2023年高考英語真題題源解密（全國卷）專題09 書面表達(解析版)

專題09書面表達（2023.全國乙卷書面表達）52.請以向學校英文報投稿的方式，用英語描述學習一項新技能的經歷，及從中獲得的體驗和感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WhenIwasinmyprimaryschool,Ihadanopportunitytoattendamusicalcontestheldinmyschool.ThatwasthefirsttimeIwatchedalivemusicalperformance.Thefantasticplayerstouchedmedeeply.Iaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginner.Inthebeginning,itwasquitedifficulttoreadthenotesonthestave.However,itdidnotdemoralizeme.Ispentmostofmyleisurehourstopracticepiano.Althoughmyfingerswerepainfulafterfewhourspractice,IfeltsatisfiedifIcouldplayamusicpiececompletely.EventhoughIwillnotpursueasmylifecareer,Iwillstillcontinuelearningandplayingpianoasmyhobby.Itissimplybecausemusicisthebestmedicationformysoul.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于記敘文，請以向學校英文報投稿的方式，用英語描述學習一項新技能的經歷，及從中獲得的體驗和感受?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累機會：opportunity→chance使沮喪：demoralize→discourage滿意的：satisfied→content空閑的：leisure→spare2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Thefantasticplayerstouchedmedeeply.Iaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginner.拓展句：Thefantasticplayerstouchedmedeeply,soIaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginner.點睛【高分句型1】WhenIwasinmyprimaryschool,Ihadanopportunitytoattendamusicalcontestheldinmyschool.(運用了when引導的時間狀語從句)【高分句型2】Althoughmyfingerswerepainfulafterfewhourspractice,IfeltsatisfiedifIcouldplayamusicpiececompletely.(運用了although引導的讓步狀語從句和if引導的條件狀語從句)（2023.全國甲卷書面表達）52.你們學校正舉辦主題為“用英文講中國故事”的征文活動。請你以一位中國歷史人物為題寫一篇短文投稿，內容包括：1.人物簡介及事跡；2.意義或啟示。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.題目已為你寫好。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Confuciusisawell-knownfigureinChinesehistory.Histeachingsemphasizedtheimportanceofmoralvalues,respectforelders,andsocialharmony.Confuciustraveledthroughoutthecountry,impartinghiswisdomtocountlessdisciplesandleavingaprofoundimpactonChinesesociety.ThesignificanceofConfuciuscannotbeoverstated.HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,fosteringrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.Eventoday,hisideascontinuetoguideindividualsandcommunitiesinChinaandbeyond.Confucius’slifeoffersvaluablelessons.Hestressedtheself-cultivation,respectforelders,andthepursuitofknowledge,whichservesasaguidinglightinourfast-pacedandinterconnectedworld.Histeachingsremindusoftheimportanceofintegrity,compassion,andsocialresponsibility.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生為學校正舉辦的主題為“用英文講中國故事”的征文活動寫一篇短文投稿。【詳解】1.詞匯積累著名的：well-known→famous人物：figure→person強調：emphasize→stress基礎：foundation→basis【命題意圖】今年高考英語試卷書面表達都是以投稿的形式來展現(xiàn)形式要書寫的內容，大力弘揚中國元素。命題人強調情境化設計，緊密聯(lián)系學生日常生活實際，擴展素材選取范圍，在現(xiàn)實的問題情境中考查學生核心素養(yǎng)的發(fā)展水平，推動關鍵能力和核心素養(yǎng)在教學和考試中的落實。不僅注重知識及能力的考查，而且考查學生的文化意識及思維品質。比如2023.全國乙卷書面表達屬于記敘文，以向學校英文報投稿的方式，用英語描述學習一項新技能的經歷，及從中獲得的體驗和感受。旨在培養(yǎng)自主創(chuàng)新的品質，同時促進學生善于動腦，善于動手和積極參與意識的形成。2023.全國甲卷書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生為學校正舉辦的主題為“用英文講中國故事”的征文活動寫一篇短文投稿。該語篇旨在引導學生形成熱愛中國文化的觀念，在實踐中養(yǎng)成熱愛學習，積極向上的習慣。以及培養(yǎng)培養(yǎng)學生熱愛中國文化以及健康生活方式,讓學生通過寫作來弘揚中國元素?！究疾橐c】2023.全國乙卷書面表達考查學生用英語描述學習一項新技能的經歷，及從中獲得的體驗和感受，主要考查學生對語篇的架構能力，語言的組織能力以及詞匯的運用能力。比如2023.全國乙卷書面表達分三段來完成寫作。WhenIwasinmyprimaryschool,Ihadanopportunitytoattendamusicalcontestheldinmyschool.Iaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginner.EventhoughIwillnotpursueasmylifecareer,Iwillstillcontinuelearningandplayingpianoasmyhobby等優(yōu)美的句子。以及詞匯的應用如機會：opportunity→chance使沮喪：demoralize→discourage滿意的：satisfied→content空閑的：leisure→spare2023.全國甲卷書面表達要求考生為學校正舉辦的主題為“用英文講中國故事”的征文活動寫一篇短文投稿。主要考查學生對語篇的架構能力，語言的組織能力以及詞匯的運用能力。比如文章分三段來完成結構明確。還有優(yōu)美的句子比如Confuciusisawell-knownfigureinChinesehistory.ThesignificanceofConfuciuscannotbeoverstated.HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,fosteringrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.Hestressedtheself-cultivation,respectforelders,andthepursuitofknowledge,whichservesasaguidinglightinourfast-pacedandinterconnectedworld.還有高級詞匯的運用比如著名的：well-known→famous人物：figure→person強調：emphasize→stress基礎：foundation→basis【課標鏈接】依據(jù)新課程標準書面表達部分試題考查的就是對語篇的理解，對文章的架構能力以及對語言的組織能力。深入考查基礎語言知識旨在引導中學教學依據(jù)課程標準，幫助學生掌握語音、詞匯、語法、語篇和語用等基礎語言知識，了解基礎文化知識；引導學生深入學習和理解語篇所表達的主題意義，養(yǎng)成一定的語言意識和英語語感。1．（2022·全國·高考真題1）學校英文報正在開展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom為題的討論。請使用圖表中的調查結果寫一篇短文投稿，內容包括：1.學習活動狀況描述；2.簡單評論；3.你的建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.短文的題目和首句已為你寫好?！敬鸢浮縇earningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomNowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroominvariousways.ItcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudentswhochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%.However,thosechoosingreadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%.AsfarasI’mconcerned,itisadisturbingtrend.Forstudents,whatbenefitsmosttotheirstudyisreadingEnglishbooks.Becauseoftheirlackofself-discipline,they’remoreeasilyaddictedtochattingonlineorplayinggames.It’surgentforstudentsthemselvestoimprovetheirself-discipline,andit’salsourgentforparentsandteacherstostrengthentheguidance.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于議論文，要求考生使用圖表中的調查結果寫一篇短文投稿，對學生的英語學習活動狀況進行描述并作簡單的評論，提出建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累缺乏：lack→shortage加強：strengthen→enhance各種各樣的：various→allkindsof就我而言：asfarasI’mconcerned→frommyperspective2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：However,thosechoosingreadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%.拓展句：However,thosewhochoosereadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%.【點睛】【高分句型1】ItcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudentswhochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%.(運用了it作形式主語，that引導主語從句以及who引導的定語從句)【高分句型2】Forstudents,whatbenefitsmosttotheirstudyisreadingEnglishbooks.(運用了what引導的主語從句)2．（2022·全國·高考真題2）你校將以六月八日世界海洋日為主題，舉辦英語征文比賽，請你寫一篇短文投稿。內容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.保護海洋的倡議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.短文的題目和首句已為你寫好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Whenitcomestoocean,itspollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.WorldOceanDay,fallingonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.Oceanplaysakeyroleinourworld.Notonlydoesoceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.Thus,itisimperativetoprotectocean.Firstofall,whatwecandoistoplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.Forexample,garbagecan’tbethrownintoocean.What’smore,wecanalsohandoutleafletstocallonmorepeopletoprotecttheocean.Themorepeopleareinvolved,thebettertheoceanenvironmentis.Allinall,itishightimethatwedevotedourselvestoprotectingocean.Toprotectoceanistoprotectourselves.【導語】本文是一篇應用文，就世界海洋日為主題向英文征文比賽投稿，闡述海洋的重要性并提出一些建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累越來越：moreandmore→increasingly重視：placeimportanceon→attachimportanceto重要的：key→significant此外：what’smore→furthermore2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：WorldOceanDay,fallingonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.拓展句：WorldOceanDay,whichfallsonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.【點睛】[高分句型1]Notonlydoesoceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.(運用了部分倒裝結構)[高分句型2]Whenitcomestoocean,itspollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.(使用了固定句型)[高分句型3]Firstofall,whatwecandoistoplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.(使用了主語從句)3．（2021·全國·高考真題1）你校將舉辦英語演講比賽。請你以Besmartonlinelearners為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽，內容包括：1.分析優(yōu)勢與不足；2.提出學習建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.題目和首句已為你寫好。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】onepossibleversion:BesmartonlinelearnersNetworklearninghasincreasinglybecomeanimportantmeansforpeopletoacquireknowledgeandsolveproblems.Butbeingsmartonlinelearnershasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Firstofall,assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducationalresourcestobroadenthehorizon.Besides,wecantaketheinitiativeinourstudybyourselveswithouttimeandspacelimit.Ofcourse,thesedisadvantagesareasfollows.Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,wecan’ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesandfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生以Besmartonlinelearners為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿，參加學校舉辦的英語演講比賽?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累充分利用：makefulluseof→makethemostof擴寬，豐富：broaden→enrich各種各樣的：allkindsof→varietiesof影響：affect→influence2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Firstofall,assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducationalresourcestobroadenthehorizon.拓展句：Firstofall,assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducationalresourcesinorderthatwecanbroadenthehorizon.【點睛】【高分句型1】Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,wecan’ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.（運用了形容詞短語作狀語，which引導非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.（運用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語作結果狀語，it作形式賓語，不定式短語作真正的賓語）4．（2021·全國·高考真題2）假定你是李華。你校計劃舉辦介紹中國傳統(tǒng)文化的主題班會，并在英文網站展示。請你寫一封郵件給外國朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中國傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國友人。郵件內容包括：1．闡明寫信事由；2．征求建議；3．表示感謝。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearChris，Howareyoudoingthesedays?I’mwritingtoaskyousomeadvice.InordertopromoteChinesetraditionalcultureandpostsomeclassmeetingsonEnglishwebsites,ourschoolisgoingtoorganiseclassmeetings,thethemeofwhichistraditionalChineseculture.Wecanchooseavarietyofthemes,suchascalligraphy,martialarts,oilpaintings,papercuttingandsoon.I’mwonderingifyoucouldletmeknowwhichofthemyoulikebestandwhichofthempeoplefromoutsideofChinaaremorelikelytobeinterestedin.Thankyouforyourhelp.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldreplytomeatyourearliestconvenience.Yours，LiHua【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，假定考生是李華。你校計劃舉辦介紹中國傳統(tǒng)文化的主題班會，并在英文網站展示。請你寫一封郵件給外國朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中國傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國友人。【詳解】1.詞匯積累建議：suggestion→advice提高：heighten→promote各種各樣：allkindsof→avarietyof選擇：select→choose2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Wecanchooseavarietyofthemes,suchascalligraphy,martialarts,oilpaintings,papercuttingandsoon.拓展句：Wecanchooseavarietyofthemes,whichincludecalligraphy,martialarts,oilpaintings,papercuttingandsoon.【點睛】[高分句型1]InordertopromoteChinesetraditionalcultureandpostsomeclassmeetingsonEnglishwebsites,ourschoolisgoingtoorganiseclassmeetings,thethemeofwhichistraditionalChineseculture..（介詞+which引導的非限制性定語從句）[高分句型2]I’mwonderingifyoucouldletmeknowwhichofthemyoulikebestandwhichofthempeoplefromoutsideofChinaaremorelikelytobeinterestedin.（if引導的賓語從句）分析近三年的高考試題，可以發(fā)現(xiàn)書面表達是以投稿，發(fā)言稿和郵件，多以投稿為主，但是每年的話題側重點不同，如：（2022·全國·高考真題1）要求考生使用圖表中的調查結果寫一篇短文投稿，對學生的英語學習活動狀況進行描述并作簡單的評論，提出建議。（2022·全國·高考真題2）就世界海洋日為主題向英文征文比賽投稿，闡述海洋的重要性并提出一些建議。（2021·全國·高考真題1）要求考生以Besmartonlinelearners為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿，參加學校舉辦的英語演講比賽。（2021·全國·高考真題2）寫一封郵件給外國朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中國傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國友人。對于2024年高考書面表達的預測，很可能仍然會是投稿的形式出現(xiàn)，話題可能涉及到學生的學習和生活，環(huán)境保護，弘揚中國元素，正能量的傳播等。需重點讓學生關注這些方面內容信息。從高考英語評分標準談了解以下提高書面表達的策略,高考英語書面表達題在一定程度上反映考生對所學語言知識的綜合運用能力。其書面表達能力涵蓋了詞法運用能力、句法運用能力、篇章組織能力等方面。在一篇文章中如何展示考生多方面的能力，寫作策略顯得非常重要。因此，通過認真研讀高考英語評分標準并結合個人多年教學經驗，認為考生在書面表達中需要做到“五個好”，便能吸引住閱卷老師的注意力，從而能夠寫出受閱卷老師欣賞的優(yōu)質作文。做到規(guī)范書寫，明確分段，要點齊全，好詞好句，巧用連接，句子流暢。1．（2023·江蘇·統(tǒng)考三模）學校英文報正在開展以“Protectingoureyestoenjoyabrightworld”為題的討論。請使用圖表中的調查結果寫一篇短文投稿，內容包括：1.學生近視率狀況描述；2.簡單評論；3.你的建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.短文題目和首句已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。ProtectingoureyestoenjoyabrightworldThehealthofchildren’svisionisfacingagrowingthreat.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:ProtectingoureyestoenjoyabrightworldThehealthofchildren’svisionisfacingagrowingthreat.Datashowsthat14.3percentofpre-schoolkidsarenearsighted.Therateis35.6percentforprimaryschoolstudents,71.1percentforjuniorhighschoolpupilsand80.5percentforseniorhighschoolstudents.Theageforthebeginningofshortsightednessisgettingyounger.Meanwhile,thereistherapidprogressionofshortsightednessduringthemiddleschool.Totacklethegrowingproblem,schoolsshouldreducetheacademicburdenofstudentsandincreasethetimeofoutdooractivities.What’smore,weshouldattachimportancetoourvisualhealthandcontrolthetimespentonelectronicdevices.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于圖表作文。要求考生以“Protectingoureyestoenjoyabrightworld”為題，根據(jù)圖表調查結果寫一篇短文，簡述學生近視率狀況，給與評論并提出建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累同時：meanwhile→atthesametime解決：tackle→handle/copewith/solve減少：reduce→decrease/cutdown重視：attachimportanceto→takesthseriously/makeaccountof2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Datashowsthat14.3percentofpre-schoolkidsarenearsighted.拓展句：Datashowsthat14.3percentofpre-schoolkidsarenearsighted,whichshouldarouseourattention.【點睛】【高分句型1】Datashowsthat14.3percentofpre-schoolkidsarenearsighted.（運用了that引導賓語從句）【高分句型2】What’smore,weshouldattachimportancetoourvisualhealthandcontrolthetimespentonelectronicdevices.（運用了“spentonelectronicdevices”過去分詞作后置定語，修飾名詞“thetime”）2．（2023·新疆·統(tǒng)考三模）假定你是李華，你校即將舉辦校園文化節(jié)。你準備參加“用英語講好中國故事之中華傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日”版塊活動，你選擇給校刊投稿介紹端午節(jié)。內容包括：1.慶祝時間；2.慶?；顒?；3.節(jié)日意義。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：粽子ricedumplings；zongzi______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion：DragonBoatFestival,alsocalledtheDuanwuFestival,iscelebratedonthefifthdayofthefifthmonthaccordingtotheChineselunarcalendar.Forthousandsofyears,thefestivalhasbeenmarkedbyeatingricedumplingsandracingdragonboats.Thericedumplingismadeofrice,meatandsoon.Youcaneatdifferentkindsofricedumplings.Besides,thefestivalisbestknownforitsdragon-boatraces,especiallyinthesouthernplaceswheretherearemanyriversandlakes.DragonBoatFestivalisinmemoryofthedeathofthefamousancientpoetQuYuan,whoisadevotedgovernmentofficialandpoet.Overall,theDragonBoatFestivalenjoysgreatpopularityamongpeopleinChina.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生在即將舉辦校園文化節(jié)中，給?？陡褰榻B端午節(jié)，內容包括慶祝時間、慶祝活動以及節(jié)日的意義?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累慶祝：celebrate→observe此外：besides→what’smore著名的：famous→well-known忠誠的：devoted→committed2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：DragonBoatFestival,alsocalledtheDuanwuFestival,iscelebratedonthefifthdayofthefifthmonthaccordingtotheChineselunarcalendar.拓展句：DragonBoatFestival,whichisalsocalledtheDuanwuFestival,iscelebratedonthefifthdayofthefifthmonthaccordingtotheChineselunarcalendar.【點睛】【高分句型1】DragonBoatFestival,alsocalledtheDuanwuFestival,iscelebratedonthefifthdayofthefifthmonthaccordingtotheChineselunarcalendar.（運用了過去分詞短語作定語）【高分句型2】DragonBoatFestivalisinmemoryofthedeathofthefamousancientpoetQuYuan,whoisadevotedgovernmentofficialandpoet.（運用了who引導的非限制性定語從句）3．（2023·陜西安康·陜西省安康中學校考模擬預測）你校開展了“記錄美好生活周”的活動。請你寫一篇英語短文，向你校英文報投稿。內容包括：1.你一周的主要生活情況;2.你的感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Recently,Iparticipatedintheactivitythemed“RecordtheBeautifulLifeinaWeek”heldbyourschool.Throughit,Ihavelearnedtoappreciatethebeautyindailylife.Thisweek,Iwasbusypreparingforthefinalexam.Toachieveidealgrades,Inotonlymadeapracticalreviewplanbutalsofolloweditwithoutanydelay.Besides,Igotmuchencouragementfrommyparents,whichincreasedmyconfidenceindoingwellintheexam.Additionally,Iphonedmybestfriendtoarrangeawinterholidaytripaftertheexam.Allthesemeaningfulthingshavemotivatedmetomoveforthedaysahead.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。學校開展了“記錄美好生活周”的活動，要求考生寫一篇英語短文，向學校英文報投稿，內容包括一周的生活狀況和感受?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累參加：participatein→joinin欣賞：appreciate→enjoy忙于：bebusy→beoccupied此外：besides→what’smore2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Recently,Iparticipatedintheactivitythemed“RecordtheBeautifulLifeinaWeek”heldbyourschool.拓展句：Recently,Iparticipatedintheactivitythemed“RecordtheBeautifulLifeinaWeek”whichwasheldbyourschool.【點睛】【高分句型1】