機(jī)電一體化陳述

中英文的寫作區(qū)別（機(jī)電類）PERSONALSTATEMENTYanZhihong作的區(qū)別。AgraduatefromtheHarbinInstituteofTechnologies,aninstitutionofhigherlearningknownforitsselectivity,IhavesolidlygroundedmyselfinadisciplinethatisstillnewinChina,namely,mechatronics.Withfouryearsofstricttrainingandconscientiousstudiesbehind,Iamnowversedinabroadrangeofsubjectsrelatedtothisdiscipline.ButIwouldliketopursuemoreadvancedstudiesinit.InowapplyforacceptanceintoyourMaster'programforthesolereasonthatyourprogramisoneofthefewthatoffergraduatestudiesinmechatronics.（一般而言，開Ifirstbecamefascinatedwithmakingelectronicdevicesinhighschool.Untilthen,Iwascontentwithmakingmechanicalgadgets,fromwhichIderivedimmensepleasure.Asachild,Imademyowntoyglidersandvacuumcleaners.Inmakingsuchthings,Iinstinctivelygraspedtheprinciplesofaeromechanics.AfterIenteredintojuniorhighschool,Ibegantomakesmallelectronicappliancesbyusingelectricalcircuitboards.AsIexperimentedfornewinventions,Ifeltmoreandmoreconstrainedbythelimitedapproaches.Iyearnedtomakereallyuser-friendlygadgetsanddevicesthatcouldbereadilyacceptedonthemarket.Attheuniversity,Ichosemechatronicsasmymajorforitsinterdisciplinarynature.Builtonthecombinedstrengthofmechanics,electronics,computerscienceandautomaticcontrol,thisgenreofstudiesdoesawaythesingle-mindednessinherentinthepursuitofstudiesinonearea.Withmechatronics,Ibegantocreateamuchlargervarietyofproductsthatcouldservealotofdifferentpurposes.Theonsetofmechatronicsrepresentstomeamajorstepforwardinthemanufacturingtechnology.IthoroughlyenjoyedthefouryearsofmyundergraduatestudiesattheHarbinInstituteofTechnology,amajorcradleofChina'sengineeringtalents.IfoundmostofthecoursesItooknotonlyinstructivebutalsoentertaining.ButIparticularlylikedthehands-onexperiencethattheInstitutealwayspromotedandrequired.Forvirtuallyeverycourseofmymajor,weengagedinassortedexperimentsandprojects.Thecompletionofeachexperimentoracademicpaperbroughtmeimmensesatisfactionbygivingmeanunmistakablesenseofachievement.Ifeelthattechnologymakessenseonlywhenitservessomehumanpurpose.Agoodproductthereforehastobedesignedandtailoredtoconformtohumanhabits,someofwhichmaybebasedonmisperceptionsormisconceptions.Designersofconsumerproductshavetobeawareofandtakeintoconsiderationthosemisperceptionsormisconceptionssothattheproductstheydesignhaveenduringattractiontoconsumers.Allthisiseasiersaidthandone,ofcourse,asitrequiresthedesignersnotonlyasophisticatedunderstandingofhumannaturebutalsosuperbengineeringskillstorealizehisideas.IamgladtosaythatIhaveboth.Alargepartofmystrengthcomesfrommyexpertiseincomputerscience.Makinggooduseofmysparetime,Itaughtmyselfawholerangeofcomputercourses,amongwhichwere:NetworkingandCommunications,OperatingSystems,DataStructureandComputation,ComputerSystemsandTheirPrinciples,SoftwareEngineering,Database,CLanguage,andVisualBasic.Iwasparticularlyfondofimprovingandupgradingmechanicaldevicesbythecombineduseofcomputerizedcontroltechnologyandtheprogrammablelogicalcontroller.MycomputerskillspaidoffwhenIembarkedonmygraduationproject,forwhichIspentonly14daysinsteadofthethreemonthsmostofmyclassmatesspent.Bystudyingmechatronics,Iaminvolvedinoneofthefivehigh-techdisciplinesthattheChinesegovernmentisactivelypromoting.Thankstothestatesponsorship,mydepartmentgroupedtogetherthestrongestinmyuniversity,asdemonstratedbytheamountandqualityoftheirscientificresearchandtechnologicalachievements.Takingfulladvantageofthisfaculty'sseasonedguidance,Itrainedmyselfvigorouslyandfruitfully.MycommandofEnglishwasconsideredthebestinmyclassthroughoutmyfourundergraduateyears,andmycomputerskillsweresogoodthatitwouldbeanunderstatementtosaythattheywerethebestinmydepartment.MyoverallGPAwasamongthetopfivepercentinmyclassof103students.Takingmyselftotaskintherealworld,Iworkedonnumerouspart-timejobswhileIwasattheuniversity.Forthesejobs,IusuallyutilizedmycomputerskillsandcommandofEnglish.Forexample,IwrotecomputerprogramsforsmallcompaniesandsearchedforinformationontheInternetforthem.Besidesmakingmoney,Ialsolearnedtomarketbothmyexpertiseandmyselfasaperson.Yourprogramstandsoutasoneofthepreciousfewthatoffergraduateresearchinmechatronics.Thatalonetestifiestoyourexcellenceinengineering.AsIseektoplacemyselfonthecutting-edgeofthestudiesinmechatronics,Ithinkyour