新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫突破：科技故事

專題14高考英語專項(xiàng)突破“讀后續(xù)寫”一科技故事

科技改變生活，可以改變世界……

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閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Awomanwhohadastroke（中Al）whileonaFaceTimevideocallwithhersister,saidthe

technologysavedherlife.EsmeeRussell,headoftheStrokeAssociation,said,“Astrokecan

happentoanyone,atanyage,atanytime.That'swhyit'ssoimportantthatpeopleknowhowto

actfast:itcouldsavealift."Strokeshappenwhenthebloodsupplytopartofthebrainiscutoff

byaclol（凝塊）,ordamagedbybleedingthatcausesbraincellsintheaffectedareatodie.

OpokuaKwapong,wholivesaloneinNewYork,wasonacallwithhersister,Adumea

Sapong,inManchester,whenMrsSapongnoticedthathereldersister"didn'Mookright”.Andshe

alsonoticedhersister'svoicewasslurred（口齒不清）.MsKwapongsaidshehadnotrealisedhow

seriousthesituationwas.

The58-year-oldKwaponghadwokenfromanafternoonsleepwhenMrsSapongcalledher

onFaceTime.MsKwapongsaid“Mysisterlookedatmeandsaidshecouldseethatmyface

didn'tlookright.ShealsosaidthatIwasslurringmywords,butIthoughtshewasmakingafuss

（大驚小怪）andIdidn'tbelieveher.,,

MrsSapongsaidWhenIcalledKwapong,shesaidthatshe'dnotbeenfeelingwellandhad

beenfeelingtiredandwasalsohavingsomedifficultywalking.Isaid,'Perhapsyouneedtotake

somemedicine.5Shetriedtopickupaglassofwaterandwasn'tableto.ThenInoticedonthe

FaceTimevideocallthatherfacewasdrooping.Itoldhersheneededtohangupandimmediately

seeadoctor.ShethoughtIwasmakingafusssoIthencalledoneofmyothersisters,whoisa

doctor,andshecouldhearherspeakingandcouldalsotellthatherspeechwasslurred.Weboth

toldhertocallforhelpatonce.^^

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Para.1:

MsKuaponghungupthecallandthendialedtheemergencyservices.

Para.2:

MsKwapongsaid:"Thereisnodoubtthattheinternetandtechnologysavedmylife.

【答案】MsKwaponghungupthecallandthendialedtheemergencyservices.The

ambulancerushedtoherhouseandnursessenthertohospital.Inhospital,MsKwapongwas

diagnosedwithstrokeandshouldstayathospitalforatleastoneweek,HersisterAdumeaSapong

lookedafterher.Herdoctorsaidshewasluckytoreceivetreatmentquicklyorshecouldhavehad

muchtrouble.

MsKwapongsaid:"ThereisnodoubtthattheInternetandtechnologysavedmylife.Ifmy

sisterhadnotnoticedthatsomethingwasnotright,thenthingscouldhavebeensodifferent.Not

onlydidtechnologysavemylife,itnowalsoallowsmetolivemylife.IrelyalotonFaceTimeas

I'mnotabletotravelasmuchasIdidpreviously.Youhearalotofnegativestoriesaboutthe

Internetandtechnology,butIthinkthisisanexampleofhowtechnologycanhelpusindaily

【解析】

本文以人物為線索，講述了一對(duì)老年姐妹在視頻的過程中，妹妹發(fā)現(xiàn)姐姐的臉色不太好，說

話也變得口齒不清，便建議姐姐立即聯(lián)系醫(yī)院。憑借著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)和科技的優(yōu)勢(shì)，老人被及時(shí)送

到了醫(yī)院得到救治。

【詳解】

1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“Kuapong女士掛斷了電話，然后撥打了急救服務(wù)。”可知，第一段可描

寫Kuapong女士得到了及時(shí)的救治。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“Kwapong女士說：‘毫無疑問，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)和科技救了我的命?？芍?，第

二段可描寫Kuapong女士對(duì)互聯(lián)網(wǎng)和科技的看法。

2.續(xù)寫線索：聯(lián)系急救服務(wù)一得到救治——感嘆網(wǎng)絡(luò)和科技的幫助

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①.照料：lookafter/takecareof

②.接受：receive/get

③.注意：notice/note

情緒類

①.幸運(yùn)的：lucky/fortunate

②.負(fù)面的：negative/minus

【點(diǎn)睛】

[高分句型l]Herdoctorsaidshewasluckytoreceivetreatmentquicklyorshecouldhavehad

muchtrouble.（運(yùn)用（省略連接詞that的賓語從句）

［高分句型2JNotonlydidtechnologysavemylife,itnowalsoallowsmetolivemylife.（運(yùn)用

了notonly位于句首的部分倒裝句式）

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Backintheearly1980s,theideaofhomecomputerswascatchingon.Iwasn'tkeenon

gettingone.Somehow,Ievolvedandhaveownedseveralcomputersovertheyears.Somedays,I

lovedmycomputer,butmoreoftenthannot,Ihatedit.Ididn'tgrowupwiththem,andtheywere

achallengetomymentalhealth.Dealingwithmodemtechnologywasmyintroductiontostress,

andIknowwhotoblame:mychildren.

Theyweren'tsatisfiedthattheirdadandIfinallyboughtacomputerandlearnedtosend

e-mails.Wewerequitehappywiththat,butnextcameacellphone.Thenjusttalkingonthephone

wasnotacceptable;theyinsistedwelearntotextaswell.Wecouldn'tgetabreak.

IrememberwellthenightthatFacebookbecameahouseholdwordaroundhere.Thosekids

ofoursweredeterminedtosetupajointaccountforus.Ittooksomeconvincing.Wefeltnoguilt

forgratingon（激怒）theirnervesconsideringthedramathey'dsometimescreatedforusduring

theirteenageyears.Alittlepaybackwouldn'thurtthosetwo.

Morerecently,myhusbandandIwereforcedintogettingridofourflipphonesandgetting

smartphones.IwilladmitthatIprogressedintoappreciatingmine.IlikedspeakingtoSiriand

findingoutwhatIneededtoknowinaninstant.IenjoyedhavingInternetaccesseverywhereI

went.Ifeltasenseofaccomplishment;myhusband-notsomuch.Tothisday,hewouldhappily

takebackhisflipphone.

LastChristmas,ourchildrensurpriseduswithyetanotherpopularformoftechnology-Alexa.

Thegirlstookoursmartphonesinhandandgotusprogrammed.Beforewefullyunderstoodwhat

washappening,wecouldtellAlexatoturnourlamponoroff,andshewould.Tobehonest,we

wereabitannoyedathavingtolearnhowtouseyetanotherdevice,butwedecidedtokeepit.We

masteredturningthelamponandoff,andonceagainIgotthehangofitsoonerthanmyhusband

did.IbecamehisAlexacoach.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Onenight,AlexadidnotturnonthelampwhenIgavethecommand.

Weshouldthankourchildrenandgrandchildren.

【答案］Onenight,AlexadidnotturnonthelampwhenIgavethecommand.Itriedtosay"Turn

onthelight“toitcountlesstimes,butAlexadidn'twork."Newtechnologiesarealways

unreliable.”myhusbandcomplained.IsearchedtheInternetandimmediatelyfoundthereason

whyAlexcouldn'twork.IjustneededtotellAlextosetthelightcolortowhiteorwhatevercolor

Iwanted,andthenitwouldturnonthelight.ThenAlexturnedonthelightitself.

Weshouldthankourchildrenandgrandchildren.Itwasourchildrenandgrandchildrenthat

taughtustousetechnologysothatIcouldfindasolutionontheInternetbymyself.Withoutthem,

ourlifeisalwaysinvariableandboring.Ourchildrenandgrandchildren"fbrce“ustoacceptand

usetechnology,whichseemstoputusunderpressure.However,thefactisthatourchildrenand

grandchildrenletusreallyacceptandusetechnologytomakeourlifemoreconvenient.

【解析】

本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者的孩子們?yōu)樽约汉驼煞蛲扑]了許多現(xiàn)代科技產(chǎn)品，作者

從很有壓力變得喜歡上它們，有一種成就感，但是作者的丈夫不太喜歡。去年圣誕節(jié)，孩子

們給作者的智能手機(jī)安裝了Alexa程序，可以打開或者關(guān)閉燈。

【詳解】

1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“一天晚上，當(dāng)我發(fā)出命令時(shí)，Alexa沒有開燈。”可知，第一段可描寫

作者和丈夫?qū)Υ说牟煌磻?yīng)，作者用孩子們教會(huì)的技能想到辦法解決問題。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我們應(yīng)該感謝我們的子孫?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼懽髡吒惺艿胶⒆觽兘?/p>

會(huì)的科技是有用處的，感謝孩子們。

2.續(xù)寫線索：Alexa不工作——丈夫抱怨——作者想辦法——Alexa被修好——感謝孩子們

——科技的用處

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①打開：tumon/switchon

②教：teach/instruct

③找到：find/seekout

情緒類

①感謝：thank/appreciate

②壓力：pressure/stress

【點(diǎn)睛】

【高分句型1JIsearchedtheInternetandimmediatelyfoundthereasonwhyAlexcouldn'twork.

（由關(guān)系副詞why引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句）

［高分句型2】However,thefactisthatourchildrenandgrandchildrenletusreallyacceptanduse

technologytomakeourlifemoreconvenient.（由連接詞that引導(dǎo)表語從句）

03

GrandmaAgnesisninety-nineyearsoldandstillliveinthesamehouseahe'slivedinfor

morethansixtyyears.Shewasoneofthirteenchildrenraisedonafarm.Andnow.sheisratherset

inherways,

Fortwelveyears,Grandmaagesenjoyedthecorupanyofherdog,Snoopy.Theblackand

whitespottedmustwasaconstantpresenceinherhomeandheryard.Duringthetimethatshehad

Snoopy,GrandmaAgnesstartedshowingsignsofdementia.Myfamilyworkedtogethertokeep

herlivingindependentlybutsafe.

Itwasdifficultformydadthedayhepulledthebatteryfromhercartokeepherfromusing

herstillvaliddriver'slicense,Everyvisitafterthatday,GrandmaAgneswouldinsistthathebuy

heranewcarbatterybecauseherswasdeadagain.Dadnoddedandagreedtodoit,knowingthat

theconversationwouldsoonbeforgotten.

Threeyearsago.Snoopypassedaway,Mydad.AuntCarolandUncleEdthoughtofwaysto

ensurethatGrandmaAgneswouldknowthatSnoopywasgone,Theyhadburialserviceinthe

backyardwithGrandma.UncleEdprintedapictureofSnoopywith"RestinPeace“written

acrossthebottomandstuckittotherefrigerator,Butonthedailyvisits.GrandmaAgnesstill

askedaboutSnoopy,Sheaccusedtheneighborsoftakingherdogbecauseshewassurethatshe

heardbinbarkingfromtheiryard.

Havingafamilymemberwithdementiaisheartbreakingandtrying.ForeveryvisitI'vemade

inthepastfiveyears,mydadhasmadeapointtotellmethatsheprobablywon'trememberwhoI

amnorthatmykidsarehergreatgrandchildren,I'vesatthroughconversationswherewepatiently

repeatedanswerstoquestionsthatwereansweredafewmomentsago.GrandmaAgnesisstill

there,andshe'sstillherstubbornself,butshedoesn'tgrasptheworldaroundher,Andyetshe

insistsonlivingindependentlyandaskingaboutSnoopyconstantly.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答.

Afewmonthsago,UncleEdcameupwithgoodideaandboughtaroboticdogforGrandma

Ages.

EveryoneinourfamilyispleasedthatGrandmaAgneshasbeensokindtoSnoopy.

【答案】Para1:

Afewmonthsago，UncleEdcameupwithagoodideaandboughtaroboticdogfor

GrandmaAgnes.Ithassoftfurandbarkswhenitsensesmotionnearby.Grandmaquicklyadopted

thedogashernewSnoopy.Herconditionhasledhertobelievethatheisananimalandnota

robot.ShegotusedtoSnoopy'sbarksandregardedthemasrequestsforfoodoranap.Thefood

disappearingeverynighthelpedconvinceGrandmathatSnoopywasarealdog.Wefoundfrom

thecamerathattheneighborcatclimbedoverthefenceandateallthedogfbod.

Para2:

EveryoneioourfamilyispleasedthatGrandmaAgneshasbeensokindtoSnoopy.Shv

wouldpethimgentlyandcarefullypreparefooda