.Butdon’tforgetthatthere’smoretolifethanschool.It’sgoodtodevelopotherinterests,suchasplayingsportsormusic.Learntostudymoreefficiently(高效地)anduseyoursparetimetorelaxandenjoyyourself.Youcanevenstarttomakeaplanforyourfuture.Youdon’thavetoknowexactlywhatyouwanttodo—butyoucanthinkaboutit.Whatareyougoodat?Whatdoyouliketodo?Wheredoyouwanttogotoschoolinthefuture?Theseareallthingstoconsider.Takecare,LiMing【寫作解析】1.題干解讀：本文屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，寫作時要按信的格式來寫，在寫作時應(yīng)承接短文開頭，根據(jù)漢語提示的內(nèi)容，給兩個月后升入重點高中的自己寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括：表達對自己的祝賀；期望全面發(fā)展；做好未來規(guī)劃。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一和第二人稱為主來敘述內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主；在敘述內(nèi)容時，力求語句通順，敘述完整，保證條理清晰，行文連貫。2．假設(shè)你是王林，Carl是你在英國交流學(xué)校的好朋友。讀下面的報道，然后寫一封祝賀信，祝賀Carl在國家長跑比賽中獲得的成績。注意：1.不少于60詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。2.congratulations

n.祝賀SunshineMiddleSchoolboyCarl,14,haswonthefirstplaceinthecountryschools’long-distanceraceyesterday.Hekeptexercisingeverydayinordertoperformwellintherace.Finallyhesucceeded.Theprizeis￡2000forCarl’sschooland￡500forCarl.Hetoldthereportersthathewouldprobablyspendhismoneyonafamilyholiday.DearCarl,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,WangLin【答案】DearCarl,Iamverygladtoknowthatyouwonthefirstplaceinthecountryschools’long-distancerace.Congratulations!Youaresogreat!Allyourhardworkhaspaidoff.SunshineMiddleSchoolisproudofyou.Asyourfriend,Ialsotakeprideinyoursuccess.Youaresotiredthatyouneedarest.Ilearnthatyouwillspendaholidaywithyourfamily.Itwillbehelpfultoyourhealth,Ithink.Wishyouagoodholiday!Yours,WangLin【寫作解析】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于書信作文寫作，要求按照所給的報道，寫一封祝賀信，祝賀Carl在國家長跑比賽中獲得的成績。注意寫作時要點要齊全，同時也可進行合理而又緊扣主題的發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一、二人稱來敘述；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主；信的稱呼和落款已給出，寫作時，注意寫信的格式，根據(jù)那篇報道的提示，祝賀Carl在國家長跑比賽中獲得的成績；文中一定要包含報道中提到的所有要點；可以運用一些短語和常用句型為文章增添色彩；注意單詞書寫的準(zhǔn)確度，語法運用的準(zhǔn)確度，上下文注意連接的流暢度，以及邏輯合理。3．假定你是李華，收到英國筆友Harry的郵件，獲悉他在機器人制作比賽中獲獎。請根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容給他回復(fù)。詞數(shù)80左右。參考詞匯：congratulation祝賀注意事項：1.回復(fù)郵件時可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，郵件格式已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請勿在文中使用真實的姓名、校名及地名。DearHarry,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________