高三英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)寫作課件

BasicWriting時(shí)間分配題型題量賦分時(shí)間（分鐘）基礎(chǔ)寫作11510基礎(chǔ)寫作的命題特點(diǎn)：考生按所給的內(nèi)容及要求，用5個(gè)規(guī)范的英語(yǔ)句子描述所給信息的全部?jī)?nèi)容，并組成連貫的短文。簡(jiǎn)而言之，考查考生整理信息和組詞造句成文的能力。對(duì)于書面表達(dá)的要求：1.Coverallthelanguagepointsandgiveninformation.覆蓋所有的語(yǔ)言要點(diǎn)

Avoidgrammarmistakesandwrongspelling應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性

3.coherent,tight上下文的連貫性

即有效地使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。4.usethewordsproperly

語(yǔ)言的得體性5.Writeyourarticleclearly.6.Mindthenumberofyoursentences.Tomakethearticletight,gracefulandclear.Toavoidusingrepetitivewordsorexpressions.

表達(dá)時(shí)盡量用一些較高級(jí)的詞匯，避免使用重復(fù)的詞語(yǔ)，使語(yǔ)言不至于單純和幼稚。也可以給文章增添亮點(diǎn)。

（2）Tousesometransitionalwords

恰當(dāng)選用過(guò)渡詞，使文章緊湊，流暢。

(3)Tousemoresentencepatternssuchasinvertedorder,emphasis,acompoundsentenceoraparticipleadverbial

適當(dāng)使用多種句型，注意語(yǔ)言的豐富性，多樣化，以變化多端的形式來(lái)表現(xiàn)豐富多彩的內(nèi)容。Basicwritingskills

Waysofwritinggoodsentences方法一.一句多譯

Assoonaswearrivedatthevillage,wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagers.Onarrivingatthevillage，wewerewarmly….

Themomentwearrivedatthevillage,wewere…Wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagersimmediatelywearrivedatthevillage.Nosooner

hadwearrivedatthevillagethanwe……Hardly

hadwearrivedatthevillagewhen

we….Usedifferentwaystodescribethepicture

方法一.一句多譯

一…就受到歡迎AssoonasLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairport,theywerewarmlywelcomed.Onarrivingattheairport,LienChanandhiswife…LienChanandhiswifewerewarmlywelcomedthemoment/immediatelytheyarrivedattheairport.NosoonerhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportthantheywere…HardlyhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportwhentheywere…方法一.一句多譯Practice

一句多譯

這本書花了我300元。

Ispent300yuanonthebook.Ipaid300yuanforthebook.

Thepriceofthebookis300yuan.Itcostme300yuantobuythebook.Thebookcostme300yuan.

Practice

一句多譯昨天下午他才來(lái)。Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.

Itwasyesterdayafternoonthathearrivedhere.Itwasnotuntilyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.

Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.

Rewritethesentences

方法二.使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使句子簡(jiǎn)潔高檔

（1）MostoftheartistswhohadbeeninvitedtothepartywerefromSouthAfrica.

MostoftheartistsinvitedtothepartywerefromSouthAfrica.

（2）Nowadaystheoldpeopleoftendomorningexercisesintheparkinorderthattheycouldkeephealthy.

Nowadaystheoldpeopleoftendomorningexercisesintheparktokeephealthy.

方法二.使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使句子簡(jiǎn)潔高檔Completethesentenceswithnon-predicate(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞)聽到這個(gè)消息,他們變的很激動(dòng)._________thenews,theygotexcited.2.盡管被告知許多遍,他仍然重復(fù)這個(gè)錯(cuò).__________________manytimes,hestillrepeatedthemistake.3.除非被邀請(qǐng)發(fā)言,你應(yīng)該在會(huì)議上保持沉默.

Unless________tospeak,youshouldkeepsilentatthemeeting.Hearing

HavingbeentoldinvitedTranslatethefollowingsentencesbyusingnon-predicate(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞)1,面對(duì)困難時(shí)，他從不放棄。2，引入市場(chǎng)后，該產(chǎn)品大獲成功。3，做完作業(yè)后，他回家了。Facedwith/Facingdifficulties,henevergivesup.Introducedtothemarket,theproductmadeagreatsuccess.

Havingfinishedhishomework,hereturnedhome.方法三.豐富的句式DescribethecharacterbyusingInvertedSentence(倒裝句)Pooras/thoughhewas,hewashappy.方法三.豐富的句式SentencepatternsAreAlwaysUsefulThedogjumpedintotheriverandpulledthegirltothebank.Itwasthedogthatjumpedintotheriverandpulledthegirltosafety.ThesquareisneartheGreatWallHotel.NeartheGreatWallHotelisthesquare.YouwillhavetoworkhardforyearstospeakgoodEnglish.ItwilltakeyearsofhardworktospeakgoodEnglish.Ifailedintheexamagain.WhatdisappointedmemostwasthatIfailedintheexamagain.MissLiwillgiveusareportsoon.MissLi,whohasawideknowledgeofEnglish,willgiveusareportsoon.WealllikeJim.WealllikeJim,whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.WealllikeJimbecauseofhishelpfulnessandkindness.

1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名詞性從句）2.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒裝句)3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虛擬語(yǔ)氣）What

surpriseshimisthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Practice

怎樣使用較豐富的句式WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.

Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.

5.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.（使用狀語(yǔ)從句）

6.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.

（用并列句）7．HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.

(使用倒裝句)NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.

Studyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.Usedifferentwaystodescribeonesentence.Makesentencesbyusingnon-predicate.3.Sentencepatternsarealwaysuseful

Summaries:

Practice此四幅畫描述了愛(ài)鳥周活動(dòng)中李明某一天所經(jīng)歷的事，由此寫一篇文章。要求：1必須使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)圖畫內(nèi)容。2將5個(gè)句子組成連貫的短文。步驟一審題narrationpasttensethethirdpersontimeorderwritingstyle:tense:person:order:caughtabirdfixedastringtoitagirllookformotherapolicecomforther步驟二要點(diǎn)sendherhomelostinthoughtsetthebirdfreefeelhappy步驟二要點(diǎn)步驟三.擴(kuò)展成句，連句成篇1.Oneday,LiMingcaughtabirdandfixedastringtoit.

2.Hesawagirlcrylookingforhermumandapolice-mancomforther.3.ThepolicemansentthegirlhomeandLiMingwaslostinthought.4.LiMingsetthebirdfreeandfeltveryhappy.步驟四.仔細(xì)檢查，認(rèn)真修改①查是否遺漏要點(diǎn)，信息是否完整，尤其是：人物、地點(diǎn)、時(shí)間、發(fā)生什么事、如何發(fā)生、怎樣進(jìn)行等方面是否遺漏。②查體裁格式是否正確。③查句式使用是否科學(xué)得當(dāng)。④查敘述的順序是否顛倒。⑤查過(guò)渡詞是否使用合理。⑥查時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)是否一致正確。⑦查書寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是否規(guī)范清晰。⑧查字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求。Oneday,LiMingcaughtabirdandfixedastringtoit.Whenplayingwithit,hesawthegirlwhowascryingcouldn’tfindhermumandakindpolicemantriedtocomfortherandtoldherthathewouldsendherhome.

Seeingthemgooff,LiMingwasdeepinthought.Heheardthecryofthebirdandsuddenlythoughtthatthebirdmightbemissingitsmother.

So

heatoncesetthebirdfree,andthebirdflewhappilyintothesky.AssignmentPleasefinishthecompositionafterclass.全本小說(shuō)/全本小說(shuō)hoq473egk辦法掙點(diǎn)錢就沒(méi)法養(yǎng)家糊口了?，F(xiàn)在呀只要有錢，讓我背死人也干！”老實(shí)人說(shuō)話就是這么實(shí)在。王希維一邊說(shuō)話，一邊拿竹竿使勁攪動(dòng)起來(lái)，污泥讓他這么一攪動(dòng)，惡臭味更濃烈了,幾乎令人作嘔。就在這時(shí)，五六個(gè)職工抬來(lái)一根粗重的鐵杠走過(guò)來(lái)了。刁一德叫嚷道：“怎么這么臭!像茅廁，他媽的我都要吐了?！钡笠坏率腔ㄩ_啤酒單位的正式工，他高高的個(gè)子，人長(zhǎng)得肥肥胖胖的，高興時(shí)頭總是昂著，像個(gè)長(zhǎng)頸鹿一樣；不高興時(shí)，又像喪家犬一樣，灰溜溜的，他長(zhǎng)著一副扇風(fēng)耳，嘴唇發(fā)白，一雙烏溜溜的眼睛總好像在尋找著什么一樣，眼睛提溜提溜轉(zhuǎn)個(gè)不停。他的形象確實(shí)是有做漢奸的潛質(zhì)。刁一德一只手抬著鐵杠，另外一只手來(lái)回使勁地煽：“真臭！真臭！”然后，往地上狠狠地吐了口痰，說(shuō)