2023年新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫提分技能09 讀后續(xù)寫：脫離困境型（故事構(gòu)造七大絕招）

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫脫離困境型（故事構(gòu)造“七大絕招”）教學(xué)課件第一絕招：環(huán)境描寫（惡劣）——波濤洶涌：1.當(dāng)我繼續(xù)往前漂的時(shí)候，一個(gè)巨浪呼嘯著向我們逼近。AsIfloatedon,ahugewave(一個(gè)巨浪)whistled(呼嘯而來)andapproachedus.2.大風(fēng)從耳邊呼嘯而過，我們被推離海岸越來越遠(yuǎn)。Thebigwindroaredthroughourears(在耳邊咆哮),andwewerepushedawayfromtheshorefartherandfarther.3.我所有的感覺都告訴我一個(gè)大浪就要來了。Allmysensestoldmethatabigwavewasabouttocome.(即將來臨)4.一個(gè)看似猛烈的海浪正向我們襲來。Apowerful-looking(看似猛烈的)wavewascomingtowardsus.

(靠近我們)——鯊魚的可怕：.那是一條鯊魚，一條巨大的鯊魚，在離她不遠(yuǎn)的地方游來游去。Itwasashark,amassivesharkthatwasswimmingaround,notfarawayfromher.2.鯊魚的下顎張開，露出一排排鋒利的牙齒。Theshark’sjawsopenedwide,showingrowsofsharpteeth.——陸地上的水：1.雨滴瘋狂地打在擋風(fēng)玻璃上，天空籠罩在一片灰色之中。Splashingraindropshitthewindshieldfranticallyandtheskieswereoverhungwithablanketofgrey,.2.水不停地漲，仿佛要把我活吞下去。Thewaterkeptrising,asifitwould

engulf

mealive.3.不幸的是，水涌了進(jìn)來，水漲到了我的腰上?！驹谒镄凶撸ú豢赡躵ush,dash）】Unfortunately,thewaterpouredinandcreptuponmywaist.

——推薦句型：1.Thewindblows/whistles/howls/picksup/whipsthroughsth/sweepsacrosssth.風(fēng)刮/颼颼的刮/呼嘯而過/愈刮愈大/刮過……/掠過……2.Theyweregetting

drenchedbyicywater.他們被冰冷的水澆透了。3.Theheavyrainwasviolently

beating

againstthewindow.大雨瘋狂地?fù)舸虼皯簟?.Therain

drummed

ontheroofofthebuilding.雨不停地?fù)舸蛑款A(yù)。5.Thefuriousstormis

grumbling

outside.狂風(fēng)暴雨在室外呼嘯著?！扑]句型：6.Theicywindstarted

howling,

stinging

myface.寒風(fēng)開始咆哮，刺痛了我的臉。7.

Aflashof

lightning

litup

thewholesky.一道閃電點(diǎn)亮了整個(gè)天空。8.Thesharp

claps

ofthunder

pierced

thequietnight.聲聲清脆的雷聲劃破了寧靜的夜晚。9.Theboltoflightning

stabs

theearth.一道閃電劃過天空。10.theskyandtheocean

meltinto

eachother

天空和海洋融為一體

第二絕招：情緒描寫（絕望、恐懼+掙扎）——疲倦/寒冷1.鹽刺痛我的眼睛，我?guī)缀醪恢牢疫€能堅(jiān)持多久。Saltstinging(刺痛)myeyes,IcouldhardlytellhowlongIcouldholdon.2.隨著時(shí)間的流逝，疲憊感席卷著我們，我們的腳僵硬/麻木和顫抖著。Timepassingus,tiredness

engulfed

(包圍了)uswithmyfeet

stiff/numb

(僵硬/麻木)and

shivering.3.盡管我們筋疲力盡，我們沒有停止。咬緊牙關(guān)，我們繼續(xù)游泳。Exhaustedaswewere

(盡管很累),wedidn’tstop.Grittingourteeth,wekeptswimming.

4.

似乎過了一個(gè)世紀(jì)，我感到極度疲勞地努力游泳以保持漂浮。Afterwhatseemedacentury,Ifelt

extremelyfatigued

(非常累)whileswimminghardto

keep

myself

afloat(漂浮著的).——疲倦/寒冷5.他縮進(jìn)大衣里，冷得臉都發(fā)紫了。Hewas

huddled

intohiscoat,hisface

bluewithcold.6.

手指被冰冷的海水弄得麻木，喉嚨被寒風(fēng)吹得哽咽，我感到快要崩潰了。Fingers

numbed

bythe

chilly

water,throatchokedbyicywind,Ifeltonthevergeofcollapsing.7.在刺骨的寒風(fēng)里，她把孩子緊緊地抱在胸前。Sheclaspedthebabytoherbosominthe

biting/cutting/piercing/sharp

wind.8.

寒風(fēng)開始咆哮，像鋒利的小刀/針一樣刺痛了我的臉。Theicywindstartedhowling,

cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife/needles.9.她冷得牙齒直打顫。Herteethwere

chattering

withcold.——害怕1.我深吸一口氣，使勁咽了下去。Itookadeepbreathand

swallowedhard

(害怕地咽了口吐沫).2.她頓感毛骨悚然。Achillfeelingcreptupherspine.3隨著時(shí)間的流逝，恐懼爬上了我的心，我?guī)缀醪恢牢疫€能堅(jiān)持多久。Astimetickedby,fear

creptuponmyheart(爬上我心頭)andIcouldhardlytellhowlongIcould

ploughon

(前行).4

一想到絕望，我就直打哆嗦。Thethoughtofhopelessness

sentshiversdownmyspine(讓我后脊背發(fā)涼).5.

我被一種恐怖感淹沒了。Iwas

floodedwithasenseofhorror(被恐懼感淹沒).——害怕6.看到這里，我內(nèi)心的恐懼感越來越強(qiáng)。Seeingthis,Ifeltmyfear

growing/increasing(劇增)inside.7.我感到一股焦慮席卷了我的身體。Ifelt

awaveofanxiety(一陣焦慮)

sweptovermybody

(襲來).8.沮喪和恐懼的淚水從我的眼中涌出，我覺得自己陷入了絕望之中。Tearsoffrustrationandhorrorgushingfrommyeyes,IfeltIhadsunkintohopelessness.9.

恐懼感席卷全身，我驚慌失措地喊道：“救命！救命！”Asenseofterrorsweepingthroughmybody,Ishoutedinpanic,“Help!Help!”10.

我后頸上的汗毛因恐懼而刺痛，我渾身被汗?jié)裢噶?。ThehairsonthebackofmyneckprickledwithdreadandIwasdrenchedinsweat.（汗毛倒豎；濕透）——描寫掙扎努力1.我們不遺余力地游向岸邊。sparednoeffortto(不遺余力地)swimtowardstheshore.2.我們交換了堅(jiān)定的眼神，然后以令人難以置信的速度繼續(xù)前進(jìn)。Weexchangedadeterminedlook(互換了堅(jiān)定的神情),thenploughedon(繼續(xù)前行)atanincrediblespeed(難以置信的速度).3....,Weswamtoothandnail(全力以赴地).第三絕招：轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)描寫描寫聲音傳來或看見了什么1.我們聽到遠(yuǎn)處傳來的聲音。A

distant

sound

reachedourears.(傳入耳朵)2.就在那時(shí)，我的腦子飛速運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)——為什么不打給911和Joe呢？Justthen,mymindraced–whynotcall911andJoe?3.船的聲音在我們耳邊回響。Thesoundoftheboat

echoedinourears.(在我們耳內(nèi)回響)4.就在這時(shí)，一聲尖銳的哨聲劃破了寧靜。Atthatmoment,a

shrillwhistle(汽笛)ripped

theair(劃破天空).5.當(dāng)我們不知所措時(shí)，遠(yuǎn)處傳來刺耳的喊叫聲。Whenwewereatalossofwhattodo,therewere

rasping

(刺耳的)

shouts(喊叫聲)risingfromthedistance

(從遠(yuǎn)處升起).6.Jason看到遠(yuǎn)處有東西在閃爍?！盁?！我看到燈了！”杰森大聲喊道。Jasonsawsomethingflickerinthedistance.“Lights!Iseelights!”Jasonshoutedout.7.我在絕望中我終于看到遠(yuǎn)處有幾艘救生艇朝我們駛來。Insheerdesperation(在絕望中),Ifinallycaughtsightofsomeboatswithlifeguardsonthemheadingtowardsus

inthedistance.8.過了很長時(shí)間，遠(yuǎn)處出現(xiàn)了一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)！我們揮揮手，大聲呼救。Afteralongtime,alightspotappearedinthedistance!Wewavedourhandsandyelledoutforhelp.第四絕招：情緒描寫（希望+努力）——描寫如釋重負(fù)1.

就像抓著救命稻草一樣，我一遍又一遍地?fù)芴柎a。Asifclutchingatstraws,

Idialedthenumberagainandagain.2.

聽到這個(gè)令人欣慰的消息，我忍不住激動(dòng)起來。Hearingthe

comforting

news,I

couldn'thelprestrainingmyexcitement.(情難自抑)3.

他的話重新點(diǎn)燃了我心中的希望之火。Hiswordsreignitedtheflameofhopeinmyheart.——描寫如釋重負(fù)4.我感到一陣自豪，欣慰地微笑著。Smilinginrelief

(如釋重負(fù)地微笑),I

feltarushofpride(感到一陣自豪).5.

看到有船來救我們，我和湯姆高興極了，都松了一口氣。Overjoyed(狂喜)toseeaboatcomingtoourrescue,TomandI

breathedasighofrelief(如釋重負(fù)地松了口氣)6.由于在一個(gè)姿勢上保持了幾個(gè)小時(shí)而僵硬了，他們慢慢地展開了身體。Stifffromkeepinginonepositionforhours,theyslowlyunfoldedtheirbodies.第五絕招：脫險(xiǎn)描寫1.

船終于到達(dá)了我們身邊，把我們所有人都帶回了岸邊。Theboatfinallyreachedusandtookallofusbacktotheshore.2.

喬大聲大叫，試圖安慰我，讓我相信這是逃離危險(xiǎn)的最好方法。Yelling

atthetopofhislung,Joetriedtosoothemeandconvincemethatitwasthebestwaytoescapethedanger.第六絕招：情緒描寫（感恩+高興）1.

當(dāng)我們想象歡樂的場景是什么時(shí)，我心中有解脫，幸福寫在我的臉上。Whenwepicturedwhatthemerryscenewouldbe,relieflayinmyheartandhappinesswaswrittenonmyface.2.

我如釋重負(fù)，不停地想整個(gè)事件。我知道如果他們再在海里，就會(huì)死了。Sighinginrelief,Icouldn’tstopthinkingaboutthewholeevent.Iknewtheywouldhavediediftheyhadbeenintheseaforanylonger.第七絕招：主旨描寫1.我突然想到，幫助別人是無價(jià)的，每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該是一個(gè)救生員。