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1Essay1Essay范文,Essay題目為"Heritage",Essay的題材類型為heritageandidentity,含Essay點(diǎn)評(píng)與分析。YaleUniversity耶魯大學(xué)的Essay范文"HERITAGE"ISTHEFIRSTWORDINmyfamilydictionary,anounandadverb,forwhoweareandhowwelive.Myparentstaughtmethatmyheritagedefinesmyidentity.Throughhonorificspeechtowardsmyeldersandadherencetotraditionalvalues,IacceptedKoreancustomsaspartofthedualitythatdefinesmylifeinAmerica.Yet,aturbulentdisunitystormedunderthatsurfaceofpeacefulThoughIoutwardlyrepresentedthemodelKorean-Americanson,Iloathedfittingthisstereotypicalmold.Myshellwassowell-constructed,however,thatothersmistookmeforasuccessfulimmigrant.IfeltasifIwererippedfromtheveryfabricofmyAmericanbirthplace,andplungedintoavacuumbetweenmyancestralhomeandtheworldIlivedin.Ifeltthatmyheritagewasashortanchoragainsttherelentlesslyrisingtide:Ihadtobreakfree—orgounder.Whilestrugglingwiththischain,however,Icametoappreciatewhatmyheritageoffered.Asamartialartsinstructor,Isupportedstudentsinbuildingdisciplineandcharacter.Asabilingualtutor,IhelpedimmigrantchildrenadapttolifeinAmerica.Soon,Irealizedthatmyheritagewasaninstrumentforharmonizingpersonaldevelopmentwithservicetoothers.WhenIwasselectedtoserveintheHOBYWorldLeadershipCongress,myfamily'sfinancialcircumstancesdidnotcoverthe$1,350requiredfee.ByinfusingmyAmericanentrepreneurialenergywithAsianmedicine,Icoveredthecostbysellingherbalproductsatmymartialartsstudio.Thoughthenoveltyofmyventurebroughtmetothevergeofbankruptcy,Ipersisted.Byresearchingproducts,competitorsandclientele,IstreamlinedmyinventorytobestservemyEventually,IcreatedabusinessaimedatofferingothersahealthySweatystudentsgulpedgreenteaandchocolate-favoredsnacks,droppingdollarsforthecausethatlaywithinmycardboardcashbox.Supportedbyoutsidedonations,IbecamegreaterL.A.'sambassadorinWashingtonD.C.Infusedwithnewinspiration,Ireturnedwithaprojectgranttospreadthemartialartslifestyleofdiscipline,confidence,andrespect.Asmyheritageanchoreditselftothebedrockofmybattles,IintegratedKoreantraditionwithmyAmericanidentity.Fusingservicewithcivicduty,I2申請(qǐng)美2申請(qǐng)美國(guó)耶魯大學(xué)的Essay范文點(diǎn)評(píng)與分析Whatmakesthewriter'sessayinterestingisthathewritesabouttheconflictbetweenhisethnicheritageandhisAmericanlife.WeimmediatelysensethatitisnotaneasyamalgamationbetweenhisKoreanandAmericanidentities.Itmighthaveenhancedhisintroductiontohaveprovidedaspecificexampleofhowthesetwoidentitiesclashed.However,hisdescriptionofthisconflictisverypowerfulandvisual,andasthereader,wecantelldetecttheauthenticityofhisinternalstruggle.Hewrites,"Ifeltthatmyheritagewasashortanchoragainsttherelentlesslyrisingtide:Ihadtobreakfree—orgounder.“Thewriteraptlyshowstheconnectionbetweenhisachievementsandhisappreciationforhisheritage.WhenhedescribeshiseffortstoraisefundstoattendtheHOBYWorldLeadershipCongress,hedemonstratesingenuityasacreativeentrepreneur.Theadmissionsofficersmusthaveadmiredhisself-initiatedfundraisingeffortsandhisdevelopmentofanewmarket.Hisexperienceshowshisinnovation,persistenceandabilitytoadapthisproductlinetohiscustomers'needs.InhisexampleoftheL.A.CountySheriff'sExplorerAcademy,heagainaddresseshisheritagewhenleadinganethnicallydiversegroupofstudents.Whileyoumaywriteanessayaboutaprojectthatyouworkedonasateamoranexperiencethatyouhadasateammember,it'salwayshelpfultohighlightyourindividualcontribution.Inthewriter'scase,herevealshisfullresponsibilityforsellingtheAsianmedicineandexplainshisroleasaleaderofhisplatoon.Youmaynotbethesoleleaderofthegroup,butwritingaboutyourpersonalenteredtheL.A.CountySheriff'sExplorerAcademy.Throughthegruelingtraining,Ilearnedtoworkaspartofateam.AppointedasDrillInstructorayearlater,Itookcommandoftrainingtheolderrecruits.www.liuxue.lathrougharelationshipofmutualrespect;Ipreparedmyplatoontodutifullyservethecommunity.Leadingthisraciallymixedgroup,Iempathizedbeyondthedualityofmyownidentity.Isoondiscoveredthatmyheritagemusttranscendmypersonalstrugglestotrulyembracediversity.Heritageisnotamereethniclabel—itisthehonorandhumanitythatIaminspiredtouphold.Today,Iamgratefultomyparentsforendowingmewithaspiritofdedicationanddetermination.Theybestowedaphilosophythatspeaksthroughmyactions.Thisinheritanceformsthebaseofmyintegrityasanindividual,anddefinesmydedicationtostrengtheningthesocietythatIlive3input3inputmakesamorepowerfulstatementthanpresentingthecontributionsofthegroupasawhole.Throughouthisessay,thewritermakesconnectionsthatarenotobvious.Atfirstglance,theredoesn'tseemtobemuchthattiestogetherattendingastudentleadershipconferenceorvolunteeringwiththesheriff'sdepartmentandethnicidentity.Butthewriterisabletoformlinksamongthesetopicsthatresultinasinglecohesiveessay.Hiswritingisengagingbecause,asreaders,wecantellthathetrulycaresabouthistopicmatterandhesha
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