中考英語作文指導課課件

Howcanwewriteagoodcomposition(作文)?——中考寫作指導課Howcanwewriteagoodcompos1basicstructure(基本結構的安排)basicstructure2DearMr.Know，I’mpleasedtowritetoaskforsomehelp.IwanttotellyousomeproblemswemeetinEnglishstudy.First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmeetbeforeinthepassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,letalone(更不用說)answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.Canyouhelpus?HowcanweimproveourEnglish?Pleasegiveussomeusefuladvice.Thankyouverymuch.Writetomesoon.

Let’sgoforit!

Mary(thebeginning)(theending)thebody（正文）DearMr.Know，Let’sgo3basicrules(寫作考試規(guī)則)search（審）list（列）add(加:開頭和結尾)connect(連)beautifY(美：諺語/例子)basicrulessearch（審）4健康很重要。在學習和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會休息的人才會有健康的身體。人們是如何度過假期的呢？國際健康組織對此作了一次調(diào)查，右圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結果。根據(jù)你所得的信息，請為國際健康組織寫一篇完整的調(diào)查報告,并提倡大家進行假日休閑。審(search)travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork健康很重要。在學習和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會休息的人才會5

如何度假調(diào)查報告倡議假日休閑stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel列(list)根據(jù)以下關鍵詞及圖表用

簡單的句子列出文章的要點。如何度假stayathomeworkvisitfri6

Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.列(list)Alotofpeopletravel.列(li7Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.（thebeginning）Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.（theending）加(add)加首尾，使結構完整?？梢圆扇】偡挚偨Y構，開頭或結尾的句子應注意簡潔、漂亮。Howdopeoplespendtheirvaca8Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

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some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

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afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.連(connect)Howdopeoplespendtheirvaca9Writingskills（“寫”的技巧）方法一:善用高級詞匯Writingskills（“寫”的技巧）方法一:善用高級10Whichisbetter?他們很早就到了。ATheyarrivedearly.BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould.Whichisbetter?他們很早就到了。A11我們應該保護環(huán)境。AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment.BIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.我們應該保護環(huán)境。AWeshouldp12方法二:活用多種句型Writingskills（“寫”的技巧）方法二:活用多種句型Writingskills（“寫”的技13

她還小，搬不動這么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung.Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarrythe…DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…她還小，搬不動這么重的箱子。ASheisv14方法三:妙用關聯(lián)詞Writingskills（“寫”的技巧）方法三:妙用關聯(lián)詞Writingskills（“寫”的技巧151.表示并列或遞進:and,aswellas,both…and,what’smorenotonly…butalso,neither…nor2.表示選擇:or,either…or3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折:but,however,although\though,afterall,anyway4.表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresult5.表示條件:if,unless6.表示對比:instead,not…but,while,inthesameway,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand7.表示解釋:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords,totellthetruth8.表示順序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend9.表示強調(diào):also,besides,especially,actually,infact10.表示結論:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshort關聯(lián)詞(connectionwords)1.表示并列或遞進:and,aswellas,bo16Let’stry_____________Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert______.Welikedoingkindsofsports_____swimming,runningandhiking._____,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._____,hewentback.____________,hesmiled.Though\AlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinally\AtlastLet’stry_____________Iamti17Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

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afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.連(connect)美(beautify)Howdopeoplespendtheirvaca18Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)Weinterviewedpeopleabo19Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.

Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

Proverb（諺語）/sayingAccordingtoit,mostpe20集中注意力于學習Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies.Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies...加諺語(Proverb/saying)可用于開頭和結尾，多是結尾。加諺語(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。集中注意力于學習Weshouldconcentrate21加入英語俱樂部是學習英語的好方法JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.加諺語(Proverb/saying)可用于開頭和結尾，多是結尾。加諺語(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。加入英語俱樂部是學習英語的好方法JoiningtheEn22Enjoysomeproverbs1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.

4.DoastheRomansdo.

三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。早起的鳥兒有蟲吃。失敗是成功之母。5.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.6.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.

Enjoysomeproverbs三思而后行。熟能生巧。23Enjoysomeproverbs

7.Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.

8.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.

9.AllroadsleadtoRome.10.Nevertoooldtolearn.

覆水難收。一天一蘋果，醫(yī)生遠離我。條條大路通羅馬。活到老，學到老。Enjoysomeproverbs覆水難收。一天一蘋果，24方法四:妙用諺語和例子

（多用于“thebody”）Writingskills（“寫”的技巧）方法四:妙用諺語和例子

（多用于“thebody”）Wri25青少年應盡我們所能保護環(huán)境拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,

wecanuseclothbagsinsteadofplasticbags,stopusingnapkins,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.加例子青少年應盡我們所能保護環(huán)境拯救地球。Weteenagers26加例子在家里，我經(jīng)常幫助父母親干家務活。Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework,suchas

washingdishes,foldingtheclothes,takingoutthetrashandsoon.加例子在家里，我經(jīng)常幫助父母親干家務活。Ioftenhe27Let’s…Doitnow!/Don’tdoitagain!Asstudents,weshouldstartfromourselves.

Don’twait.Joinusnow!Starttojoinusnow!Don’tputitoff!Becomeavolunteertoday!Howamazing!Ican’twait!Saveanimals!SaveOurselves!Saveourplanet!Itwillbegreatfun!結尾：提出倡議或號召Let’s…Don’twait.Joinusno28

First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.

WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmetbeforeinthepassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,

letalone(更不用說)answerthequestions

aboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.

Let’sgoforit!123465Let’sgoforit!12346529DearMary,Iheardyoudidn’tdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadviceforyou.Yours…________________,IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant._______,youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEnglish.Youknow,“Practicemakesperfect.”______________,itisnecessaryforyoutolistentotheEnglishradioeverymorning.Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill._________,EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpfulforyou.Yourturntogoforit!（試填一填）DearMary,______________30DearMary,Iheardyoudidn’tdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadviceforyou.Yours…________________,IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant._______,youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEnglish.Youknow,“Practicemakesperfect.”______________,itisnecessaryforyoutolistentotheEnglishradioeverymorning.Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill._________,EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpfulforyou.TobeginwithOfcourseInfactThenYourturntogoforit!（check）123DearMary,______________31Let’spractise.Let’spractise.32Duringthewinterholidays,Ithappenedalotofthings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother.Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuond’tfoundhermother.Sowestartedtohelptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy,too.IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Checkandcorrectthisarticle.alotofthingshappened.helpingIwereshoppingcryinghappenedtocouldn’tfindhelpherfind.Theycouldalso,soDuringthewinterholiday33滿分作文標準：第一檔：（17~20分）完全符合題目要求，觀點正確,要點齊全，立意高。句式多樣，詞匯豐富。語言準確，語意連貫，表達清楚，結構合理，具有邏輯性。卷面書寫干凈，整潔，無涂抹，字跡大小適中，疏密合適，書寫美觀。標點，大小寫正確。最好能有一兩個亮點句。（主從，定從，表從，諺語）滿分作文標準：第一檔：（17~20分）34規(guī)范三寫：大小寫,拼寫,書寫規(guī)范三寫：大小寫,拼寫,書寫35中考英語作文指導課ppt課件36中考英語作文指導課ppt課件37隨著人口的增多，人類不僅需要越來越多的地方居住，而且需要越來越多的食物。人類把森林變成了耕地；新的城市和道路占據(jù)了動物的棲息地；許多動物遭到獵殺······所有這些都導致了越來越多的動物瀕臨滅絕。然而動物是我們?nèi)祟惖呐笥眩覀冇胸熑稳ケＷo他們，而不是傷害或獵殺它們。請根據(jù)上述內(nèi)容寫一篇不少于80詞的英語短文。

要求：

1.語言規(guī)范、意思連貫、表達完整；2.提示的內(nèi)容要全部用上。It’syourturn!(練練筆)隨著人口的增多，人類不僅需要越來越多的地方居住，而且需要38Let’sHelpOurFriends（滿分作文賞析）Withtheincreasingpopulation,humanneedsmoreplacestoliveinandmorefoodtoeat.Asaresult,wechangetheforestsintofarmland.Ifeelpityfortheanimals.Moreandmorenewcitiesandroadsarebuiltonanimals’habitat.Alotofanimalsarekilledbecauseoftheirtastymeatorbeautifulfur.Thereusedtobelotsofanimals,butnowmoreandmoreanimalsbecomeendangeredbecauseofourcrazyandsillybehavior.Forexample,thereareonly2500manateesintheUSAnow.Doyouwanttoseethesegentleandshyanimalsdisappear?Doyouwantourchildrenonlytoseemodelanimalsinthefuture?Don’tyouthinkanimalsareourlovelyfriends?Iknowyouransweris“No”.Soit’sourdutytoprotecttheminsteadofhurtingorkillingthem.Don’tputitoff！Let’stryourbesttohelpourfriendstoday!Let39Thankyou!Goodbye!Agoodpassage=Arighttitle+

Ahealthybody+Aniceconclusion/endThankyou!Goodbye!Agoodpas40HOMEWORK:書面表達（共20分）根據(jù)中文設置的情景、英文提示詞語以及表格所提供的信息，寫出語法正確、意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。注意：1．字數(shù)60一80。2．所給的英文提示詞語及表格所提供的信息必須都用上。（可適當發(fā)揮）3．發(fā)言稿的開頭和結尾已給出。（請不要抄寫在答題卡上）假設你是張斌，今年暑假你將參加學校組織的赴加拿大“綠色之旅”夏令營活動。請你準備一篇在開營式上的自我介紹發(fā)言稿。發(fā)言稿（介紹）HOMEWORK:書面表達（共20分）發(fā)言稿（介紹）41name,ZhangBin,fifteenyearsold,liveinBeijing,favoritesubject,biology…InterestFreeTimeActivitiesFutureJobHopedrawinggocamping,drawpicturesofplants,enjoythesingingofbridsinnature.biologist,growupgoodfriends,doone'sbest,maketheearth…Dearfriends,I'mverygladtointroducemyselftoyou.

That'sall.Thankyouforlistening.

name,ZhangBin,fifteenyea42Dearfriends,I’mverygladtointroduce（介紹）myselftoyou.MynameisZhangBin.I’mfifteenyearsold.IliveinBeijing.Oneofmyfavoritesubjectsisbiology.I’minterestedindrawing.Inmyfreetime,Ioftengocamping（野營）,drawsomepicturesofplants,andenjoythesingingofbirdsinnature.Iwanttobeabiologist（生物學家）whenIgrowup.Ifeelluckytojoinyou.Ihopewecanbegoodfriendsanddoourbesttomakeourearthmorebeautifulandmuchgreener.That’sall.Thankyouforlistening.Dearfriends,43Ilikemanysports,suchasswim,fishandsoon.Butofallthesports,basketballismyfavoritesport.Ilikebasketballbestbecauseitcanhelpmekeephealth.Iplaybasketballwithmyclassmatesatschooltwiceaweek.ImakealotofgoodfriendswhenIplaybasketball.Anditbringmealotofhappy.What’smore,itcanmakemetogrownotonlytallerbutalsostrong.Iloveplaybasketball.Ihopebeabasketballplayerinthefuture.

Myfavoritesportswimming,fishinghealthybringsstrongertobe/IwillbehappinessplayinggrowIlikemanysports,suchassw44

TheLifeasaGrade9StudentHowtimeflies!NowI’minGradeNine.ActuallyIfeelthelifeisquitedifferentfromitusedtobe.NowI’masbusyasabee.There’salotofhomeworkandexams.TheonlyfeelingIhaveis:ThelifeasaGradeNinestudentisverybusyandchallenging!!There’sanoldsaying:Hewhofailstoplanplanstofail.Idon’twanttofail,soIcreateaplanforthefollowingdays.SincenothingisdifficultifIputmyheartintoit,IwillchangemyattitudetowardsmathsandphysicswhichIampooratnow.I’llspendtheresttimeefficiently.Asthere’snoelevatortosuccess,I’lltrymybestto

doeverythingstepbystep!IbelievethatIcandoit!

It’syourturn!（滿分作文賞析）It’s45Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.1.Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried.2.IthinkitisanunforgetablethingbecauseIhelpedsb.climbedtiredunforgettablesomebody3.Onafridayafternoon,Iwentshoppingwithmymother.Spelling（拼寫）（others)Friday4.Ican’tforgetthatday.Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateherbirthdaytogether.Ic