2024屆高考英語(yǔ)二輪專(zhuān)題復(fù)習(xí)與測(cè)試專(zhuān)題五應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作第三課寫(xiě)作模板與實(shí)戰(zhàn)展示Ⅲ

第三課寫(xiě)作模板與實(shí)戰(zhàn)展示（Ⅲ）（建議信、申請(qǐng)信、告知信、求助信與詢(xún)問(wèn)信）（一）萬(wàn)能內(nèi)化模板1.建議信2.申請(qǐng)信Dear（對(duì)象），Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto（需要提建議的具體事項(xiàng)），andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion，youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions：（建議的具體內(nèi)容）.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful，andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouforfurtherdetails.（祝愿）.Yourssincerely，LiHuaDearSirorMadam，I'm（簡(jiǎn)單的自我介紹）.I'mwritingtoapplyfortheposition（申請(qǐng)的具體職位）.Ireallywanttoobtainthispreciousopportunitybecause（說(shuō)明為什么想得到這次寶貴的機(jī)會(huì)）.Ｗ.Besides，（分層次說(shuō)明自己的優(yōu)勢(shì)）.IamsurethatIcanperfectlyliveuptoyourexpectations.Iwillbegratefulifyoucouldgivemeakindconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours，LiHua3.告知信4.求助信5.詢(xún)問(wèn)信Dear（對(duì)象），Gladthatyou'veheardofthegoodnewsaboutthecoming（告知的具體內(nèi)容）.I'mwritingtoinformyouofthedetails.Asscheduled，the（活動(dòng)或項(xiàng)目）willtakeplaceat（地點(diǎn)）on（時(shí)間）.Youareexpectedto（具體要求或期望）.Besides，attentionsshouldbepaidto（進(jìn)一步的要求或期望）.Hopefullyyouwillbewellpreparedforitandenjoyyourself/haveagoodtime.Ifyouhaveanyfurtherquestions，pleasedon'thesitatetoaskme.Yours，LiHuaDear（對(duì)象），Iamwritingtoformallyrequestto（求助的內(nèi)容）.Thereasonisthat（給出原因）.I，soI（給出細(xì)節(jié)）.Iwouldalsoliketorequest（提出進(jìn)一步的求助）.IamsorryforanyinconvenienceIhavecaused.Thankyouforyourattentiontotheserequests.Iamlookingforwardtoafavourablereply.Yourssincerely，LiHuaDear（對(duì)象），I'mthepresidentoftheStudents'Unionofourschool.Delightedthatyourgroupwillcomeforavisit，I'dliketo（詢(xún)問(wèn)的內(nèi)容）.Tobeginwith，Iwouldappreciateitifyoucould（告知行程），inwhichcasewecouldgetpreparedforitaccordingly.What'smore，wewouldliketo（進(jìn)一步詢(xún)問(wèn)具體的事情）.Lastbutnotleast，（我還想知道您是否有其他特殊要求）.Yourearlyreplytotheletterwillbehighlyappreciated.Yours，LiHua（二）四步解題示范[典例]你的英國(guó)朋友Jim所在的學(xué)校要組織學(xué)生來(lái)中國(guó)旅行，有兩條路線可以選擇：“長(zhǎng)江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim來(lái)信希望你能給出一些建議。請(qǐng)你給他回一封信，內(nèi)容包括：1.你建議的路線；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim，I'mpleasedtohearthatyouwanttoaskformysuggestionson________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua[寫(xiě)作示范]第一步：三審定題，列綱謀篇定題謀篇體裁建議信第一段建議的路線人稱(chēng)以第一、第二人稱(chēng)為主第二段給出你的理由時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)第三段表達(dá)祝愿第二步：斟詞酌句，鎖住要點(diǎn)單詞route，civilization，suggest/recommend，scenery，sure/convinced，surprising/amazing短語(yǔ)haveabetterunderstandingof，beeagertodo，enjoyoneself，inconclusion句型名詞性從句，非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞（短語(yǔ)）第三步：詞句升級(jí)，升華助篇詞匯提升方法：普通→高級(jí)示例：sure→suggest→surprising→knowwellabout→haveagoodtime→句子整合方法：簡(jiǎn)單→復(fù)雜，主動(dòng)→被動(dòng)示例：1.Asweknow，YangtzeRiver，themotherriverofChinesecivilization，isthelongestriverinChinaandthethirdlongestriverintheworld.（用主語(yǔ)從句，notonly...butalso...句型改寫(xiě)）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.Istronglyadviseyoutochoosethisone.Fromit，youcanhaveabetterunderstandingofChinaandChinesehistory.（用詞匯升級(jí)＋定語(yǔ)從句改寫(xiě)）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：convincedrecommendamazinghaveabetterunderstandingofenjoyoneself1.WhatiswellknowntousisthatYangtzeRiverisnotonlythelongestriverinChinaandthethirdlongestriverintheworldbutalsothemotherriverofChinesecivilization.2.Istronglyrecommendthatyouchoose“TriptotheYangtzeRiver”，fromwhichyoucanhaveabetterunderstandingofChinaandChinesehistory.第四步：銜接潤(rùn)色，完美成篇DearJim，I'mpleasedtohearthatyouwanttoaskformysuggestionson________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua【參考答案】DearJim，I'mpleasedtohearthatyouwanttoaskformysuggestionsonhowtochooseabetteronefromthetworoutes“TriptotheYangtzeRiver”and“TriptoMountTai”.Herearemyopinions.WhatiswellknowntousisthatYangtzeRiverisnotonlythelongestriverinChinaandthethirdlongestriverintheworldbutalsothemotherriverofChinesecivilization.Therefore，Istronglyrecommendthatyouchoose“TriptotheYangtzeRiver”，fromwhichyoucanhaveabetterunderstandingofChinaandChinesehistory.Inaddition，thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing.Thus，I'msureyouareeagertocomeheretomakeasecondtrip.Inconclusion，IamconvincedthatthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverisabetterchoice.Ihopeyouwillenjoyyourself！Yours，LiHuaWriting1假定你是李華，暑假將要去倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，請(qǐng)給你在當(dāng)?shù)氐墓P友Mary寫(xiě)一封郵件，請(qǐng)她幫你找一間合適的公寓居住。內(nèi)容包括：1.期望的住宿條件；2.房租預(yù)算；3.租用時(shí)間。注意：1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】DearMary，IamgoingtostudyinLondonthissummervacation.Excitingnews，isn'tit？ButI'mstillworryingabouttheaccommodation.SoI'mwritingtoseeifyoucouldhelpmelookforanapartment.IwillstudyinLondonforabouttwomonths，sotheideallocationisaroundmyuniversity.IfIremembercorrectly，youlivenearthatarea，right？Ipreferaone-bedroomapartmentwithbathroom，laundry，kitchen，andWi-Fi.Mybudgetfortherentis￡350amonth.MystudywilllastfromJuly1sttoAugust31st，sotheapartmentshouldbeavailableduringthesetwomonths.ManythanksforyourhelpandI'mlookingforwardtoourreunion.Yours，LiHuaWriting2假定你是李華，正在ColumbiaUniversity求學(xué)，想利用暑假時(shí)間在肯德基（KFC）當(dāng)一名服務(wù)生。請(qǐng)你給店長(zhǎng)Steven寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信，內(nèi)容包括：1.自我介紹；2.申請(qǐng)的理由；3.聯(lián)系方式。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】DearSteven，IamLiHua，astudentfromColumbiaUniversity.IamwritingtoapplytobeawaiterinyourKFCtoearnsomepocketmoneyduringthissummervacation.Iamoutgoingandcangetalongwellwithmycolleaguesandcustomers.Iworkedinarestaurantlastsummerandearnedmuchrelatedexperience.Aboveall，Iamaquicklearner，whichcanenablemetoadapttomyjobassoonaspossible.Iwillhighlyappreciateitifmyapplicationistakenintoaccount.Pleasecontactmeby123456@.Yoursfaithfully，LiHuaWriting3假定你是李華，正在新西蘭讀書(shū)。你的好友Fred將負(fù)責(zé)學(xué)校文化節(jié)期間中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的演出策劃。他想聽(tīng)聽(tīng)你的建議，請(qǐng)給他回封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示贊賞；2.關(guān)于演出內(nèi)容的建議；3.約定時(shí)間進(jìn)一步討論。注意：1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】DearFred，GladtohearthatyouareresponsiblefortheperformanceofChinesetraditionalcultureduringourSchoolCultureFestival.Herearemysuggestions.Chineseshadowplayshouldbeincludedintheperformancebecauseitissomagic.Besides，theshowofHanfuisagoodchoicebecausemoreandmorepeoplehaveshowninterestinit.Toensuretheperformancegoeswell，you'dbetterchooseperformersinadvanceandhavesomepractice.Ifnecessary，Icanhaveadetaileddiscussionwithyouatyourconvenience.I'mlookingforwardtotheperformance.Yours，LiHuaWriting4假定你是李華，你的外國(guó)筆友Jack打算暑假期間來(lái)中國(guó)體驗(yàn)生活，發(fā)來(lái)郵件詢(xún)問(wèn)相關(guān)信息。請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歡迎；2.推薦內(nèi)容；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJack，KnowingthatyouarecomingtoChinaforthesummervacation，__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________