2024屆高考英語二輪專題復習與測試專題五應用文寫作第一課寫作模板與實戰(zhàn)展示Ⅰ

專題五應用文寫作一、題型解讀1.應用文寫作主要考查學生英語語言實際應用能力，測試學生在實際生活情景下運用英語傳達信息、表達觀點的能力，題目側重英語語言的交際性和實用性。2.文體包括書信（郵件）、新聞報道、日記、通知、發(fā)言（演講）稿、倡議書、海報、說明書、網(wǎng)絡發(fā)帖等。但近幾年高考進一步拓展寫作文體，更新試題呈現(xiàn)形式，設置更加貼近現(xiàn)實生活的英語交際任務情境，增強試題的開放性和靈活性。3.詞數(shù)為80左右，滿分15分。應用文通常給出提綱式要點，話題常與學生的校園生活息息相關。二、命題透視卷名體裁主題語境素養(yǎng)話題2023·全國甲卷征文稿人與社會用英語講中國故事的征文活動投稿2023·全國乙卷征文稿人與自我描述自己學習一項新技能的體驗和感受的投稿2023·新課標Ⅰ卷建議信人與自我對外教分組安排的意見和建議命題預測本題型的考查除了強調(diào)基礎性外，還將進一步增強開放性和靈活性。1.融入中華文化、堅定“四個自信”。命題寫作話題以文化類居多，通過講述中國故事倡導傳承中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化，引導學生堅定“四個自信”。2.落實五育并舉、深化體美勞教育引導。命題形式以活動介紹為主，如農(nóng)場活動、校園活動、跑步活動等，情景真實，貼近學生生活，加大對體育運動與健康意識、審美情趣和勞動精神等的考查。3.關注社會熱點，與時俱進，傳播正能量，倡導和諧人際關系和科學探索精神。4.借助英語的工具性，拓展國際視野，助推人類命運共同體建設和跨文化交流。三、賦分標準（一）應用文評分細則1.本題總分為15分，分五個檔次進行評分。2.評分時應主要從內(nèi)容組織、詞匯語法和篇章結構三個方面考慮。具體為：（1）對于內(nèi)容要點的覆蓋情況以及表述的清楚程度與合理性。（2）使用詞匯和語法結構的準確性、恰當性和多樣性。（3）上下文的銜接和全文的連貫性。3.評分時，先根據(jù)作答的整體情況初步確定所屬檔次，然后以相應檔次的要求來綜合衡量確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。4.評分注意事項。（1）詞數(shù)少于60或多于100的，從總分中減去2分。（2）單詞拼寫和標點符號是寫作規(guī)范的重要方面，評分時應視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮，英美不同的拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。書寫較差，以至影響交際的，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。（二）各檔次的給分范圍和要求檔次描述第五檔（13～15分）——覆蓋所有的內(nèi)容要點，表達清楚，合理。——應用了豐富的語法結構和詞匯，有少許錯誤，但完全不影響理解。——有效使用語句銜接手段，全文結構清晰，意義連貫，完全達到預期的寫作目的第四檔（9～12分）——覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點，表達清晰?！獞昧素S富的語法結構和詞匯，有些許錯誤。——有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊第三檔（7～9分）——雖漏掉了一些內(nèi)容，但覆蓋了主要內(nèi)容。——應用了一定的語法結構和詞匯，有一些錯誤?！獞煤唵蔚恼Z句間的連接成分，使全文內(nèi)容連貫第二檔（4～6分）——漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容，寫了一些無關內(nèi)容。——應用了豐富的語法結構和詞匯，有很多錯誤?！皇褂昧撕苌僬Z句間的連接成分第一檔（1～3分）——明顯漏掉主要內(nèi)容，寫了一些無關內(nèi)容，原因可能是未理解試題要求?！獞昧藷o關的語法結構和詞匯，有太多錯誤，嚴重影響理解?！獩]有銜接，全文意義松散，不連貫，完全未達到預期的寫作目的零檔（0分）——未作答或內(nèi)容太少，或所寫內(nèi)容與題目要求完全無關一、案例現(xiàn)場“冤屈的”四檔作文（得分9分）“體面的”五檔作文（得分14分）DearTom，Iamverydelightedtohearfromyou.Youaskedmeaboutthephysicalexerciseinourschoolandthefollowinginformationmayhelpyouknowmoreaboutit.Tobeginwith，anewstadiumhasbeenbuiltup，andithasbecomethenewlandmarkinourschool.Moreover，withthestadiumsetup，manykindsofsportseventsareabletobeheld，ofwhichPingpong，footballandrunningcompetitionsareverypopular.Asforme，I'minterestedinbasketball.Isincerelyinviteyoutocometoourschoolandseeforyourself.Yours，LiHuaDearTom，Iammorethandelightedtohearfromyou.Youaskedmeaboutthephysicalexerciseinourschooland，Ithink，thefollowinginformationmayhelpyouhaveabetterunderstandingofit.Tobeginwith，anewstadiumhasbeenbuiltup，whichhasbecomethenewlandmarkinourschool.Moreover，thestadiumsetup，awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld，ofwhichPingpong，footballaswellasrunningcompetitionsenjoygreatpopularity.Asforme，I'minterestedinbasketball.Isincerelyinviteyoutocometoourschoolandseeforyourself.Yours，LiHua專家點評1.左欄作文用詞準確，分段合理，且使用了with復合結構和ofwhich引導的非限制性定語從句等，是一篇相當不錯的作文。2.右欄升級后的作文，語言更地道、更自然流暢，可謂妙筆生花，技高一籌。（1）詞匯的提升有五處，特別是haveabetterunderstandingof、awiderangeof及enjoygreatpopularity的使用會令閱卷老師贊嘆作者深厚的語言功底，同時也提升了得分檔次。（2）句式的提升有三處，插入語Ⅰthink，which引導的定語從句，以及獨立主格thestadiumsetup的使用，都恰到好處，相對于左欄的作文有了大幅度的提升二、策略大營策略（一）“包裝”讓詞匯高端起來1.用詞無重復原則——求雅變異寫作時，應盡量避免重復使用相同的詞語。恰當?shù)厥褂猛x詞（組）不僅可以體現(xiàn)雅致的文彩，還有利于增強段落的統(tǒng)一性和連貫性。例如：（1）oldpeople→theelderly/seniorcitizens老人（2）awaytodosth.→anapproachtodoingsth.做某事的方法（3）allkindsof→avarietyof/various/awiderangeof各種各樣的（4）finish→accomplish完成（5）hard/difficult→tough/challenging困難的（6）different→various不同的（7）free→available有空的（8）sorry→upset難過的（9）glad→pleased/delighted/cheerful/joyful高興的（10）inspire→spark激發(fā)，鼓舞（11）bebusywith→beabsorbedin/beoccupiedwith/beengagedin忙于[針對訓練1]同義詞替換。1.Inordertoenrichstudents'after-schoollife，anexhibitionofstudents'traditionalChinesepaintingsisbeingheldbyourschool，whichinspiresagrowinglovefortraditionalart.→Inordertoenrichstudents'after-schoollife，anexhibitionofstudents'traditionalChinesepaintingsisbeingheldbyourschool，whichagrowinglovefortraditionalart.（2021·浙江卷滿分作文）2.DuetoCOVID-19，itisdifficultforfarmerstoselltheirproduce，makingthemveryhopeless.→DuetoCOVID-19，itisforfarmerstoselltheirproduce，makingthemveryhopeless.答案：1.sparks2.tough/challenging2.詞義具體化原則——生動貼切寫作中盡量避免使用意義廣泛、模棱兩可的詞，而要根據(jù)語境使用具體生動的詞。[針對訓練2]補全句子。1.ListeningtosongsandwatchingmoviesaregoodforimprovingtheirspokenEnglish.→ListeningtosongsandwatchingmoviesimprovingtheirspokenEnglish.（2022·全國乙卷作文）2.Ialsogotadeeperimpressionfortherolethatplantsplayedinkeepingthebalanceofourecosystem.→Ialsofortherolethatplantsplayedinmaintainingthebalanceofourecosystem（2023·浙江卷）答案：1.arebeneficialto2.gainedagreaterappreciation3.高年級詞匯優(yōu)先原則——新穎高級為了表現(xiàn)自己的語言功底，吸引閱卷老師的眼球，應盡量使用高年級階段學到的詞匯，而不用低年級階段學到的詞匯。[針對訓練3]同義詞替換。1.Wearesupposedtoadoptaproperwaytoprotectusfromtheterriblevirus.→Wearesupposedtoadopt________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________usfromtheterriblevirus.2.ThereisallkindsoflocaloperasaroundChina，suchasBeijingOperaandKunOpera.→ThereislocaloperasaroundChina，suchasBeijingOperaandKunOpera.答案：1.anappropriateapproachtoprotecting2.awiderangeof4.短語優(yōu)先原則——湊詞增色用短語代替單詞不僅會給文章增加亮點，而且用短語湊詞數(shù)也是一個很好的選擇。（1）形容詞變短語的方法（of＋同根名詞）。veryimportant/useful/valuable/beneficial/helpful→ofvital/greatimportance/use/value/benefit/help（2）動詞變短語的方法——替換升級。動詞對應短語know/realizebeawareof/befamiliarwithunderstandfigureout/makesenseofshouldbesupposedtousemakeuseof/takeadvantageofconsidertake...intoaccount/considerationbecomingbeapproaching/bearoundthecornermasterhaveagoodcommandof動詞對應短語thankexpressone'ssinceregratitudetorepresentonbehalfofsucceedmakeit/achieveone'sgoalshelpdosb.afavourvalueattachimportancetovisitpayavisittolikebefondof/beinterestedin/becrazyabout/beaddictedto（3）副詞變短語的方法——同義短語替換。副詞對應短語verymorethanproperlyinplacequicklywithoutdelayactuallyasamatteroffactpossiblywheneverpossible[針對訓練4]詞匯升級。1.ImasterEnglish，whichenablesmetocommunicatewithforeignfriendswell.→I________________________________________________________________________English，whichenablesmetocommunicatewithforeignfriendswell.2.So，itishightimethatwedidallwecantoaffectthesustainabledevelopmentofoceansgreatly.→So，itishightimethatwedidallwecantothesustainabledevelopmentofoceans.（2022·全國甲卷作文）3.IfallintolovewithEnglish.→I________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________English.（2023·新課標Ⅰ卷）1.haveagoodcommandof2.makeahugedifferenceto3.amfondof/aminterestedin/amcrazyabout/amaddictedto策略（二）“換裝”讓句子新穎起來換用句式時，應遵循以下原則：高級但不造作，多變但不離譜，復雜但不晦澀。1.特殊句式，風景獨好（1）運用強調(diào)句：強調(diào)句型的使用是為了突出強調(diào)句子的某一部分，它是一種比較容易掌握的高級表達方式。其構成為：①強調(diào)句型基本結構為“It＋is/was＋被強調(diào)部分＋that/who＋句子其他部分”。②借助于助動詞do/does/did對謂語動詞進行強調(diào)。[針對訓練5]對加黑部分進行強調(diào)。1.Inmymemory，Youthaccompaniesmethroughmywholehighschool.→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2021·新高考Ⅰ卷滿分作文）2.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.IexpectYouthcanpublishmoreclassicworksandhaveapromisingfuture.→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2021·新高考Ⅰ卷滿分作文）答案：1.Inmymemory，itisYouththataccompaniesmethroughmywholehighschool.2.Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.3.IdoexpectYouthcanpublishmoreclassicworksandhaveapromisingfuture.（2）運用倒裝句，以示強調(diào)。在寫作中，倒裝句應用比較廣泛，涉及的句型也比較多，包括部分倒裝和全部倒裝。常見的有：①“only＋狀語”置于句首時，句子用部分倒裝。②none、neither、nor、not、never、hardly、little、seldom等否定詞以及atnotime、bynomeans等短語置于句首時，句子用部分倒裝。③在so/such...that...結構中，當so/such...位于句首時，其后的句子用部分倒裝。④as、though引起的倒裝句。⑤表方位的副詞或者表地點的介詞短語置于句首且句子的主語是名詞時，句子用全部倒裝。⑥notonly位于句首，后接句子時，要求采用部分倒裝結構，即將該句中謂語的一部分如助動詞或情態(tài)動詞或系動詞倒裝至主語之前。[針對訓練6]句型轉換。1.Oceanpollutioncanbedramaticallyhighlightedwitheveryone'sinvolvement.（用only＋介詞短語引起倒裝）.→Onlywitheveryone'sinvolvement______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.（2022·全國甲卷作文）2.Eachpaircanhaveagoodmatchandeffectivelycommunicatewitheachotherinthisway.→Onlyinthiswayagoodmatchandeffectivelycommunicatewitheachother.（2023·新課標Ⅰ卷）3.Moreover，itwillnotonlyimproveourEnglishcommunicationskills，butitwillalsobuildourconfidence.→Moreover，ourEnglishcommunicationskills，butitwillalsobuildourconfidence.（2023·新課標Ⅰ卷）4.AnoldtemplewhichdatesbacktoMingDynastystandsatthefootofthemountain.→Atthefootofthemountain________________________________________________________________________，whichdatesbacktoMingDynasty.5.Throughtheexhibition，youcannotonlyadmirewonderfulpictures，butalsounderstandtheartoftraditionalChinesepaintingbetter.→Throughtheexhibition，notonly，butalsounderstandtheartoftraditionalChinesepaintingbetter.（2021·浙江卷滿分作文）答案：1.canoceanpollutionbedramaticallyhighlighted2.caneachpairhave3.notonlywillitimprove4.standsanoldtemple5.canyouadmirewonderfulpictures（3）運用省略句，避免不必要的重復。[針對訓練7]句型轉換。1.WhenIfeeldepressed，Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.→________________________________________________________________________，Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.（2021·新高考Ⅰ卷滿分作文）2.Ifitispossible，avoidgoingtocrowdedpublicplacessuchascinemas，shoppingmalls，Internetbarsandsoon.→，avoidgoingtocrowdedpublicplacessuchascinemas，shoppingmalls，Internetbarsandsoon.答案：1.Whenfeelingdepressed2.Ifpossible2.三大句式，編排巧妙（1）運用定語從句。[針對訓練8]句型轉換。1.WeallknowthatChinesefoodhasbecomeincreasinglypopulararoundtheworld.（用as進行轉換）→________________________________________________________________________，Chinesefoodhasbecomeincreasinglypopulararoundtheworld.2.Withthefireheating，theboilingoilsuddenlysplashedoutofthehotpan，anditscaredmealot.→Withthefireheating，theboilingoilsuddenlysplashedoutofthehotpan，Ｗ.（2023·全國乙卷）答案：1.Asisknowntousall2.whichscaredmealot（2）運用名詞性從句。[針對訓練9]補全句子。1.________________________________________________________________________（令他吃驚的）isthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.2.Ihavejustfound________________________________________________________________________（我那天下午得參加一個重要會議）.3.Wordcame________________________________________________________________________（我們學校打算舉行一次班會）whosetopicisrelatedtoChinesetraditionalcustoms.（2021·全國甲卷滿分作文）答案：1.Whatsurpriseshim2.thatIhavetoattendanimportantmeetingthatafternoon3.thatourschoolisgoingtoholdaclassmeeting（3）運用狀語從句。[針對訓練10]補全句子。1.Ifnot，pleaseletmeknow（以便我們做出調(diào)整）accordinglytosuityourschedule.（2022·新高考Ⅰ卷）2.________________________________________________________________________（盡管我被拒絕了），Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement，whichgivesmeconfidencetobeawriter.（2021·新高考Ⅰ卷滿分作文）答案：1.sothat/inorderthatwecanmakeadjustments2.Refusedas/thoughIwas/Although/Though/WhileIwasrefused3.活用非謂語，讓表達言簡意賅用非謂語動詞整合簡單句、并列句或復合句，提升表達檔次，使句子凝練高端。[針對訓練11]句型轉換。1.Astheoceanpollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreserious，June8thisofficiallynamedbytheUnitedNationsastheWorldOceansDay，whichisaimedatraisingpeople'sawarenessofoceanconservation.→________________________________________________________________________，June8thisofficiallynamedbytheUnitedNationsastheWorldOceansDay，whichisaimedatraisingpeople'sawarenessofoceanconservation.（2022·全國甲卷作文）2.Lastweekend，Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activitythatwasorganisedbyourStudents'Union.（用非謂語動詞短語轉換）→Lastweekend，Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityＷ.（2023·浙江卷）3.WhenwearefacedwithallkindsofinformationontheInternet，wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse，whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.（用非謂語動詞短語轉換）→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________，wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse，whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.（2021·全國乙卷滿分作文）4.Ontheotherhand，onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections，whichmakesitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.→Ontheotherhand，onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.（2021·全國乙卷滿分作文）答案：1.WiththeoceanpollutionbecomingmoreandmoreanisedbyourStudents'Union3.FacedwithallkindsofinformationontheInternet4.makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected4.適時感嘆，必要強調(diào)[針對訓練12]補全句子。________________________________________________________________________（我們玩得多么開心?。?！Notonlydiditgiveusrelaxation，butalsoitgotusclosertonature.答案：Whatawonderfultimewehad5.it句式表達技高一籌（1）Itis/was＋形容詞/名詞＋that...It'snecessary/important/naturalthatsb.（should）do....某人做……是必要的/重要的/自然的Itislikelythat...有可能……Itis（high/about）timethat＋主語＋did/shoulddo...該是……的時候了Itis/wasnosurprise/wonderthat...……不足為奇Itisapitythat...遺憾的是……（2）Itis/was＋過去分詞＋that...Itiswidelybelieved/acknowledgedthat...人們普遍相信/認為……Itisknownthat...（＝Whatisknownisthat.../Asweallknow，...）眾所周知……Itisstronglyrecommendedthat...強烈建議……Itisreported/said/hopedthat...據(jù)報道/據(jù)說/人們希望……Itisthought/consideredthat...……被認為……，大家認為……（3）It＋be＋名詞＋（of/forsb）todosth.It'sagreathonourforsbtodosth.對某人來說做某事是一件非常榮幸的事情It'smygreatprivilegetodosth.做某事是我的莫大榮幸（4）動詞＋it＋其他。I'dappreciateitif...如果……我將感激不盡sb.hate（s）/dislike（s）/love（s）/like（s）itwhen...某人討厭/喜歡……（5）it的其他相關句型：Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...毫無疑問/不言而喻……Ittakes（sb.）sometime/energytodosth.做某事花費了（某人）一些時間/精力Itisnouse/gooddoingsth.做某事沒有用處/好處Whenitcomesto...當談到……Assb.put（s）it...正如某人所說的那樣……Ithasbeen＋時間段＋since...自從……有多長時間了eq\b\lc\\rc\}(\a\vs4\al\co1(Ithappens/happenedthat...,sb.happen（s）/happenedtodo...))eq\a\vs4\al(偶然……；,某人碰巧……)Itoccursto/hits/strikessb.that...某人突然想到……Itseems/appearsthat...看起來似乎……（6）主語＋think/believe/feel/make/find＋it＋形容詞/名詞＋（of/forsb.＋）todosth.[針對訓練13]補全句子/句型轉換。1.________________________________________________________________________（眾所周知），morethantwo-thirdsoftheEarth'ssurfaceiscoveredbywater.（2022·全國甲卷作文）2.I________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________traditionalChineseculture.我認為這是進一步了解中國傳統(tǒng)文化的一個很好的機會。3.Itisimportantthateveryone________________________________________________________________________inanewenvironment.在新的環(huán)境中學會和他人相處對每個人都是重要的。4.ItisknownthattheGreatWallisoneoftheSevenWondersoftheAncientWorld，whichislocatedinNorthChina.→theGreatWallisoneoftheSevenWondersoftheAncientWorld，whichislocatedinNorthChina.（主語從句）→，theGreatWallisoneoftheSevenWondersoftheAncientWorld，whichislocatedinNorthChina.（非限制性定語從句）答案：1.Asweallknow2.consideritawonderfulopportunitytofurtherunderstand3.shouldlearntogetalongwellwithothers4.WhatisknownisthatAsweallknow策略（三）“改裝”讓細節(jié)豐滿起來在英語寫作中，適當增加細節(jié)內(nèi)容，能使習作流暢、豐滿，達到應有的表達效果。1.增加同位語或定語從句[針對訓練14]補全句子。1.I'mLiHua，________________________________________________________________________（一個參加交流項目的中國學生），andI'mstudyinginthisschool.2.Tobeginwith，thethemeoftheshowisEnvironmentProtection，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（這不僅有意義，而且有趣）.答案：1.aChinesestudentonanexchangeprogramme2.whichwillbenotonlymeaningfulbutalsointeresting2.列舉具體的實例來補充說明[針對訓練15]補全句子。1.I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（和他們聊天，做一些家務）.2.Inthepasttwoweeks，wehavehadtheculturalcommunicationinmanyaspects，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（例如生活、學習、體育、文學、藝術等）。答案：1.chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework2.suchaslife，study，sports，literature，artsandsoon3.添加與所給信息有關的原因、結果、條件、讓步、手段、目的等內(nèi)容[針對訓練16]補全句子。1.Iammorethandelightedtosharesomedetailswithyou.→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（知道您對我們的“珍愛生命”活動感興趣），Iammorethandelightedtosharesomedetailswithyou.2.I'mplanningtotakeaparttimejobinaforeigncompany.→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（為了獲得一些實踐經(jīng)驗），I'mplanningtotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncompany.答案：1.KnowingthatyouareinterestedinourCherishLifeactivity2.Inordertogetsomepracticalexperience4.內(nèi)容適當具體化[針對訓練17]補全句子。1.I'mgoingtodosomeshoppinginthesupermarket.→I'mgoingtodosomeshopping________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（在超市里，直到下午5點才能回來）.2.TheactivitywillbeheldinClassroom501.→Theactivitywillbeheld________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（4月11日的上午9時至10時）inClassroom501.答案：1.inthesupermarketandwon'tbebackuntil5o'clockintheafternoon2.from9a.m.to10a.m.on11April5.表達感受、評價、愿望、倡議等[針對訓練18]補全句子。1.Ithinkitisagoodchancetoappreciatelocaloperas，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（這肯定能幫助你了解更多的中國文化）.2.Wecansetoutearly________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（這樣我們就可以有更多的時間來閱讀和選擇書了）.答案：1.whichwillsurelyhelpyoulearnmoreaboutChineseculture2.sothatwecanhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks策略（四）“化裝”讓語篇靚麗起來根據(jù)行文或段落需要，在句與句或段與段之間適當增加過渡詞語，使文章渾然一體。1.表示“首先”的詞語如first/firstly，firstofall，tobegin/startwith等。①Firstofall，wemustmakefulluseofevery45-minutelesson.②Tobeginwith，smokingshouldbebannedinpublicareas.2.表示“其次”的詞語如second/secondly，besides，inaddition，what'smore，furthermore，moreover等。①Secondly，weshouldgetupearlytomemorizeidiomsandusefulexpressions.②What'smore，goodbookscanhelpustodevelopgoodcharacters.③Inaddition，doctorsarehighlyrespectedinChinaandingreatdemand，especiallyhighlyqualifiedprofessionals.3.表示“最后”的詞語如last/lastly，lastbutnotleast，mostimportantly等。①Lastbutnotleast，healthisalsoverysignificantforusstudents.②Mostimportantly，readingthosebooksopenedawindowformetoanotherworldandgavemeanewpointofview.4.表示“總之”的詞語如inshort，inbrief，inconclusion，ina/oneword，tosumup，allinall，onthewhole，ingeneral等。Inaword，successisimportant，andsoisfailure，becauseit'sthemotherofsuccess.[針對訓練19]補全句子。1.（首先），Ibroketheeggsandstirredthemevenlyundertheguidanceofmymother，andthenIwashedthetomatoesandslicedthem.（2023·全國乙卷）2.（而且），12%ofthestudentschoosetovisitEnglish-learningwebsiteswhenenhancingEnglishskill.（2022·全國乙卷作文）答案：1.Atfirst2.What'smore第一課寫作模板與實戰(zhàn)展示（Ⅰ）（活動介紹/新聞報道、演講/發(fā)言稿、通知與倡議書）（一）萬能內(nèi)化模板1.活動介紹/新聞報道2.演講（發(fā)言）稿ACross-CountryRunningRaceInorderto（目的），（事件）.（人物）participatedintherace，amongwhomthirtyweregirls.Participantssetout（時間、地點）.________________________________________________________________________（活動意義）________________________________________________________________________（注意事項）.Goodafternoon.Fellowstudents/Distinguishedguests/HonourableJudges！Mynameis，from（自我介紹）.Mytopictodayis（提出演講主題）.Everybodyknowsthat（意義）.Unfortunately，mostpeople（反面）becauseit'seasilyto（原因分析）.Forexample，（事實或現(xiàn)象列舉），inwhich（后果）.Besides，（進一步闡述理由）.Solet's（再次點題）.That'sall.Thankyouforyourlistening/attention.3.通知4.倡議書NoticeInorderto（目的），an（活動）willbeheld（地點和時間）.Theactivityis（詳細信息），whichwillbeveryinteresting/meaningful/significant.Attheendoftheactivity，（人物）will（具體事例）.What'smore，you'resupposedto（要求）.Allthestudentsofourclassareexpectedtobepresentontime.（日期）（單位）（對象），It's（表示榮幸）andgivemyspeech.Mynameis（自我介紹）.Thetopicofmyspeechis（提出倡議主題）.Tobeginwith，manypeoplesuggestthat（倡議具體內(nèi)容）.Firstly，Ｗ.Secondly，Ｗ.Thirdly，（話題或現(xiàn)象列舉）.WhatIwanttostressisthat（重申主題）.Foronething，Ｗ.Foranother，Ｗ.Besides，（原因或重要性列舉）.Inaword，（總結）.（二）四步解題示范[典例]你受學生會委托為校宣傳欄“英語天地”寫一則通知，請大家觀看一部英文短片GrowingTogether，內(nèi)容包括：1.短片內(nèi)容：學校的發(fā)展；2.放映時間、地點；3.歡迎對短片提出意見。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[寫作示范]第一步：三審定題，列綱謀篇定題謀篇體裁書面通知第一段目的和主要內(nèi)容人稱第三人稱第二段短片名字與內(nèi)容；目的與意義；放映時間與地點；相關要求時態(tài)一般將來時第三段結束套語：提希望第二步：斟詞酌句，鎖住要點單詞attention，interesting，outstanding，development，own，beloved，meaningful，confidence短語remember/note，opinion/comment，takepartin/joinin/participatein，heateddiscussion，giveacomment，haveagreattime，holdthebelief句型三大從句，非謂語動詞第三步：詞句升級，升華助篇詞匯提升方法：普通→高級示例：interesting→someinformation→own→remember→opinion→believe→句子整合方法：簡單→復雜，主動→被動示例：1.ThenameofthemovieisGrowingTogether.Itisaboutthedevelopmentofourownschool.→ThenameofthemovieisGrowingTogether，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.（用定語從句改寫）2.Everybody，youwillbewelcometotakepartinit.Pleaseenjoythemovie.Thenyoushouldhaveaheateddiscussionandgiveyourownopinions.→Everyoneofyouwillbewelcometotakepartinit，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________afterwardsand________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.（用動詞-ing形式改寫）答案：outstandingrelevantmenthave/holdthebeliefthat...1.whichisaboutthedevelopmentofourbelovedschool2.enjoyingthemovie，havingaheateddiscussiongivingyourowncomments第四步：銜接潤色，完美成篇銜接詞：tobeginwith，besides，what'smore，afterwards，hopefully________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：NoticeBoysandgirls，Recently，anoutstandingmoviewillbeshowninourcampus.Herearesomerelevantdetailsaboutit.Tobeginwith，thenameofthemovieisGrowingTogether，whichisaboutthedevelopmentofourbelovedschool.Besides，pleasenotethatitwillbeshowninthelibraryfrom2：00to4：00p.m.on9June.What'smore，everyoneofyouwillbewelcometotakepartinit，enjoyingthemovie，havingaheateddiscussionafterwardsandgivingyourowncomments.Ihavethebeliefthatyouwillhaveagreattimethen.TheStudents'UnionWriting1（2023·湛江市普高二模）假定你是李華，請給你校外教Anna寫一封郵件，邀請她主持下個月的英語演講比賽，內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽的地點、時間等；2.她需要做的事。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。DearAnna，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua【參考答案】DearAnna，IamwritingthislettertoaskifyouarewillingtobethehostoftheEnglishspeechcontest.Thecontestisscheduledtobeheldintheschoollecturecentreonthesecondweekendofnextmonth.Youareexpectedtogivebothanopeningspeechandaclosingone，andmakesomebriefcommentsonthespeakers.Andofcourse，youneedtointroduceourjudgesbriefly.I'dappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyinvitation.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestwishestoyou.Yours，LiHuaWriting2（2023·大灣區(qū)普高聯(lián)考）五一勞動節(jié)快到了，學校開展了“我?guī)透改缸黾覄铡钡幕顒?。請你為校報英文專欄寫一篇短文，介紹該活動的情況，要點包括：1.活動目的；2.活動內(nèi)容；3.你的感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。HelpingMyParentsDoHousework________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】HelpingMyparentsDoHouseworkWiththeapproachoftheMayDayInternationalLaborDay，ourschoollaunchedanactivityof“HelpingParentsDoHousework”，aimingtocultivateasenseofresponsibilityandgratitudeinstudents.Theactivityinvolvedstudentstakingonvariouschoressuchascleaning，cooking，andlaundry，thusgivingparentssomewell-deservedrest.Throughouttheweek，studentswereencouragedtosharetheirexperiencesandinsightsinclass，promotingdiscussionandreflection.Personally，Ifindthisactivitybotheducatio